The Fourth Janam - need suggestions

hey people, like all of you, I too am a big fan of PKDN even though i ain't been on the forum. I have come up with this idea of a fan-fic for PKDN.

It starts 4rm when Krishna and Radhika have found out they have been tricked and now Krishna's grandad has decided to get Krishna married to Tanya. He also invites Radhika's family to show them that love can loose. He says that the wedding will take place in Himachal in the ghav Lakhanpur. So they all go and on reaching there, Krishna and Radhika have these strange feelings, as if they had been there before. But before he can find out what is causing those sensations, his father and two older brothers shoved Krishna into a mansion looking house (kunwar's house) and makes their way inside.

Radhika on the other hand starts feeling weird and begins to have flashbacks of her being Shyaama and Radha. As having the flashbacks, it takes her all around the village. Noticing her not there, Radhika's brother and father start looking for her. They go searching for her all over the village but in vain, they come back saying that they can't find her. Krishna gets worried as to where she might be and then also has flashbacks of him as shyaam running towards the house, to save radha and as kisan to come over there for Dada Thakur and he too follows the flashbacks hoping it would lead him to Radhika.

Meanwhile, in the village on the other side (where shyaama's house is), Radhika begins to remember all that had happen. She goes from her house to Kisan house remembering all that had happen in the past two janams that she and krishna took. She then makes her way to the mountain peak, where she jumped off saving herself from the evil Kunwar. She then shouts "KISAN, SHYAAM, KRISHNA!!!!!!!" Unable to take it all, she ran away from the mountain and headed back down, going towards her old house in the village.

Upon hearing her voice, Krishna immediately ran towards it, hoping and praying that she was safe & sound. He ran upto the mountain finding no-one there. He then remembered how he died as kisan, jumping off the mountain, he remembered ballu - his childhood friend and his dadi. he remembered his past two janams, crying out "SHYAAMA, RADHA, RADHIKA"

Hearing his voice, she ran only to find Uday in her way. Running as fast as she could, she made her way towards the forest, re-calling how she ran from Kunwar's clutches. Krishna had already ran off to find her (radhika) and found only Tanya in her wedding outfit.

T: krishna, i love you alot
K: but i dnt love u, i love only shyaama i mean radha i mean radhika.
T: wht?
K: no time to xplain. I need to find radhika

And with that he ran off in search of his radha. Radhika, in the meantime, was saving herself from Uday's clutches. (okay guys, i gonna fast forward a bit, cnt be bothered to give detail - too tired). She reached the mountain top and remembered that nite she jumped off the peak. She then saw Krishna and shouted his name, he heard it and ran off towards her.

U: radhika, where can u go now?
Radhika just kept silent. Not sayin a single word, she backwards herself from him, she started to prepare herself and with bravery she fell backwards.
This uday saw and became shocked. krishna reached there and looked for radhika. He punched Uday and he too fell into the depth of below, allowing himself to die with his radha.

The family find out and uday get send to jail. Both families repent on what they done and asked for forgiveness.

Now we see a girl in her PJ's waking up 4rm bed in one house and we see a guy in an another house pulling the curtains from his room.

PRECAP: Krishna and Radhika's intro.
Stay tuned people

whooo good one sum, i like say that sum is my best friend in school so please read! 😉 😛 😃

Wow!..cool Fan-fic! 👏 ..Never knew your are such a big fan of PKDN! 😛 Very nice!. 👏 👏 👏 . keep it up! 👍🏼

thanks you two for the lovely comment. the next part will be up 2morrow

Great FF!..I'm happy that someone who can write actually bothered to write a FF!..

btw, are they gonna be born as Krishna & Radhika again?..because they had diff name in all 3 janams naa?
& if I'm allowed to suggest, how about Krish & Radhiyana(sorry, no proper girl name..so just made one up😆, maybe you can look up somewhere)

@-Krupa-: their names aren't gonna be Krishna & Radhika, i just used those names coz i hadn't thought of two names for the next janam

@Cool_Dipti: thanks for the comments and yh i am a BIG fan of PKDN. cnt wait for it ta cum on star ustav

@zeefan 1: thanks sawdah

Keep work up and let see what happened in next part?

RECAP: Krishna and Radhika die and take a new janam

We see a girl who is waking up from bed and heading towards the bathroom in one house and we see a guy in another house pulling the curtains from his bedroom

In the girl house.........
Mom: M
Gal: G
M: priya!!!!!!!! come down for breakfast, u have to go to college
G: coming ma

The girl comes out from the bathroom and flicks her hair out of her face. First we see her eyes and now we see her lips and then we see her face. She is Priya Khanna. She is wearing a top with sequences with a pair of jeans that has a flashy belt.
She runs downstairs and goes infront of the Radha-Kishen idol.
Then she runs into the dining room and hugs her two bhabi's (who is mishti & kripa from KYPH) from behind. They hugged her back and carried on with the work of making breakfast. Priya next goes to her two brothers and hugs them. She then asks:

P: bhaiya, where is my chocolate??????

B1: bhaiya 1 ( who is played by Karthik in kaisa yeh pyaar hain)
B2: bhaiya 2 ( angad khanna of KYPH)
(i dunno y i added them 4 people in here but they are just in here for special appearance)

B2: rite her dear sister. always gt ur chocolate. and he gives her 2 chocolates

P: and how is my nephew and niece today, this fine morning?
Ne: alrite aunty
P: dnt call me aunty, it makes me feel old okay, u call me bua ma
Ne: okay bua ma
P: much more better and she sat down in her seats.

Just then her mother and father came down and smiled as they saw their family eating and chatting away happily. Priya saw her parents and hugged them, especially her father. Priya had always been a daddy girl's ever since childhood. Her father had always given the most amount of love - not that he didn't love his sons but he loved priya much more.

Priya was the daughter of Dilip and Naina khanna. They were both business people and were very famous. Priya had the most loving family anyone could possibly have.

She had breakfast with her family, blew a kiss and went running off to college.

Priya worked in her dad's office along with her brother's and father. She earned her own money and was really popular in college. It was mostly becoz of her singing and dancing that she was really famous for. Afterall, she was the sister of Angad Khanna - the leading superstar in Mumbai.

Now we go to the guys house. He is doing weights and is sweating really badly. We see his arms, then his eyes and now his entire body and we see that it is Raj Malhotra.

M: Raj, breakfast taiyar hain!!!!!!!!jaldi neche ajao she shouted
R: coming ma he shouted back.

Raj quickly showered and got dressed in a simple white T-Shirt and blue jeans. He looked at himself in the mirror and commented on himself.

R: hey dude, not looking bad for a first day back at college. Of corse you are the footie captain so u have ta look great. He says to himself.

Just then, his sister walk into his room saying

S: bhaiya, you have to drop me of to college today. I just foned up Priya's house, but aunty already said that she has left.

Raj smiled at the name of Priya. Him and Priya had known each other ever since they were in pre-school. He secretly had adored her and was now in love with her but had never expressed his feeling towards her coz whenever she came in front of him, he began feeling shy so was never be able to express his love towards her.He had loved her singing and dancing. She had sang so beautifully that his love for her increased even more. He only told one person and that was his sister.

Tia smiled at her brother. She knew how much he loved priya but never let him becum embarrassed infront of her.

T: bhaiya, stop day-dreaming about her.

Raj blushed and quickly said

R: okay, cummon, be4 mom kills us and gives us lecture, lets go downstairs for breakie.
T: k bhai

They go downstairs and take the aarti from their mom and quickly sat down for breakfast. Raj was the obedient beta. Something every mother would want in her son. He always did what he was told. He never asked for money from his dad but earned it himself by working in his dad office.

The Khanna's & Malhotra's were business partners. They were also close friends and were very happy. They had hoped that the friendship would turn into family relationship from the marriage of Raj & Priya, but they knew that the kids would never agree for an arranged marriage, Priya's dad - knowing her too well and Raj's mom - knowing him very well.

After breakfast, Raj & Tia left for college in Raj's sports car after kissing their parents goodbye.

So people, there is the intro of Raj & Priya's fourth janam. Do comment, good and bad.

whooooooooooo 😆 i love it please update soon! 😊

Hey patel u did really good job. 😉 Carry on with the work 😃 and why shuldn't u akhir dost kiski hai 😆