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Posted: 9 years ago
very painful
cried all the time while reading

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb part
Geet doesn't want to be with maan because she can't give child to maan.
Maan is ready to complete all geet dreams.
He jst want one night with geet for rest of his life.
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Who the hell is he? Maan snarled like a wild animal. He had returned back with his Mom, Dad and sister after attending the wedding function but he had never known tat he would be welcomed with something tat would ruin his life. Who the bloody hell is he Geet?

I.. Geet just stared. She was still trying to cover herself even if she was fully dressed but seeing her half naked on a bed with a stranger had shaken her life like anything and the worst was tat her whole family, her Maan was standing right at the doorstep of their bedroom.

Is this the reason you refused to come along? Naina asked in anger. How long has he been coming here Geet?

Mom...

Don't you dare call me Mom. Naina hissed. I thought a girl like you..

Wait a second. Naina stopped and looked at her daughter Pari. I know him.. yes I definitely know him.

You know.

Bhai I have seen him with bhabhi once. Maan just looked at Pari. I was with my friends for lunch when I saw her stepping out of the lifts tat leads to rooms in tat hotel and you know wat I saw later.. Mohinder uncle. He too was there... they were so happy and laughing.

But tat was..

Shut up. Yash growled. Is this wat you have been doing behind our back Geet? Is this wat your love for Maan is?

How long Geet? how long..

Don't you raise you voice. The man standing right in front of them glared at Maan. She may be your wife but she's my love and you don't..

Your love. Maan laughed. How long have you known each other haan?

Quite long.. or say since childhood. Geet's eyes turned wide and now she did not keep this faade.. we have got wat we wanted and in short while she will be out of your life and with me.. her Jatin.

Jatin. Geet murmured her name. She had never heard or seen this man and he claimed to love her.

And I have been with her since the moment you all left this mansion for the wedding.. you know it was a farewell love making for us in tat huge bed but henceforth she will make love to me in our marital bed not on yours.

Maan...I don't know..

She could not even complete her words as Maan's phone rang and he frowned seeing the name. He picked the call and whatever he heard destroyed his trust he had on his Jaan. This was not the first time but still he kept quite thinking it wasn't true but today everything was right in front of him.

Where's your phone? Geet frowned. I asked where the hell is your phone?

Upstairs in the room. Maan asked Pari to fetch it and the moment he had his hands on her mobile he checked the call list and the time of the calls and whatever he heard was true. Everything was clear right now in his mind. Maan..

How long have you been cheating me Geet? How long have you been behind my money?

Money.

Yes... the call I just received was from the bank manger saying tat the joint account tat belonged to us is wiped clean for money. My personal account is half empty. Some of my checks have been cleared and you know in which account all the money has gone to. He looked at her with furious eyes and then he looked at Jatin. Jatin Singh... your love.. your future husbands and everything was done with your permission and my signatures.

I don't know..

Geet you don't need to worry anymore. Jatin placed a concerned hand on her shoulder. We have got wat we want and trust me Mohinder uncle's idea and your plan was perfect... we have done it Geet and now you don't need to stay here anymore.. come on let's get out.

Maan Geet cried as she saw Maan beat the hell out of the man called Jatin. She called him again fearing. She had never been subjected to such violence and now seeing it was making her scared. Maan...

I will wait for you Geet.. I will and Jatin ran out and Maan wiped the blood bleeding from his lips.

Maan...

No. He yelled in anger and Geet jumped in fear. Don't you dare touch me Geet Handa... don't you dare touch me with those filthy hands. She was numb. He had never raised his voice on her and today he was insulting her. I have ignored everything I had heard and seen.. I have even ignored my own eyes when I saw you coming out of Star Hotel with Mohinder Papa and tat Man besides you... I have ignored those photos tat I have received.. I have ignored so much thinking tat someone was trying to malign your name but now everything is right in front of me.

I don't...

Don't you dare open tat shit mouth of yours and don't you say you weren't in Star Hotel two days back with your papa.

I was but it was because..

Is this how your father builds his business Geet? Are you his money producing machine? Naina asked. Why did you marry Maan?

I love him and he knows why I married him.

I thought I knew but after this, no I don't know. Maan was trying his best to control his hands who wanted to slap the life out of her. Mom and Dad were right... girls like you only marry rich boys for money and you proved them right.. they always.. cut tat shit Dad.

Its from newspapers office. Mid-day section Maan. Yash received the call and was shocked to hear wat he heard. He looked at Geet and then at Maan with anger. She ruined us.. she's here only for our destruction Maan.

Wats wrong Yash? Naina asked in fear. Wats wrong..

There's story on her affair with Jatin. Geet's eyes wide in fear and she looked at Maan for some help but all she got was anger. Maan Singh Khuranna's love wife cheating on him with her childhood love Jatin.

How could you Bhabhi? You said you loved Bhai but then wats all this.. how could you..

I don't know Pari...I don't know... I remember I...

Shut up. Maan grabbed her hand and just dragged her out of the Mansion.

Maan... Maan please listen to me Maan.. please...

You are dead for me.. dead and I will make sure you rot in jail Geet Handa.. I'll destroy tat father and lover of yours... I will destroy you.


Naina. A tear slid down the moment she was out of the past. Naina.. where have been?

How could we Yash?

Wat how could we? Yash asked in confusion. Forget tat tell me where have you been.. I tried calling you but..

Meri Maa sach kehti thi Yash...

Kya..

Naina tum apne haatho se apni Maan ki zindagi barbaad kar dongi.. tum apne hi haatho se apni Beti ko dard dongi and see she was right.. she was right in each and every word she said.. Naina Singh Khuranna destroyed her Maan and Pari for selfish reasons.

Tum pagal ho kya.. ab yeh sab kyu when everything is going as we wanted. Maan's getting married to Ria and we'll have their business and properties too.. hum aur rich honge. Yash smirked. He knew getting chopra's business will make them more powerful. We have everything we want Naina...

Except Maan and Pari. And it was time for Yash to freeze. Sab kuch tho hain per bache nahi hain humare.. You know wat Yash...

Wat..

This is not our victory but our biggest loss.

No its not... you can't think...

Geet ne bahut kam keemat lagayi humare sins ki. She kept the cheque in his palm. We aren't so cheap na.. humne tho itne bade paap kiya hain ki hum khud nahi jaanthe humari keemat kya hain.

Geet paid you for wat? Yash looked at the cheque and his eyes wide seeing the amount. How dare tat girl?


She rewarded us as parents Yash. She rewarded us for ruining and destroying Maan's life not hers.. do you hear not hers but she rewarded us for destroying and giving death for Maan..our only son.

He is alive. Yash screamed. He felt the piece of paper so heavy tat he dropped it down and step backwards. My son is alive.. do you get.

A dead body. And she took the gifts wrapped in satin cloth and slowly unwrapped it revealing it to Yash. Yaad hain yeh kya hain.

Yeh tho..

Our gifts.. the first gifts tat Maan got for us with his own money and do you know how he earned the money? Yash looked confused and seeing tat confusion Naina told him wat Geet told her about this incident and every word was so heavy on Yash tat he could not bear them. Humne Geet ko nahi balki Maan ko humse dur kiya.. Pari ko dur kiya.. we did not destroy Geet but we destroyed our very own kids.. we killed our Maan... we forced him to kill his baby Yash... we killed our very own grandbaby... do you hear humne apne haatho se apne hi khoon ka khoon kiya ush din. We are the bloody murderers Yash.. we are the killers.

No.. don't say tat.. humne kuch nahi kiya.. humne sirf Geet ko...

Humne ek beti ki zindagi barbaad kar di Yash even without realizing tat we were destroying our very own daughter too. Yash shook his head. He never ever realized his any mistakes. He never ever respected his mother and now he could see why his own mother loved his son so much. We destroyed our very own family Yash... and we never ever realized it.

And it does not matter now. They turned and saw Savitri Devi walking down the stairs with Pari. Don't not shed those fake tears Yash.. kuch fayda nahi hoga... jo karna tho woh kar diya... Tum dono ne sirf Geet ki nahi apne bacho ki zindagi barbaad kar di and now you don't have any right to cry for your sins..

Maa..

No... don't call me Maa. Savitri raised her hand. You lost the right when you and your wife planned tat dirty game against Geet when I was away.. You lost tat right when you were busy partying and I fighting for my life in the hospital.. so don't ever call me Maa. She gave a look to Naina and said and you Naina.. wat should I say.. yes I can say tat you are a omen on the name of a mother... bhagwan ne galati ki tumhe bache dekar.. zindagi ka sabse bada aashirwaad hote hain bache but wat you did.. you destroyed them for petty selfish reasons... paise and power ke liye..

Maa...

Now I challenge you to win back Maan and Pari's love with tat money and power Naina.. win them and prove yourself and the world tat you are right in killing Maan and his love. She challenged her openly. She did not have any pity for them coz she was past tat line now. She waited for so long but finally she too failed and saw everything falling apart. Her Maan was living a dead life and her Pari every second she was regretting and crying for ruining Her Bhai's and Geet's life and she knew no redemption was ever going to forgive her. Chale Pari..

Pari beta..

Dadima ne theek kaha Mom.. win me and bhai back with tat money and power and then call me beta. And she held her dadima's hand and walked out of the door leaving the two souls in the darkness tat they forced in their home unknown tat in one corner their son was playing a dangerous game to get back his love tat they destroyed. Unknown tat their punishment has just started and it would leave them in pure darkness for the rest of the life.

*****

Where's my Jaan? Geet just stared at him as if he was a stranger. I asked where's my Jaan? Maan repeated his questioned putting the small plastic bags he carried on the table. Geet..

Your Jaan is right in front of you and wats in those bags? She asked shaking her head slightly. She had been so scared and even a bit of excited to spend the night with him. She knew it was wrong but who cared wats wrong and right when it comes to love. As you said I did not leave as I want to give you your right.

But I said I want my Jaan not Geet. Geet frowned and Maan smiled a bit. So where's she?

Are you playing some game? Geet asked trying to look angry. Your Jaan is..

You are not my Jaan coz I remember the first time I made love to her here she was my wife. And Geet's eyes were wide. So you see you aren't my Jaan but just Geet.

But...

Don't you worry. He smirked and her heart flattered coz she knew tat it meant she was in danger as he was all prepared. Change into this. He grabbed one bag and handed it to her. It's a red saree.. there was a small saree shop and since I knew wat I wanted I got this for you and here he fished something out from his pocket your mangalsutra and rings. Now go get my Geet transformed into my Jaan coz her Maan is very much hungry and the food is getting cold.

Aap yeh..

I said go. And she just walked inside the bedroom where they had made love for the first time. Maan smirked as he knew if he had any chance this one night would help me to get his Jaan back and even after this, she does not agree then he will play his card and force her to do wat she wants but he will never ever let anyone to step into his life not even Ria.

Maan. She felt so good wearing her mangalsutra tat she could not express herself and now standing right in front of Maan and the way he was smiling at her made her heart to beat faster. Aap..

Now you look like my Jaan. And she was in his arms the next moment. Maan held her so tight tat she could feel her bones crashing under the pressure. This is my Jaan.. the real cute sweet Jaan.. My angel.

Maan. She felt him shiver and when she tried to pull away he held her tighter. You are crying..

Na.. he pulled himself together and pulled away keeping a small distance between them. Ab rone ka haq tho main kho juka hoon na.

Why are you saying tat? She knew but still she questioned. Aap ro sakthe ho.. main thode hi hasungi.

Very funny. And he actually felt light after so many days. But I would not cry...you always say tat I look like a monkey while I cry.

Woh tho hain. She pulled his cheeks and he let her do whatever she wanted. He had his own plan and before tat she would do as she wishes. Maine Maa ko phone nahi kiya.. Papa will be worried na.

I called Rano Maa and she'll manage. Maan had really informed Rano about Geet being with him as he knew here they would not get any network. And now lets have dinner.. you need all the energy for the night. She blushed while grabbed her hand and walked towards the small table where he had set the dinner. They ate dinner stealing glances at each other but Maan mostly fed her as if she was a baby. He loved to share their meals like tat and just the thought of it made him to cry and seeing the expressions in his eyes Geet closed hers understanding wat he was thinking but she did not say a word. She did not wanted to ruin by saying something tat would hurt both.

Wat are you doing there? Geet asked stepping inside the bedroom. She had tried to stay out as much as possible but she knew she could not let Maan wait. If he wanted to spend this night with her she would give him all her love coz she was made for him. I thought you might be sleeping.

You were not there to hold me and put me to sleep. Something twisted inside her realizing wat he meant. Ek saal se sone ke naam se darr lagtha hain and since you were not there to hold me I refused my eyes the sleep they needed. He turned and asked leaning on the window pane. And you still question me on my sleep.

Would you want me to put you to sleep?

Did you ever question me like tat Jaan? And once again he caught her in her words. Tho aaj kyu.. har baar tho you would grab my hand and hold me in your arms and make me sleep.. you remember you used to call me baby.. your sweet little baby. She looked at him with pain. So why ask me for permission tonight.

Why are you hurting yourself Maan? Why are you giving yourself this pain? She asked wiping tears on her cheeks. Wat do you want?

You in my bed. She tried to read him but he scooped her in one long step and dropped her on the bed. Kya hua... why you are so silent?

Are you trying to be rude to me? Maan smirked seeing her stare at him. I don't see my Maan in you.

Your Maan. He laughed and unbuttoned his shirt and hovered over Geet pressing her into the mattress. Off course m there Jaan.. you just need to see.

Maan. She cupped his face. Is this coz I asked you to promise and marry Ria? Are you trying to...

This is about my right Jaan. He smiled and kissed her nose. She twitched feeling his lips and giggled as he started to trace her waist line and tickle her. All I want is my Jaan and now I have her. He slowly traced her face with his fingers but did not touch her lips. She closed her eyes feeling his touch after like ages. She wanted his lips on hers but she did not know how to say it. Open your eyes Jaan.


Maan. Her eyes opened and just stared at him the moment he undid her saree and threw it away. App yeh..

I said na I want you tonight. She blushed and wrapped her arms around his neck pulling him down. Na... you just lay down..nothing doing.

But tats..


I said na. She nodded as he played with her saree skirt. His legs were rolling the material upwards and the feel of his legs on her bare legs were creating a different sensation making her want him like anything. How much do you love me Jaan?

Yeh kaisa sawal hain. She asked. You know..

Tell me how much do you love me? He pressed a kiss to her neck. I want to hear right now when I make love to you. Tell me Jaan. He bites and licked the area pressing her more.

So much tat its hurts...

And tats the reason you are hurting me. His words ripped her apart but before she could say a word he took her lips into his and kissed her. He deepened the kiss trying to take everything she had not letting her to even think on wat he said.

Maan.. she gasped as she felt him bit her lip and pinch her waist. I...

You don't need to say a word. He looked into her eyes as he slowly unbuttoned her blouse. I know you love me so much tat you are ready to get me into bed with someone else.. and for wat.. a silly little baby.. Khuranna ka khoon.

Yeh aap..

Kaha na kuch nahi. He smiled pecking her lips again. Main tho aise hi... waise maut ki saaza kaisi hoti hain Jaan.

Maut ki saaza. Geet grabbed his hand and stopped him. Wats going inside you.. tell me wats all about this..

Tell me how desperately you want to see me have a baby?

Too much tat I can give me life. Maan smiled and kissed her eyes. So much tat I can see you with someone else as your wife.

Then how about I ask Ria to sleep with me and give me a baby.. then kick her out and come back to you. Geet could never ever think of her Maan like tat. Dekho waise bhi ek baby ka hi sawaal hain na.. so shaadi karu ya na kari wats the matter.. all is you want to see me have my own baby right.

So you would break the promise made to me?

Promises are meant to be broken Jaan aur waise bhi maine kaunsa promise rakha hain. He continued to smile and Geet was having a feeling tat there was something deep going inside his mind and he was playing at it. Jhoot ko dekhkar tumne dard diya.. you know sometimes I do feel tat I deserve such punishment.. aakhir unh do parents ka beta jo hoon.

They are your parents Maan... and you are...

Parents. He laughed. Oh come on Geet don't you know tat the same genes run in me.. wat they did I will be doing the same with any baby of mine.. pata hain maine kabhi socha hi nahi but now I realize why the bloody hell I killed my own baby.. zindagi kaise de saktha hoon when all I wanted was to kill tat baby of ours. Tears rolled down her cheeks. This was not wat she wanted. And you call parents.. chi chi Geet aisa kabhi mat karna..woh tho pata nahi kaunsa paap hoon main unke liye.

You are marrying Ria and whatever you say would not change my decision. She ignored his words coz a word from her and she would die hearing his next set of words. I know this I all...

Off course I will marry Ria but as I said promises are meant to be broken Jaan. He pressed her curves and kissed them over her blouse. He just undid two buttons. Baby jo deni hain tumne..

Will you just shut up? Geet yelled. And I do not..

Hmm.. I will shut up... na next question. He smiled and pecked her lips again. How about you see me dead? I mean dard hoga... Will it matter to you if I die or live? Oh don't cry Jaan.. I was just asking you. He wiped the tears and kissed her eyes. Main tho mazak kar raha tha.. ab apni Jaan se mazak nahi karunga tho kya Ria se karunga.

Why are you hurting yourself Maan? Why this pain...

Coz my Jaan wants to see me in pain na. Her heart just stopped. Aab main apne Jaan ko khushi tho nahi de paaya so I think I can atleast give pain to myself.

Is this why you said you wanted to spend this last night with me? She asked in anger. She had enough of his talks and now she understood he was playing with words so tat she changes her decision. Is this a game to force me change my mind?

Na... maine kab kaha aisa. He grinned. My Jaan's smart now and how dare MSK play against her.. hum tho ek team mein hain na. He bit her cheek and squeezed her waist. But trust me Jaan.. I know now tat the way I killed our baby I will kill the next baby also.. kya hain na khoon hi aisa hain... so then don't come complaining to me ok..

Get off me. She tried to push him but he pressed her more. Maan I said..

I was thinking like wat if Ria does not get pregnant.. should I then marry again.. kaun dega aur ke patni mujhe...how about I marry some baby producing machine... unh done tho do hi paida karne unki zindagi barbaad kar di.. so I was thinking like how about I produce too many and destroy them... maaza aayega na Jaan.. khoon se khelna... so much exciting na..

Aap pagal ho gaye hain kya. She cupped his face. His words were scaring her now. This is not you na Maan... why all this talks.. aap tho baby se pyar karte hain na.. isliye tho..

Isliye tho khoon se khelunga.. pata hain.. but this time she did not let him speak and shut him with a soulful kiss where she took all his pain and hurt and tried giving him love.

Kuch pata nahi hain. She murmured into the kiss and forced him to respond to her. She did not think about anything else just kept kissing him and when she felt tat he would not say a word more she slowly parted and said with her hands still on his cheeks. You are the best husband and the best Dadda... and now not a word about anything.. you want to make love to me na.. then make and give me this one night so tat we can live with it.

Deal..

Deal. She narrowed her eyes at him. Kaunsi deal.

You know I'm a businessman so when I sign a deal I should even have some profit right.. you see equal profit or loss. Geet nodded but did not get wat he meant. And I want you to have some loss and profit with this deal.

Maan humne koi deal...

Marry Vicky before I marry Ria. And it looked like her whole world stopped with his words. Marry him and show me tat this is wat you want Jaan and yeah don't you dare think tat I don't know wat you are playing at.. Vicky se shaadi karo mere samne and I marry Ria in front of you and tats a promise tat I'll never ever break.

You don't mean..

I do mean it.. shaadi karo and prove tat this is how we'll respect our Redeeming Love.. Shaadi karo and prove me tat this is wat will give us happiness and peace.. prove to me tat this will not tear us apart.. marry Vicky and prove me whatever you said earlier.

Ok.. I will marry him. He smiled and then smirked with such cold dead eyes tat her soul shivered. I promise you tat I will marry him in front of you.

And then this revenge game will be over. Her eyes wide.

Maan...

No.. this is wat I have to do. He said roughly pulling the mangalsutra and the rings from her. There's no place for them in this game Jaan.. mere tarah yeh bhi kho juke hain but trust me if you don't marry Vicky before I do then don't ever complain for wat I will do... na.. yeh tumare Maan ka promise nahi but ush Maan ka promise me jishne do aise parents se janam liya...

No.. don't say tat.. don't ever...where are you going.. aapne tho kaha.. She panicked seeing him leave her alone on the bed.

Do I have any right in our life Jaan... tho main karu ya na karu kya farak padta hain.. and the truth is tat this is your life and you have to decide wat I and you should do.. She just stared at him. Wat did he mean she had to decide. Sleep now.

But you.. come back to bed Maan... you know I can't..

There will be no Jaan for me... so I should sleep alone.. haan Ria hongi par woh meri Jaan nahi hain na. He gave her a last smile and walked away leaving her cold and dead.

*****

Few days later..

Why don't you go and meet Maan Geet? Rano looked at her daughter and cried seeing her not even replying her back. You do know na where's he right now.. aise tum ushe..

We are divorced Maa and I'm getting married to Vicky. Rano closed her eyes. She was trying all her best to make Geet realize tat she was doing a mistake but she failed each time. And don't you speak about him to me.

So this is your revenge.. suna tha ki badale mein aadmi pagal ho jatha hain par aaj dekh bhi liya. There was no reaction from Geet. And now I can see the real you Geet.. woh sab drama tha.. giving those socks to Ria and all tat right.. waise why don't you kill Maan?.. tumari haatho ki maut bahut achi hogi.. waise bhi bechara jee kaha raha hain... apne bache ko maar diya hain na ushe.. he killed..

He didn't. Rano smirked seeing her getting angry. Do you get my Maan..

No he killed your baby and tats the reason you are taking revenge...

Pyar karti hoon Maan se Maa.. and she broke down with tears. I love him and he did not kill my baby.. he did not kill his baby Maa.. My Maan..

Then why punish him Geet. Rano cupped Geet's face. Ush raat ke baad tum dono.. you both are dead.. I know I was angry on Maan but the truth was tat he never stopped loving you.. sab kuch akele sehta raha but why now.. don't kill him and yourself like this Geet.. don't do this.. why destroy Vicky's and Ria's life Geet.. why being so selfish.

I have to Maa.. I have to and I don't care whose life I destroy you get... I do not care for anyone except my Maan... he should be happy and and tats all and I don't care for the rest.

Buy why..

For Maan.. for his happiness.. uski family ke liye. Rano's eyed turned wide and she just glared at Geet. Haan Maa.

You..

No.. let me speak Maa. Geet wiped her tears. I don't want Maan to hate his parents and trust me seeing me each day in front of him he will only remember the accident.. the trust tat he broke.. he will remember about our baby and this will make him hate them Maa.. Maan ne humesha unhse pyar kiya.. he always loved them and I want tat Maa... and my presence will only bring in hatred.

You still care for those two Geet.. they have..

I care for Maan Maa. Geet cut her mother. Wat will happen if and I Maan marry again.. will I be able to give him any happiness... and seeing me cry each day will he be happy.. unke liye tho woh maut hi na Maa.. seeing his love his Jaan cry... Our love will be dead.

No this is all wrong Geet... You do not know wat you are doing.. Why destroy Vicky's and Ria's life Geet.. why being so selfish. Rano asked in anger. You are destroying their life too Geet.

I don't care whose life I destroy, do you get

You are wrong.. you are wrong Geet and you'll not do this. Rano said shaking her by shoulders. You aren't going to do anything.. nothing tat will destroy two innocent lives.

No I have to. Geet screamed pushing Rano away. None of you understand me.. do you get and I care a damn wat you think.. main Vicky se shaadi karungi and he will marry Ria.. ..he will love Ria no one can change and no one can understand why I'm doing this...

Then wat about you.. wat you will do with Vicky.. love him.

I'll divorce him when I get to know tat Ria's pregnant.. he will be free from me. Rano was shocked. Her daughter was so wrong and she did not understand wat to do. I will free Vicky soon.

You are wrong and trust me you'll regret it Geet.. you will regret..

Wat do you want Maa.. main khud apne haatho se Maan ko maut du.. boliye.. should I marry him again and give him death.. ek ek pal ki maut.. if yes then tell me coz uske liye tho tayaari karni hogi na mujhe.. maut jo deni hain apne pyar ko.. wahi tho karti aayi hain hum dono...

Geet..

Na Maa.. na... maut hi deni hain na mujhe tho de dungi main... I will kill him my marrying him again.. kya hoga... saaza hi hogi.. duniya wale keh denge ki woh dekho ek patni ne apne hi pati ko maar diya.. woh bhi kaisi maut... dard se bhaari hui.. wahi tho chahte hain aap sab... no one understands me.. no one knows wat m going through.. sab bas yeh keh rahe hain ki Geet bhool jao sab.. forget and marry Maan again.. you can adopt a baby and all.. but does anyone understands why I'm doing this.. sirf Maan ka dard deekhayee de raha hain mera dard nahi Maa. Rano cried. She was understanding her daughter better now and she realized this was not about her but about her Maan, to keep his safe from her, to keep him safe from the pain she was going through. Boliye.. kya karu main Maa.. unhe maut du aur zindagi jee lu... kya yahi pyar hain mera... kya yahi chahti hoon main.

Geet... aisa..

Just go Maa.. just go. Geet pushed her away. She was tired. She was tired from explaning everyone and she did not have any energy. She knew her life with Maan would only be painful and she could not give Maan death. She had never ever wanted this but to save him from her own pain and hurt she has to let him go. She has to force him to forget her and love someone else. She had lost everything and the only thing she had now was Maan's love and getting together would destroy them and she was not tat strong to see her love dying and no one ever was going to understand why she was doing this and she did not care. All she cared was about Maan and her love and for tat she would kill herself rather than getting together and destroying her Maan and her love.


Precap: Redeeming Love.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Yaay me first 😃

Edited by ns.1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update di
naina remember past where they destroyed everything. She cofessed to Yash and both realised but as dadima said ab koi fayeda nahi hai they lost everything already.
Maan and Geet talk and Maan tried to made her realize what she was gifting her in form of marriage but Geet was determined on her decision so she will not change. Rano to tried but she confessed her thoughts. She wants k wo parents ko hate na kare regret na kare... So ab kya bole wo zidd pe adi hai. Koi kya kar skta hai. Just because ki Maan guilt feel karega joki sure b nahi hai. They built a new peaceful world far away from this mess,but she choose another option as she dont want him to hate his good got nothing parents...
Now i am waiting what destiney planned for them...
Edited by Dragon-Heart - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb updates 😊if part-7 left me speechless and disturbed 😭part-8 made me shed even more tears 😭😭 the biggest painful truth of geet's life was out that she can never conceive again 😲😭 and she disclosed this truth before maan's mom that how she destroyed her own son's happiness and left him dead 😭 the scene when geet gives naina maan's gift which he had brought for his parents by his own hard earn money at a very tender age was very heart wrenching 😭 naina remembering the past and regretting that how they destroyed an innocent life 😭 finally making naina khurana realize that she and her husband in their greed have destroyed both their children's life😡and i loved the scene when geet gave maan's mom the cheque ,which was a tight slap on the face of that disgusting woman 😡so now maan's parents are regretting their actions after destroying their son's life 😡but now its too late and daadima rightly said that accept her challenge and get back their son and daughter 's happiness with their money and power. Maan playing with words to get back his jaan as he knew that geet will never marry vicky and she is faking all this but is adamant to get him married again and see him happy and maan wants her to marry before him,to which she agreed 😭even her mother knows that she is doing wrong and all 4 lives will be destroyed but geet is adamant and so is maan. What does destiny has in store for them? Will geet marry vicky and divorce him later or and will maan marry ria ? Is a big question mark? The scene where maan was trying to make geet take back her promise was simply awesome and written fabulously 👏it brought out maan's pain and condition so wonderfully. Hope they end up together ending this pain forever and finding peace and happiness together again 😊

Edited by ns.1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey jannat di reading this update I cried again heavily 😭 the plan tht naina aur yash did aur executed aur included pari in it was so shameful how can they accuse so wrongly to a pure soul aur di ab naina aur yash ko pata chalega ke jis paise aur power ke liye woh bhag rahe the woh unke paas hai par jinke liye kar rahe the woh unke paas kabhi ho hi nahi sakte maan is planning something dangerous di aur hearing him is scaring me too much , geet vicky ke shaadi kar rahi hai aur she told rano ke hearing ria is pregnant she will divorce vicky aur di I agree wid wht rano said ke jo woh kar rahi hai woh galat hai she'll regret it di me scared ke maan kya karega di ek request ek aur update abhi doge kal tak kaise wait karoon update ke liye plzzz jaldi se next dena dying to read it my heart is still beating so loudly di
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Posted: 9 years ago
maan tried his best to manipulate geet to change her decision..
but she for her maan and his happiness is ready to do everything.. even ready to marry Vicky..
all she want is maan being happy with his family..
the family who he always carved for and the family who destroyed their own child.
naina and yash feeling the pain but as dadima said its too late to repent..
too late to buy their child happiness.
what will maan do now???

awesome update
loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
SUPERB Updt
finally maan parent know what dey lost
dey killed deir son
Geet wanted his happiness still hurt him
maan try to get his jaan back badly failed
cont

Edited by TinaSwiss - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Emotional update why geet don't understand after marrying ria also maan will not be happy so she should understand him hope to see this in next update so update soon

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