FF: SONATA OF MY LIFE update chp 22 pg 71 12 feb

Hello every one, I'm Fazza. The newbie here. Disappointed & frustrated with the show that mocking my own condition. I'm trying to write a simple story while waiting for my flight. This is my first time writing so please bear with my lameness and mistakes. This is only my imagination, sorry for any mistakes and anyone who is offended by this story. Do comments

PS: I'm sorry for changing the family's name but I think it is necessary to deviate my mind from the horrow show of YHM. ;)

Main Leads:

Raman Patel : 30 years old CEO of oil & gas company run by his family. Had master in engineering from Germany. Had once in love with Shagun Arora. Cocky, arrogant, no manner, kadoos personality but he will change soon with twist in his life. The only son in his family.

Ishita Kapoor: 30 years old simple paediatrician. She end her own fairytale due to her dark history', for her, love is far away from her life. If you can't bring happiness at least keep your loved one from suffering, that's the motto of her life. She never know what future will serve her.

The Patels:

Rakesh Patel: The owner of multidollar company. He is happy and satisfied with his life ; great CEO son, loving wife and luxurious life. He only hope his son will settle down and live happily.

Kavita Patel: Ex lecturer and currently running non-profit organization for orphans. The strong support for her husband and family. One wish; raman married with the right one J

The Kapoors

Amit Kapoor: Pharmacist & also lecturer in Bhopal. Down to earth & very friendly type of person. Share the closest bond with his second daughter, his ishu. He teach ishu how to be strongest when you are actually the weakest. The best father to all his children.

Neelam Kapoor: A loving yet strict mother. She has her own principle of life. The role model for ishita. She is a retired teacher & currently a freelancer doing charity works.

Priyanka Kapoor : The eldest out of 3 siblings. Married to Ranjeet, she is an accountant same goes with her husband. Had 2 daughters, Laila 3 years old chirpy little girl & Meera 5 months chubby cheek baby.

Mihika Kapoor: The youngest and the most mischievious. Live your life in your own way, that's is her mantra. Prepare for trouble if she knew somebody making her ishu didi crying. Currently in final year in designing course & dreams to open her own boutique.

OTHERS:

Shagun Arora: Ex- girlfriend of Raman. Only has her eyes on raman's property. The only daughter of Arora's family.

Sameer Khanna : Ex-fiance of Ishita. A doctor by profession.

Mihir Bhatt, Romi Bhalla: Best friends & boys gang of Raman.

Prologue

"Ladies and gentlemen, on behalf of our captain and the rest of the crew, I'd like to welcome you aboard and we look forward to insuring that your journey with us today is as pleasant and carefree as possible. Please take your seat and fasten your seat belt." The announcement echoed throughout the flight. Everyone is busy preparing for the flight but there are two fragile souls who lost in their own world, few years back they were despaired, broken hearted human. Back then their own fairy tale just turn into a nightmare which haunted them for life. Their physicals only working right now alas their mind & heart already stopped, damaged by the cruelty of life.

FLASHBACK

Sameer, am I not enough for you? Uttered ishita who is shocked with his fiance's decision to doubt his upcoming life with her. It is not what you think ishu, but I'm afraid our marriage will only last for a halfway and for me complete family include kids' replied Sameer. Ishita understood it now, no matter what, his fiance prefer child than her, she clearly stated that, find someone else Sameer to complete your life, I'm sorry I can't give you what you want and yeah, thanks for all the memories'. That's how her fairy tale life ended. It hurts, but for her, she needs to move on even though her heart is no longer open for any relationship, yet.

"I'm sorry Raman, but I can't do this. No way I'm going to live in India with your parents and labelled as married woman, no way I'm being a type of person dedicated to a relationship and most important I can't leave my lavish life in Germany.' A cruel statement came from a woman named Shagun Arora whom Raman considered as love of his life and trying to propose her as a partner of his journey but in return, he only got disappointment and sorrow. That's how Raman's heart turn into a frozen one.

Should I continue with it? Please do comments guys

INDEX

CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

CHAPTER 4

CHAPTER 5

CHAPTER 6

Really Interesting

amazing well written dear

i loved it dear

please continue soon dear

want to know how the story is going to move

thanks for pm me dear

First of all, thank you to everyone for giving your time reading my story. I would like to apologize for any mistakes and I'm not an india resident so please bear with my so so hindi. Comments are much appreciated.

CHAPTER 1

"This is your captain speaking, we are about to land in Chhatrapati Shivaji International Airport. Please fasten your seatbelt and thank you for flying with us. Have a nice day ladies and gentleman". Finally, Ishita and Raman are coming home, for ishita it is just a matter of couple of days since she had conference in Germany but for Raman this is his ultimate homecoming since he make a living in Germany.

"Priyanka di..., where is ishu di, don't tell me she choose to be the last person leaving the flight again, for god sake! could she stop considering others priority, mumma will lecture us for the lateness and most important I'm so hungry," Whining mihika while glaring at two men beside her who seems to enjoy the sweetness of cotton candy and also busy handling a medium sized card written with WELCOME BACK BHAI!'

Mihir, should we spare a little bit of this cotton candy for Raman bhai? Well you know, to introduce him the sweetness of Mumbai people like us?' asked Romi who is so in love with his cotton candy. Normal people will appreciate the sweet gesture but Raman Bhai is an exception, he will turn into raavan once he knew cotton candy awaits him. Romi beta, your bhaiya is allergic' to sweet thing especially this fluffy pink cotton candy, we might end up with cotton balls in our nose and our family celebrate our funerals together. We will rest in peace with memory of our cotton candy...' Replied Mihir while his eyes eagerly scanning for The Raman Kumar Patel. Romi gorges into his cotton candy quickly considering the advice from Mihir.

Di!!!! Bhai!!!' yelled Mihika and boys gang in unison once they saw two most awaited people. Ishita apologetically said sorry to her two sisters for making them waiting for quite a long time. The sisters trio then leave for their home and ishu gives the last glance towards a man in a Black Hugo Boss Suits who is sandwiched between two guys who are excitedly giving their warmest bear hug to their long time no see bhai. Raman struggled to free himself and he stared at the lady in front of him who is slowly leaving the airport. Chalo idiots, bring me home fast before I packed you guys as cargo and sent to god as a surprise gift' warned Raman towards his two childish brothers who still can't move on with the fact that RKP is right here, in Mumbai!

Inside the car:

Ishu, is there any problem in the flight since it is quite a time we've been waiting for you', enquired Priyanka while struggling with the traffic in Mumbai. Right di, are you inspecting the plane so that it parks correctly and then bid adieu for every single person worked at the airport? My bechara tummy, it struggles with the time and temptation of fluffy cotton candy just for you my beloved diii...' Complained Mihika and in the same time giving her precious ishu di a tight side hug. Ishita chuckled and replied' areee, its nothing like that meri bechara miku, it is just there is tiny little issue just before I managed to leave the plane.' Ishita waits patiently to arrive home and recalled back the incident.

FLASHBACK:

You've got two hands and functioning feet right? Why don't you f**king handle the kids, they are such a nuisance! I don't know why I agreed with your stupid decision coming back to India,' said a man angrily towards his wife who struggled to manage her two kids before leaving the plane. It happened in front of Ishita and Raman. Ishita quickly went to help the lady and holding her little baby while the lady occupied with her elder daughter and hand luggage. Excuse me sir, if you can't help manage the kids, at least try to help handling the luggage, you are a man, much stronger to handle the heavier luggage and one more thing kids will never be a nuisance, perhaps you are having motion sickness. Oh, before I forgot welcome to India. Enjoy your stay.' Ishita give a mini lecture to the man. Mind your own business woman, and I came here just to grab the offer to be a part of The great Patel's company not to be a nanny to the kids', replied the man arrogantly. Mr. RKP can't stand this anymore and he took the situation in his way. Well, syabas man, you got the offer, I agreed with you, kids are nuisance', declared Raman while getting a death glare from Ishita. But from now on you can start thinking buying the ticket back to Germany since I no longer need man with low testosterone level who can't even help his wife handling little kids, how can he work in a big company which need a higher energy right? Well, forgot to introduce myself, I'm Raman Kumar Patel.' That's how Raman making the man shocked, Errr...Sir I'm sorry I don't mean it... i just... I promise I'm going to help my wife and kids but please sir, don't fire me even before I start the job. I really want to work under you Mr. Patel', the man pleaded Raman. Out of sympathy towards the kids, Raman agreed to let the man continues to work, well of course with a lot of conditions. Thank you sir, I promise I'll help my wife all the time', said the man relieved that his job is still intact. He then leave the plane with his family. Ishita became the silent spectator, she just watched how Mr. Patel solved the issue in a blink of eye, impressive but she can't agree with the fact that kids are nuisance, no way for her kids are troublesome, they are too precious for her to be called trouble. Excuse me Mr. Patel, what did you just said? Kids are trouble? Don't you had once became a kid before growing up into this kind of man? Don't you ever had troubled your parents? For your kind information it is normal for kids to be active and making noise rather than stayed quiet. It is kind of their developmental process and it is not called troublesome. We will worried if the kids do not show any reaction, passive and not communicating well. Once again never ever called kids as nuisance.' Ishita continued her lecture this time around exclusively for Raman.

Finish? Five minutes lecture almost make me needed some sort of new hearing aid implant, I wonder what happen to people live with you forever? No, no I don't even want to think about it, creepy! Nightmare!' claimed Raman who was annoyed with Ishita's lecture session. By the way, miss always right', I said kids are nuisance because I know I'm a shaiton itself during my childhood and how it caused a chaos in my parent's life not because I clearly hate kids, I just hate the fact that a woman right in front of me can't even stop blabbering, if I let you continue the lecture session, we might going back to Germany instead of staying back in Mumbai, I wonder what kind of test god gave me to be stucked with lecture machine in the plane, poor soul of me.' With that, Raman leave Ishita open-mouthed, it was unbelievable for her to be labelled as lecture machine. Raavan Kumar, how dare he called me a lecture machine! Am I talking too much?' mumbled Ishita before leaving the plane.

Raman's car:

Romi played a song with a high volume from the radio causing Raman asking him to turn down the volume since he need to relax his eardrum from the trauma of hearing lecture just now. He keeps his eyes closed and head rested wondering what is going to be served by the future for him in Mumbai.

That's it for now. Please comments and sorry for any mistakes.

Precap:

Mrs.Kapoor, nice to meet you, I'm Kavita Patel, a part of this Orphanage house. Thank you for joining us today in our fund raising event.

Nice to meet you too Mrs.Kavita Patel. It is an honour to join your event. Well, this is Ishita my daughter who is one of volunteered paediatrician today to serve the precious kids.

Getting very interesting...

chapter 1 was superb dear

really loved it dear

starting was nice dear

mihika talk with sister was nice dear

when romi want both of them for intro to raman was nice dear

mihir warning romi and dialogue was awesome dear

ishra look was superb

flashback was nice dear

with in a minute raman solving the problem is impressed dear

ishita lecture was nice dear

raman calling her lecture machine was lovely dear

continue soon dear

Thanks to everyone who spent the time to read it. Hopefully i can improve it for the next update. 😊

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CHAPTER 2

Hello. i'm back with the update. sorry for not been updating a long time. Hope you guys can leave comment. Much appreciate it😊

Ishita was welcomed warmly by her family. She had the best family dinner. The family enjoy their time chit chatting and watching TV. "Ishu, tomorrow there will be charity event for kids... would you like to be involved with it? I mean you are paediatrician na..., why not contributing your career for those who really in need? Mrs kapoor tried to persuade her daughter to join her. "It sounds nice mumma, it considered done, I will join you" ishita replied with smile. " Thank god there will be someone to escort queen Kapoor or else I'm going to be the one" mihika teased her mom. For now, mihika is safe since she has class for tomorrow.

"Beta, hows your journey back to india? Mr patel inquired his son. "All went fine until I met a lecture machine, bohot harmful she is, I almost lost my hearing..." raman stated his frustration.. All laugh at him, two idiot brothers were ready to tease him at any time.." Kya bate bhai, are you saying our future Bhabhi is a lecture machine? Can't wait to see how mr raman patel handled her..." romi tried to tease his bhai. " Raavan patel will turn into sri ram patel..." added mihir. Luckily he had finished his dinner, he can save himself from more torture there. He leave the table and also give his two lovely bhai a smack on head. "We will deal it later once I had charged up! God bless you beta,.. Don't forget I'm ravaan kumar.." raman spoke to his brothers. The diner hall burst into a fit laughter seeing the expressions of romi and mihir. "Raman, wait! Actually tomorrow, I'm having charity event,perhaps would you like to join me , help me to manage it. Would you?" Mrs patel asking a favour from raman. Since he will not start his work for tomorrow, he agreed eventhough he not so keen going to charity, not because of he did not like helping people, but he felt not so comfy going to public masses. "Waaahhh, this is the first step our bhai turning into sri ram, he is WILLINGLY to join charity... hats off na bhai!! Don't worry we will escort you tomorrow." Romi once again teased him. Raman can only shake his head and went away from there to save himself from the two jokers.

"Good morning mam? Are you dr. ishita? I'm Pooja, one of the volunteer today, I guess you are going to lead us in health team. Glad to work with you" greet Pooja excitedly. "Nice to meet you too Pooja, hopefully we can provide the best service for all of them." Ishita happily replied. Everyone is busy preparing for the event. Ishita is arranging her needs to provide her service. " Is that her son? Bohot handsome and stylish," claimed one of the volunteer. "I've only heard about him being the most successful and youngest CEO, never see him in real."another girl gossiping. Every eyes at the event are focusing on raman, this is the reason why he don't like going to such event. people will talk about him. His phone save him from the public gossip. Romi and mihir drag him to the main event canopy which eventually help him from wild gossiping. Mrs Kapoor is helping ishita preparing for the evnt. Raman's mother come to the booth and greet all of the volunteer, she immediately recognized mrs Kapoor because both of them used to attend any NGO event. Mrs.Kapoor, nice to meet you, I'm Kavita Patel, a part of this Orphanage house." Mrs patel started the conversation. Thank you for joining us today in our fund raising event. Nice to meet you too Mrs.Kavita Patel. It is an honour to join your event. Well, this is Ishita my daughter who is one of volunteered paediatrician today to serve the precious kids" mrs Kapoor greet back. Ishita smiles and welcome raman's mother warmly. She explained the purpose of her service today. Unknown to her, mrs patel develop an interest with her, she just felt some connection is there, perhaps ishita's friendly personality and of course her angelic beauty. After being tortured by his two pagal brothers, raman went to mrs Kapoor unrealized that he will get to meet her future soulmate.

"Ma, apart from helping those two idiots, can you explain to me the purpose of I'm being here?" raman complained. His present makes everyone turn their focus on him. Immediately he recognized ishita, the "lecture machine". Aap? Oh god! Save me from another torture!"muttered raman. "Excuse me, I'm here for a professional purpose, not even once I'm going to torture you. Mind your language please.." ishita retorted back. Mrs. Kapoor and patel surprised that their children know each other. More to his surprise, his mom told him since he want to know his purpose, he will help the health team. Raman stucked there, he is trapped by his own mom. He helplessly agreed eventhough a lot of cursing playing in his heart.

The charity event started, ishita is busy providing her health service for kids. Health consultation is given. "Kya batei, for the first time lecture is given at right time" said raman while observing ishita doing her duty. To her surprise, raman is very good handling the little kids especially the one who is scared of doctor. It seems opposite with his statement that kids are nuisance. Those children are very comfortable with him. A loud crying from a baby shift the attention of raman to the baby. He approached the orphanage worker asked her the reason why. "I think baby is scared to meet the doctor. She is a smart baby." The worker answered. Raman asked her permission to handle the baby. "Aja beta, you are such a smart baby, if you scared of the lady in red shirt, it is a lot more scarier for me.." Raman talk to the baby while referring ishita as doctor in red shirt. The baby is four months old girl and her name is Nisha. Raman brought the baby to ishita. "Hello! Here is your little patient treat her before she is going to do another drama." Ishita received the baby happily but not with raman's attitude. She will deal with it later. Raman watched how ishita deal with the baby, she looks so natural. Not awkward, well perhaps she is a paediatrician. Raman took back Nisha and help to handle her since the care taker was busy with other kids for the health check-up. It was a break time for the volunteer, lunch time it is. Raman and ishita were ready to have their meal when suddenly ishita noticed that raman struggled to handle Nisha and in the same time having lunch. She took a seat beside him, "Let me hold her for a while. You have your lunch" ishita lend a help. Raman hesitated first, lecture machine offered a help without lecture? It's a miracle... But what to do, his stomach growled louder than a lion. Ishita feed and burp the baby, not once she seems annoyed or tired taking care of Nisha. She started to have her meal once raman finished his. Nisha looked so comfortable with raman, she cooed happily. "Mera chotu look so happy na..."Raman talked to Nisha while giving her a kiss on her cherub cheeks. The drama queen burst into a fit of giggle. Ishita enjoyed the view. It seems the man with hard personality outside has some part of loving, warm and caring personality. She guessed that was only action out of humanity, unknown to her raman is a very complex man whom also build a hard shell to protect his heart from another pain and disappointment. The care taker took Nisha and thanked both of them. The baby reluctantly went back to the arm of her care taker. Raman kissed the baby many times and said " don't be sad na chotu, I'll visit you again so that we can play together again, be healthy and grow up well na, thanks for being my happiness today,". Ishita also bid a goodbye, she kissed the chotu's chubby hand.

Thank you lecture machine... First because you did the best for the kids and second you did not started the lecture session yet. Raman said it. " Its my duty, and kids are really precious for me...By the way, I'm not intended to be a lecture-giving-machine, it just felt good to tell someone the right thing... especially you mr raavan kumar." Ishita replied. "Yeah... keep going on with your lectur, one day people will all become saint and peaceful...May god bless you" raman replied while gave her a wink. He leave from the booth. "Ravaan kumar will never change! ishita muttered.

That's it for now, sorry for any mistakes. Do leave comment guys. I'll try to improve it.😊

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