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Posted: 10 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: ToxicLove
With deep regrets, I am writng this to inform you all that I wont be able to post the next chapter on time. Those antibiotics are numbing my brain and I have never been so dysfunctional. Yet I am going to try my best to post the chapter by Sunday midnight USA (or Monday noon IST). But if I fail to meet even this timeline, can I request you all to excuse me for this time.
Sorry!

Don't worry. Take your time and get well soon.

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sonali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#372

please take care of your health, dnt be sorry dear. Health first [>:D<] Take rest.

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Dhruvi Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#373

Hey i can see green light.. Are you updating ??

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Deepthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Deepthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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lala rukh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#376

Awesome update...very mature in its meaning,intensity and depth...the whole update in my eye is all abt handling the issues and situations maturely at every step and from every end...we r with u arnav,lets help her out... golden words ...thats the whole aim of life from now onwards...i wanted to say this to arnav as a reader too..and i am sure others having the same feelings :)...that we r with u arnav ,lets help her out ...:)

How aptly arnav decided then and there that the timing is no more right to think about love ...he pushed back everything ,every pain and hurt of his sulking heart burring it deep down..atleast for khushi's current state of mind ...she left everything for him...how can he leave her on her own at this delicate moment for the sake of his hurting heart...the epitome of excellence character of his ...can't even dream it reality tou dour ki baat hay.

loved the way u have shown gayatri and abhey though as parents worried for their son but at the same time they can feel the pain of a poor broken girl...they know wt ever arnav is doing its some how inherited by him,the values ,the nature to help others..the place where he is standing today ...he came long way and from here there is no looking back actually...no idea wt future holds but at least at heart they all will be content one day if they able to help khushi out in this crucial stage of her life.

abhey decision ,beautiful...:)

shashi character...u have shown a different side of his suffering...i am shocked...wt society is capable of ...how they able to ruined deprived people..his present is all about pathetic past...his search for khushi brought some pain ...i thought for once maybe he not totally gone case...but his anger after knowing from lavuu about khushi being with arnav at better place...and he having only one daughter now,payal...kiya boolon mien..hopeless indeed

loved how gayatri seeing khushi rotten state...her puffy eyes...her love for this girl washed out every ifs and buts ...she welcomed her with open arms...making her comfy ...i am thinking one mother is this gayatri ,then there is garima,and there was once in form of karan's mom...wt a difference ,wt a contrast...duniya truly rang baraangi...human of different traits and personalities..although falling under same tag...MOTHER..

in this all love and praise towards gayatri abhey and arnav...i also wanted to give some credit to khushi here...that no matter how worst her state is...she on every step able to notice the unconditional love these all r showering on her...she is so overwhelmed with this care ...noticing that just a night before she rejected this gem of person and today he is nothing but angel back in her life for help..kabhi kabhi hum apni takleefon mien iss terhan phas jatay hain keh ahsaas bhee nahi hota keh koi aik haath ap keh saath non stop hay ...but she is not forgetting any kindness ,any gesture of care from any side :)...thats beautiful writing of urs...

how maturely arnav is handling khushi here...asking about her wishes,wt she wanted for her future...and then guiding her where its required,giving her space where its necessary...loved it...good she going to find the job and she ready to stay with them till arnav going to see true smile on her face which reaches her eyes too...uff beautiful...

that one YES of her is a big relief for arnav and all of us ...:)

loved the forehead kiss from arnav to khushi...wt a gesture :)

loved the way he went on his knees and hugged his parents,wt a moment...:)

excellent excellent

ps: keeeya,kiya kaha tum ney...sunshine smile...hmmm...arey yeah right sunshine hidden behind the blankets of flu headache clouds..needed heavy dose of steammm...in order to appear on clear sky 😆

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Dhruvi Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Amazing update deepthi:) their togetherness is perfect soothing balm for my bruised heart after the way khushi turn down his proposal.. I know she has ber reasons still..!! I guess with time, khushi will understand that this is her home, her arnav's arms ❤️ i can bet on my life that no parents can be as understanding as arnav's !! How lucky he is to get such warm n kind hearted parents :) loved their convo, the way his parents asked about khushi, arnav's explanations and their concerns about him everything melts my heart thinking how can they so caring and trust their son so deeply :) so happy to see that they all are with khushi to help her to recover from this phase of life..:) its pure bliss to read things going positive:)

Deepthi, after giving a elaborate refelection of shashi's life made me think why was he like that ..?? I know that he doesnot hate her but things lacks at trust issue but now the sneak peak of his earlier life perfectly shows why he thinks so low.. It was all society's low taunting and their scum comments that brings a drastic change in him.. Where some people can accuse a father of loving his daughter and takes his love in wrong way, i can completely understand what he go through that time..:( i am feeling bad for a father that he was being pushed away from her daughters coz of that ridiculous society..!!

Beautiful moments where they had breakfast together, khushi's hesitance, gayatri sharing recipe with khushi and other light moments:) its good that khushi wants to be independent, this will help her to see in which direction she want to explore her life..:) arnav, being the strongest pillar in her life, can guide him in best possible way, i love his decision of her living in his parents house rather than in any hostel:) hos concern for khushi left me speechless..:) aaj ke time mein aisa arnav milna mushkil hi nahi namumkin hai boss 😳

Loved it deepthi:) superbly written!! 😊

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Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#378

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Wowww what an updt...
Loved each nd evry bit of dis updt..
Abhay scared me a lil bit though I knw thy ll support arnav...
Awesomely written... Amzng updt...

Edited by gowtu - 10 years ago