Manan new begining (chapter 19)pg 14 updated on 15/12/15 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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So sweet romance 😳
Thank you for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update nd manik in mundu hahahahaha kaise lagega...
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it was fantastic update. Please post the next part soon. Thankyou dear . Tack care of yourself. Keep smiling 😊
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Chapter 10

Before duo competition

Next day in SPACE.The day before duo competition.

All came early so that they could do more practice. All were preparing for competition in their respective classrooms.

Cabir and Navya were practicing but suddenly Navya's back started to pain so she stopped so Cabir asked her why she stopped. She said that she is having back pain.

Cabir got worried and asked her to take break. He helped her to get up from her chair forwarded his hand and takes her hand in his. They go to the collider as she needed some fresh air. Cabir leaves her in collider she was sitting on chair arranged near wall. And goes to take water for her.

Harshad was passing from there but seeing Navya he stopped.

Harshad: So lagta hai ki koi competition se darr gaya hai iss liye practice karni bhi band kar di hai. Aur aaise collidor mai baithe timepass chal raha hai

Navya: Dar aur tumse. Harshad kaunse dunyame jite ho tum humne tumse darna kabka chod diya hai.

They get interrupted by Cabir as entered there.

Cabir: Navya your water he gave her bottle. Navya acche mahol mai raha karo.Agar bure logon ke beech me rahi toh bacche par bura asar padega.

Harshad angrily listen cabir pointing finger at him

Cabir: Tum yaha time kyu waste kar rahe ho jao aur practice karo

Harshad goes from there angrily.

They went to their classroom

Navya was trying to sit on chair but suddenly she kept her hand on stomach and said "oouch" loudly

Cabir get panic

Cabir: Kya hua thik toh ho na ?

Navya: Who kuch nahi baby kicked said while smiling

Cabir: ffo tumne toh muzhe dara hi diya.

Navya: hum practice karte hai meri vajah se bahot time chala gaya hai.

Cabir: haan chalo

Manan were practicing

Nandini: Tomorrow is big day for all of us.

Manik: haan who toh hai. Aur bhi ek baat hai atleast ek toh aaisi competition hui jiski vajah se we got more time to spend with each other.

Both looked at each other and smiled

In another classroom

Alya: Aryaman kya tumhe lagta hai ki we are fully prepared?

Aryaman: Are you getting nervous? Well we have whole day we still can practice and improve ourselves

Alya: you are right we will do practice then all will be fine.

Mukti and Dhruv were discussing about competition

Mukti: ab lag raha hai ki competition hai. Muzhe lag raha hai ki we are good but I want it more better

Dhruv: Yes Mukti tomorrow we will roch the stage

Mukti: Yeh hui na baat

All met while they are having break

They took break and then went for practice

Nandini: Manik I think aaj hame practice jaldi khatam karke ghar jana chaye na.So we will get proper rest.Hame kal jaldi bhi toh aana hai na

Manik: Haan who toh hai we will practice then go.

It was Almost 8 o'clock.

Manik dropped Nandini home.

She get out of the car Manik also came.

Manik: Finally kal competition

Nandini: Hmm

She was lost watching him.

Manik: Tumhe kya hua. Aaj itana pyar.

Nandini: Sraighten herself and said aaisa kuch nahi hai . I just hope ki kal hum jeet jaye

She was exited

Nandini: Aur agar hum jeet gaye toh na we will celebrate.

Manik was smiling as she was looking so cute.

Then he was getting naughty

Manik: haan yeh bhi koi kahene ki baat hai kya jarur celebrate karenge jaise last time kiya tha when tumne aur maine talent hunt jeeta tha tub.

Nandini: haan

She didn't realize his meaning when she said yes. But soon she realized what he meant.

She blushed and found Manik was smirking at her.

Nandini: Manik chalo mai jati hoon chichi wait kar rahi hogi

Manik : Okk Good night

Both hugged. Nandini kissed her cheeks and said bye.

Manik: Tayar rahena kal I will pick you

Nandini: haan

Finally day of their competition arrives

Harshad was present in Neonika's office

Neonika: Ab kya chahiye tumhe?

Harshad: Mrs.M kya apko pata bhi hai ki Manik and nandini are participating together

Naeonika: yes So

Harshad: Toh fir aap aaise shant kaisse baith sakti ho

Neonika: Toh what do you want me to do Harshad?

Harshad: Leave it. jo karna hai mai karunga. I don't need you.

Neonika: Don't forget tum kisase baat kar rahe ho. Aur rahi baat need kit oh agar bhul gaye ho toh yaad dila doon ki Whatever you did in talent huntuske baad b hi you are here not in police station it's all becoz of me.

So jo karna hai who karo.But iss baar koi stupidity nahi karna.

Manik ko harana tumhare bas ki baat nahi hai. You can cheat and win nahi toh kuch nahi ho sakata.

Saying this she told him to leave from there

Harshad goes from there thinking what he should do

Guys what do you think yeh Harshad hamare Manan ko perform karne dega ya nahi

Ab kya plan karega against manan

Who will win the competition?

Iss sabke answer ke liye you have to wait for next part.

Are you guys exited???

If yes then comment.So that mai next part update karu

Love

sonpri

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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awesome update ...
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
awesome update...
loved manan to the core...
cabir's concern for navya was awesome...
hearted like always is gonna loose...as love wins over all...
manan are gonna rock the stage...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Wow ur ff is so nice yaar

Its exactly what I want to read
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Amazing update
looking forward to the competition :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
AWESOME UPDATE
I THINK MANAN WILL WIN
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its okk dear..😊
\i m nt angry.. sorry if i reacted too much..
r ur updates r lovely..

very much excited 4 the nxt..

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