woh tum the!!! ||TEI - OS|| final part updated - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
love it <3 plzz continue!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
amazing. loving the start please update soon and longer ones plzz. cant wait to read wat happens next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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As soon as twinkle slapped Yuvi everyone stood up from their seat in a shock of the revelation. Everyone saw Twinkle crying and thought that remembering the farmhouse event she is crying but only Kunj knew that twinkle was crying because she was betrayed in love, Cause of the feeling of being a toy only to take revenge. Kunj walked towards twinkle and picked her up. he wiped her tears and nodded his head stating that there is no need to cry for such a cheap person, he doesn't deserve her tears. "i m sorry kunj, please mujhe maaf karde. i m sorry." saying this she again broke into tears. kunj took her into his arms and instructed yuvi "issepehle main tujhe jaanse mardu tu yahase chalaja, aur kabhi twinkle ya mere parivaarke aas pas bhi dikha toh tere saat acha nahi hoga" hearing thos anita gets scared "yuvi please yahase chal, its not the right time." and anita and Yuvi leave. Up to this time Twinkle composes herself and wipes her tears and lightly comes out of the hug. she looks at kunj and says "maine galtiki the toh ab mujhe he sudharni padegina." saying this she walks towards everyone. "uncle ussdin aapne apne sirpe banduk rakkhke kunj ko majboorkiya tha ki wo mujhse shadi kere. kyunki aapko bhi laga tha ki ussne mere saat kuch galat kiya hai. par usne toh kuch nahi kiya please usse uske vaadese azad kar dijiye." to be interrupted by her mom "twinkle puttar tu yeh kya keh rahi hai?" twinkle answers "uss raat ke baad kunj aisi ladkise shadi nah karna chahtatha jo uspe bharosa nahi karti. manohar uncle ne usse shadi k liye majboor kiya hai. yeh toh galat hai na ma. aap thodi der k liye bhul jao k main apki beti hoon an socho ki kunj apka beta hai. toh kya aap uski shadi aisi ladki k saat karwayegi jo uspe bharosa nahi karti." to which leela does not have any answer. "appki chuppi ne mujhe mera javab de diya." she turns towards manaohar "uncle please ek baar kunj k dad banke sochye ek business man nahi." saying this twinkle starts walking away only to stoped by kunj's hand holding twinkle's.

precap - kunj's pov
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Aaw it's so cute n beautiful 😳😊 . W8ing for the next update 😃 Plz update fast 😆.. kunj's pov 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
cute update
loved it
pls cont. soon
thnx
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Amazing update 😊 w8ng 4 d next update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Lovely Update! Liked the fact that Twinkle supported Kunj and asked Manohar to set him free. This should win her some points from Usha. Is Kunj going to stop her in the next update? I can't wait to read the next update. Continue soon, please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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While all this was going on Kunj in his mind was thinking."twinkle teh tumne kya kiya. mujhse mafi mangne apni badnami kardi wo bhi itne saare logo k samne. tum abhi kitne dardse gusar rahi hogi phir bhi tum mere bare main soch rahi ho. humare beach bhalle he dosti ho par main dosti ab toh kisi bhi kimat pe nahi khouga" he sees twinkle leaving and immediately holds her hand. Twinkle turns and looks at her hand and then looks at the person holding it. "Twinkle tum sabko aur bohot sari chese bolna bhul gayi." hearing this twinkle puts her head down and in her mind "Kunj maine tujhe bohot hurt kiya hai, tu aaj mujhe jo saza dega wo main lelungi aur jo bhi kahega wo sunlungi" and she stays there. kunj faces leela and continues to speak "auntu abhi twinkle ne kaha ki aap thodi der k liye soche k main apka beta hoon, toh aap apne bete ki shadi aisi ladiki se nahi karwagi jo apne galtfami ki maafi khud ki badnami karwake mange. Jab usse mujhse kahi zyada takleef ho rahi ho tab bhi wo mere dard k bare sooche." hearing this leela wipes her tears and gives him a smile. then he turns towards twinkle who had tears into her eyes heaing what kunj just said. kunj came near her and wiped her tears and said "bin puche mera naam aur pata rasmoko rakhke pare, char kadam bas char kadam chaldona saat mere." Twinkle gives a shocked expression then a little confused she says. "chor, yeh toh PK movie ka gana hai." hearing this everyone in the hall start laughing. Kunj also has a huge smile seeing her innocence. Twinkle looks at everyone and realizes what did she just do, and even she stars laughing. Kunj in his mind "Mission accomplished" and smiles.


the end...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
this was adorable. loved it. continue soon kunj is such a sweetheart.
wish show wali twinkle was half as intelligent
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Aw...
I can't believe it's done! No chance of continuing it? If not this, then is there a chance of you writing more stories with a Twinkle that can actually think? Please do write more.
This was such an awesome read and I am looking forward to reading the next one from you.

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