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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
very painful 😭😭
mohinder and rano tried to convince geet but she is adamant
maan is in so much pain 😭😭
he wanted to escort geet to mandap
he made geet wear jewels
maan asked geet to sign the papers wherein she could not divorce vicky
geet is thinking about maan's happiness but she is unable to realize that maan's happiness lies in geet

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Posted: 9 years ago
very very very painful and emotional part😭😭😭😭😭😭😭and yet again I just cried cried cried and I am still crying 😭😭😭maan made geet sign some legal papers that said that if she ever gave divorce to Vicky , his lawyers will get his parents arrested for their sins😊as he knows geet too well and what she is planning to do. He even made his jaan wear jewellery that belongs to khurana's and took her to the mandap, Vicky also tried to convince maan to marry geet forcefully but both maan and geet are adamant on giving each other their happiness😭 geet is not listening to her own parents or Vicky but she doesn't know that instead of giving happiness to her maan she is breaking him further and giving him so much pain that it is scaring me that maan is planning something big for himself but what 😕I don't want to think on that as its very scary 😭geet and Vicky got married 😲now what because I am sure that maan will never marry ria😊can't see them like this in so much pain😭😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi shobha
yeh geet pagal hai ya mein hoon ..pata nahi ..
seriously i want to slap her ..she is all doing for a kid ..what nonsense ..she is simply revenging maan by saying rather shouting pyaar pyaar ...
maan is so much in pain ..can't she see that ..
chalo shaddi ho gayi ..
maan ko maar do ..
let this selfish geet be happy with her so calledd best friend vicky ..
after reading this story ..only i can say ..maan made a fault ..he loved his parents ..so hurt geet ..
but what geet doing for child was not so acceptable ..
maan ka baacha maanka baacha ...bewakoof jab maan hi nahi rahega baccha kaise hoga ,..

all i can feel was maan's pain ..for geet 😡..
maan was trying to recify his mistake but geet successfully punished him ..
if maan's parents were at fault for spoiling maan's life geet made him lay in coffin ..
for me ..all relations which maan made were useless...all used maan for their benefits ..

its best for maan to die rather marrying ria or geet ..

thanks for update
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Vicky smiled seeing her jump and dance like a kid. She was so happy and he was proud of himself coz he had promised himself tat he would keep her happy and he did. His eyed held so much love and pride for her tat anyone seeing him would have been jealous of his feelings for her but he never ever denied himself from showing his affection towards his Geet and right now seeing her dance and jump in the sand in those sexy shorts and a almost white see-through took his beat away but there was also a silly wicked grin.

I just can't stop myself yaar.. she's so sexy and hot. You know I should whisk her away from everyone and just..

Not forget tat she's my wife and mother to my triplets. Maan growled keeping in check his jealousy. He had been watching his Jaan dance and enjoy with their miracle triplets but when he saw Vicky stare at his Jaan, hot and dangerous jealousy burned him from inside. And I do not wish to have my hands colored in your blood.

Why don't you bloody say tat you are sick with jealousy Khuranna? Vicky grinned resting his body on the sun lounger under an umbrella trying to save his half naked body from the hot sun of Malaysia. But trust me I enjoy tat sexy wife of yours yaar.

Where's yours? Maan ignored his words. He knew ever since their reunion Vicky loved to tease him like hell coz he used to shove him off whenever he would find him hugging and kissing his Jaan. I haven't seen her since long.

Tat fat hippo. Maan glared. Ok ok.. I know tat my wife is your sister but trust me she's as annoying as you and a big hippo who kicks me out of the bed every night. Heck I curse myself why the hell I got her pregnant for the second time. Maan laughed as if Vicky was telling a joke but seriously he looked so funny tat he could not control himself. Right laugh.. meri halat tho samajh nahi pata.. Seriously Maan just take her back to KM ok.. main apni beti ko leke wapas London jaunga.

Why don't you tell her this? Vicky narrowed his eyes. Coz as far as I'm worried she might not be ready to leave her flirtatious husband behind with her daughter.

Wat do you mean? Vicky hissed at his brother-in-law.

I mean tat she very well knows you are planning to get a second wife and kick her out.

Coma mein Geet thi tum nahi. Maan grinned and ignoring him he turned his eyes back to his Jaan and his triplets. Two sons and one daughter for whom Geet had given her life but she came back as a fighter. Don't you dare ignore me Khuranna.. tum dono ke liye maine apna pyar daav pe lagaya tha and you bloody donkey you say I want to kick my wife.. my love Pari huh.

Yeah your hippo wife's screaming for you. Maan smirked and walked away leaving an angry Vicky who was about to follow and beat the shit out of Maan when he heard his wife call for him.

Vicky... Vicky..

Yahi hoon. He yelled back and walked towards his pregnant wife who was walking with their daughter besides her and by the look on her face he knew she was pretty angry with her mother. Kya hua.

Daddy.. Ada screamed and jerking her mother's hand ran to Vicky and jumped in his arms. Mumma not good.. mumma very bad ok.

Ok. Vicky grinned pressing a kiss to his 5 year old daughter who was exact copy of his wife but had the mischievous traits from him. But tell Daddy wat Mumma did or say.

She says Daddy very rubbish.. Daddy very bad boy and baby boy good. Vicky looked over her shoulder and saw his wife walking with slow steps. He knew this second pregnancy was tiring her yet she never complained. And Mumma no love Ada.

Really.. Pari did you say you don't love Ada baby. Vicky said as he took steps to reach his wife. This is not done Pari.. you shouldn't..

Don't. Pari glared throwing Ada's hat on Vicky. Don't even say a word more and next time when we come on a holiday make sure you don't include me.

See I told you na Mumma gone mad. Vicky giggled seeing his daughter making actions to prove tat her mother is mad. Daddy get Mumma to hospital. She's mad.

Ada. Vicky glared slightly and Ada bit her tongue. No talking like tat ok.. you know na Mumma's having baby and she gets tired.

Tired.. how dare you say it. Pari glared at him with her hands on her enlarged hips. You... you sit and enjoy here while I struggle with this daughter of yours. Nahi chahiye mujhe yeh beti aapki. Pata hain how much she troubled me to get her in this small beach wear.. sachi mein abhi aisi hain tho badi hoke kya karegi haan.

Main hoon na. Vicky wrapped his free hand around Pari's shoulder and kissed her head. Don't worry baba.. main hoon na and I know she will be just like you.. little naughty and..

Na.. not like me. And Vicky closed his eyes coz he knew why she denied Ada being like her. She should be like you and even this baby. She patted her six months pregnant belly.

Hmm. Vicky slowly kept Ada down and asked her to play in the sand while he talks to Pari. You see them he pointed towards Maan, Geet and their triplets wat do you see Pari?

Love and happiness.

And for tat I think you should let the past go.. jo hua woh ho juka hain and we should be happy tat our little efforts brought them together. Pari smiled. And I want Ada to be like you coz you realized your mistake and confessed to Maan the moment you heard about the accident.. Aasan nahi tha knowing tat you'll be getting hatred but confessing wat you did to help your parents to get Geet out was a big risk Pari.. and I'm very much thankful to god tat he knocked some sense in you and tat stupid Rahul broke your marriage warna aaj tum meri nahi hoti. Vicky grinned trying to cheer her up.

I know it. Pata hain Vicky if I hadn't confessed to Bhai wat I did na I wouldn't be able to be alive.. I always listened to Mom and Dad and believed money was everything so I planted Jatin one of my friend who was in need of money and you know seeing you get married with Bhabhi, I could understand how it felt to lose your love but I was happy tat I was losing my Love to Bhabhi and helping her. Vicky hugged her. And if not you Vicky I would never ever get them together.. ush din agar aap Dadima ko phone nahi karte tho I swear I would have died by now with guilt.

I know but when Mohinder uncle called me and asked to marry Geet my parents were ready. They loved Geet and never minded tat she was earlier married but I knew Geet loved Maan like anything and so I did the best. I called Dadima and got to know the real reasons and then I talked to dadima about getting them together and when I saw you again tat day on the airport with Dadima I was like you weren't the same arrogant Pari I had met on the wedding and tat was the first time I fell in love with you. Pari giggled pressing herself to him but made sure tat she would not harm their baby.

Hmm and then you plan of shocking Bhai at Dr. Sareen's clinic, breaking Bhai's car... it was mind-blowing na.

But nothing worked until you suggested and talked about those socks and your plan of making Geet to see those socks really worked. Pari shook her head. They were helpless coz every time they tried to get Maan and Geet closer they failed but then suddenly Pari remembered about the socks and they had got the first success. But phir bhi kuch nahi hua.. geet was determined to get away from Maan. Kitna kuch kiya but she never listened and then we had to go with Maan's plan to make Geet realize tat she was wrong aur bhai ko kuch pata hi nahi tha tat he was helping us also but seriously Pari when the panditji asked me to fill Geet's maang na I was like dead. She was my friend, my best friend and she means more to me then you but marrying her.. I was shaking but then suddenly she was nowhere sitting next to me aur jab dekha tho she was talking to Maan and saying something. Pari smiled and she was not jealous coz Geet meant to him more then her.

Haan we were even ready to sacrifice our love but I was happy coz I was doing it for Bhai and Bhabhi but then Bhabi once again gave me happiness.

Haan and for now I think we should play with our Ada coz I can see how she is glaring at us and thinking we are romancing. Pari laughed and pulled herself away and looked down at her daughter who was glaring at her with big eyes.

You both... doing love na... I tell Maan Mama and Geet Mami ok and I even tell Dada and Dadi.. you see they say Mumma Daddy all time do love.. and no love Ada. She continued glaring at them until Vicky took her into his arms and walked towards the water holding his wife's hand with his free hand. I tell everyone..

Ok meri Maa bata dena but for now lets play coz I want to get you and Mumma wet.. ok. Ada grinned while Pari glanced at her Bhai's family where she saw her bhai just stare at his child wife enjoying with their triplets.

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Baby says tat Mom, Dadda wouldn't marry Ria Aunty. Maan was so lost tat he did not even see his Jaan jerking Vicky's hand tat was about to tie the mangalsutra around her neck. Bola na.. Baby sach keh raha hain... aap kuch karne wale hain na. She questioned again sitting right in front of him where he sat in the mandap while everyone stared at them not understanding wat was going on. Maan.. she cried his name

Huh. He's eyes blinked and saw his Jaan so close tat he feared to touch her. Jaan..

Baby says tat Mom, Dadda wouldn't marry Ria Aunty. Geet repeated her words.

Kab kaha.

Abhi kaha.. you did not see baby coming and sitting near you... did not you see he yelling at me and telling Mom you are wrong.. aap Dadda ko pain de rahi ho.. Aap Dadda ko punish mat karo.. Aap mujhse mera Dadda dur kar rahe ho. She did not know tat if it was her imagination or not but she had seen their baby sit in front of Maan and yell at her. Boliye na.. baby ne theek kaha na aap Ria se shaadi nahi karne wale hain na.

Kaisa karu. He asked tears rolling down. Meri Jaan tho nahi hain na mere saath... aur Ria... Ria ko pyar nahi kar saktha na Baba.

Where are my mangalsutra and rings? Maan just stared at her and seeing him not answering her she forced him to stand along with her and she fished her mangalsutra and rings from his pocket. Shaadi karonge mujhe Maan

Huh. He was shocked.

Apni Jaan se shaadi karonge aap

Shaadi. He did not believe her. He looked beyond her shoulders and saw Vicky alone staring at them with tears in her eyes. Tum tho waha thi na.. yaha kab aayi..shaadi ho gayi kya.

Will you marry me Maan? Aapki Jaan aapko propose kar rahi hain.

But..

No buts.. Oye Vicky waha se haato mujhe tumse shaadi nahi karni... I can't let my Maan marry any Ria Pia and hurt him.. woh main pagal thi.. kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha but ab nahi.. humare Baby ne kaha ki I was taking his Dadda away from his Mom aur main apne baby ko dard nahi de sakthi ok.. tum na.. haan I'm sorry but I can't marry you. Vicky just nodded. He was finding it hard to say a word and he was scared tat any word from him would bring Geet out of wherever she was and before she changed her mind he asked Panditji to get them quickly married making it short while others just stared at Geet who dragged Maan, her love to the place which was meant for the bride and groom and all the while she held his hand so tight as if she was fearing tat he might just disappear but no one knew wat and how this happened but they had tears in their eyes seeing the Redeeming Love once again getting tied into the scared knot and this type no one would ever destroy this love for them.

Dadda. Maan smiled and wiped his tears as he heard Armaan call him. Aap kya dekh rahe ho... Mom ko kya.

Na. He picked his 5 year eldest son and kissed his little nose. I was thinking how lucky your Dadda is to have you, Aadhaan and Maansi.

And wat about Mom. Armaan asked wrapping his small hands around Maan. Are you not lucky to have Mom with you? Maan smiled. How could not he. He still feared tat if he closed his eyes this would wipe off and he would be empty hand but he was happy. He was so happy tat he could not express his feelings now as his Jaan was back with him and their kids. He still remembered the day 6 years back when he and Geet had decided to start the formalities for adoption when she suddenly fainted in the car and was rushed to the hospital but then his whole world was rocked and filled with happiness on hearing tat his Jaan was pregnant and tat it was not less than a miracle. He never believed on miracles but ever since having his Jaan back he did believed but then nothing was peaceful and happy. Just few months later they got to know tat Geet was carrying triplets and her pregnancy was full of complications and dangerous and when he asked for abortion she refused and locked herself inside their room and he to listen to everything she said for having those babies for him. He forgot about office and stayed 24 hours with his Jaan but still he could not save her from dangers and the moment she gave birth to their babies she slipped into coma for one long year but then she fought. Every doctor had given up but he hadn't. He used to take their kids to the hospital, make them sleep with her, on her tummy, on her chest and he even at times he used to get her nipples into their babies little mouth so tat she could feel them. Every day he took their babies to her and talked to her about them and then one fine day when he had kept Maansi on her breast and Armaan and Aadhaan sleeping next to her, he saw her eyes open and tears rolling down and her hands safely tugging Armaan and Aadhaan at the sides. And tats how the doctor and her nurse had found them after hours. No one knew tat she was awake and just resting on the bed feeling her babies next to her and since then Maan hadn't let Geet out of his sight.

Dadda..

Yeh lo aapke Dadda phir se dream karne lage. Geet pushed Maansi into his arms and she held Aadhaan who was laughing seeing his Dadda make cute puppy faces. Aise mat dekho aap.. you have been lost for so long.

Kya karu... kabhi kabhi darr..

Darr lagta hain.. na I don't remember. Maansi fussed hitting her head. Mom, Dadda kya kehte rehte hain.

Ki tumari Mom pagal hain. Armaan pulled Maan's hair. Yeh tum..

Why did you call Mom mad haan? Mom let me down.. I will kick box Dadda right now. Aadhaan glared at his Dadda with his big eyes.

I'm not scared of you and don't forget tat its me Dadda who teaches you your kick boxing ok.

Oye Dadda ke beto.. apni bokwas kick boxing baatein bandh karo aur mujhe impress karo. Geet laughed hearing their only daughter demanding tat the boys impress her. She always did this when the boys start to speak about their kick boxing. Nahi tho main Mom se kahungi ki tell Dadda not to give you new games.. hain na Mom.

Yeh smart hain Jaan.

Aap pe gayi hain. Maan grinned kissing his daughter. Waise how about we pay in water now?

Really. The kids screamed and without wasting time Maan and Geet took them into water and got the wet. They threw water at each other and when tired they came and settled on the sand.

Come on let's get going... lunch bhi karna hain na. Geet said as she stood up and brushed her shorts. Maan. She called again and smiled seeing how their kids were sleeping on his big body holding him right while he wrapped his big hands around their small body to protect from falling. Maan uthiye.. Lunch karna hain hume.. sab wait kar rahe honge.

Sit down Jaan.

Maan..

I said sit down and sleep with us here. Geet glared.

Maan get up and get them to warna main..

Shut up Geet..

Haan haan shut up Mom. Armaan, Aadhaan and Maansi repeated Maan's words.

Maan..

Good one cuties...

You.. I will.. grrr aap sab so jao main chali akeli. And she left them behind sleeping on the sand and walked towards the beach house tat they had rented for their stay.

Mom left Dadda.. ab hum kya karenge. Maansi asked slowly peeping out and looking at Mom. She's very angry and you know wat she will do.

Yeah.. she will go and sleep on the bed without having a bath..hain na Dadda. Maan grinned. Their kids truly understood Geet and her anger. And she will fuss when Dadda takes her in his arms and throws her in the pool. Armaan said with a smile.

Mom's really a baby Dadda. Aadhaan added. You know we should get her one of those baby socks..

Baby socks. Maan suddenly remembered about Ria and the shocks and how she returned them when she got to know Geet was pregnant. Yeah let's gift Mom baby socks on her birthday but right now let's go and get Mom in the pool before she starts crying for us.

Maan helped his kids to stand and the four walked towards their beach house. He knew by now everyone would have lunched and he would not have to share his Jaan and his kids with anyone else especially the two people who though stayed with them as a family but were far away from his life.

Yes, Maan would never ever forgive his parents but he never ever let them out of his life. They were a part of his family and his life and he never stopped his Jaan and his kids from getting closer to them but he stayed away from them. It was his respect o his Redeeming love tat he would never forget wat they did. They had ruined him and his Jaan but he knew his Jaan would never want him to part away from his parents and so he promised tat he would stay with them, be a family but never be their son again whom they killed long back and he was very possessive and protecting of his babies and always fussed when he would see them with Yash and Naina and with silly excuse he would take them away and keep them close to him promising them tat he would loved and die for them and when he stepped inside their room he saw his Jaan sleep exactly like his kids said.

Jaan...

Khush ho ab aap... you know wat Maan she sat and glared at him I know why you stayed there.. aap na kabhi nahi badalonge right..

When you know me so well why do you ask aur waise bhi I do not deny their time ok. The kids looked at their parent's not understanding wat they were talking. Waise bhi mere bache hain and I know wats best for them.. right kids..

Very Right Dadda. Geet grits her teeth and threw a pillow at them. Dadda time for...

Throwing her into the pool and before Geet could escape Maan scooped her up and walked towards the swimming pool with their kids following and cheering their Dadda.

And this was their journey of Redeeming Love. No, they haven't forgotten about their Redeeming Love coz its part of their life now but they know how to respect it and keep it close to their hearts coz this very Redeeming Love brought them closer in a way tat no one could ever part them now.


' True love is not how you forgive, but how you forget, not what you see but what you feel, not how you listen but how you understand, and not how you let go but how you hold on.'

'One word frees us of all the weight and pain in life. That word is love.'

The End.

Redeeming Love...

Wat should I say coz this story has given me such beautiful readers tat I really can't stop thanking them. The way they have commented analysis every bit of the story made me so happy tat I don't have words to express wat I feel. I know this short story wasn't a happy one but I enjoyed writing it coz I got such good readers with this new story and I thank you all for it. You made me happy and tats the reason I just left all my other stories and finished this. I did not wanted to keep you all waiting for this story and here today I complete it and hope you all loved the end.

NEXT : Epilogue

Edited by sdlife19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

hi shobha
don't know what should i do with comment on previous part ./.
after reading this last part ..only one word for u ...





geet finally realise that maan's happiness lies with ler not with ria ..
i love the baby part ..it was baby who made geet realise her fault ..that moment just stole the heart away ..
maneet had triplets..geet faced tough time ..shews in coma but maan's love brought herback in life ..
pari and vicky loved each other ..that was 😲 ..they were sacrificing for maneet ..thank god geet came into senses early ..married maan and become his jaan ..
pari vicky married ..they have happy family ..
the way maan and kids tease geet ..its hilarious ..
maan's parents r still with him ..all thanks to geet ..


thank u for this story ..
while reading this story i got angry so many times ..so many times hate geet as wish that this story finish asap ..but now when its ended i wish there could be some more parts to it 😆




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Fantastic superb amazing wonderful update
vicky and pari got married
i had a feeling that vicky and pari would help maaneet to be together
on geet-vicky's wedding day
geet realized that she is hurting her maan and then she dragged him till manap and married him
maaneet blessed with triplets 😊😊

will definitely miss this one
it was painful and sad one but in the end it was happy
loved this story



Edited by heemasomani - 9 years ago
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Painfulll update dii [:'(]
just couldnt read full..but had to read it as my heart felt sad for my maan [:'(]
wondering how he managed to be so calm..even when his love..his life was getting married to someone
but I feel dis is what is called a true love where he just wants nothing but her happiness 😊
awesum update dii 😊
Hoping maan nd geet will love eachother even when drifted apart 😊
pls do pm for nxt part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
very emotional
mohindar realised his mistake keeping away get from maan but it is too late

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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg nooo.. Geet cant do this.. Y do i have a feeling either geet will stop the wedding or maan will commit suicide.. Fabulous part hun.. Cont soon

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