The Fourth Janam - need suggestions - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: zeefan 1

whooooooooooo 😆 i love it please update soon! 😊


Originally posted by: Wisdom Mistress

Hey patel u did really good job. 😉 Carry on with the work 😃 and why shuldn't u akhir dost kiski hai 😆



thanks you too. knw u from school has done some good then init
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow! It's gr8...fav. Job 👏 👏 👏 kep up the gud work...I really appreciate ur effort 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tina_sre

Wow! It's gr8...fav. Job 👏 👏 👏 kep up the gud work...I really appreciate ur effort 😛



thanks for the reply. will surely continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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shall continue 2morrow if i can. til then intazar kejiye
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW!..great part!

you know, Raj + Priya are to names that go together!..i've seen so many movie's with Raj's & Priya's!😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Krupa-

WOW!..great part!

you know, Raj + Priya are to names that go together!..i've seen so many movie's with Raj's & Priya's!😆



i knw which is why i chose the two names for them. really like it (the names)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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RECAP: raj and priya's intro.

Raj and Tia reached college and the first thing they saw was Priya who was happily chatting away to her friends. raj smiled at the sight of her. She was looking exceptionally beautiful today. He couldn't help but smile.

He didn't notice his friends cumming upto him and nudging him on the shoulder until Jai came up right in front of him. This distracted Raj from seeing priya and finally noticed his friends standing next to him along with his sister. He smiled at them while they just stared from him to Priya.

Even they were Priya's friends as most of them from the footie team also sang and danced along with Priya in the school festivals but were more closer to Raj than her.

R: hey guys, its good to be back in college trying not to bring up the topic of Priya
J:yh dude, so good to be back.......... so you can just stare at her all day
R: who (he knew xactly who but didn't wanna show it)
Rohan: oh cummon raj, dnt act like u dnt knw. U staring at Priya. I mean, it is obvious that u like her......well more like LOVE her (seeing the look on raj's face). Everytime we talk bout her, you always end up talking the most bout her and then start smiling at the memory of her. It all has one word equalling to all the dat kind of behaviour - LOVE.
R: i knw rohan, i'm totally in love with her.........
(Priya comes)
P: in love with who?
Raj and evryone faces her ans looks shocked.
R: uhhhh........ummmmmmm........uhhhhhhhh
P: kya howa raj, tum kise bare mein baat karahe the?
R: nai, kise ki bare main nahin init guys.
They all nodded and priya just smiled back at them. She noticed
P:hey tia, you started college yeah?
T:yeah.
P:then y didn't u come with me, we could have gone together?
T: well i wanted to but you had already left the house.
P:oh okay, sorry
T:no problem
P: well guys, i gotta go. class gonna start soon and raj,(raj looked up) really looking forward for the first match.
R: okay
Priya went and raj smiled and turned to face his friends. Just then priya looked back and looked at Raj who had his back towards her and smiled. She walked on and went of to class.

So there guys, is an intro to college life. Part fan-fic is gonna be like taking place in college and another half somewhere else.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
wonderful yaar
do continue soon
update as soon as possible 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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people, i need sum ideas on how to continue with the ff
any suggestions are welcomed.

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