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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting starting
geets family hate her even maan rejected her..!! Feeling bad 4 her
waiting 4 more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The Rejection_Part-1.



Past Continues..

I woke up with loud voice of my brother " You worthless People good for nothing, I will tell maan to abolish you from the pack and when you will turn a rogue , you will understand how it feel". Rogue are the wolves who doesn't belong to any pack, they are considered bad, you know in humans who you are abolished from your country, it's the same. The rogue is not allowed to enter the boundaries of any pack. If they enter , they are either killed or send to dungeons. It all depend on decision of alpha. This is worst punishment for any wolves. I ran down the stair, to know why my brother is shouting like that. Than I saw my brother and a male, I know him, he is an omega. I kept staring at him, when my brother's voice broke my staring " Very good here comes another you, welcome princess, woke up from your beauty sleep". He doesn't even care how much his words hurt me, I tried to keep my eye shut, to stop tears flowing from them, when I heard " you fatty , today is MAAN'S 18 bday party , at night I don't want want to see your worthless face, don't show your face there.. okay? Have I made my point clear?". I nodded slightly. He turned to omega and said " and you, you better hurry up, I want all the work of the party completed before 8 pm" and he left for school.

Omega man was elderly, I think 45-50 year old. I saw him and moved towards him. He got scared as if I am gonna beat him. I gently patted him and said " sir if you need any help please tell me.. don't think bad about him, he is a nice man, its just you know after my parents death, he is in anger, that made him this, so please forgive me" . I joined my hand and asked for his forgiveness. The omega man saw towards me with affection and said " these people are not worth you affection daughter, I know how they treat you and you still defend them. You have heart of gold. Wherever your parents will be, they will be proud of you. May moon goddess give you every happiness GEET". Like humans believe in their god and goddess, wolves believe in moon goddess. I smiled to him and said " can I help you with something sir?". The man smiled and said " no thank you daughter" and he started picking up the box. Before he can pick up the box, I picked it up . he quickly said "no no, you are daughter of our previous BETA.. you cant do this". I smiled to him and said " you just called me daughter na, plz let me help you to keep it in the cart". He smiled and nodded his head.

After keeping the box, I came inside. I missed my school. But helping him seemed right to me. I moved to parents room and saw their picture. I love talking to their picture. I said "hey mom, hey dad, I missed my school I know u will be angry with me for that, but when I tell you why I left my school, I think you will be happy with me. I miss you mom and dad. Why you left me alone. I feel so lonely. I wish you were there, to tell me what is right for me and not. I am sorry I am the reason it all happened. I know brij bhai hatred is right, I know I deserve it, but I miss us, your family, I am sorry". And quietly I felt for my room.



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Edited by angelwords - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Loved it
What did she do to be treated like this
No one sees her pain n they inflict more pain
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
loved it

quite diff concept it is

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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Nice update
Briji is cruel
hate him
bt wat did geet do dat every1 hates her?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
hi wonderful update! Feeling 4 Geet! Everyone hates her! Y? Brij is so mean! update soon! well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Nice start to ur new ff,
Geet seems like a sweet innocent girl, wonder why Brij and Maan treat her badly,
Waiting for the next part, update soon...
Thnx
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
wow, its an interesting concept eagerly waiting to read more Parts.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Why is Geet called fatty? Is it because of weight or something else?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for new story...
nice start...
geet is hated by her family..
maan too hate her but why... waiting for next part.

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