Gravity of Love [Swara-Sanskar, FF, updated pg.23] - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sooo painful it is! feeling constriction in my heart too... I don't have words right now as can't think straight after seeing the state of Sanskaar. :( please try to update next chapters as soon as possible... P.s - you are a brilliant writer.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my god...! This was heart wrenching 😭
Sanskaar was in soo much pain ! Poor guy, I almost cried reading this. Why is Swara doing this to him ? Well...she must be having some reason. Eager to find out what it is. How would have sanskaar felt when lakshya kissed swara...god ! And swara just walked away ? This is soo sad and confusing..Please do update soon I really want to know the reason behind her behaviour.

Now once again, let me applaud your writing👏👏 You write really well. You've portrayed sanskaar's pain soo beautifully i could feel it. Loved this update even though it was really sad, it was superbly written. Please please update soon.😳

PS: Please PM me the next time you update, i really don't wanna miss it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was amazing!! Thanks for pm!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is beautiful!👏

I loved how you penned down Laksh's, Sanky's and Swara's pain. Ergh I don't even have words to describe how brill this is.

It genuinely felt like my heart was breaking into a million pieces for Sanskaar. 😭
Can't wait for the next update, thank you for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Brilliant 👏 You are an amazing writer 😳
I was transported in an another world 😳
Felt Sanskar's pain 😭
You described all the emotions perfectly 😳
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
amazing!! Thanks for pm! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg that was so touching...
felt bad for Sanskar...

this is not fair...
I dont like Lucky getting so close to Swara..

Plz dont do that..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: TRPS

Sooo painful it is! feeling constriction in my heart too... I don't have words right now as can't think straight after seeing the state of Sanskaar. :( please try to update next chapters as soon as possible... P.s- you are a brilliant writer.



Aww, sorry for making you feel so sad But it is necessary for the plotline, unfortunately. And as I said, I have a little sadistic streak... but things will look better, eventually!

Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cintila

Oh my god...! This was heart wrenching😭

Sanskaar was in soo much pain ! Poor guy, I almost cried reading this. Why is Swara doing this to him ? Well...she must be having some reason. Eager to find out what it is. How would have sanskaar felt when lakshya kissed swara...god ! And swara just walked away ? This is soo sad and confusing..Please do update soon I really want to know the reason behind her behaviour.

Now once again, let me applaud your writing👏👏You write really well. You've portrayed sanskaar's pain soo beautifully i could feel it. Loved this update even though it was really sad, it was superbly written. Please please update soon.😳

PS: Please PM me the next time you update, i really don't wanna miss it😳



Next chapter will be Swara-chapter, so we might get more of an insight about her thoughts on the whole situation. But yes, poor Sanskar! I am making him suffer quite a lot - but, as I say, at the end of all hardships, there awaits us a great reward, na 😉

And aww, thank you! 😳 I am always so happy to read that my writing is liked so much!

I was going to PM you for this update but saw that you already liked it - so, I let it be. But will pm you next time, don't worry 😉

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