New ss PUNISHMENT epilogue on page45

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Hai friends... thanks all for supporting me...with all ur support u want write a small two short story ...
Keep supporting me... thanks all...
Read my another story. MR& MRS ANGEL..
PLZ...

OK let's read is
CHAPTER1- 1
CHAPTER2-3
CHAPTER3-5
CHAPTER4-9
CHAPTER5-17
CHAPTER6-22
CHAPTER7-28
CHAPTER8-37
EPILOUGUE-45
PUNISHMENT.:


Jo & ja are best friends from childhood.. both the families also very good friends... jo marriage was settled but she don't want to get married becoz she loves ja very much.. but didn't tell to him.. she asked her parents give me a 1 day to think about the marriage.. they love her a lot so they said ok... she wear green anarkali ja favorite... she looks beautiful.. any man can fall for her with her looks.hear our ja doing his office work on his laptop in his mansion.. jo went to his room sits beside him.

Ja looks her & says u look so beautiful any special today? Jo says hmmm... no special I wear for u only... ja says wow for me... y like that... do u want me to impress me jo... not a bad idea.. u can try & laughs.. jo gets angry & says I am very serious ja.. my marriage was fixed.. ja stops laughing & looks at her hugs her who is that unlucky guy marrying u jo... I will pity on him I am so sorry for him..becoz he is marrying u..he had a great heart ... & laughs again..

Jo shouts on him. Stop it ja.. it's not a joke ja... seriously I am getting married.. & I want to say something to u... ja stops laughing & tell me what do u want to tell me... but plz don't say now u love someone & don't ask me to stop this marriage jo plz... jo get irritation with his words but controls her self... becoz she know how ja behavior... he is funny guy...
Yes ja I love someone.. I want this marriage should be stop..

ja oh god I know whn u said u want me to talk with me then I understand Something is there... this guy was saved but the guy u loved was really great becoz he loved u na & laughs... jo get irritation enough ja now stop all this... this is very serious.. ok Said ja...
Jo .. I love him but I didn't know whether he loves me or not...
Ja says oh my dear jo so this guy also very lucky na.. no body can bear u only me... I am very kind that's y we are friends till now..only I can handle u jo... oh god save me from this jo... & laughs again.. jo slaps him harldy.. ja stops laughing.. looks at her with angry face...
Jo cups his face & says I am sorry baby... I am talking serious matter with u... u r making funny of this... she give a kiss on his cheek..
Ja ok... tell me who is that guy .. I will ask him... tell his name jo...
Jo gets nervous & says it's u ja...
Ja gets shocked WHAT!!!!
YES ja I LOVE U...
I want to marry u... I love u sooo much. Hugs him... I want to marry u.. come to dad & ask my hand ja...
Ja gets out from shock & moves from her hug & says jo now u started joking ... Stop this jo plz...
I hate this kind of pranks jo..
Jo gets tears in her eyes... no ja it's not a prank... I love u sooo much... it's all true...Will u marry me.???
Ja says no jo I didn't love u... u r my best friend.. that's it.. I never thought u as my love. I have my own plans jo.. u know na I am busy with my own business & need to develop dad business tooo... my full concentration is there only.. I don't love u.. & I don't want to get in relationship now. I want to be free now... I am sorry jo.. u better do marriage. I wish u had a beautiful life but not with me... advance happy marriage life jo...
Jo gets shocked with this.. she starts crying... I hate u jalal... yes I am very unlucky to have u.. I thought till now u r best in my life... but I hate u ja... I will do marriage & goodbye ja.. she goes from there after going to room near to doar she looks back & see ja.. come back to him hugs him tightly. & says I AM SORRY or shouting at u.. I LOVE U.. u r my first love. I will do marriage.. but plz never come back to my life.. I don't want see ur face.. GOOD BYE JA...
She leaves from there. Went to her room cried cried until her energy drops fell asleep...
In the morning she understands that she will not get her happiness so she thought at least I can make my parents happy.. so she Said ok for marriage..
The marriage preparation is going on.. she is just smiling for her family sake .. she don't have intrest in any rituals but she did all for her family... ja family came to jo wedding but ja didn't came..finally the marriage is over.. bride didn't see groom. Becoz of his shera(the flower which covers groom face like in serial). Finally bride & groom says qubool Hai.. nikah is over.. both are Muslims yaar...
Finally Sr.. jo is sitting in a large bed room fully decorated with lots of flowers & candles... nice jasmine aurora is there in the room... jo loved the decoration... & she keeps on saying that I have to forget him.. & move on...

Finally doar opened...groom enters...



Stay tuned...
I hope everybody like this..no proof reading... sorry for the mistakes...

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avika444 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
Yayyy yayyy I'm first I'm first ⭐️
Pehli baar I'm the first one to post 😆
Coming to TS its superb dear
Jajo best friends and Jo loves him secretly, she doesn't want to marry any other guy and so she picks up all her courage and propose jajal, but this ediot rejected leaving Jo dejected 😭
She accepted the proposal brought my her parents and marries the guy ,
Sr wow , I'm sure the groom is jalal HAINA ???
Pls continue second part soon 😊
Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing story dear
jo proposed jalal but he rejected
hope the groom is jalal
plz post nxt part soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow superb ifeel ja is groon but quite interesting to know hw wil jo punish him...update soon pls...
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Nice ... Update second part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First part is very nice update second part soon pm me make it fast
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Posted: 9 years ago
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groom jalal k alawa koi ho hi ni sakta


update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os... jo love ja nd with lot of courage confessed to jalal nd he rejected it... nd jodha is married nw... y do I feel groom is jalal only... update next part soon ... nd pm me plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I think jo's parents fixed her marriage with jalal and jalal did this behavior with her to punish her. I know groom is a jalal 😉 and plz tell me di will we see a hot sr so soon 😳
Plz update soon i m eagerly waiting for it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. interesting to know more
Continue soon Lakshmi
It's awesome story..
If the groom is Jalal. Please punish him first before he touched Jo at their SR 😡 😛 Coz he is already make Jo cry and reject her.. 😭 😆

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