NEW TS: Yeh Moh Moh Ke Dhaage! Epilogue on page 24 - Page 20

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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful epilogue 😳...loved it totally
their conversation in d park was superb...really liked this straight forward ishita 😳
their first kiss ☺️ blushing ishita was cute 😳
liked despo raman's frustration and his words to ishita πŸ˜†...
and their kitchen romance ☺️...loved it😳
thank u for this wonderful TS πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

jaanu...it ws an adorable TS...njoyed readin it..πŸ€—


Thank u Nikki
So happy to see u here. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sri1091

Wonderful epilogue totally loved it... That straight talk in the park was jst awesome I liked ishita's boldness while opening upto him without hiding anything from him... Their journey was beautiful thank u for giving us a story lyk dis totally loved d story



Thank u Sri.
I am very glad that u loved this concept. It was a pleasure writing this πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

OSJ, amazing TS. I love the way you ended it. πŸ˜ƒ liked Ishita dreaming about Raman in her bedroom their memories and yes, the kiss was hot. ☺️ amazing work once again. πŸ˜ƒ


Mehek I didn't feel like ending it at all but I am happy too with the ending! πŸ˜³
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anum_says

Eeekkksss ..

Loveelyyy epilogue


Thank u πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rutu83

oh thank you! got my closure - and what a closure β˜ΊοΈ

awesome epilogue!


Pleased u liked it πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehal21

Lovely epilogue..😳
It was an awsome TS...enjoyed reading it! 


Thank u dear πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: avni_19

Jaaanuuu.. That was EPIC Epilogueee...😳😳😳 Tooo awesummm yaarr.. 

Loved how you described the past three months journey in which Ishita was rewinding and smiling like a teenager and then the present..!! Bwhahahha!!!! Mr and Mrs.Iyer in their bedroom!! Ohh my...! πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

I can understand Puttar's desparation..That was indeed cuteee!!!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰

 Loved those intimate kisses he kept giving her... My heart beats and sends shivers everywhere!😳
Beautifully written as alwayss and bilkul entertaining...πŸ‘ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Ap STAR ho Sach mei!!!!β­οΈπŸ‘


Thank u very much dear! It was a pleasure writing this piece of fiction. Though it was hard trying to end it in three shots I am happy with the ending with mr n mrs Iyer visit n Raman blowing his top! πŸ˜†
Star toh mein nahin janti but loved I am for sure! By you all wonderful ppl out there who always have kind words for my work. πŸ˜³
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Epilogue aya :D
They sorted out then n there in the park...
U know u can easily make it a ten shot with per epi a new development... To couch ..to bed..to cuddle ... To kiss...
Kiss se yaad aya what a kiss!!!!
The last part was hilarious... Raman Ki itni months Ki frustration vent out hui... Hehehe...
I love each of the dialogues of Raman in it.

Di thank you so much for writing this one.
Btw mine one was kiss-less hug-less lol...
N villain... I hate villain... In my stories u will never find villains... Until it is required :P

P.s. Can you write one two three four more lol. I have 2-3-4-5. Concepts. Few are strictly one shot... N again simple n sweet se ... Say yes... Plz



Ouiii maaa! I can't write that much even I can, I won't b able to visit the threads let alone reply to the comments πŸ€£
I damn well know u will live the last part with putter blowing his top after coming back home to see Amma n Appa taking his bedroom. πŸ˜†