Gravity of Love [Swara-Sanskar, FF, updated pg.23]

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@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

That's beautiful but painful.

I had tears in my eyes reading the update.

Sanskaar is in so much pain, can't bear it. Please update soon.

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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Heartbreaking yet so beautifully expressed. Thank you for the PM. Do update soon.

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gayu6

@gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Feeling sad for sanskar 😭 finally what's swara's decision

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kaku17

@kaku17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

This is way too heart wrenching...angst at its best...😭...sanskaar oh my god...even my heart broke in to pieces along with his..😭...can't even imagine what sans would have felt when he saw lucky kissing swara, though she definitely wasn't responding, but did not shove him aside too...😲..I know I would have died...😭

Having said that it way too brilliant, and I have always loved your work right from NAUC forum...esp that TS " a tale of two brothers"...my fav..⭐️...sorry for getting side tracked...😛

Please do update the remaining parts sooner...I have a really low threshold for pain...it will take some time to recover from this chapter for me and even in the serial the track is moving towards angst...my poor heart...😭

Please update soon and hoping that this time it would be happy one...and thanks for the pm...😃

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Oh my god...so painful...my poor sanskar

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sonal

@SONAL30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Wow noor...finally u updated😃

Okk awesome chapter

But what the hell is going on...lux ji kissed swara🤢that too infront of sansku😭

Whatever but he was forcing himself on swara😡

Hey but why the hell miss swara was listening his bakwass

AP😡 gandi aurat plzz think about sansku yaar he loves her but nhi she only cares about her son's happiness

Swara n lux ka rishta🤔

But DP was the saviour...he talked to sansku n finally sanskaar is in love

Now m waiting for SwaSan wedding

Continue soon dear🤗

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c85rie

@c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

I am really liking your story. SwaSan is captured very well. Do continue soon.

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_InDreamWorld_

@_InDreamWorld_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Wow superb
Thanks for pm 😛

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1018283

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Live-life
That was literally heartbreaking for me! I could hear my heart breaking into two as well in the fictional sense of the world. 😆

I had tears streaming down my eyes as well. Ah All the feels right now! I can't!
And can I just say how beautifully you describe each and very detail of a scene be it any character or feeling or emotion. It's seriously beyond amazing. And honestly I don not mind the touch of sadism in this it makes you want the romantic stuff even more. I like that kind of angst! And you clearly are really good at making readers crave for what they want. 😉

Sanskar's delllima and his longing made me cry the only thing missing was having a tub full of ice-cream so I could eat my feelings while he turned a little like devdas but without the sharab and shabab, yet

😆

And I liked Bade Papa's indirect way of giving advice! It made him want to fight for his love. That was a good scene. I liked it.

And Laksh...was the unbeknownst Devdas in this one btw. I mean uske pas sharab to hai but uski shabab jail mein hai isliye doosron ki shabab se kam chalana pad rahe hai bechare ko! 😛 Well dem love triangles and all. Although...it's more like a rectangle with a line missing since Ragini is in jail which means that she may or may not come back and Swara's feelings being...confuzzled right now. Make that two lines! So technically this isn't even a shape. only two dots which are Laksh and Sanskar! 😆 My understanding of geometry with chemistry is amazing (JK 😆)

And Hawww! Laksh kissed Swara! Hailaaa 😲

I defintitely did not see that coming...well then again...he was drunk so...not surprised. 😛
But did Swara kiss him back? That iz the question *shakespeare style*
😛

But Sanskar...Oh god he was the highlight of this whole update! I feel for him...poor guy! 😭
But it's ok...Love will conquer all! <3

That was a Beyond fabulous update! I loved it to each word and emotion portrayed! Seriously!
Update soon. My mind won't be quite until I know what happens next!

😆

Love youuu! Keep rocking it! 😃

Until laters!

Hey, dear! 😉

First of all, thank you for this really long comment - I love reading all the comments, especially if they are longer 😳

You know, I am smiling brightly right now knowing that I made you feel all of this! There are writers who are good in describing surroundings, those who are good in telling a story etc... - I don't know what I am 'good' at but I always give most importance to the emotions of my characters. How else will I make my readers feel with them? And seeing that, apparently, I am able to portray the emotions well, makes me happier than a child offered chocolate (though, I wouldn't mind chocolate, either) 😆

They always do, don't they? There heroes of us can't resist their sharab and devdas mode, if need arises. Well, let's see if Sanskar can or cannot 😉

DP is the second most sensible Maheshwari. I like the guy well enough and needed to give him an important role - I so can see him sharing a warm fatherly bond with Sanskar! And he is a just man. Simply because his real son is suffering, he won't put his other son through pain, as well. As he, himself, said: He has wronged Sanskar, once, now it's time to do some praychit 😆

Ooh, only Lucky-Sanskar left in your equation? ☺️ 😆 I love me good bromance, but it's not necessarily for this story.

Once again, thank you for this awesome comment! I am going to start the new chapter and hope to finish it soon - also, hope to read from you, again 😉

Edited by Amina-Zahra - 9 years ago

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1018283

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: zoya6
Good chapter..u express emotions of characters really well..do continue soon.. 😊

Thank you, yaar! 😊 Glad you liked it - and I hope you will keep liking it as you have a hand in me posting this story, to begin with 😳 Though, as you might have noticed, I am slowly averting from your given scenario... but, yeah, that's me 😆

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