Feelings.. Updating..

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Bonsoir!!

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"Sometimes, reaching out and taking someone's hand is the beginning of a journey."

Index

Togetherness : Hold my hand

Envy : Jealousy

Sadness : Soothe my heart

Fear :

Surprise: Bol na halke halke

Joy: Tum mile

Trust and Love: Ishq bulawa

Don't throw tomatoes and chappals on me..😉

First of all congratulations for writing something that too for the first time on maaneet.

Congratulation for writing on maaneet.
Nice start.
Maaneet are friends.
Holding hands is a cute gesture.

Its good for first time :).
I like the theme.

this is so sweet..

Congrats for the new story !!!

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Jealousy - A Green Eyed Monster

Maan was waiting for her for a long time standing there..their usual place..but Geet never came after their first fight on that night..

they fought for a reason he could not understand ..but how could he? She had never told him about the reason..

what could have she told?

That she did not like him being with another lady..

that she did feel jealous about that lady standing near him..

that she could not control that bitter feelings she felt when that lady was dancing with him in the party..

that she did not like when they were having dinner together..

she felt like only she had the right to dance with him..to stay near him..to dance with him..no one else have that right..she was his friend right?

(idiot girl...she is jealous of all this things and still says it friendship..:P but she can be jealous in friendship too..cant she? :D)

how could he know about all this?

He had waited for a single call from that night..but she never called him..the reason is unknown to him..he had been waiting from 3 days..but he was disappointed..

He got a letter written his name in her writings..

No calls no meetings ..she left a piece of paper behind her..is this their friendship'?

No it cant be true..they have their friendship very strong..they were friends for 4-5 years..

Even now when she was gone...he was getting a letter every month on 19^th..the day on which they have met..

The letter describing about her well being..he was always waiting for her letter..but neither she writes address of her place nor she leaves any clue in letter ..

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na phone pe bulaoge

Na shaam ki karaari chai, labhon se yun pilaoge

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na din dhale sataoge

Na raat ki nashili bye se neendh mein jagaoge

Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai

Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai

Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai

Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

They met after 2 years in the meeting.. he was here for his business deal..she was there representing her company..she looks more pretty than before..she looks so confident.. so great..

She was as surprised as him seeing each other in meeting..from the last two years she was waiting to see him once..she was trying hard to not reveal her whereabouts to him..and here he was..looking handsome as ever..
In evening they had to go in the party thrown by the host company..she was wearing black party wear..she looks stunning in black..and to accompany her, he was also in black..as their eyes met from two distant corners in the hall,they felt something different..

He so much wanted to ask her why she had left him without telling him anything...

He wanted to be near with her,,,so much wanted to hold her hands..to have fun in same way they had in past..she felt the same way for him...

She wanted to know how he was doing all these days..whats going on in his life..

Suddenly a man asked her for dance..with a small smile she agreed and slipped her hand ito that person..

Maan saw this and felt his blood boiling..

They were dancing on a romantic tune..was he her boyfriend? No that could not be..because if he was then she must have mentioned to him in one of the letters..

And his legs on their own accord lead him to the couple..

She saw him approaching to them and song came to an end the very moment he stood near her..

He took his hand forward ,asking for a dance to her..

And the songs played na aaye ho na aaoge.'and they danced on it ..being near to each other after a long time felt bless to them..it felt so good to them both..

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na dooriyaan dhikhaoge

Na thaam ke woh josh mein yun hosh se udaoge

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na jhoot se sunaoge

Na rooth ke sihane mein, remote ko chupaoge

Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai

Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai

Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai

Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

After dance they lead to their table ..withous saying each other without asking eachother ...they were walking side by side..and she stopped on her table and looked at him..and without saying anything he left for his table..no words left to shared after being together for short time...they felt something..its something more than friendship ..they felt attracted to each other..

And there is no sleep in their eyes...how they could sleep? It was so much disturbing..

he remembered in the party when she was talking to one of her collegues..may be he was more of friend to her..they were having dinner together ..he had seen him and her talking ,laughing on some joke..and he felt weird something within him..nooo..he could not be jealous...its not possible..

she felt some what of relief...he was affected by her ..he was feeling jealous...though she was feeling bad looking at his hurt eyes..but that was not the same reason why she had left the place..

both were far from their sleep, thinking about eachother..and hoping for something good to happen tomorrow..

Aankh bhi tham gayi, na thaki

Raat bhi na bhati, na kati

Raat bhi cherti marrti

Neendh bhi lutt gayi, chiin gayi

Raat bhi na sahi, na rahi

Raat bhi laazmi, zaalmi

Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai

Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai

Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai

he drifted into sleep very late after 3 am..the only though that was on his mind..why did she left without telling him anything?

She was thinking about them...was it good idea that she had told him once that she got nice opportunity in her drean company ?was it good idea that they had talked about how she had felt in the party?

Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na phone pe bulaoge

Na shaam ki karaari chai, labhon se yun churaoge..

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"You can only be jealous of someone who has something you think you ought to have yourself."
Margaret Atwood

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Perfect description. ...

read both the parts...interesting
eagerly waiting for the next update