SS - Redeeming Love : Complete

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Maan..slow.. stop it Maan.. please stop it.


Geet cried trying to make Maan understand tat she was scared the way he was driving.

Maan please.. not so fast..please Maan.. it's not safe..you are hurting me Maan.. please stop...no don't Maan.

But Maan was beyond any understanding. His anger always controlled his mind, heart and soul and every word she was saying was blocked by his anger and she feared tat. She feared tat this anger would finally take everything away they had built for themselves in their love years.

Please Maan.. I beg you... you are going to hurt our baby..you are going to hurt our love baby Maan.

She finally confessed. She was 7 weeks pregnant and just few hours back she was confirmed by her doctor but she was yet to tell her husband who was angry from last few days. She tried hard to explain him tat she was not wrong, tat she did not do want his sister said, tat she did not do want his parents accused her off but all went in vain and finally today she was thrown out of the house by her own husband, her love who was driving her back to her parents.

Please Maan...don't drive so fast...m not feeling well.. baby will cry in discomfort Maan... you know we have been waiting for this baby Maan... we'll lose our baby before we have our baby Maan... slow down..please... Maan..please.

And in a need to stop him she put her hand on the wheel but Maan's furious and hatred filled eyes gave her a life full threat as they met her.

Don't you ever touch me b****.

And she was frozen with the word tat he used on her for the first time.

Don't ever lay your dirty hands on me.

But next moment no one knew wat happened coz all he heard was a painful agonized cry as he saw his wife flung from the car breaking the front glass and hit the bonnet of the car covered in blood and pieces of glass.

Geettt.

Geettt.

Maan woke up with a scream, the same scream tat he has been hearing and dreaming ever since the accident tat changed his whole life but it looked like it was just yesterday even if it was a year today and suddenly he started to shiver as he realized the date.

I'm sorry Geet.. sorry Jaan.

He let his tears roll down coz this was only the place he would allow himself to cry coz for the rest of the world he was a ruthless man, a ruthless husband who not only killed his baby but his wife though she was a leaving dead body.

Will you ever forgive me Jaan.. will you ever feel this redeeming love in me?


He always questioned this to their lifeless room where once they made memories of love, made their baby for whom they had been waiting for years but he had taken it all. He destroyed every moment of their life with anger and his blind faith in his family and now though surrounded with the people he love he did not have the one whom he wanted.. His Geet, his wife, his Jaan.

Babaji let her stay in peace. He looked up and murmured his first few words of the day. Let no pain touch her Babaji... let no harm reach her. He closed his eyes for few seconds murmuring sorry to his baby and then with a heavy heart but a hard face he climbed out of the bed and walked towards the washroom to start his day without his Geet.

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Good morning Maan. He looked up and saw his Dadima stand right in front of her and he knew she knew wat day it was. Breakfast karne chale. She wanted to hide somewhere but she could not leave her Maan alone. His own parents and sister ruined his life but she could not leave him. I have made pancakes for you... the way you like... The way Geet likes.


She does not like me anymore Dadima. And tat was the truth. He always kept his distance from Dadima coz she was very close to his Geet and it hurt him to see her looking at him with pain but at times he would simply say words tat would hurt her.

It's been a year Maan...kab tak aise. She knew she was hurting him but she wanted him to smile, wanted him to see him again with his Geet. Why don't you talk to her?

My sin is death for me Dadima. He said with cold voice. I killed her baby... our baby. And with these few words he stepped away from her but stopped seeing his sister giving him a look of regret and loneliness but he just walked away.

I'm sorry Bro...so sorry. Pari cried there was no one who would understand her pain. Her own parents who set up all the dirty game still wished death for Geet while her Dadima she resented her like she was some dirt. How can I make everything good Bro?

There's nothing you can make good Pari? She did not turn coz she knew the moment she turns she'll only see hatred and disgust in her Dadima's eyes for her. You destroyed everything...just not in his life but your own life.

Will you stop blaming her Maa? Yash Singh Khuranna wiped Pari's tears. And for god sake how can you blame Pari when Maan never loved Geet... he never loved her coz if he loved then he would not believe wat Pari and we said... it was just a no good marriage Maa and finally Maan is free from his mistake.

And you must be happy to lose your son Yash. A pain reflected in Yash's eyes. You must be very happy coz you not only killed you son but you forced your own son to kill his own baby... isn't it a murder Naina... after all your dirty games and ploys just not killed one innocent life but three.

Maa app..


Nahi Naina. Dadima cut her. No words will ever change this truth and trust me no parents are like you...tum dono ne na sirf Maan ki but apni beti ki zindagi barbaad kar di and tats the reason when she confessed her sins Rahul slapped her breaking the marriage.. Pari cried remembering how she confessed her sins in front of everyone and how Rahul broke with her. But now I realize tat this was wat you had been dreaming for your kids.. right Yash.. yeh zindagi jo unke khud ke Mom and Dad ne di hain unhe.. I must say you are very much successful in destroying them both aur aaj ke din main khud bhagwan se pray karungi tat never ever give heartless parents like you to any children... aaj ke din yahi badua deti hoon main tum dono ko kyunki aaj ke din hi tum dono ne Maan and Geet ke rishte ke saath saath unke bache ko bhi maar diya... you killed tat innocent life for your selfish reason Yash.. for your selfish reasons Naina.

We did.. but it was too late coz Dadima walked away with tears in her eyes. She so much wanted to go and see Geet but she wasn't allowed. She could not break the promise she had given to Maan tat she will never meet Geet and try to talk to her.



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Geet. She instantly wiped her tears and tried to smile but she could not hide the pain from her parents. Rone ka dil kar raha hain. She once again tried to smile but Rano knew her daughter like a open book. Aise nahi rote beta..you know you should not keep pain inside you, so let it go.. let your baby feel tat his mother is missing him. And Geet threw herself in her mother's arms. Rano always tried to make Geet understand tat crying would not help but now she herself used to ask her to cry coz she knew if she does not cry then it would hurt her daughter more.


Can we go to the orphanage Maa? She asked after few minutes. I brought some things for the kids.. kya hum dene jaa sakhte hain. Rano smiled nodding. They were just a middle class family but then suddenly after the accident Geet's father Mohinder's business flourished and within a year they were rich and were now living in the posh area of Delhi. Mohinder thrived to make his business coz money and they being the middle class with no much money was the main coz of their daughter's pain and now they had everything only tat they were not happy. Papa ko bhi leke chale.

Why not? Mohinder entered with a small smile. He hugged and kissed his only daughter on her forehead. Your Papa too purchased gift for the kids.. Pata hain maine ne unh bacho ke liye naya playground bhi bana rahu hoon.

Really. Geet smiled at the idea. But they don't have place na.

But there's the empty space just behind the orphanage building and I bought it.. ushpar tho kaam bhi shuru ho juka hain. Mohinder loved to see his daughter smile but now-a-days she hardly smiled but he knew she loved this orphanage and he was going to do anything tat she would love. She had also recently joined his Handa Testiles and he wanted her to flourish. Ab chalo get ready and yeh wear tat new dress tat I gifted you last week ok.. tum na angel lagogi usmein.

Geet nodded and walked inside her washroom while Mohinder and Rano stared at her from behind and let their own tears fall down. Mohinder hugged his wife who was trying hard to control her sobs and so was he coz if Geet sees them crying then she would curse herself and he did not want tat to happen. Their daughter was their life and he wanted happiness to return in her life and he would do anything for tat.

Maine kuch socho hain Rano. Rano looked up wiping her tears. Geet ki hum dusri shaadi karva dete hain.. na don't say a word. He cut his wife. I know she will not agree and trust me Ill not force my bacha so I have spoken to Raj and he agreed to my idea of sending Vicky here for few days.

Apna Vicky... you mean Vicky Khanna. Rano smiled coz Vicky was Geet's best friend but then the Khanna's shifted to US.

Haan apna Vicky and spending time would help them to know each other and trust me when I say tat they don't mind and care for her past.. they only want Geet as their Vicky's bride. Mohinder smiled. He knew his decision was right coz it was time tat Geet moves in life forgetting her past.

But Maan and Geet aren't divorced..

I know. Mohinder boiled in anger. He hated Maan and his family and now he would go to any extent to get his daughter finally free from tat marriage tat killed her. I asked the lawyer to work on the Divorce papers... its time tat Geet gets her happiness.


Precap: They meet in the orphanage.

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NEXT : PART 2



I know you would be surprise tat I'm back on GF but do not worry this is just a small story of about 5 parts. Whenever I write small stories I will post them of GF but not any new FF. So hope you enjoy this short story.


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I love this starting !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My fav theme.. love and pain.. superb update !!!
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Interesting story
Maan killed his own baby because of mu created by his sis nd parents
Now geet parents wants her to get married again
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congrats on the SS! Lovely banner! Painful update! Maan killed his baby! he didn't trust Geet! Maan drive rashly! Geet pleaded n he never listened! they met in an accident! Maan shattered after knowing the truth! Its a year nw! It was all cos if his parents n Pari! Geet with her parents! she misses her baby! he dad wants her 2 get married again! bt Maaneet nt divorced! update soon! well written
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Awsome but painful start. Maan not listen to his love and destroyed everything in his rage. You really made me cry di 😭 Mujhe Maan se jada gussa Maan pe aa raha hai. Yash was right if he really loves her then he would not do what he did. He himself responsible for runing his life. Dadima to not able to comfort her childern as she made promise. Now Mohinder wants her daughter to move on in life and as a father he was right but surly marriage is not a sol for the pain Geet enduring. But spending time with orphan childeren was helpful in real sense. Atleast it give a bit relif.
Waiting for next update...
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Great start nd painful to read .geet had lost the baby becoz of maan's anger.dirty games played by maans parents resulted the agony of maaneet .hope it will,b redeemed the lost love in the lives of maaneet
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First of all congratulations for your new story dear!!
I am excited..

Ohh Goddd!! Maan and his anger issues.. kab sudhrega yeh ladka!!
Now because of his anger he has lost his wife(not in literal sense) and also his child..
Almost felt like crying..😭
Okay May be I am already emotional and your update made me cry..
just kidding dear..😆 As usual well portrayal of emotions which I always expect from your stories..👏
For a second I was scared to expect Annie as Maan's sister because I have developed a soft corner for that character from Ek Vivah Aisa Bhi..
So I dint want Annie to be Maan's sister.. I was also planning to request you to change the name if possible..
Okay you might think that I have gone Mad but can't help it dear.. Paidaishi problem hai..😛😆
But happy that Pari is Maan's sister..
So now Maan's parents hate Geet because she was from middle class family..
Then why Pari supported them ?! I mean now she has realised her mistake and accepted her sins then what must have happened.. I guess we have to wait for a while to know what must have happened!!
Happy that atleast dadima is there for Maan and Poor Geet how much she is suffering..
Hope Maan get her and himself out of their misery..

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First of all congratulations for your new story dear!!
I am excited..

Ohh Goddd!! Maan and his anger issues.. kab sudhrega yeh ladka!!
Now because of his anger he has lost his wife(not in literal sense) and also his child..
Almost felt like crying..😭
Okay May be I am already emotional and your update made me cry..
just kidding dear..😆 As usual well portrayal of emotions which I always expect from your stories..👏
For a second I was scared to expect Annie as Maan's sister because I have developed a soft corner for that character from Ek Vivah Aisa Bhi..
So I dint want Annie to be Maan's sister.. I was also planning to request you to change the name if possible..
Okay you might think that I have gone Mad but can't help it dear.. Paidaishi problem hai..😛😆
But happy that Pari is Maan's sister..
So now Maan's parents hate Geet because she was from middle class family..
Then why Pari supported them ?! I mean now she has realised her mistake and accepted her sins then what must have happened.. I guess we have to wait for a while to know what must have happened!!
Happy that atleast dadima is there for Maan and Poor Geet how much she is suffering..
Hope Maan get her and himself out of their misery..

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It is awesome...

You really brought tears in my eyes...
It's was so painful to see both maan and geet in soo much of pain...
They both are lost in their own grief...

People always ruin things in anger...
Maan did the same thing in his anger and spoiled everything in his life...
Geet was soo much trying to make him understand but he didn't even listened to her even when she told him about their baby..

updatee sooonn

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