Swara Love confession to Sanskar

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Story prediction after lakshya and ragini become one.

sanskar go out of city for some official tour and some goons kidnap him as he has gone against there wish and signed a deal with opposite company.

The day sanskar left for office he fought with swara regarding his love for her but still swara not accepted his love. so in angry mood he left from home.swara felt

bad as she also started falling for sanskar but not ready to admit it as she always says they where best friends and sanskar broke the friendship by bringing love in

between.

so here the plot goes

sw - maa (to sujata) sanskar ka call aya tha kya wo pohech gaye kya.
sujata - swara wo toh joru ka gulam hai..mujhe thodi na karega tujhe karega
sw - nahi maa unka koi call nahi aayaL
su - he bhagwan ab tak koi call nahi aya..mera beta thik toh hoga na...lakshya..beta kaha hai tu..jara dekh sanskar pune jo kam ke liye gaya pohcha kyu nahi..chore ne

call bhi nahi kiya mera toh ji machla ja raha hai..
sw - in mind thinking sanskar kaha ho tum...ye koi tarika hai kam se kam phone toh karte maa ko..
La - maa aap bilkul chinta mat kiji ye main check karta hu..he calls the hotel where he was suppose to stay...hello hotel Blue print may i know room no 209 booked by

Mr.Sanskar Maheshwari ..can you please connect him.

Hotel Staff - Sir Mr.Sanskar not yet checked in.

La - Hanged phone in affraid. and informs swara and sujata ...sanskar not yet reached hotel.

sw - lakshya ye kaise possible hai ab tak toh unhe reach hona chaiye tha...and can see froms swara face she was shocked and tension was going in her nerves..as sanskar

phone is also switched off

sujata - lakshya mera sanskar kaha gaya...mera beta thik toh hai..chore ka phone bhi nahi lag raha

la - maa mujhe lagta hai hamein police complaint karni chaiye..

sujata - ha lakshya..jaldi se kar

phone rangs suddenly...

Caller - Pareshan ho ke sanskar kaha gaya..wo mere kabje main hai...and wo kidnap hua hai..and uski jaan bachana hai..to sanskar ke office main jo new assignment ki

file hai..uske details hamein lakar do..

La - Kaun ho tum log...sanksar ko chod do...

caller - behes karna band karo...aur maine jo kaha wo karo warna sanskar gaya and hangs the phone.

La- Kidnapper ne koi file lane ko kaha hai..warna wo sanskar ko nahi chodenge wo usse...kahi...(and close his mouth with hand) and see swara..

sw - nahi aisa nahi ho sakta...and tears starts falling on her cheecks...swara runs to her room and starts crying...sanskar pls wapas aa jao main tumse jhagda nahi

karungi promise...tumhe bed pe sone dungi..main sofe pe so lungi..tumhara fav nasta banaongi...pls wapas aa jao...and remembers the moments with him and suddendly

usse yaad aya ki us din sanskar kisi se baat kar rahe the jisne phone pe sanskar ko dhamki di thi regarding any new project..and his name is Mr.ankit wadela.she wipes

her tears and run to lakshya room..and she tells the whole thing about ankit wadela to him.

LA- swara ye tumne acha kiya mujhe batakar ab sanskar tak pohchna aasan hoga...pehle toh..humne uske sare ghar,company,godown ke details nikalne honge

finally lakshya and swara ne sare details nikalkar ek ek office ke godown main sanksar ki khoj suru kardi...with police help finally dono ek godown main pohche jo 3

saal se band tha but achanak se waha kafi security wale aa gaye...so they both are sure now that sanskar is here..so with the help of police they first catched all the

security outside the godown..and once they successfully get in they where able to see from small hole inside the main room..sanskar is seated on on chair tied up and

blood comming from his horehead...seeing this from swara's eyes tears falling like rain and wanted to rush as soon as possible to sanskar.

finally lakshya goes in and do lots of fighting and surrender every goons to police and finally he hold ankit wadela and drags him outside the room..still sanskar is

tied in chair swara walking baby steps and crying goes near to chair and sanskar's eyes who is injured badly still manages to see swara and his sad face brightened

feeling swara is here to release me...

sw - then after making sanskar stand...she hugs sanskar tightly for 1 min then again released him and started to see his wounds and touching his forehead,hand his

cheecks starts crying and again hugs sanksar...and this time more tightly and telling, sanksar kyu mujhe chod ke chale gaye the. i was so affraid, if something has

happened to you..what i would have done, tell..and crying sanskar i cant leave without you...i love you sanskar...

SA - After hearing I love you word sanskar who is injured badly who's eyes was shut down opened with energy..and released the hug and ask swara..what kya kaha

tumne..phire se kaho..

sw - yehi ke tum kaha gaye the..

SA- us ke baad..

SW - Main kitni darr gayi thi...tumhe kuch ho jata toh..

SA - us ke baad swara...in more angry tone

SW - tumhe kuch ho jata toh..

SA - swara tumne jo end main kaha

SW - swara understood what he wants to listen..and says i love...and tries to run without answering..

SA- hold her hand pulls her towards him and holds her tightly..swara i love kya...tum aaj nahi jaa sakti..jis 3 words ko sune main ek bin pani ki tarah machli ke

tadap raha tha..wo aaj mere kano ne suna..toh mujhe usse mehsus toh hone do...swara bolo na i love kya..

SW - Ha sanskar main tumse pyaar karti hu, tum mere ruh main bas gaye ho, tumharein bina main nahi jee sakti..tum mere jaan ho.. "I love you" sanskar.

SA - holds swara's face...swara...i m so happy..swara i love you...you are my world ..you are my everthing...and passionately try to kiss swara...and swara too

feeling shy closes her eyes...and songs plays...(tum hi ho) and finally first time swara sanskar shares a passionate kiss and thier love blossoms from here...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome yaar... i thought about some kidnapping track to unite swasan in my exam hall (after finishing the exam only)...😆
Edited by tigress.meenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one.
Pls change the title as OS then it will be easy to someone read
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tigress.meenu

awesome yaar... i thought about some kidnapping track to unite swasan in my exam hall (after finishing the exam only)...😆




is it thanks...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Thanks Anu...

I am planning to write more...but it will be further story...when all is okay with swasan and raglak
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Wow cute story,loved it soo much 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it..
nice👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you so much that u liked my writting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continuation...Part of Swara's Love confession..

After sharing the passionate kiss...swara being shy run to the end corner of the place..and sanskar...madly in love and over the moon fresh like flower..so happy again try to move towards swara...suddenly lakshya comes..bhai aap thik toh hai na...and hugs sanskar ..swara too come towards both...lakshya put sanskar hand in his arm..and other end swara too supports sanskar they left towards car and settles sanskar in back seat of car...and swara sits next to sanskar and lakshya moves towards driver seat and starts the car..sanskar who had several injuries in his hand and back...still not uttering a single word as he was worried by seeing it swara will get tensed..

sw - sanskar tum thik toh ho..

sa - ha swara main thik hu

la - bhai aapko unhone bahut mara toh nahi..

sa - nahi lakshya main thik hu

sw - sanskar jab tak hum ghar nahi pohchte dressing ke liye hospital chalte hai

sa- nahi main thik hu..ghar jakar karte hai

suddnely lakshya put break in car as one dog was crossing the road..and due to break sanskars back get touch with the car seat and he cry...maa ..

sw- sankar kya hua tumhe...and tears fall from her eyes..

sa- kuch nahi swara main thik hu..

sw - nahi sanskar tum jhoot keh rahe ho..tum thik nahi ho..

la- ha swara main gadi yeha ke ek hospital main ghuma leta hu..sanksar ko doc ko dhikana bahut jaruri hai..

they move towards hospital...within 19 min they reached hospital..

sw - sanskar hospital aa gaya..dheere se neeche uthro..

sanskar who was in so much pain..but as swara next to her..he was ok..they all move towards the hosptial..where doc took sanskar in a room...swara and lakshya joined them..

doc - sister start for dressing..

sister removed sanskar shirt and there was a big cut in sanskar back which he got when he was trying to free from them..blood was dropping from there...seeing that swara...was shocked..and tears started falling from her eyes...

sw- sanskar ..ye itna bada ghav...tumne mujhe kuch kaha bhi.nahi...doc please sanskar ko thik kardo jaldi se koi dawai lagado...unhe bahut pain ho raha hoga ..doc please doc please

doc- dekhiye aap bas aap hamein apna kam karne deejiye..sab thik ho jayega..

la- ha swara bhai thik ho jayegne...pls tum ro mat..unhe apna kam karne do..

sa - swara please tum ro mat..tum bahar ja kar baitho lakshya ke sath

sw - nahi main kahi nahi jaungi..

doc- nurse...start the necessary arragements..we need to stop the bleeding and stich the cut..
they told sanskar to turn back and sleep..sanskar was in a directon where he can see swara standing in her front...swara was crying seeing from front as she cant she the treatment standing next to sister..she was facing sanskar...not seeing the treatment the docs doing and the stiching on the wound starts..sanskar who is only facing swara...and recalling the specail moement he shared with her just a while ago..the "I love you" moment where swara uttered i love you words for him and the kiss what they shared...and recalling the special moment he is having cute smile on his face..seeing this...swara who is crying opp to him seeing this...thinks what happned to sanskar how he can smile when he is such a bad pain...

Doc completed the dressing on the wound...and told swara to take a proper care...and give him medicine which will help him to come out of pain..

sw- jii doctor..i will take care of him..

la - swara you take care of sanskar in the meanwhile i will bring something to eat for you and sanskar and leaves the room..

now there is only swara and sanskar in the hosptal room..

SW - sanskar tumne mujhe bataya kyu nahi tumhe itna ghav hua hai

sa- main tumhe taklif nahi dena chahta tha,.

swara come closer to sanskar...helping him to sleep in proper angle without getting hurt..and asking it might be paining a lot na..

sa - nahi toh bilkul nahi

sw - abhi tumhe doc stich kar rahe toh..tab wo dekhkar mujhe pain mehsus ho raha tha..and tum smile kar rahe the..

sa - ha kyunki tum jo thi mere aankhon ke samne...itne din jo tum se dur raha..tumharein pyaar ke liye taras raha tha..wo mere liye pain tha..ye pain jo tumharein samne horaha tha wo toh meethi si..sui ki chuban lag rahi thi...tum sath ho toh..duniya ki koi bhi taklif sehen karlunga..i love you swara..

a eye lock between swara and sanskar...songs plays...tere bina ab jee nahi sakta..

sw - i love you too sanskar and kiss sanskar on his forehead and move her hand in his hair...you are my world sanskar and koi takleef tum pe kabhi nahi anne dungi...koi taklif ko mujhse gujar ke jana hoga tumhe chune se pehle..

By hearing this words..tears stars falling from sanskar's eyes and swara's eyes too and they share a cute hug where swara adjusting to the bed sleeps there and hold sanskar..and sanskar too put his hand on swara and holds her...and background songs plays...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys I updated 2nd Part of my Story please check and let me know if you liked it...

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