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Each update maaneet pain are increasing... I so wish that in the fight to save maan hope she don't loose him forever... His last talk with geet was scary n he just left her... Now rano maa understand geet actual plan to save her love... Hope she realize that she is maan love n life...
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very sad update
why geet cannot understand after marrying ria , maan will not be happy
so why she cannot give him one more chance
update soon
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Fantastic update
yasha and naina realized what they have lost
they cannot buy their children from money
maan tried to change geet's mind
maan took promise from geet that he will marry ria only when geet will marry ria
rano is trying to explain geet to marry maan
but geet doesn't agree
i agree with rano that with geet' decision both vicky and ria's life will be destroyed
but geet is adamant on her decision
eagerly eagerly waiting for update
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very emotional update...why geet is doing that...she is not understanding that maan will be in more pain by marrying ria...
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Superb update...naina & yash realized they did sins & repented for that but no use cos big damage was done , they realized they lost their children . maan was in action ... he tried to made his jaan understand that this time she is wrong . love is pure , it comes from heart not by force . indeed geet became mad . her mom tried to made her understand but no use . even her mom said she is destroying vicky & ria's life but she don't care about that ...
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Everything waa beautiful and heavenly but not the hearts tat were involved in this auspicious wedding. There was pain and hurt and nothing would save them from this never ending Redeeming Love. Mohinder closed his eyes as the Panditji said something to him. It did not take time for him to realize tat even he was at mistake. Yes, he knew his daughter could not be a mother again but keeping Maan away from her for one long year was the main reason for this day. If he had not been angry and thought with heart he would not see everything falling apart.

Suniye. He opened his eyes hearing the soft voice of his wife. They both tried everything but their daughter always shut them out of her life. Maan and his family. She pointed at a direction and Mohinder's heart wept seeing a dead Maan. There was nothing on his face just plain. Main dekh...

This should not happen Rano..sab barbaad hoga. Mohinder tried hard not to cry but seeing Maan after so many days he could not control himself. Geet ko..

No one can stop her. Rano gave a weak sad smile and asked him to go and greet Maan and his family while Vicky he stood in one corner and just stared with his parents who smiled at whoever smiled at them.

Maan...

I want to be the one to escort Geet to the mandap. Everyone stilled. They just stared at Maan who had nothing written on his face but these few words from him shocked and scared them. And its my right.

Maan this is not done beta. Dadima took his hand in hers. It will only give you pain Maan.

Dard tho kisi aur ne diya Dadima. Dadima closed her eyes. She knew wat Maan meant while Naina and Yash they bowed their heads in shame. Aur ab main wahi kar raha hoon jo meri Jaan chahti hain.

Why don't you stop her Maan? She's ruining everything. Rano tried for the last time. Sabki zindagi se khel rahi hain woh.

She thinks tat this will help me to get rid of my guilt Maa. Rano did not know wat to say as he was right. She wants me to be happy and in this fight she can't see anything beyond... Pyar karti hain na mujhse so she does not even want to believe I killed my own baby.

You did not kill Maan. Yash spoke for the first time to Maan after he realized his mistakes. Its not you but me. Maine khud..

And this is how she thinks we should respect our Redeeming Love Maa. Maan ignored his father. There was no hatred no anger for them in him coz his heart tat loved them was dead and soon the heart tat loved his Jaan would also die. And its my right and I will do it. No one said a word as they saw Maan walk upstairs to see Geet. There was nothing tat would stop this marriage and Maan was prepared for it but something scared them tat this wasn't just the storm tat was waiting but there was much more to come.

Maan. Her heart stopped even before he stepped inside her room. Maan...

Yahi hoon. He said stepping inside and locking the door. Don't worry.. shaadi dekhne aaya hoon main.

Hmm. She tried to smile but seeing him after so many days she was choked and her throat was ready to burst but she controlled. Aap akele aaye ho.

Na. And he did not say a word more and walked towards her.

Aise kyu dekh rahe ho.

Ek aahkri sawal poochu. She nodded. She did not think she could say something now when he talked like tat.

Are you sure you aren't punishing me for killing our baby? Are you sure this is not some sort of revenge? Are you sure you love me so much tat you only think about my happiness after I destroyed you?

3 sawal hain Maan. He smiled and kneeled down in front of her. Aapne kaha tha sirf ek sawal.

Answer them. He fingers slowly reached to touch her soft cheeks tat had lost their glow and the chubbiness. He always liked her fuller cheeks and now they looked so bony. You have lost so much of weight.

I know. She wanted to reach and touch him but she was scared. She was so scared tat if she touches him he would disappear. But ab moti hone ki khoshish karungi.

Answer my questions Jaan. Geet nodded. Aahkri baar answer karo na.

When I opened my eyes after the accident I saw you Maan...I saw the pain and something dark in your eyes and tat scared me so much. You were there in front of me but you were not my Maan and I did not dare to say a word but as time passed I realized wat it was.

Kya tha.

It was anger and hatred for yourself. You hated yourself so much tat you thought you killed our baby but you did not..how could you kill our baby.. so you got your answer for it... Aapki Jaan ne kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi socha tat you killed our baby and no, this is not any revenge. Geet can never think of such and answer for the last one I don't know wat to say coz my love for you... is something tat you feel not I.. its something tat you should answer.

Will you sign something for me Jaan? Geet raised her brow. Something tat I want to have as a personal assurance for your happiness.

Kya sign karna hain Maan and wat is tat will assure you my happiness? Maan pinched her nose. She was so innocent and nave. Maan.

Yeh. She narrowed her eyes. She had not seen Maan carrying anything and now she saw a folder and a bag next to his legs as she was so busy to see his face tat she probably might have not to see anything else. Its some legal papers.

Papers.. legal. She asked in confusion.

Yes and they say tat if you ever divorce Vicky Malhotra, my lawyers will get Naina and Yash Singh Khuranna arrested for their crimes and see tat they don't escape. Geet gasped in shock. She had never ever thought Maan would be so dangerous. I know wat this little brain of yours has planned he tapped on her forehead and being your Maan I need to protect you and see tat you do not ruin your life for me. So you see you divorce Vicky and see those two people rot in jail.. Aahh don't argue Jaan coz I know wat is this all about so just sign and let me stay happy.. main tho wahi kar raha hoon tat you want me to do.. Marry Ria and have a family but for tat I need to assure myself tat my Jaan is happy.

I can't sign this Maan..its blackmail. Geet shook her head. I can't.

You want me to marry Ria right. She nodded for yes. Then sign or else I'll break the promise I made to you Jaan and trust me I'll get them arrested. Ek saal se chup tha but not anymore so sign and make me happy. She looked into his eyes. This was his last step and she knew she was caught now and she could not escape this. She decided tat she'll sign it right now but then later she would find a way to get out of it and she knew she would come out of this marriage and even save his parents. Maan smiled as she signed and gave him back the papers but then suddenly he pouted and the frowned glaring at her.

This does not look good on you. He said unhooking the necklace and keeping it aside. This type of jewellery does not suit my Jaan. She smiled. She just wanted this moment to freeze as he slowly removed her earrings, the nose ring and the mang theeka. Why did you wear them haan?

Kuch aur nahi acha laga. She lied. Aur phir Maa ne kaha yahi pehan.

Ok. And he slowly pulled s jewellery box from the side tat was in the bag he bought with himself. You'll wear wat I have got ok.. yeh acha hain...Tum dulhan bane wali ho na and dulhan should look beautiful.

Why are you doing this Maan? Aapko dard hota hain na. She cupped his face. Aisa na karo baba.

Dard mehsoos nahi hota hain Jaan. He smiled as he hooked the beautiful necklace around her neck followed by Khuranna family's kundan necklace

Yeh tho..

Tumari amanat hain. He straightened the piece. And it only belongs to you ok... so kuch mat kehna.

But..

Kaha na Jaan kuch na kehna. Tears rolled down her cheeks. Aye.. don't cry.. makeup karab hoga and I don't like my Jaan to be a cry baby on her wedding.. Vicky kya kahega.

Kuch nahi. And she threw her arms around his neck and hugged him tight. Kuch nahi kahega.. kuch nahi kahega..

Pagli. He pulled himself away. Aisa nahi rote and let me complete this.. uske baad mandap par bhi le jana hain na.

Aap.

Haan aur kaun hoga.. mera haq hain na Jaan. She just stared at him now. She did not have any words to say to him coz she was going to break down and she could not afford to do it. Everyone said she was wrong, she was ruining lives but she knew to save her Maan she had to do this. She knew he would not marry Ria but she had her plan ready and he would do as she said. She was all ready for the future and for tat she had to be strong for her Maan, for her love.

You look so beautiful Jaan. He slowly turned her. See. And she raised her eyes and saw the most beautiful heavenly sight in her life. Just like my angel.

Why do you keep saying my angel? She asked wanting to have something to talk. You always say I'm you light in the darkness.

You are my angel Jaan aur angel ko angel nahi kahunga tho kya kahunga haan. She nodded. Ab chale neeche.. Vicky wait kar raha hoon.

Hmm. And she slowly stood and Maan kissed her forehead.

You know na tat I love You. She tip toed and pecked his lips and he smiled but did not say anything. He held her hand softly in his and walked out of the room and then down the stairs forcing every head to turn and look at them. Who would say tat this couple was ever going to be separated but today they were going to witness the biggest truth of their life.

Maan don't do this please. She pulled his hand asking him to stop half down the staircase. This is not your right Maan.. Papa kar lenge please.

Its my right Jaan and I want to do it. He slowly turned and smiled at her. Na.. your Maan's fine.. see smile bhi kar raha hain.

You are hurting yourself Maan. Tears trickled down. Please aisa na karo please.

Let me do this please... yeh aahkri baar hain na please.

Kya aahkri baar. Suddenly she panicked. Maan kya aahkri baar. Wat are you going to do?

Marry Ria and after tat how will I ever get to hold your hand. But she was not satisfied. Something told her tat this was not wat he meant but she did not get wat it was. She was failing to read and understand her Maan and it was scaring her. Chale... Vicky wait kar raha hain. And he started to walk down again.

Maan... Sab dekh rahe hain Maan.

I know. He said as he walked towards the mandap. They know tat they can't match you up na.. you look so beautiful as a bride tat they are jealous of you... Aare Vicky tho aadhe raaste mein hi hain.

Is this right Maan? Vicky asked the moment they reached near him. Yeh hum kya kar rahe hain Maan... iski zidd aur yeh tumara pyar.. who will win Maan.

You love her na Vicky. Vicky nodded. Then I know this is right and iski zidd humesha se achi hoti hain Vicky. Geet cried from behind. She was losing this but she did not want to. Maan ko aur kuch nahi chahiye... meri Jaan khush rahe tats all I want and I know with you she'll be.

Take her away.. force her to marry you Maan... main khud help karunga and once you marry her again she'll not dare to get away.. go I will see tat she does not say a word Maan. Maan smiled at him. Don't smile Maan.. do as I say.

Mandap chale... varmala ka time ho raha hain. And once again he started to walk towards the mandap and forced Vicky to follow. Pandiji yeh rahi dulhan. The Panditji smiled as Maan made Geet to stand and asked for the varmala's. He looked for Vicky and saw him walking slowly. Vicky..jaldi.. muharat ka time chala jaa raha hain. And he stepped down making Vicky to stand in front of Geet.

You ok. Maan turned feeling a hand on his shoulder. Maan.. you ok.

Absolutely Dadima. He tried to hide his pain but Dadima could read him like an open book now. More than happy to see my Jaan getting married.

Dil ko samajha rahe ho ya aapne aap ko Maan. He shook his head with a silly grin. You..

Aap kuch bhi Dadima. He pulled her closer and wrapped her hand over her shoulder. You know na how much I love my Jaan so why do you think I'm not happy for her.

If I was there tat time then yeh sab nahi hota.. Yash aur Naina..

It does not matter now Dadima. He just closed his eyes. Hona tha so hogaya now let's enjoy this and see my Jaan getting married again.. waise she looks very beautiful na.

Coz she's your angel. He smiled. Tears were burning his eyes but he had threatened them from leaving his eyes. He wanted to see his Jaan without any distraction and tears would blurr his image so he warned them. Where are you going?

To see my Jaan. Dadima frowned not understanding her Maan. Yes, she was scared and worried for him but today she could see a genuine smile on his lips and she knew he was happy for Geet. Sitting there he pointed towards a place in the mandap I'll be able to see my Jaan properly. Aap aa rahi hain kya.

Na. She was filled with emotions. How easily he could do all this and show he was happy. Aap chahiye. Maan gave her a smile and he walked towards the spotted place and kneeled down to watch his Jaan. The varmala ritual was over and now the bride and the groom was sitting down and the panditji was saying something. Geet looked up and saw Maan looking at her with a smile tat she loved but tat smile was making her afraid. She tried to smile back but she could not and her eyes just rested on him.

Kya hain. He murmured and Geet could guess from the movement of his lips tat he asked her wat. Jaan.. Don't look at me.. Concentrate on your wedding baba.

Why are you smiling? Maan smiled reading her lips. Though they were not near and just murmured they could read each other's lip movements. Boliye na..

Coz you decided for us Jaan and I'm happy. Something told her wat he meant. Yes she decided for them and he was happy very happy, she could see in his eyes but then why was she not feeling happy. Why was she having this fear but then suddenly she saw something like Maan holding a baby and she smiled. All fear gone for that moment coz she knew she was right and she looked up at Maan with a big smile and wiped her tears.

You ok. She felt a hand and saw Vicky looking at her. Are you having second thoughts on this wedding?

Na.. never. Vicky just looked at her with big eyes. I want to get married to you. And then she concentrated on words the panditji was saying. She gave Maan a smile again and then looked at her parents and smiled at them. She was happy, yes she was happy coz she was doing the right thing for everyone and her Maan would be happy alive with his own family away from her own pain and hurt.


Precap: And they live with Redeeming Love...

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Edited by sdlife19 - 9 years ago
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Mohinder nd rano both tried to convince Geet but she is not understanding anything.
Maan himself helped geet with the jewels nd took her to mandap.
First time geet is not understanding what maan is thinking.
Maan talks are strange.
Maaneet talks with their eyes only.
I think maan is planning something big.
He is trying to commit suicide.
Edited by kamnagupta7 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
god heart wrenching update

cannot see them separated

u have written superbly

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