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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
lovely update, well described feelings
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice start
Both have feelings but denying or ignoring.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi

How are you all?

Enjoying weekend?


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Sadness : Soothe my heart

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Sadness is emotional pain associated with, or characterized by feelings of disadvantage, loss, despair, helplessness and sorrow. It helps people to deal with their situation.

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Geet and Maan met in the college and had became friends since then..spending long time together..they had became close friends ..their classmates and other students also think of them as couple..but their friends knew more than that..and had never thought of them in such a way..

At that time even Geet helped Maan to find a girl Kavya' for farewell party arranged for them..but what happened at the end of the day was too predictable for their friends...Maan bluntly refused to go with anyone other than her..what was the reason for that? Because if he went with that girl then Geet had to go with Karan as he had asked her..and he didn't like karan a bit..so he told Kavya to go with karan and he came to the venue with Geet..he was so much possessive for her at all time..Iski wajah se usko Geet se or kavya dono se bahot sunana pada tha..par usko jaise Geet ke age kisi ka fark nahi padta tha...In their group they were only single souls, all of their friend were in a relationship..

Hotel :

Geet woke up in morning at 8. After getting ready,she went to the cafeteria,hoping that she might be able to see Maan. But what see in the front area of the hotel was the shocking scene..

BLOOD...

An accident was happened at the hotel, fire caught the portion club area where one family was resting and the family lost their daughter in the accident and her brother was badly injured who was trying hard to save her sister..

ambulance was standing at the porch..lots of people were crowded near the door..

Maan and his team were seating in the cafeteria for informal meeting..when the men from ambulance were taking a girl to the ambulance his brother was bitterly crying,her mother was not in any sense and fainted twice there..


Maan was standing at the corner and watched those men..A look on Maan's face and Geet knew what was going on his mind at this moment..the past of his life..he was reliving those moments now ..he looked at the crying guy and unknown to him a tear rolled on his cheek..

She so much wanted to go near him..and wanted to take him in her arms like before..to sooth his aching heart..tornado of past moments left him in such a vulnerable state when he saw Geet was staring at him with emotions filled eyes..

Maan's team had never seen him so weak like this..they were shocked by looking the state of their MD.

It was the early shiny morning..the atmosphere in Khurana house was full of laughter and happiness..It was the first day of his job at his father's company.It was his dream to work in the company .he was the future MD..They all were having breakfast together.

A Perfect Family Breakfast.

His dadi Gayatri devi Khurana; his father,Raghuvendra Khurana; his mother Naina Khurana; his sister Nandini Khurana and him.. Geet had also joined them a bit later..she was there to wish him for his first day..they were talking and laughing..his mother believed in "The family that eats together that stays together."and Geet was always welcomed in their home as a family member..

she was friend of Nandini too.. Naina aunty always showered her love on her and praise her for her good nature..

After breakfast he left for his office.and then Nandini and Geet also left for their respective places..

he was reached halfway and got a call..that call had changed his life..it was call from Nandini's cell,some unknown person was talking to him..and that person informed him about Nandini's accident..his world stopped by hearing that..he loved his sister beyond anything..and he was so worried about what happened to Nandini..

he suddenly called at his father and informed him about the emergency..

when he reached the place..looking at the sight,its like his heart stopped for a moment or more..he could not understand anything..he stared at her sister's body which was covered by the white cloth..he did not cried a bit..not a single tear!

Everything was over for him but he was not showing his pain to anyone..at that time Geet was there helping his family,supporting his family..jitna bhi kar shakti thi jo bhi kar shakti thi who usne kiya..the house was a silent place..happines from the house was left the house with Nandini..

After a week,

He was standing near railing on terrace..staring in the black sky..

He felt a hand on his hand which was resting over railing..and look at the source of warmth..Geet was standing there with him..none of them speak a word..

She took his hand in her hands and stood there for a long time..and suddenly he hugged her...the tears were not stopping ..they were flowing on his cheek ..she tightly hugged him back..he was seeking the warmth,the support to face his parents and courage to see his broken parents ..

"Don't be ashamed to weep; 'tis right to grieve. Tears are only water, and flowers, trees, and fruit cannot grow without water. But there must be sunlight also. A wounded heart will heal in time, and when it does, the memory and love of our lost ones is sealed inside to comfort us."
Brian Jacques


They stood there for long time..then she lead him to the swing and both sat there.. they both were sitting and side hugging on the swing when her eyes opened on the first ray of sun in the morning..she looked at his face..traces of tears on cheek and the frowns on his head..a look at him and she felt the pain...she left after a bit..when Maan woke up ..he was sitting alone on the terrace..he was feeling different.he felt he was not alone.. but he felt the previous night as dream..he was afraid to feel it as a reality..though Geet was helping him and his family through all that time..he had never thought of sharing his pain with her..but she was there to support him..just like he was there to help and support her..

They looked at each other for a moment and Maan left from the place to the pool side..no one from his team dared to follow him..shayad unke boss ko kuchh wakt ke liye akele rahene dene mein hi unki bhalai thi..

Geet was walking behind him and stopped at a distance..he stopped near pool..Geet went towards him..and called him,"Maan"

Maan replied without turning to her,"Geet wo wo Nandini.."

And he hugger her..

Their differences, their fights all were forgotten..

He knew all this time nd even the current moment only one person had ability to make him forgot his pain by a simple hug and could soothe him by a caress..

She knew in the moment that nothing mattered more to her than him..


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When I see you are to cry
Tears are falling from the sky
And the meaning of
your eyes is strange
I never felt that you loved me
I never thought that

you could see

To see the light..

I've been looking at
your eyes for years
Come to me and
soothe my heart
Fill it up with useless art
You're the last to see my light

To see the light...

*song credit-google / singer unknown*

Edited by Anny90 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Nice one..
What I liked most was their bonding!👍🏼
Special n best!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Nice part
Maan remembered his sisters accident
Geet was there to soothe his pain then n now too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
very nice update
maan n geet's bonding is great
only geet can sooth maan's hurt heart

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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Hey I just read all the parts in onego ... I loved the concept and the stories too.. U have done a great job dear.. Already waiting for the next one.. U r a superb writer keep it up and keep on writing no one can say u r writing for the first time.. U r actually v good.. Great to have u.. Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
SOMETHING DIFFERENT BUT LOVELY
SO MANY EMOTIONS
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Very beautiful story
Loved the three parts
So simple and soothing
Continue soon
Is there a PM list? :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
I am sorry.. I can't update till December end..I have my dissertation this month... I will update once it will be done..

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