MANAN FF: IT'S NOT END,IT'S NEW START..... Chapter 4 pg 29 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dashreya21

first of all...

GET WELL SOON MY DEAR...
THAT'S SO SWEET OF YOU TO GIVE US UPDATE EVEN WHEN U ARE NOT WELL AND IN HASPITAL...
THE UPDATE IS SUPER...I CAN FEEL NANDINI'S PAIN AND HERE I WAS ABLE TO READ IT AS I AM SURE YOU WILL BRING MANIK SOON NOT LIKE IN THE SHOW AND THAT'S WHY I STOP WATCH AS COULDN'T SEE NANDINI BEING SAD...IN YOUR STORY SINCE MANIK WILL RETURN SO I ABLE READ AND MOST IMPORTANTLY ALSO LIKING IT...
👏
OKAY SO GET WELL SOON AND COME WITH MORE CHAPTERS😊



THANK U SO MUCH
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aavani

kiddo...

get well soon baby...
pls take care of ur self...and be careful

update was awesome
loved it
loved the way fab3 supported nandini
u penned beautifully
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
stay blessed...

love u...!!!



AWWW LOVE U TOO DIII
MISSING U
THANKS FOR UR LOVE ND CARE
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Posted: 9 years ago
THANK U SO MUCH GUYS FOR UR LOVE, CARE
YA I AM IMPROVING
MY WRITINGS ND MY HAND ALSO
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Posted: 9 years ago

Precap:

Nandini: We Want Our All Instruments

Nyonik: Kk Then Take It Fast Nd Leave



(Everyone Pick Up Their Instruments...Dhruv & Mukti Pick Up Their Respective Guitar, Aliya Her Keyboard, Navya Helps Her Arayman Was Going To Pick up Manik's Guitar But was stopped by Nandu, she Herself Goes Towards Guitar Nd Picks It Carefully)

(Bg Song YehDosti... MiltiNasseb Se)



CHAPTER 4

Scene 1

Space Academy, Corridor

Everyone was walking in the corridors...

Nandu reminisces the time she spends with manik, the time which they both spend together... their time... while touching guitar she reminisces how he teached her guitar... how they sang song before fusion concert on her terrace ...

So many memories were connected to this guitar...

The hope of togetherness... fusion concert... her 18th birthday... so many...!!!!!

She was not able to hold herself. She rans towards music room



Scene 2

Music room

Nandu is sitting on chair and caressing guitar... Manik's guitar...

Soon everyone comes inside. They felt bad to see her like this... fab3 came towards her...

Aliya: Nandu... plz hold yourself... plz for us

Mukti: we can't see u like this...

(Both were feeling like crying but they could not Nandu would became weak nd this thing they never wanted)

Dhruv: Nandu do u want us to became weak ?

(Nandu shooked her head)

No na then plz stop

Nandu wiped her tears

Fab3 hugs her



Soon they broke their hug

Navya: guys today is Manik's birthday nd what u all r crying? We have to celebrate it

Aryaman: Ya guys!!!!!! So let's start...

Sooon everyone started to decorate music room



Scene 3

London

Boy came towards ICU

He sees his friend

He was under stress aqnd too confused as to what to do nd not?

Dr gives him time as to think what to do...!!!!!!

He remembered one small incident of his life

one girl in her seventeen's was crying nd crying

Her love of life was in ICU he had met with an accident

He had got injuries on his head nd hand...

Girl was sobbing seeing it through the glass

Boy came towards her nd said her to not cry nd be a strong she hugged him nd said "bhai he will be alright na soon... bhai I am afraid bhai..."

The boy promised her that he will always be thereto protect him

She smiled faintly

He also smiled looking at her...

Her words were echoing in his ears

"bhai..." "bhai he will be alright na soon" "bhai..." " I am afraid bhai..."



Soon his trance was broken when Dr asked him about his descision, he replied to dr that he is confused and he still needed some more time to think

Dr just nodded nd left





Scene 4

Space academy

Music room



The room was decorated with many ballons and ribbons hung from them the pics of their old memories shove as the star of the sky

In middle of room there was a table on which cake was placed

Cake of course in Manik's fav flavored chocolate cake

Beautifully decorated...

Everything was looking perfect but still it is imperfect



Fab3 nd Nandu cut the cake together & feed each other

Everyone thought of manbir

They were missing him so much

After some spending some more good time with each other everyone decided to leave

Aryaman was the first to leave... after that navya left

Now mukti Nandu nd dhrulya left

Nandu signaled mukti nd both excused theirself nd leaves both dhrulya together

Nandu nd mukti was going to sit in car but nandu's phone rang she picked it it was from chachi

Chachi: Nandu beta college laute waqt rishabh ke reports lana hospitals se

Nandu was tired nd she was not in mood but she couldn't denied chachi so she said yes

BUT WHO KNEW THAT THIS VISIT WOULD BE A SHOCK FOR HER LIFE...

WHAT WILL HAPPEN?

IS THAT THING HER LIFE INTO GOOD ONE OR BAD ONE?

IS IT A TURNING POINT OF HER LIFE ?



Let's See

What Will Happen?

Stay Tuned

FOR COMPENSATION I WILL POST NEXT PART SOON

MAY BE NOW OR TODAY EARLY MORNING

Edited by Samruddhi_Kadam - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice and emotional update
cont soon
Edited by vaishnavigarla - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
i love ur story...waiting for turning point...i hope it will good for nandini...thank u for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing ...

hospital story is getting intresting .
thy r in London hospital how it can connected to thm.

u r amazing writer.

suspense .
waiting for next part ..
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Sam..
Nice update dear..
So emotional..
Pls Manik aur nandini ko Mila do ab toh..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..
Bye.. Take care..
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...so emotional
but a lit of confusing, means who is that mysterious guy plz tell us
try to give long update and if possible by today

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