MG OS : BreakFree *(Pt 7 & Last Prt @Pg24) *|| Reply to Note @ pg - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
Seems like my comments mirrored my desperation to kill that loser husband of Geet... Okay i got it, that Maan is there.. But, i wa
nt to slap Maan too...
I believe, no amount of repenting can lessen the impact of one's deeds... So no matter how much sorry Maan is, it wouldn't effect me coz it couldn't reduce the torment an innocent soul has to go through due to it.. sorry, if someone doesn't likes my thinking... Although The Gyani baba Pipal tree from the Pond side is giving me anger management classes.. Hope it shows its effects soon..
Felt bad for Geet.. No emotions for Maan.. Hate for that LOSER hubby..
And thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update maan was falling for geet he was very scared and worried for her took out his frustartions on his friend he was very scared something happened to her he always had falling feelings for geet he wondered why that idiot cheated on the angekl he had if he did he would never look at anyone maan did try to flirt with her but she put him staright tah she was married and unavailable but something abt maan was pulling her towards him her loyalty impressed him but when he decided to give her reality check abt her husband seeing her shattered broke him apart
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional part...
season 2 idea was good...
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lovely update maaneet coming close which was not giod for maans mission maan realsied it but ignored it he knew he was falling for her but denied for his mission was imp he is regretting coz of him geet got beaten he is frustrtated wants to take her away from that cage he is feeling guilty for using her for his mission he didnt know she will be an innocent angel
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update geet always found maan diff from others he would talk iwth her llisten and respect her they were like old friends she was a free biord with maan could do anything eat anything enjoy herself like a normal girl but tehn her dream shattered when she came to know maan is an acp she felt betrayed as maan never told her she blamed nikhil as he never spend time with her so she has to go out for friends she called him but he got to know again he is cheating on her so she decided to give her life another chance with maan they ended up kissing geet was crying thinking of her life maan made her understand that she can get rid of her life if she isnt happy to let go and move on
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lovely update ye nikhil to jst hate him he married geet coz he lusted her and then why she is with him he is wondering what maan gave her but he can never understand she is trapped in his cage she was cursing herself for marrying him trying to find way to escape maan is lodst in his thoughts how geet came to meet him he forgot his mission only want make her happy maan has no choice but to tell her abt his mission his real intention he has to braek her heart again
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lovely update maan was abt to tell her abt his mission when he saw a couple of guys abusing geet he beat them and saved geet took her away from here to his room geet was feeling cheap abt herself she was feeling weak she couldnt stand up for herself maan thought she was crying coz she blamed herself but she was angry at herself for becoming so weak maan confessed but geet cant love him back like he wants she said words that made him loose himself and make her his they became one but he still didnt tell her swati told her to talk to geet but before maan coud tell her she heard their convo and now is mad for she was betrayed again
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Posted: 10 years ago
typing the last few scenes ..
hoping to update it tonight or tomorrow evening for sure after coming back from work

wish me luck

luv ya
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Posted: 10 years ago
all the best! will b waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi everyone, how r u all ..??
sorry got bit held up couldn't type the last part ..n now that i have its bit too long so i ve split it into two

thank u all for ur lovely comments n likes ...😃n all those who have been part of this journey really i enjoyed alot ..😃for a change more than typing the story ur comments made me happy ..
so thank u all so much 🤗

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fingers crossed i am really a bit nervous this time ...ts the concluding part ..hope u all like it ..
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enjoy reading n do leave ur reviews for the last time please please please

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