The unknown son (An Arjuna-Iravan FF) Part 8B-Page 23

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Yajnaseni

@Yajnaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Patrarekha
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Hope u are taking your time to write a comment which matches the length of the story.😉

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Semanti Chakraborty

@DharmaPriyaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Forgive me, Tia, as I never read this FF before. But today I finished the whole FF at one go & I'm speechless 👏 So sweet FF ❤️ loved every bit of it! Very very beautiful portrayal of Iravan's relation with Pandava family 👍🏼 as a diehard Pandava fan I always enjoy any happy family moment of them, which you portrayed so nicely ❤️ thank you very much for this awesome FF 🤗 loved Ulupi's heart of mother 😊 I always used to miss her & Iravan as they are very less discussed, but your FF fulfilled that void for me 😃 I always feel a special affection to all Pandava children so your Iravan is very dear to me
Btw- when will you update your Pritha FF? waiting eagerly for that 😊

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Yajnaseni

@Yajnaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: Urmila11
Forgive me, Tia, as I never read this FF before. But today I finished the whole FF at one go & I'm speechless 👏 So sweet FF ❤️ loved every bit of it! Very very beautiful portrayal of Iravan's relation with Pandava family 👍🏼 as a diehard Pandava fan I always enjoy any happy family moment of them, which you portrayed so nicely ❤️ thank you very much for this awesome FF 🤗 loved Ulupi's heart of mother 😊 I always used to miss her & Iravan as they are very less discussed, but your FF fulfilled that void for me 😃 I always feel a special affection to all Pandava children so your Iravan is very dear to me
Btw- when will you update your Pritha FF? waiting eagerly for that 😊

Thanks for reading the FF Urmila. I don't have any specific date in my mind for future updates.

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Wow...What an Ending!!!.Very Touching!!..U had made a Perfect ending to this beautiful story..But My tears rolled down while reading the Uloopi's part...So sad of her..😭😭This is what we mention as MOTHER'S LOVE..I have no words to praise ur writing skills...So,HATS OFF to U for giving us,this wonderful story👏👏

Thanks for the pm..

Hope U will write another story for Us..😊

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Soumya

@vaishali09

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Hey Tia,

Sorry for the late reply.

So, the beautiful story ends.

I felt for the boy and his mother.

Wish you could show Arjun's feelings too.

Write more stories if time permits and ur studies are not hampered.

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Yajnaseni

@Yajnaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: vaishali09
Hey Tia,
Sorry for the late reply.

So, the beautiful story ends.

I felt for the boy and his mother.

Wish you could show Arjun's feelings too.

Write more stories if time permits and ur studies are not hampered.

Thank you for following the story to the very end.

I am writing other stories in the forum as well, just not getting enough time and patience to write any updates.

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Yajnaseni

@Yajnaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: shiningstar77
Wow...What an Ending!!!.Very Touching!!..U had made a Perfect ending to this beautiful story..But My tears rolled down while reading the Uloopi's part...So sad of her..😭😭This is what we mention as MOTHER'S LOVE..I have no words to praise ur writing skills...So,HATS OFF to U for giving us,this wonderful story👏👏
Thanks for the pm..

Hope U will write another story for Us..😊

Surely I will write other stories. I just love writing, and even more I like reading your comments. Thanks for following the story until the end.

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Brishti Sarkar

@CaptainSpark

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Finally read the full FF! Its just beautifully done :) The last few lines.. were really touching.

And your FF, gave me a character sketch of Iravan. very little is known about him, and thus, your story helped me know him better! A memorable story :)

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Yajnaseni

@Yajnaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar
Finally read the full FF! Its just beautifully done :) The last few lines.. were really touching.
And your FF, gave me a character sketch of Iravan. very little is known about him, and thus, your story helped me know him better! A memorable story :)

I really do hope that I have done justice to the character of Iravan. I myself know so little about him. Thanks for reading Brish!

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Tia I am extremely sorry dear.I had read both the updates.And I thought I commented but only yesterday I realised that I didnt.I am really sorry for being so late.

The first part carries a feel of anxiousness.I mean the reader can sense that some danger is ahead.I am very happy to say that you have grown beautifully as a writer.Not that you were not one before.But you excels yourself.You expresses complex and deep emotions of a mother in such less and beautiful words.Loved it dear.

And the ending was so emotional yet beautiful.I loved the way you described the battles.Short yet detailed.And Uruvi's reaction was brilliantly portrayed.The way you described it was sombre and reflected the purest feeling called love.And Arjun's reaction brought tears into my eyes.I really felt sad for the mother and the son

And thankyou so much dear for giving me one of the best stories I read here.Iravan was a character I was least bothered about.It was only through your story that I started loving him.And with this beautiful story Iravan and you both earned a space in my heart.Love you dear.Please update the other stories too.Once again sorry for being too late