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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: filter.coffee
why didn't you pm me :( ?

btw loved these 2 chapters. sensual and raw.uff!

he is leaving? why :/ no! damn :/

I think I skipped you. Sorry my fault. Won't happen next time.

Thanks. I am glad you could like it, Rez.

He is leaving? Let's check. 😛

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: -Chandramukhi..
Res
Unres
Shenz the summers are getting tougher, i don't want Manik to go but i won't kill you either 'cause then we'll not know the rest of the story😉
Manik has to come back and he will.
Great updates Shenz😊

Thank You so much ^_^

And I know. That's what Tough Summers were meant to be. 😆 Tougher than you would have thought it to be. Anyways, the climate isn't helping either.

Oh! You can get the remaining parts of the story but, of course, a different version. Though there isn't much of a contrast. So you won't need me to know this story.😆

Will he be back, keep guessing. We will see that by the end of this story! ;P

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: manya_189
These were Bliss ❤️

Originally posted by: Adithinath
Lovely.. ... Update soon pls

Originally posted by: jomart
Waiting for the next update!!

Thank you guys ^__^

Updating in a few minutes.

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: jai18
Oh no why's hs leaving 😔
But awesome updates again :)

Because as Nandini said, I quote, "Work comes first!"

Thank You again! :))

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filter.coffee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: -shenz-

I think I skipped you. Sorry my fault. Won't happen next time.

Thanks. I am glad you could like it, Rez.

He is leaving? Let's check.😛

what yaar just one time i skipped commenting cause i was feeling low you forgot to pm me :( not fair dude

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: chair1992
I would be scare those girls Away or would drap him in a towel
Only meant for my eyes 😆

He will come back soon? He has too!!!

Oh! I would take that suggestion and use it somewhere, if possible. Drape him into a towel and her hands unintentionally brushing over him. 😆

You are questioning me or reassuring yourself? Well we may see ! ;P

Thanks by the way 😳

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

^Rez : I am sorry. I won't repeat my mistake. The thing is I PMed in a haste. Sorry! I know it's my fault and I cannot justify it. Sorry!

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: RomComFan
Well, of course he has to earn it... and I can't wait to see how the distance affects this relationship... and the affection between them.. as always, a beautiful update..

The end ind of reminds me of this...

Sooo... great job!😉

The use of your GIFs make me grin like anything 😃 The way her eyes shift, I don't want to gush about it. Let's concentrate :P

Thanks not just for the review or showering this story with love but also making me grin. Thanks a lot.

Oh! And we will see if he can earn it or not.

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Okay. I know I should't be making this my habit but I am sorry with the festive season already geared up and Eid is like nearing up.. it's already here, a few days more.. so I have a lot of guests and updates just don't happen from phone when my chapters are on the desktop. ;P Lame I know but can't help. Kill the guests or me. I would prefer the latter. :D Okay! Anyway. Warning:

Beware. Yes. Exactly that. Though this fandom and forum both are mature enough to handle contents which I hereby put on display but then I can't help learning the fact that there are adolescents on this forum as well, who need to be kept away from a few stuffs. This chapter be one of them. Though it's not much detailed but then this is my style.

I think I have given a lot of stuff to read before you actually reach the chapter ;P

But then that's me, too much in the form of A/N and blabber a lot. I had held a lot because this forum had been new to me. And let me state the fact that I am still holding back a bit. :D

Anyways, Go read.

Chapter Fifteen.

He turned to the delicate touch on his shoulder. He looked around in the dark as His eyes welcoming the serene beauty. Burning his eyes, drinking in the image as much as he could. He knew he wasn't getting enough of her.. ever. Her petite form stood still in front of his eyes. A smile plasted on her face as his predatory eyes went scrolling down at her. Clad in a thin fabric, she looked more ravishing than ever. The strapless blouse covered her rightly at her bosom. The waistband of Her multi layered skirt rested lower than her low waist. Nothing left to his virtual imagination. Focusing back at her face that glittered in the dark atmosphere dimly lit as the moon rested peacefully in the sky. Dragging her feet forward she stepped a little close. Close enough to wrap her arms around his neck. Within no time he snaked his arms around her waist. They shuddered. Not just because of the breeze but more due to the other's presence, so close, so intimate.

Her lips parted, her breathing got quick and heavy, and her fingers clutched his shirt as his arms were hardly pressed against her bare back. Her hot breath hit his flesh, her heart raced as his fingers traced the path of her spine. Left with no strength, lifting her heels off the ground she inched and he leaned in to her frame; Her forehead rested against his. The shivering plush lips of hers created havoc in his mind. He already had a tough time having her dressed like this. And now the proximity and her unknown actions.

Engrossed in his world of thoughts he didn't notice that she had already stripped his shirt off him. Widening his eyes at her wild actions, he looked at her for an explanation or at least some words in her melodious voice.

Making him astounded as her cold palms touched his bare frame, worshiping him. He growled as he desired for more. Her fingers traced down at his navel, lower. He was aroused and she made every passing second for him harder.

Jolt. He woke up. He was amazingly dreaming of her, again! He looked at his watch. 4 in the morning and he was dreaming. Her! She had no clue what she had done to him unknowingly. The dream had him aroused, what if that actually happened. He would pass out probably. But he was pleasured; at least he had her in his life, almost.

Next Chapter

Okay! This wasn't that extreme, was it?

State your opinion about the chapter and your suggestion, if any. And let me know.

Thoughts, please :))

Edited by -shenz- - 11 years ago

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filter.coffee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: -shenz-
^Rez : I am sorry. I won't repeat my mistake. The thing is I PMed in a haste. Sorry! I know it's my fault and I cannot justify it. Sorry!

arre i was joking.chill 😛

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