StarDevdass - Karna

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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was a peculiar Dushy .. He neither slept nor ate which were his all time duties earlier. He preferred to stay alone.. DSK could not believe it.. why should Sishupal's called off wedding affect Dushy so much?.. His bestie Karna was sent to check..

K: Dushasana 😕

D: Ji Bringraj

K: Whhaattt?? 😲

D: I mean Angraj 😛 I know why you are here.. infact I was waiting for you.. I cant open my heart to anyone but you 😳


Dushy sounded romantic and Karna stepped back a little...


D: I saw a woman.. and she is no ordinary woman.. at Vidarbha garden.. she walked like a poem.. smiled like a painting.. spoke like music ☺️


K: Dushy 😲 I thought you knew nothing more than Pithu 😛 who is she? 😉


D: Her name.. Brihannala.. and I know nothing else 😳She left in a jiffy but I managed to capture her image in my heart and now onto this canvas..


he unveiled the painting as saying that and turned to Karna.. to see him frozen .. he could hear Karna's heart beat.. ❤️


Dushy sensed danger and lost all hopes.. 😲 "Angraj! Angraj! She is my love 😭.. your beti samman sister in law.." 😭


Karna heard not anything.. He was nothing but a feather in air.. he felt nostalgic.. this is not the first time he is sent afloat by a beautiful woman.. 😳

*****

"Radheya! Radheya! 😃 How do I look in this new saree? 😃".. His neighborhood friend Vrishali came in asking..

"Well the saree is awesome"

"I asked about me" 🤔

"Please dont mind Vrishali.. I think you should hit the gym.. your hips are too broad and shoulders puny.. look at your thighs yuk.. 🤢 "

"Broad shoulder and thinner hip? 😕 Radheya 😕.. that will make me look like a man dressed up as woman.."

"Shut up you old fashioned fool.. now get out of my sight.."

Vrishali cursed his zero-figure ki lalsa and resolved on revenge.. "Probably I should marry him" 😵

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Vrishban lost his cool.. Vrishu spent all his savings for gym subscription and protein powder.. he had no idea why she kept reading Sibi's story with a knife in hand.. he approached Adhirath for help.. Adhirath put on his 007 jacket and hat and started investigating.. In no time he found Brihu to be the reason.. and also her portrait in Dushy's room..


"We should be lucky if we can bring her as our daughter in law" he told Radha in a soft voice.. "but wait.. oh shit.. this is Arjun"

"That is unbelievable.. there is no other woman in the world whom I've felt jealous of"amazed Radha..

Adiratha discovered a diamond necklace studded on 916 gold underneath Karna's pillow..

"sigh.. so much was Karna in love that he identified Brihu's necklace to be a cheap set from naaptol.com and he ordered for this one.. he would be devastated to know Brihu is Arjun's disguise.. "

'thud' they heard the sound of stupefied Karna falling like a corpse.. "it is high time both Karna and this necklace reach Vrishali's hands" Radha concluded..

***

Years passed by.. but the soft spot Brihu left in Ka's heart for Ju was still alive.. He created his own opportunity in Kurukshetra to speak out his affection towards Brihu.. He felt heaven when Ju asked if Ka couldnt forget Brihu's sight.. so much was the impact of constant eye locks at Matsya..

It was not without a reason that he chose the sexiest dress from his wardrobe for Virata war.. or for that he wanted priya Arjun to do his last rights..

The world knew that the high souled Karna wanted to die on the lap of the woman who was his mother for few hours.. but no one knew that he wanted to die at the sight of the (wo)man who was his love for few days!

***THE END***⭐️

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Sanskruthi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This refreshed my Prapanchi memory😛 😆 it had cleared my same necklace doubt too, Adi007😳... I had been screaming since then for someone to write on Vrushus long time pregnancy nd Krishu frightened about Vada stealing his place of being sutradhara of MB😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mind-blowing!! ❤️ 👏
pithu!! thanks for reminding...oh god how could i forget it 🤔 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I was laughing uncontrollably all the time! KaJu are brilliant!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣
I am getting burps of cashew flavour... 😆
Brilliant writing... 👏

And u have made DuJu as well... 😳 n Karna's 'size zero lalsa'...🤣

U can post this in the new forum...I think people will like it there...




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh Diala Dii 🤗
U just refreshed my memory of reading Prapanchi special writings 😛 🤣 I remembered reading ur piece in our Prapanchi thread
Remembering our StarDevdass Karna in Aham's b'day 😳

Edited by ...Hemangi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"it is high time both Karna and this necklace reach Vrishali's hands" Radha concluded..


LMAO!!🤣 great work 👏
Edited by The.Lannister - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahahaha, couldn't stop laughing! brought back some fond memories!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing story! So funny! Couldn't stop laughing! Loved the KaJu and the DuJu. Haha Brihu was definetly popular. Have you written anymore KaJu goodness? Really loved the chemistry between Aham and Shaheer in Mahabharat! Keep up the great work! Do you think you could write something about KaJu but from Arjuna's pov? Good luck on all your future endeavors!

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