Manan ff- together forever chap 6 on pg 11 on 25oct - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Hey
I really loved it
The language used by the children I so cute
Nandani having second child
I really liked the chapter it was cute
Waiting for Manan meeting
Please PM when you post the next chapter
KEEP SMILING
KEEP RISING
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
awesome update...
manan and rohan are just too cute...cant wait to see their bond...
waiting for manan to meet...keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Nice prologue and ch 1...
Manan married & have kids...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Sounds interesting
Pls add me to the pm list
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Hey guyzz...I'm back...I know I'm late nd a big sorry for that...so without wasting anytime here goes ur next update

PART-2

Manik's pov

After a drive of one and half hour, we reached MALHOTRA Masion where two noo three love of my life were waiting...
all the way while going in, I was only thinking abt her that now her belly would have grown bigger, how will she look, what will be her reaction...yehh reaction because from the time we met in my office this was the 1st time that we are away from each other...
By thinking this I entered in the mansion,
unaware of my arrival she was busy in kitchen with navya while manan and rohan were running behind each other...as soon as manan saw me he shoute...

Manan- dad...nd he ran towards me geeting attention of nandini too...
While manan just came nd hoped in my arms. Nd I happily pull him up hugged him...he started sobbing . badly... as he is just like me who doesn't cry but makes other cry but at the the he is a baby who met his father after long 2 months...

Nandini's pov

I was busy in preparing snacks for manan and rohan when manan shouted...and I got alerted that he came, yes my Mani is here, he is back to me
I went towards the hall and saw that manan was crying in manik's arms while other were smiling at them...
As soon as we saw each other we had an eyelock telling all our pain carve for each other in this 2 monts...
Only we both knw how we were still away for each other...it was just coz of our surrounding nd our eyelock broke coz of Rohan who was in bhai's arms nd happily chatting abt gifts which he has to bring him

I went near them nd hug each of them
Mukti- kesi h tu choti,??? All fine n...!! I just nodded with a smile nd hugged her after hugging alya and dhruv with a kiss on forhead to their little angel...
I went towards bhai who kept rohan down nd hugged me nd kissed me on my temple

Cabir- ksa h mra baccha...!! How r u, tu thik h n...koi prblm to nhi hui n...
I just gave him an assuring smile...

Manik's pov

While she was meeting to every one manan was still in my arms not in a mood to leave me , I smiled and patted his back nd mukti ruffuled his hair

Manike- hey champ!!! Calm down...no more crying now...ab to dadda is back n

Manan- dadda I missed u bahut sala...extending his both little hand( he said cutely while sobbing)

Kissing on his forehead- I too missed u my jaan...but bass ab no more crying, u r my strong baccha n ( he nodded)
He was continuously crying from last 10 mints nd so now sniffing badly

Manik- nandu give a glass of water nd after making manan drink all were sitting nd manan was in manik's lap nd nandu was too sitting behind him

Manik took nandu in side hug and kissed her on hairs nd she engulfed more in him

All know that how they both were carving for each other nd all were happy to see the happy famile while they knw ki there is still a lot bcz manan had not even talked properly , they were just busy in feeling each other's presence and need alone time but not getting it

Only manik and nandini knows ki how they were controlling their emotions

Mukti- navya abb tumhari mom ksi h, unki ek dam se tabiyat k karan u have to rush from London n...

Navya- ha mukti-...vo thk h...hum kal Hi aaye h Delhi se...
Mukti nodded

Nandini was kissing their entangled fingers then cabir asked

Cabir- nandu tu bta, ksi h tu, all well n, regular checkup to krwa rhi thi n, nd jyada workload to nhi h n...aur tune college se chutti to le li n...he asked all this in one breath

Nandini- ha bhai, m bilkul perfect hu...koi prblm nhi hui h mujhe, last semester ke exams abhi 2 week phl Hi khtm hue...

Mukti- chalo accha hua tri exams khatm ho gye, vese bhi its 5th month of ur pregnancy now no more stress...nd abb m aa gyi hu n...m tre sath Hi rahugi if u need any help...

Alya- yeh nandini mukti is very good baby seater nd knows so much abt all this as she had an grt experience with my daughter...
Nd all start giggling remembering the moments

Mukti- yes alya-,, they were really get ( sarcastically )

Nd their chit chat goez on, on various random topics nd pulling leg of each other

Precap- in room
Manik- stop crying shona...
Nandini- I missed u Mani...I love u soo much...!!!

In short...the time for some romance ;)

I hope the chapter is long enough...well a big thanks to all who commented...nd I would have replied but again I dnt knw how to reply to ur comments...

Nd those who want pm...I'm sorry but can send only tab when any of u will tell me ki how to pm...

If u like d update please do comment guyzz...nd any criticism is more than welcome

NOTE- I'm changing d name of d story as there is one more story whose name is "Tum Hi ho"
So new name will be
Manan ff-"Together forever"

Love
Sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Hey dear...
Just read it all in one go...
I r an awesome writer...
Good Going...
M yeah to reply any comment just click the option of QUOTE...(it will be above the commemt only) and them uh can reply all the comments...
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The another way is where uh can see the anyones comment on your FF, you will see an option of PM under it, just click it n fill the PM content uh want to send...
U can also see the option of PM in the Profile of the user...
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N yeah Do PM me if u can...
Babyeee
Take care
Stay Blessed

LOADS OF LOVE,
Garima
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
it was fantastic update. Please post the next part soon. Thankyou dear. Tack care of yourself.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Nice chapter
Poor baby was not even ready to come down from Manik's embrace

Loved it

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice start dear
I loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Hey!!! 😊
It was amazing!!! 👏
Waiting for your next update!!!

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