MaNan Drabble: Tough Summers {Epilogue - Pg43} - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter Fourteen.



His wet lips glided across hers - tingling her senses as it drew down her nape. Shifting her curls to the other side on the other shoulder, his fingers caressed her back. She gasped as his fingers travelled the path down her waist. She heaved as his fingers went through the sides of her curve.
His grip tightened, while she felt a churning sensation. He sensuously called out her name, "Nandini.." but she wasn't even able to form a word even.
"I won't do anything you allow me to." And with that he stepped back, leaving her dumbfounded. He wasn't ready to take any step that may prove to be harmful for him, for her - for them - like it did earlier. He was determined to be cautious this time - think of her comfort before his desires and that was imprinted in his mind.
His eyes never leaving her as he moved back - her form still as while she was unable to think. He had stepped back only for her comfort, the thought itself made her heart swell. The heat of his body minimized as he distanced himself making her feel uneasy. She turned to look back at him, into his eyes and a different emotion crept within her.
She flung into his arms, wrapping hers around him - mingling with the wetness she crashed upon him not wanting to leave him. Initially he was taken aback with her sudden action but eventually he snaked his arms around her waist. She ached to feel him - rightly so close. It amused her the way their bodies perfectly fitted against each other while he was nothing less than a hulk and hers was like a dwarf as compared to his. Pulling apart, just to look into his dark intensive eyes, feeling the urge to drown into them forever, made a lump of emotion form into her throat. She had to make things right in place.
"Manik, I-" She initiated when the sudden ringing of his phone disturbed her though he didn't bother, for him her voice was more intriguing to hear than the constant ringing of his phone. "Manik, your phone-" She started but he ignored it with a gentle nod.


"Might be something important." she stressed.
He picked up the phone greeting disinterestedly to the person on the other side. And as he heard the voice from the other end, he flared. Puzzled with his behavior, she caressed his forehead trying to ease off his anger. Her mere attempts made his lips curve into a smile. But that didn't last for long, as he argued, "NO! I won't come back. I on a leave." He moved a little away, leaving her. Sulking at the words that just left his lips, her face fell - He had to go back. And she knew he would, some day or the other.
As he smacked the phone onto the floor, she continued, "You should-" he looked at her confusingly as she spoke with her teary eyes, "You should go back. Work comes first."
His eyes shut in order to calm his senses a little and approached her, "I have my vacations, I took a long leave. And I want it last longer than possible."
A depth of emotion enveloped into his words. Gathering the strength and courage she hugged him, "You can come back. You have to."
He sighed, "I will."
"When are you leaving?" sadness reflected in those words. "Tonight." He spoke with a heavy heart and she chose to stay there in his arms for some time.
"You were saying something." he tried to lighten up her mood. She slyly nodded in negation and he "Have I earned it?"
"No! Not at all," pretending to be highly casual as his brows shot up in an instant, "-not after that stunt that you pulled up a couple of minutes back, outside."
"Don't look at me like that. You haven't earned it, yet. But you will have to come back and I will see what is to be done." She conditioned the clause a bit more.
"Fine!" He agreed to her.





Thoughts :)

Kill me if you all want to.😳


Edited by -shenz- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
u just don't letme unres

now I don't want him to go...stop him someone.

But I'll be fine I supposecoz I know he'll come back to earn it, he has to.

Shenz you right really well...love u loads
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Posted: 10 years ago
why didn't you pm me :( ?

btw loved these 2 chapters. sensual and raw.uff!

he is leaving? why :/ no! damn :/
Edited by filter.coffee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unres
Shenz the summers are getting tougher, i don't want Manik to go but i won't kill you either 'cause then we'll not know the rest of the story😉
Manik has to come back and he will.
Great updates Shenz😊
Edited by -Chandramukhi.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely.. ... Update soon pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
I would be scare those girls Away or would drap him in a towel
Only meant for my eyes 😆

He will come back soon? He has too!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for the next update!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well, of course he has to earn it... and I can't wait to see how the distance affects this relationship... and the affection between them.. as always, a beautiful update..

The end ind of reminds me of this...

Sooo... great job!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh no why's hs leaving 😔
But awesome updates again :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0

u just don't letme unres

now I don't want him to go...stop him someone.

But I'll be fine I supposecoz I know he'll come back to earn it, he has to.

Shenz you right really well...love u loads


You don't blame me for updating before you unreserve, do you?

I won't stop him. Don't even think I will plan to or will I?

He will come back? Surely? Earning it? Let's keep the mystery as it is.

Thank you so much. But I know there's still a lot to improve with my writing. But then I am not to become a professional writer. ;P

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