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Anny90

@Anny90

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Updating fear!

Sorry not possible today..

But sure for tomorrow.

Last minute changes..

Edited by Anny90 - 10 years ago

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Anny90

@Anny90

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Note-

Hey beautiful people..

I know I have forgotten this ss for while but I am back for now..

If you feel I have written this not properly then I am sorry.

I am going on a break from IF for few months.

So I am completing this ss in hurry. If you find mistake please tell me..I am human.and human tends to make mistakes. 😉

Okay so enjoy the update!

Bye bye guys.. :*

Edited by Anny90 - 10 years ago

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

i loved the second shot jealousy too..its was awesome read

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

the third short sadness...is a very emotional one shot... just made me feel the sadness...wonderful writing..keep up the good job

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

nice update

lovely story

maneet has feeling for each other but not able to tell ..

thanks for update

waiting for next

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Congratulations on your first story
Start is already so Interesting
yes true just holding one's hand is a gesture of kindness and caring a sense of belonging
Geet wants to buy Maan a gift and he denies as she just started her job 3 months ago but she is also adamant that she needs to buy him a gift and finally he agrees

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Part 2

Both seemed to have the emotion of jealousy
but the difference was Geet left when she felt jealous while Maan after two years seeing her also dance with another man came immediately and asked her for a dance yes at some point they both felt its only them that have the right on each other and that the reason for jealousy to creep in between

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Part 3

So Emotional and Sad yet Geet been there always to give support to Maan without him asking and even today after years still that pain of losing his sister is there and Geet been the only person to soothe him