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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved the update. Awesome fabulous.
Continue soon eagerly waiting.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ofcourse he will meet Nandu nd gonna have very qualitiy time..

giving chakma to NYO...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all I am really very sorry ki maini pura week update nahi kiya

But I am back and here is eighth chapter

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Manik goes with Neonika in her car.

They reached to the office here meeting was going to be held but other members were not present there yet.

Manik: Neonika I want to ask you one thing is it one of your stupid plans? No one is present & why the hell I am here just for some signs. Tum bji to muzhe papers de sakti thi na to yahan aane ki kya jarurat thi?

Neonika: Manik don't give so much importance to you. I never wanted you to come for an ordinary meeting. They forced me to do so I have to. I had no choice.

Manik: Really Mrs.Neonika Malhotra has no choice that's new. Aur waise bhi you never give importance to people you are just after money.

They got interrupted when other members entered into room.

Neonika: Good afternoon.

And meeting got started.

In college Nandini was missing Manik badly

Aryaman and Alya were in classroom.

Alya: Aaj no practice only photo session ok??

Aryaman: Ya kyu nahi aaj toh sabka haq banta hai.Sab ladkiyaan bahot khubsurat dikh rahi hai.

Alya: Accha

Aryaman: Ya aree such bol raha hoon.You are looking really beautiful.

Alya: Thank you said giving smile

Par muzhe selfies bhi click karni hai so let's go and find others.

Aryaman: Toh phir chalo

Cabir and Navya were sitting in canteen

Cabir: Navya ek baat bataoon tum aaj bahot acchi dikh rahi ho par...

Navya: par kya?

Cabir: Jara sambalke chalo Saree can make you fall.

Navya: Don't worry Cabir hum apna khayal rakhenge aur tum bhi toh ho yahan pe.

Aryaman and Alya came there

Aryaman: Whats up guys kya ho raha hai?

Cabir: Kuch nahi yaar Manik nahi hai Dhruv bhi gayab hai aur saath mai Nandini bhi.Yeh log kaha hai?

Aryman: Who Nandini se baat ho gayi hai she is on her way

On the other side meeting got over But Manik still had to wait for some time. There was formal lunch was arranged. He was least interested. So he was about to leave. But stopped by Neonika.

Manik gave her questioning look

Manik: What an kya? Ho gaya na tumhara. I sighned those papers. Ab kya chahiye tumhe?

All were looking at them

Realizing this

Neonika: Please sit down. It's important so you can't leave like this.

Manik: Seriously and leave from there saying he needs a break for minutes.

He came out from that room. He called Nandini. She picked phone.

Nandini: Manik ka baa rahe ho meeting is over na?

Manik: Who Nandini meeting khatam ho gayi hai par muzhe rukna hoga. But I will try ki mai jaldi aau

Nandini: Manik kya bol rahe ho ,Thik hai bye

She was really angry now

She reached to the canteen

Cabir: Kya hua Nandini you look so angry

Nandini: Jao apne dost se puccho kya kiya usane. He said he will be late tab tak college bhi khatam ho jayega.

Cabir: Nandini do you want any cold drink?

Nandini gave him an angy look

Nandini: Please muzhe pareshan maat karo

Cabir: Acch thik hai nandini itani pareshan maat ho Agar Manik late aata hai toh phir hum sab use traditional wear pahenayege aur baad mai celebrate karenge Is it ok?

Nandini: Par uske liye who yahan hona ton chahiye na.

Manik was damn sure that Nandini must be pissed of becoz of what happened today.

He was trying to figure out what can make her happy.

His lunch got over and he feels relieved. So started to move towards car again he was stopped by Neonika

Neonika: Where are you going Manik?

Manik: And makes you think that I will answer this question?

Neonika: Never mind but I need car I have to leave for airport so you can take another car.

Manik was feeling so happy he didn't say anything just said ok

Then driver came there with another car Manik takes car and goes from there

Sorry guys abhi bhi Manan nahi mile

What do you think Manik will do for Nandini who is really angry with him

Socho socho...

And don't forget to comment and like


Precap:

Manan rain romance

Mbe time for some south Indian traditional wear bas itani hi hint de sakati hoon

Edited by sonpri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Very nice update...
Please show some manan moments...
Update faster...
Thank you...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Nice update bt m w8ng for manan romance
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very bad..
ek to late update..then vo bhi ittuu saa.
uske upar suspense, ,,😡😡

update soon na yaarr.. vo bhi big wala..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Chapter 9

Manik directly drove the car towards his home .He called Nandini and asked her to came home immediately

Initially she refused but the agreed. But still she was angry.

She entered in Manik's bedroom calling his name but he didn't reply she again called his name.

This time little lower voice.

Manik was standing in front of her And guess what he was wearing Mundu.

Nandini couldn't believe her eyes. Manik who was hesitant to wear mundu on her birthday was standing in front of her and actually looking good in it.

Nandini faked anger.

Nandini: What is this Manik ? kyu bulaya muzhe yahan?

Manik: I am sorry Nandini. I got late so I didn't came to college. But all I know ki tumhare birthday ke din you wanted to see me in mundu. But I was not feeling comfortable .Waise abhi bhi yahin feeling hai.Aisa lag raha hai ki maine kuch pahena hi nahi hai

Nandini was smiling watching him

Nandini: Actually you are looking good Manik

Manik: Thank you.Aur dekho pyar main kya kya karna padta hai Panjabi ladka is wearing mundu.

He was giving look to Nandini

Both started to laugh.

Nandini: Par such mai Manik you are looking cute.

Manik: Accha yeh baat hai ye sirf maine tumahre liye pahena hai. Aur cabir called me hame jana hai

Nandini: haan to chalo

Manik: kya chalo I have to change. Main aaise nahi aane wala

Nandini: Ok baba go and change I am waiting.

Manik goes and changed himself into kurta pajama

Manik: Cabir ne muzhe aaise kyu bulaya hain

Nandini: It's your punishment tumne muzhe dinbhar akele choda na issiliye

Manik: It's looking weird Nandini. I am not going to wear this I will go and change this.

He was about to go but Nandini stopped him by holding his hand.

Nandini: Manik chalo aaise hi .We are getting late.

Manik: Bilkul bhi nahi just give me two minutes please

Nandini: Okk but jaldi aana

Manik goes and change himself into white shirt and black pants (imagine fusion concert night)

Nandini was texting cabir that they left

She was busy and didn't realize that Manik was standing behind her.

He was watching her. Admiring her beauty.

He came from back and slid his hand to her waist Hugged her .He goes near her ear and said I missed you Nandini.

Nandini turned back and hugged him tightly rested her head on his chest and said I missed you too

She said this so lovingly Manik couldn't hold himself .He break the hug and lifted her chin and places soft kiss on her lips.

Manik: You have no idea ki mai itani der tumse kaise dur rahaand the way you are looking I was desperate to meet you.

Nandini blushed.

Nandini: Aasi baat hai toh late kyu aaye?

Manik: It was really important warna mai aur kabhi Neonika ki baat manu yeh ho sakta hai kya?

Nandini: Toh iss ki barpayi karne ke liyr ye tha yeh Mundu

Manik nodded in no

Nandini: Manik

Manik: matlab haan but if you remember on your birthday we had a deal that if I will wear Mundu you will swimsuit REMEMBER

Nandini bite her lower lip as she remembered their conversation. And started to blush

Manik never leaves a chance to tease her

Manik: so maine apana task pura kar diya hai toh tum kab karne wali ho ?Matlab tell me agar tumhe abhi karna hai to warna you may forget again

For stopping him to talk further she said that Manik tumbhi na kitni der lagaoge ek to do baar change kiya chalo na she was still blushing and feeling shythinking her in swimming suit

They reached to Mukti's home

All came except aryaman who was busy in his stuff.

And Alya was late. She came last. She was all drenched. She was trying manage her saree. She stopped in middle when she realized that Dhruv was watching her .She blushed little. Dhruv was mesmerized by her beauty .She didn't even know why she was blushing. She was still angry on him.

Mukti gave her cloths to change .She joined them after she changed.

They were having fun. They played cards also. All started to move when it stopped raining.

Manik was driving car to drop Nandini home. They were in midway when car stopped.

Nandini thinks that Manik stopped it so she she started to ask him questions

Nandini: Manik kya hua tumne gaadi kyu roki?

Manik: Nahi,I didn't. I think there is some problem. Wait mai check karta hoom

Manik got out of the car and sensed that mechanic is needed. So he called his driver and asked him to came along with mechanic.

Nandini: toh manik hum phir kya karenge?

Manik: We will wait here till other car will reach here It will take hardly 20-25 minutes.

Nandini : Ok

It was chilling weather becoz thodi der pahele bahot barish hogayi thi

Both came out of the car Nandini saw one shed there was one chaiwala so she wanted to have it.

Both started to move but suddenly it started to rain again. It was raining heavily.

Both stopped at shade. Both were drenched. On the opposite side of shade chiwala was listening radio.

And RJ said Iss achanak ki barsaat hone se mahol suhana hoga hai Aur agar iss mausam mai do pyar karne wale sath ho toh kya kahna

Aur issi baat pe suniye barish mai apne partner ke saath yeh romantic gana.

Manan looked at each other

Nandini was already getting wet in rain as she loves rain and she was having fun.

And the song starts

Music get started

Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe pahli baarish ki duaa

Manik goes near her. Her back was towards him. He careses her hand and started to move his hand from her hand to her shoulder. And turn her face towards him.

Tere pahloo mein reh loon
Main khudko paagal keh loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan
Seh loon saathiya

Make her look into his eyes. Now both were looking at each other. Lost in each other

Koi nahi.. tere siva mera yahaan
Manzilein.. hain meri to sab yahaan
Mita de sabhi aaja faasle
Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le
Zara sa mujhme tu jhaank le
Main hoon kya?

He now hold her waist .she was wearing saree and it was all drenched .her saree made clear access to her bare waist. He pulled her closer. Tightening grip on her waist.

Woo.. aeee.. aeee.. aaa.. sathiyaa..
Ae ae... aa...

He brushes his thumb on her bare waist. And pulled her more closer decreasing already negligible distance between them


Pahle kabhi, na tune mujhe gham diya
Phir mujhe, kyun tanha kar diya
Guzaare thhe jo lamhe pyaar ke
Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke
To phir tune badli kyun adaa
Yeh kyun kiya?

Wo o wo o.. Wo o wo o..

He leaned and kissed near neck then kissed her cheek then another. She was turning red with each kiss.

Nandini encircled her hand around his neck pulling him closer.

Kabhi jo badal barse
Main dekhun tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe pehli barish ki duaa

And they kissed. First it was soft but it turned into passionate one. His hand started to move upwards from her waist. Her one hand was around his neck. She digs her nails into his hair. Another hand was moving from his neck to chest.

Tere pahloo mein rah loon
Main khudko pagal kah loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan, sathiya..

They were kissing each other as if they are kissing after ages. They were not ready to leave each other. But realizing that they need to breath they started to move apart unwillingly

Pehle kabhi, na tune mujhe gham diya
Phir mujhe, kyun tanha kar diya
Guzaare thhe jo lamhe pyaar ke
Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke
To phir tune badli kyun adaa
Yeh kyun kiya?

And rested their foreheads

Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe pehli baarish ki duaa
Tere pahloo mein reh loon
Main khudko paagal keh loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan
Seh loon sathiyaa..

Both were smiling. Now they were under shade. It was really cold and after getting wet in rain Nandini started to feel chill .Rain also stopped.

Manik: Nandini do you want to take tea? It will make feel you feel better.

Nandini nodded in yes.

Manik: Wait ek minute

Nandini: Kya hua?

Manik: just a minute

He goes near car and took his jacket.And placed it around nandini.

Nandini was smiling looking at his caring nature

Both go from there. They had a good time while taking sips of HOT tea .

Driver arrives there with a mechanic.

Manik takes another car and dives Nandini to her home.


I hope jin logon ko Manan scenes chahiye the unko wo mil gaya hai . I tried to fulfill your expectations.

Thanks for giving me suggestions. Keep suggesting so I can improve.

Please like karne ke liye sif ek button press karna padta hai so just click it.

And those who regularly like my post thank you guys you kept me motivated😊


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Edited by sonpri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
awesome update
loved it
good one
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
wowww
manik in mundu
manan rain romance
nyc one
cont soon
waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
loved manik in mundu...and his teasing of nandu...
rain dance was awesome...
hope dhrulya get back together...
can't wait to see what happens next...

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