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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

The poem was short and strong! Loved it.

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GEETHA KRISHNAN

@KURT15

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
The poem was short and strong! Loved it.

Thank you. 😃

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Sirisha Nandini Jala

@NandiniJala27

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Geetha, please update this wonderful poem from Arjuna's pov. Could feel the emotions that I think Arjuna really felt. Any way that you can do one from Karna's pov then maybe end it with a happy reunion in heaven? Keep up the great work.

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GEETHA KRISHNAN

@KURT15

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: NandiniJala27
Geetha, please update this wonderful poem from Arjuna's pov. Could feel the emotions that I think Arjuna really felt. Any way that you can do one from Karna's pov then maybe end it with a happy reunion in heaven? Keep up the great work.

Thank you for your kind words. I have written other poems, but haven't thought about a sequel to this one or even about a reunion scene. 😉

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

amazing poem andanother kaju moment i always think arjun would have never move on from the guilt of his

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GEETHA KRISHNAN

@KURT15

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Patrarekha
amazing poem andanother kaju moment i always think arjun would have never move on from the guilt of his

Thank you Jhum. You seem to be on a spree!! Decided to get me to stop complaining?? Love u.

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Sphinx.

@Sphinx.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

honestly while started reading this I did not expected this finishing!! i got goose bumps!! it was very focused and to the point..but very touching..beautiful dear

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GEETHA KRISHNAN

@KURT15

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
honestly while started reading this I did not expected this finishing!! i got goose bumps!! it was very focused and to the point..but very touching..beautiful dear

Thank you Dhi..😳