Gravity of Love [Swara-Sanskar, FF, updated pg.23]

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Love it. Can u plz pm me when u update next?

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TRPS

@TRPS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

I didn't get pm but guess what!!!!! I didn't need as I was keeping an eye on this thread. 😳 I have already read it in the morning when you updated few minutes ago. 😛 but if you want , you can send me a pm. Such a nice chapter it is! filled with thrill, truth and love... 😊 perfectly written. I love that how beautifully you wrote small details of the scene like Sanskaar's fingers combing through Swara's hair, his murmuring... So serene they sound. 😊 but I didn't get the point of backing out of Swara? 😕 seriously girl ,your Love with you then why as you denying from such a pure love... eagerly waiting for next part. 😊

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Arthi Shefali

@AartShefa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Lovely..

I would love to read more. .

Waiting for your next update. .

Update soon

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Fantastic- I love your story and your writing flows and expresses so well, I'm hooked! Can't wait to read more! 👏

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

This is sooo good!

I'm really intrigued and eager to read the next chapter.

Fantastically written, keep up the good work. 😊👏

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Sana

@Swasan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Nice Update
Plzz PM me when you will update next

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_InDreamWorld_

@_InDreamWorld_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Superb update 👏
Plz pm me next

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1018283

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Annei123
Lovely update !!!!
Do update next part soon !!! 😃

Thank you 😊

I had a mild writer's block, very annoying. But the chapter is flowing, now, and hopefully it will be read very soon 😉

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1018283

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
yeah rangini ka parda pash ho gai...
reaaly nice..

Loved the scene of Swasan..
Sanskar Poor...
Why is swara no ready to accept the relation???
😭😭😕
thank you for the PM

Yeah - I can't tolerate to write too much about evil-Ragini 😆

And really glad that you liked the SwaSan scene! 😳

That's a good question. What is Swara's problem, really? Unfortunately, only Swara knows it, and poor Sanskar will have to suffer for a little bit due to it 😔

No problem!