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MG OS BreakFree
PART 6
Kya kismat hai meri ...dil dia bhi tou usko jiska dil mien khud torne wala hoon ...
Maan sighed n closed his eyes gathering all his courage n walked in the disc again only to loose all his control seeing the sight ...
Geet was standing in a corner while 2 drunk bas***ds were advancing towards her ..she looked so panick striken stil trying to warn them off ...maan rushed towards them n held them from the back of thr collars n jerk them back making them fall down on the ground ...if it wasn't for geet clung to his side shaking in fear he would have beaten the shit out of them ...how dare they even lay thr filthy eyes on her ...she was a crying mess when he parted her from his embrace n glanced at her ...her sleeves were torn n she was looking down ...feeling so conscious ..maan closed his eyes n took out his jacket made her wear it ... n turned towards those 2 men ...geet tried to grasp his hands ..
Maan ...(but he was gone ...
Geet stood thr clutching his jacket while maan beat them black n blue ...n finally clutched the collar of one of them n said with outmost anger ..
Next time ...kisi larki ki taraf aankh uthane se pehle hazaar baar sochna ...
N he threw him away only to crawl his way out of the disc while maan went towards geet n held her trembling form in his embrace to which geet willing hid herself from the prying eyes of everyone looking at her as if she is something to feast on ...maan held her close not letting anybody see her vulnerable self while giving everyone staring at her a mean look n took her with him upto his room ...
Geet couldn't gather herself ..she felt so cheap ..angry at her own helpless behaivior out thr ..if ..if this would have happened 2 years back maan wouldn't have to intervene she alone would have been enough for those two bas***d but what she did ..stood thr like a weak girl listening to them letting them have thr way with her ...the feel of thr hands on her body still sending chill shudders down her body making her tremble ..she hates herself ...she so much hates herself to have become such a weak person .. she snapped when the bed beside her dipped but relaxed realizing it was maan ...
Relax geet ..lo pani peo n just chill u r safe now ..
But her tears didn't stopped ..maan sighed every second her tears were making him mad ..almost urging him to go hunt those idiots n kill them ..he didn't knew what he could do to make her feel better ... just when he thought to say something geet started random things apparently to nobody ...
I isn't me ...I wasn't like this ..yeh kya kar liya hai mene apne saath ...kahan aagayi hoon ..kyun yeh sab ..babaji plss just put an end to all this please ...
That was all it took for maan to snap ...
Will u please just stop it ..tumhari koi galti nahi thi ..those guys ..geet I don't get u ..y the hell r u crying buckets coz of those dickheads ..whatever happened wasn't something u could have any control over besides nothing went out of control ookie ...mien hoon yahan ..u ...u r completely safe ..for heaven sake stop crying ..
U ..u think I m crying coz of what they tried to do ..or what they did ..
No I thought u were crying coz u lost ur fav clutch ..
U know what maan ..i m done here ..(geet stood up n started walking away) .. thank u very much I m leaving ..
Maan panicked n held her wrist just as she took a few steps ahead of him n stopped her ...
Geet listen ..i m sorry I didn't meant to offend u ..
Geet still didn't gave up n struggled to get her hands free of his grip but he never let her go instead he walked up to her n stood in front of her looking at her while she looked away said ever so sweetly ..
Sorry ..but I couldn't see u crying for what happened down thr ..
Geet snapped her hand free of his grip n threw her clutch on the floor in anger ..
U don't get it do u maan ...mien nahi ro rahi unki waja se ..its ..(n new tear trail made way out of her eyes while she stood thr likea defeated person alone on the battle field) ..
Maan walked upto her n cupped her face n wiped her tears with the back of his thumbs looking in her teary almond eyes ..
Tu phir kya baat hai geet ...plss btao mujhe ...
Its not me ...yeh mien nahi hoon maan ...that scared vulnerable piece of shit ..mien aisi nahi thi maan ..itni kamzoor nahi thi ...mere dad ne mujhe values nahi diye maan ... my brother didn't brought me up like a weak scared girl ...(geet looked down trying to get a grip on her self but today she realized how deep Nikhil has bruised her) ..mien apne aap ko kho chuki hoon maan ...(she stepped away from him and stood in front of the mirror).. yeh larki ...mien nahi pehchaanti isko ...kaise itni kamzoor hugayi mien nahi jaanti ...usne mera dil nahi ..mujhe tor diya maan ...sab kuch legaya mera woh ..sab ..
Kuch nahi legaya wohh geet ..kuch nahi ..
Geet turned towards him with a confused stare while maan came to stand infront of him with a determination in his voice n love in his eyes that held her captive in her spot ..
Meri nazar se dekho ..mien aaj bhi in ankhoon mien wohh masoomiyat dekh sakta hoon ...aaj bhi tumhare andar ka wohh bachpan mehsoos kar sakta hoon ...jab tum kisi ke home garden se fruits chura kar khati ho tu tumhari ankhoon mien who shararat dekh sakta hoon ..jab tum kisi oldage home mien khantoon guzaar kar khush hujati ho tu tumhare dil khubsoorti ko dekh sakta hoon ...geet meri nazar dekho tu aaj bhi tumhari rooh mien woh pakizgi dekh sakta hoon ...tumhare dil mien chupe uss pyaar ko mehsooz kar sakta hoon jis ne mujhe tum se pyaar karne par majboor kar diya ...
Wohh tum kuch nahi cheen paya hai geet ..na tumhari sachai ..na tumhari pakizgi ..na tumhari masoomiyat na tumhara bhoolapan ...na hi tumhara pyaar ...kuch bhi nahi ...
maan held her face with his right palm n her hand with his other n stepped closer to her while she stood thr looking at him wondering why he loves her so much ...what has she ever done to deserve this angel ..y he is making her see things about herself which her own husband never bothered about ...what is it about him that she can't seem to be able to stop herself from getting drown towards him ... but everything n every thought flew out of her mind feeling his hot palm on her cold skin ...almost making her shiver ...maan placed his lips on her eyes drinking her tears one after the other while she closed her eyes surrendering to his touch but snapped open them hearing the next set of words from him ...
I love u geet ...đł
Geet gasped n tried to step back but he held her with a firm grip on her waist ..geet trembled in his hold ..while tears made thr way out of eyes ...any other girl in her place would have been the happiest girl in the world to have heard this from him but geet knew she doesn't deserve it ...she will never be able to love him the way he should be ...she has so much baggage on her ...she can't do this to him ..she shouldn't have let this go on between them ...its all her fault ..!! with a forceful jerk she shove him away n stood back with tears flowing n heart beat paced high ...
Don't maan ...jaane do mujhe ..
Geet just listen to me ...mujhe kuch kehna hai tum se ...please ..ek baar meri baat sunlo ...
Mujhe kuch nahi sunna maan ..yeh sab meri galti hai ...apni khushi ke liye mien itni khudgarz hugayi k ..(sob) ..i am sorry maan ...but mien yeh nahi kar sakti ...I don't deserve u ...I ..i am married (it choked her to even say it out loud even when she knows that he knows it ...still) tainted ...good for nothing ...mien tumhain ..mien tumhain kabhi khushi nahi de paongi maan ...u deserve a lot better ...mien tu ...(sob) ..mien tu apne aap kho chuki hoon ..tumhain kya pyaar dungi ...
Geet don't say all this ...mujhe sab pata hai ..but tum ...tum kuch nahi jaanti ..ek baar mujhe bolne ka mauqa tu do ...(maan knew it would be difficult to tell her ..to make her understand but he never thought geet thinks so low of her own self)..
Nahi maan ...please don't make this any more difficult for both of us ...tum ...tum buhat ache hu maan ..n u deserve a lot better ..koi aisa jis pr koi daag na hu ...jis pr pehle se kisi ki chaap na hu ...
That was all it took for maan to loose his rationality ..how could she even think like that ..n in a second she was in his embrace while he was assaulting her lips mercilessly ...his right hand on her neck while the other holding her waist held her immobile making her feel who actually possess her body n soul ...geet gasp with the passion he was holding her with ..the hold on her waist only increased making her glued to him ..while his tongue entry in her mouth ...tasting every corner making her melt in his love and passion ...maan was so furious with her words ...he wanted to make her believe how shallow her words were ...everything she said wasn't true ...he didn't knew what possible words could he use to make her believe of his love ...he wasn't ever so good at using words but he could make her feel it ... that they are far beyond all these worldly boundaries n standards of pure n impure for him she was the epitome of love n purity ..never in his life he met a girl so innocent n true at heart...his words may fail him but his passion for this angelic woman won't n today he will mark her as his .. tell her that he own her soul ..that neither she is tainted nor that man holds any mark on her heart or soul ...its him her body craves for ...it him her heart beat for now ...!!
Geet never knew a simple kiss could hold so much depth ..expressing every inner turmoil ...that it could make someone feel the others' heart ..maan passion overwhelmed her to the point of loosing her every inhibition n feel his anguish at first in form of his aggression n with her submission his love with the way he kissed her so tenderly like she was something to worship ...tears flew from the corner of her eyes while she responded to him with equal fevor ..accepting his love ...his passion ...all the way realizing that her own heart has started beating in sync with this beautiful man ...that its no longer to be away from her horidous marriage life that she is here but coz she has fallen for her guardian angel ...n all of a sudden everything seemed to fall into correct place her heart at peace ...being in his embrace feeling someone finally love her for no reason ..not to showoff to his friend ..not coz she is beautiful but he loves her for what she is ...
The kiss was just the beginning of a passionate night that made two soul mates finally unite ...a night when he marked her soul with his love n she realized the depth of her own passion for this angel ...when finally she melted in thr togetheress breaking from all the insecurities and relations that always held her back ...a night of sheer passion ..love ...n... desire of two souls for one another ...
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It was almost evening when swati broke in his room n blasted him seeing the devdas avatar he is in ..
Just what the hell do u think u r doing maan ...sitting here n sulking isn't going to do any good neither for us nor for geet ...whats done is done ..now get ur damn ass out of this room n do something damit ...
I didn't wanted to do this to her swati ...not without confessing it ...trust me mien ...mien usko sab sach batane wala tha but ..sab galat hugaya swati ...mene sab khatam kar diya ...how m I ever going to explain all this to her ...
Swati sighed ...it pained her too ..to see her best friend like this ..he has been a stone wall supporting her all through her life ..nothing could ever hurt him enough after the death of his parents 7 years back in an accident ...he never was good at expressing himself ...love wasn't suppose to be for him ...but here he fell for the one girl he wasn't suppose to ...swati bit back her emotions n sighed kneeling to the ground where he sat n kept a hand on his folded knee ..
Maan I know u ..n I know u love her ..mien jaanti hu tum usko dhoka nahi dena chahte thay ...but u need to understand ke life mien rewind ka button nahi huta buddy ...sitting here won't do any good ...kya yeh better nahi huga ke tum Nikhil ko expose kar ke geet ko uss prison se bahar nikalo ...that should be ur priority ...get up ..think something ...we still have an hour for Nikhil n mishra ..the drug racket owner's meeting ...u can still get things on track partner ...aur jahan tak geet ki baat hai ...I m a girl maan ..aur mene dekha hai geet ko ..she love u hell a lot more than u think ... I m sure u'll be able to win her over .. wohh samajh jayegi maan ..aur nahi samjhi tu mien hoon na ...we'll figure this out maan ...
U ..u're right ...mien yahan beth kr kuch nhi kar sakta ... Mujhe ...mujhe se baat karni hugi ...
Maan r u nuts ...//
No swati ..geet ke siwai koi aur arora mansion ke andar se humien Nikhil ke against proof nahi de sakta tum jaanti ho ..its been 3 months rohan wahan hai as junior chef ...but kuch nahi kar paya hai woh other then informing us about his schedule n other stuff not a single solid proof ...geet is our first n last hope ..
But maan geet abb ...//
I'll tell her everything n ill try to convince her to help us ...aur agar ...agar wohh nahi paani tu ill go in arora mansion to get the proof by myself ..
U won't dare to maan ...
Swati I have to ..this has been my final plan ever since ...I always had this in my mind ..if geet didn't did it for us this was what I was always going to do at the end ..n u know it's the end ..
Agar yeh hi karna tha tou kya zarora thi itna sab drama karne ki maan ...we both know it's a death scheme ...just coz u think u have lost ur love doesn't mean u plan on getting murdered by those arora guards ..u get it ..wahan itne guards hain u r never going to get passed through the main hall even .. n u know this maan ...
Pehle rohan ko call karna huga ...ill have to tell him to get his mobile to geet so I can talk with her ...
Swati waited for rohan to pick up the call while maan prayed to her babaji to make this work ...he never feared a confrontation so much in his life ...
Hi rohan get to a safer place ..maan wants to talk with u ...its urgent ...no I m not disconnecting the call ..ill wait ...
While rohan moved out of everyone's eyes ..swati looked at maan who was now looking away at the blue white sky facing his back to her ..while she spoke ..
If it fails ..i m going to go with u ...
Hello sir ..(swati handed over the phone to maan)
Rohan I need u get ur mobile to geet ..i need to tell her everything ...its only 50 minutes from now mishra is gonna be in arora mansion for the deal ...
Sir ji r u trying u say ke aap geet madam ko humare mission ke bare mien sab kuch bata denge ...
Han ...
Rohan panicked ..n tht was evident from his voice ..
Maan sir please aap aise kaise kar sakte hain ..unko pata chalega k aap unko humare mission ke liye use kar rahe thay tou wohh humari help kyun karengi ..please sir ji soch lijeye ..
Rohan I can't do the explanation now ...do as u r told ..
Sir ji dekhiye mien jaanta hoon mien aap se buhat junior hoon iss Anti-narcotics department mien but Nikhil arora ke khilaaf proof nikaalne ka ek hi raasta hai unki wife geet arora agar unko bata diya ke aap unko kis liye pata rahe thay tou kabhi humara saath nahi dengi ..iss se better tou aap unn se pehle proof nikalwalo aur phir chahe unko bata dena ...k yeh sab kuch mission ka part tha ...
Rohan will u please just shut ur damn mouth n do as u r asked to ...
The roaring voice of ACP Maan Khurana was enough to get him shaking n he scumbed to his orders ..
Gi ..gi sir ji ...abhi karta hoon ...geet madam ke room ki window kitchen wale backyard mien open huti hai ...ziada problem nahi hugi abb tou andhera hugaya yahan backyard mien ...oh shit ..
Kya hua ..rohan bolo kya hua ..
Sir ...sir ..sir ji wohh mishra ...mishra the don aagaya yahan ...wohh time se pehle hi aagaya ..đ¤˘
Damn ...rohan get ur damn ass moving fast n do the work now ..
Theek ..theek hai sir ji ..abhi ..abhi karta hoon ..
But he froze as he turned around n the ground slipped beneath his feet ..
Ma ..ma .madam gi ..đ¤˘
Geet had dried tear trail on her cheek but she stood terrifyingly cold while glaring at him...
Tu kadam isli naam kya hai tumhara ...
Yeh ..yeh ..yehh kya bol rahi hu aap madam ji ...mien tu ...mien tu kadam surmawala hi hoon ..woh ...who ..wohh tu gaw (village) se call aaya tha ..
Geet had lost her temprement the minute she heard his convo ...n she was just about a minute away from killing his liar in front of her ...when she spoke in a clipped tone ..
Dekho mujh se aur jhot bolne ki himmat bhi mat karna ...seedha seedha sab kuch sach btao mujhe kyun ke mien tumhari poori baat sun chuki hoon ...
Madam gi aap yeh kya bol rahi hu mujh tu kuch samajh nahi aaraha ...
Jab mien chila chilla kar poore ghar ke guards aur Nikhil ko yahan bola lungi tu tumhain sab samajh ayega beta iss liye behtar hai ke mere saamne mou khol du ...maan ka kya mission ...kyun wohh mujh se mila ..nikhil ke khilaf kis baat ka proof chahiye usko ...aur ...(a tear slipped from her eyes while she kept her voice stern) .. aur mien hi kyun ...??
BOLO ..warna mien abhi sab ko ...//
Nahi nahi nahi madam pls nahi ...wohh log tu zinda nahi chorenge mujhe ...pls kisi ko mat bolayi ..mien sab batata hoon aapko ..waise bhi maan sir bhi aapko yeh hi batane ke liye phone par baat karna chahte hain ..
Mujhe tum se sunna hai ke sach kya hai ..jaldi bolo waqt nahi hai humare paas ..
Wohh ..wohh madam gi ...aapke pati ..wohh India ke sab se bare drug dealer ke business ko support karte hain ..unki hi support se uska saara maal humare desh mien land huta hai ...aur aaj ki deal ki khabar mien 3 mahine pehle mili thi jis ke baad mujhe yahan as secret angent bheja gaya ...but Nikhil arora apna saara kaam itni secrecy se karta hai ke mujhe kuch haath nahi aaya ...phir hum sab plan banaya ke maan sir aapko phasayenge ...aur aapko convince karenge ke aap ...ke aap apne pati ke khilaaf humare liye proof layen ...kyun k Nikhil arora ke personal files aur drawers mien aap ke ilawa kisi ko itni asani se excess nahi milta...
Tou itne deno se jo kuch hua ...sab ...sab mission ka part tha ..đ
Aaj wohh drug dealer aapke ghar mien hai ...iss year ki sab se baari deal karne ..agar aaj humien aapke pati aur mishra ke against ek bhi solid proof milta hai tou hum unhain arrest kar sakte hain ..nikhil arora ka poora political career khatam hujayega ..he.will.be.finished.
Bas yeh hi sab kuch aapko batane aur apko humara kaam karne ke liye convince karne ko maan sir aap se baat karna chahte hain ...
Tears flew from her eyes unknown to her ...a pain so unbearable surged in her heart she never knew she would experience ...it was all for a mission ..!! đ
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DIGVIPAUL n others who wants to beat the shit out of nikhil ...relax girls maan hai na ...đ
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By The Way ...what is ur opinion about having a season 2 of this OS ...Meant To Be ...đł
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