Manan ff- together forever chap 6 on pg 11 on 25oct

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii guyzzz...I am sakshi...I am a silent reader but after reading all ur ffs nd love for parth has inspired me a lot...
So thought to write a ss/ff depends on the feedback I get...
So enough of my chit-chat session...

PROLOGUE

A person was in flight coming from London looking in his mobile nd caressing it ever so lovingly nd talking to the pic of his love,his life, his wife...
"It's been 2 months nandini since I have seen u...nd only i know how i have spend this months without u that to in ur this condition. If u would have not forced me or If it would have not been related to ur studies or health mai tumhy kabhi akela nhi choda not for a day...but now the wait is over, ur wait is over , my wait over, our wait is over nd from now we will be together hamesha."
With this while hugging his phone slumber took over him...

While his all other friends were happy to see him happy as they only know how he has spent those two months without her...
Yes he was our "THE MANIK MALHOTRA"


In morning@Mumbai
A girl was sitting on sofa was ordering all d servants for doing works...she wanted to do work by herself but she to his over caring husband she was bound not to do any kind of work nd just sitting taking care of her two lovely children...one which is her monster running here nd there while the other his princess in her womb...
She was waiting impatiently for seeing her husband after such a long time nd her eyes were looking at door in every next second...



How was the prologue? Should I continue? Was it good enough? My poor writing skills...!!!! I hope I didn't waste ur tyme guyzz...
If u guyzz like it and want me to continue plzz give a big wala comment with criticism and
Appreciations if it was worth enough to give...




NEED HELP- DONT KNOW HOW TO POST NEXT CHAPTER SO IF ANY OF U GUYZ WILL HEPL ME...??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey... it was nice
firstly your writing skills are nice...
it looks interesting both are separated from 2 months...
MARRIED... i would love it...😉
2 childern OMG...
Nandini Pregnant????
both are going to be together after 2 months...awww
that's gonna be romantic
itna sab kuch ek prolougue main hi...
obviously u should countinue dear..


u can post next ch by posting a reply on this topic as i'm leaving a reply...
and u can change the subject and add pg no. by editing your first post (subject)
i hope it's long enough for prolgue...
will wait for update
do PM me whenever u post
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice pls continue n plsake this story as a happy n romantic one with their children's no separation track just show their romance n how they raise their children n their daily routine
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome prologue...
glad manan are married and this story is gonna show case their married life...hope you continue soon...
can't wait to see what their reactions are gonna be once they meet each other...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well d response was not as expected...but for those who look bit interested...will post this part for them and hope that this time I will get enough response...

PART-1

Nandini was impatiently pacing to and fro and her heartbeat was increasing with each passing second ...she very well know that their is still time for their flight to land but now this VBwait is killing her...she wants to be in his arm...

Then after sometime their is her bestfriend Navya coming with her son rohan for d small party which was organized by nandini...well it was not exactly a party just a get together in which their will be just fab -5 , navya and abhimanyu.

Navya- Hye nandu tumne sab tyari kr bhi li...humne kha tha n ki hum mil kr krege...tum pakka hme manik aur cabir se daat sunvaogi...

Nandini- chill navya...na Hi bhai kuch kahege aur na Hi manik...I will handle them...(to roha) arey mra baccha itna sad kyu h, aj to papa bhi aa rhe h n..

Rohan- (while sitting towards nandini and keeping his head in her lap)
Bhua vo ek week baad stul stalt ho jayeda na to fll no masti nd m manan k sath khel bhi ni pauga

Nandini- arey but is bar to manan bhi apke sath Skul jayega...
Nd rohan face too light up.

Navya- vse h kha manan

Manan- m yha pl hu maasi
( nd he come running down stairs from his room nd was abot to fall)
Nandini shouts- carefully baccha...nd he smiles towards her...kitni bar bola h manan tumhe sidhiyo pr bhaga mt kro but mri koi sune tab n...

While @ Airport
The flight has landed nd they all come out after checking nd taking their luggage..
Mukti- finally we r back!!!
Aliya- ye!! It was quite long hectic too...
Cabir- yeh,!! Let's go home fast my 2 love will be waiting
Dhruv just nodded who was standing taking his and alya's 1 year daughter...

They all sat in the car all were chit chatting while manik was just sitting quite nd waiting to reach home as soon as possible...

Precap- manan meet

So how was it..?? Was it good or bad do tell me by ur comments nd if u all are not liking it I will surely not want to waste any of our time so plzz guyzz if u are liking nd want me to continue plzzz comment nd hit the like...

OK thanks
Love
Sakshi
Edited by softysakshi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was nice...
Well abhi to story start hoi hai i'm sure it will have success...
Or ye kia Sirf manan nai sab k bache hain... hehehe...
Countinue soon.
Take care
Stay blessed
Love
Dua...
Edited by dua_arafat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Superb update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazin'
it's so interesting
wow!
Nandu is pregnant and has a son also!
That's good
waiting to read manan meet!
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was amazing update. Please continue soon. And pm next time before update the chapter. Thankyou dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update post the next part soon n long one

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