Gravity of Love [Swara-Sanskar, FF, updated pg.23] - Page 16

Originally posted by: AartShefa

Thank you so much for the long update dr..

Loved it..

Superb superb superb ...

I could imagine swasan while reading it..The way u described swara n her emotions ..omg I m speechless yaar..I must say u are a very good writer..keep rocking. .thanks for the pm...

Loves n hugs

Nothing to thank me for, really! I enjoy writing as much as you do reading 😉

Amd thanks 😳 I am happy to read that you liked the update so much! Hope you will keep liking it ^^

Originally posted by: KhwaboKeParinde

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">wonderfully written👏</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">enjoyed it</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">your version of Swara-Sanskar and even Shomi are better than the actual show! (to a great extent)</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">thanks for the PM😊</font>

Thank you 😳
And aww, that's a huge compliment! *blushes* I am glad that you like my versions this much 😉

And no problem!

Originally posted by: gayu6

Nice update what will swara decide. Hope she will not marry laksh. Also think she will take some time to realise her feelings for sanskar. Pls continue soon. Pls pm me also

Thank you 😊 Swara will make some decisions neither you oror she, herself, will be very happy about. But Sanskar is there to stop her from any foolishness 😉 And yes, time she will need. And a lot of courage to take the jump - to realize that someone will catch her.

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Awesome update noor

AP's chaacter is confusing

Sujata is well sujata😆

SwaSan's part was so passionate😉

Loved the update

Continue soon n thanks 4 the pm

Thanks! 😃

Well, AP's just selfish in her love for her son. Sujata is, as well 😆 Wouldn't surprise me if these two mother clash in an epic battle, lol 😎 Glad you liked it, especially the SwaSan part 😉

Originally posted by: TRPS

I love it! well, in starting I was afraid of Swara saying yes to AP. And then I sighed in relief when she said a rational no.and just loved it when Swara ran to Sanskaar without even thinking that why would his mother will tell he is going to die and is not stopping him herself!!!! well, the part you were trying to delete is attention stealer in this part. A drunk confession is something I love from my Madhubala ek ishq ek junoon days. So cute, sweet and Romantic Swasan are. At last Swara said her feelings , inner turmoils to Sanskaar. Hope, he works on this matter. :) and we get a happy Swasan soon. and how I wish that Shomi gets her happiness , but here her husband is spineless. so, yeah, this decision good for her rather than getting insulted each and every day... :| Well, again a great writing by you. eagerly waiting for next parts. :))
P.S.- I love looonnng updates ,specially when written in a beautiful writing as yours... hope we will get more updates like this one. :))

Thanks for such a sweet comment! 😊

As I already mentioned, I was tempted to make her accept. It would have added a great dose of Angst and pain - but looks like Swara doesn't wanna hurt Sanskar anymore, either 😛 And Sujata is just outstanding! I love that woman 😆

Well, I didn't delete it which seems to have been the right decision 😉 I used to watch MB, liked RK and all, though I wasn't gaga over it 😆 As for Sanskar, let's see what's going on with him. Does he even have a plan ready, yet?

I always wished Shomi would kick Shekhar to the moon, lol. "Love" is just not enough to make a relationship work, after all.

Can't promise more such long updates but my chapters are mostly on the longer side 😉

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

I don't think I've felt so many emotions all at once when reading an FF.

My heart ached for Swara. 💔

I gave Shomi a virtual high five for not going back to Shekhar.

Then I panicked and wanted to smack AP in the face 😡😆

Felt bad for Laksh. 😕

I wanted to hug Sujju and giver a kiss. ❤️

I was satisfied when I saw that Sanky and Swara were so comfortable with each other even after all that happened.

Drunk Swara is the cutest thing, omd.

I was red as a tomato during the rain scene. ☺️

I loved their conversations with each other at the end. It could not have been more heart wrenching, yet genuine.

You are portraying their thrilling love story beautifully. I can't wait to read the next part!

Well, I am rejoicing that I was able to evoke so many emotion within you! 😃

I am putting both, Swara and Sanskar through a lot. But at the end of every night, there's a sliver of daylight 😉
Wished Shomi could have done the same on the show 😆
Let's see how long you'll feel bad for Laksh 😛
I love to write drunk characters - it's so much fun, yaar! 😆 And yes, SwaSan share a great comfort level even though, a lot has happened between them. If Swara only could see that...

Originally posted by: anju10

wonderful update dear
amazing
swasan scenes were awesome
thanxx for the pm
😊

Thank you! 😳 And no problem, at all! 😉

Originally posted by: Katori

I like your "selfish" Swara. Very well written and the story is progressing well.

Nice to see you here, Katori! 😊 And I am glad you are liking the selfish part of "my" Swara - everyone has the right to be a little selfish, after all 😉

Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: -damon-

Totally Loved the last 2 parts..
Glad swara didn't accept the sso called offer
hate annapurna really
loved the dance sequence
thanx for pm

Am happy you liked it, especially the last parts! 😊 Yup, it was good that Swara refused AP - she shouldn't get too blinded in her son's love.

No problem! 😊