NEW TS: Yeh Moh Moh Ke Dhaage! Epilogue on page 24

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: rutu83
oh thank you! got my closure - and what a closure ☺️
awesome epilogue!

Pleased u liked it 😃

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: Snehal21
Lovely epilogue..😳
It was an awsome TS...enjoyed reading it!

Thank u dear 😃

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: avni_19
Jaaanuuu.. That was EPIC Epilogueee...😳😳😳 Tooo awesummm yaarr..
Loved how you described the past three months journey in which Ishita was rewinding and smiling like a teenager and then the present..!! Bwhahahha!!!! Mr and Mrs.Iyer in their bedroom!! Ohh my...! 😆😉

I can understand Puttar's desparation..That was indeed cuteee!!!! 😆😳😉

Loved those intimate kisses he kept giving her... My heart beats and sends shivers everywhere!😳
Beautifully written as alwayss and bilkul entertaining...👏 😃😃😃

Ap STAR ho Sach mei!!!!⭐️👏

Thank u very much dear! It was a pleasure writing this piece of fiction. Though it was hard trying to end it in three shots I am happy with the ending with mr n mrs Iyer visit n Raman blowing his top! 😆

Star toh mein nahin janti but loved I am for sure! By you all wonderful ppl out there who always have kind words for my work. 😳

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Epilogue aya :D
They sorted out then n there in the park...
U know u can easily make it a ten shot with per epi a new development... To couch ..to bed..to cuddle ... To kiss...
Kiss se yaad aya what a kiss!!!!
The last part was hilarious... Raman Ki itni months Ki frustration vent out hui... Hehehe...
I love each of the dialogues of Raman in it.

Di thank you so much for writing this one.
Btw mine one was kiss-less hug-less lol...
N villain... I hate villain... In my stories u will never find villains... Until it is required :P

P.s. Can you write one two three four more lol. I have 2-3-4-5. Concepts. Few are strictly one shot... N again simple n sweet se ... Say yes... Plz

Ouiii maaa! I can't write that much even I can, I won't b able to visit the threads let alone reply to the comments 🤣

I damn well know u will live the last part with putter blowing his top after coming back home to see Amma n Appa taking his bedroom. 😆