Ragna ss please forgive me ( part 2: page 4 11/8)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi friends I am writing this story in another forum Arjun and I thought of writing a ragna version of it

Will continue only if u guys are ok with it

Any resemblance is purely coincidental and you can inform me through pm and I will stop this

I m giving prologue now
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue :

What happens when a girl snatches her sister love...

What happens when the girl convinced her sister that the guy whom she is madly in love don't love her and instead loves her sister...

What happens when the girl thinks that the guy cheated her and played with her feelings...

What happens when the guy doesn't know how the girl he loves look like...

What happens when the guy comes to know about the injustice done to him and his love...

Will he be able to get his true love back?????

Friends shall I continue or not...
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Part 1

A beautiful girl's sleep is disturbed by sunrays...she woke up and got freshened up and went near a room and knocked on the door but its already opened...she saw the most important people of her life quarreling cutely...she smiled and went inside they saw her and stopped quarreling and the girl hugged her and said good morning kalpi...[Yes the girl who came in was Kalpana]

Kalpana : Good morning Bhabhi...Eh kya aap subah subah meri bhai per chillarahe ho??

Mansi: Kya aap dhono bhai behan ek jaise hi hai ...meine kuch nahi kiya sabh thumhari bhai kha hi galathi hai...he was about to fall...

Kalpana ran to her brother who is sitting on bed hugged him and said : Kya bhayuu eh sahi hai kya joot math boliye...

pakhya: Ha kalpi sorry ...

Tears are rolling on Kalpana's cheek...pakhya wiped the tears and said sorry kalpi aage se aisa nahi hoga...

Kalpana hugged him and said I know bhaiyuu u are trying not to trouble us but we both love u a lot...u can never trouble us we can't see u in pain please for both us don't take such drastic steps...

Mansi placed her hand on Kalpana shoulder and sat beside pakhya...pakhya apologized both and both hugged him...

Kalpana: Chalo ab bahuth hogaya aur tho aur meri manjil thak khi safar kal se shuru hogi bhaiyuu I promise I won't leave the people responsible for our condition ...

She placed her hand on mansi hand and said bhabhi abh mein humare saath aur injustice nahi hone doongi...they will have to payback for their deeds...

Mansi assured Kalpana that she will definitely succeed in her mission and blessed her...Kalpana composed herself and complained that she is hungry...mansi and pakhya smiled at their kalpi their life and all went to have breakfast...

Later Kalpana and mansi went to mall for shopping where a little boy playing near the edge and is not listening to his mom Kalpana caught the boy by tricking him and handed over to his mom all were amazed at her beauty and skills...

Sammyand raghav and maya also came there and saw all that...Sammy asked them to wait at parking and he will be back...
Raghav observed that Sammy talking to the girl and hugging her before she left...Sammy returned to car and drove back ...

All were thinking about the girl in the mall and Sammy is smiling thinking of the girl which got noticed by Raghav he has many doubts but brushed them aside...They went directly to office...

Later in the evening all left for the house after completing the work...only Sammy and raghav were in the room...Sammy phone beeps indicating a message after reading which small smile crept on Sammy face ...he muttered pagal Larki kabhi nahi sudaregi...

Some where else Kalpana got a call seeing the id she became happy and lifted the call...

O.S.: Hello darling how are you ...

Kalpana : tho abh yaadh aaya janab kho mein..finally...

O.S: oy chupkar...thum ho jho mere sawal kha jawab nahi dethi ho aur mujhe sunaraheho...

Kalpana: kounsi jawab...

O.S: wahi mera 143 kha Jawab...

Kalpana: Abhi thu phir shuruu hogaya...okay bye mein phone rakthihu ...

Abhi: sorry jaanu sorry...please talk to me...

They talked for some time and Kalpana slept awaiting the next day to be asap as it is first day of her journey to the goal...

Next morning Kalpana woke up early got ready and went to a place and stopped before a building..which is

Singhania Office...

All were in the conference room...Kalpana went inside the office said something to the receptionist and went inside...

She reached a floor and opened the door...the door just missed hitting sakshi ( a girl who loves raghav one side love)..

Sakshi furiously started shouting on Kalpana as to who is she it is not a place anyone can barge into...it is conference room and nonstop shouting at Kalpana..before Kalpana could talk all heard Sammy shouting at sakshi...( sakshi is not there at mall scene)

Sammy: sakshi enough!!!! She is Kalpana and she is the new marketing head...

To be continued
Sorry for any mistakes
Please do comment on this
swara2504 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsm storyline Swetha
Please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing concept
Plz continue soon
Nandinisai thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story
update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update swetha
Kalpi mansi and pakya's tunning is very nice
Who saying 143 to Kalpi ..
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update swetha, continue soon n thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update dear
Continue
Is it sammy whome kalpi talk on ph.
Updatre next part soon dear
N thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏 Superb update.. Plz continue.. Who was that girl in mall.. Was she Kalpi.. I thnk she was Kalpi only.. So kalpi is new marketing head... Nd Sakshi she scold our Kalpi.. Idiot girl.. M waiting for nxt chappy.. Plz update soon..

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