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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

hi angel

nice update

brij hates his sister but why ..even maan too ..

geet is sweet person yet bearing so much pain ..

thanks for update

waiting for next //

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Nice update. Brij treats Geet so bad.

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

what is the reason Brij also hate his sister Geet...

he is also Beta or Alpha but whatever he is all 3 Alpha Beta Gamma are elites so why he treats her like this...

interesting update...

thanx for pm...

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ns.1

@ns.1

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

congrats for the new story 😊great start and a very interesting concept but a very emotional first part😭feeling really bad for geet😭and brij and maan are😡😡😡😡😡 eagerly waiting for more and please do continue " my devil" also.

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mansijani21

@mansijani21

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Lovely start...awesome concept..
pls continue soon

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shalinisaran89

@shalinisaran89

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

omggg...they r so cruel 2 her...

feelin bad 4 her

y geet is bearing their tantrums...

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Hey dear...
Great buildup of the plot!
Geet is a kind soul, what role did she play in her parents' death?
She still suffers from the guilt and is thus bearing Brij's atrocious behaviour to atone for the same.

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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Why she is treated like this
It's painful how her own brother talks to her
Continue soon dear

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Prologue and First Chapter is Interesting and Captivating too

In Prologue Maan rejects Geet as his mate but he already has a girlfriend Sameera and she is beautiful and according to both Maan and Brij Geet is fat so than why would a young 18 years choose a mate that does not have any appeal .

Geet and Brij parents died but it almost seems like he blames her why so much hatred for his sister and why can Geet not leave the house instead of staying under those conditions