PREMAR OS: Prem Birthday [Completed (Pt 3,4 on Pg3)]

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Hi everyone its a new Os just 3 to 4 parts i will complete it today itself. Thought to post it. Please provide your valuable feedback

Part 1,2 --- Pg1
Part 3 --- Pg3
Part 4(a),4(b) --- Pg3
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PART 1:

Office:

Siddanth: Prem so July 12th we will keep the meeting what do you say?

Prem: Ok mere Bhai no problem

Siddanth: Arey no we will postpone it to some other day

Prem: Why?

Siddanth: Have you forgot it's your birthday

Prem: Ya I forgot after almost 3 years I will be celebrating it with Simar. Hope she remembers my birthday😃

Siddanth: Hey obviously she will remember

Prem: I don't think so if she remembers she might be planning something but no signs of it only

Siddanth: Ok after going home you try to find it from Simar I will ask Roli if there are any preparations going on

Prem: Ok

Premar Room:

Prem (St): Sunday it's my birthday but don't know whether she remembers or not. Simar comes to room

Prem: Simar do you remember what's on Sunday?

Simar: Ha Prem ji I remember how can I forget it

Prem feels happy 😊but Simar continues

Simar: You promised Anjali and Sanju to take them to Kid's Zone

Prem smiles forcefully and says ya I remember😭. Simar turns and Smiles😃

Prem (St): Almost after 3 yrs. we are together for my birthday but she didn't remember her husband birthday only great.😭

Simar: Prem ji what are you thinking?

Prem: Other than this you didn't remember anything

Simar turns to other side by smiling😊 and will be acting as if arranging bed properly

Simar: Prem ji still what is there to remember you only say

Prem: Nothing I am going down

Simar by falling on bed laughs😃

Simar (St): So cute. Prem ji how can I forget your birthday almost after 3 yrs I am with you I will make sure this birthday remains very special for you and for both of US

Prem comes down

Mataji: Prem where is Simar?

Prem: She is in room

Siddanth: Mataji Sunday we should have a party

Mataji: Yes since its Prem birthday we will celebrate it very nicely

Anjali and Sanju shouts yes Papa birthday we will enjoy nicely

Prem (St): Simar itself didn't remember. What's the use to celebrate my birthday?

Roli: Jiju what r u thinking?

Prem: Nothing Roli

Mausiji: So Sunday birthday party. We need to start preparations

Prem: No Mataji I don't want to celebrate. So please don't arrange anything

Sujatha: Why what happened Prem?

Prem: Nothing maa

Sujatha: If nothing then why are you dull and why you don't want to celebrate?

Mataji: Ha prem tell why you don't want to celebrate

Everyone asks him

Prem: Arey everyone including Anjali & Sanju remembers my birthday but Simar doesn't. So what's the use of celebrating?

Roli: No chance jiju didi will never ever forget

Prem: I also thought the same but she didn't even remember otherwise she might be planning something or the other but no planning anything.

Mausiji: Ha may be due to work she might have forgotten. What's there we will remind

Prem: No Mausiji none will remind her. If she remembers herself we will celebrate otherwise no. If anyone reminds her then I will not talk with any of you.

Roli, Anjali, Sanju you three also should not remind it's a promise from everyone remember.

Everyone reluctantly says Ok

Simar might have listened everything and smiles.😊 She comes down

Everyone acts normal

Mataji: Where were you Simar?

Simar: I went to clean room Mataji so it became late

Mataji: Ok

Mausiji: Simar what's on Sunday?

Prem looks angrily at Mausiji

Simar: Composes herself and says ya Mausiji I remember we should take Anjali & Sanju to Kid's zone

Everyone smiles half heartedly

Mausiji: Other than that you didn't remember anything

Simar: Ya I remembered

Everyone feels happy 😃whereas simar continues

Simar: Sunday my friends daughter naming ceremony is there she asked me to come but I can't go so I will call her and say I can't come. Thank you Mausiji I might have forgot but you reminded

Mausiji: No problem happy that you remembered go and call her

Simar goes to call her friend and everyone feels dejected

Prem: Why did you ask Mausiji?

Siddanth: Arey Bhai Mausiji is finding out whether Simar is acting or really forgot?

Prem: So what is your conclusion?

Jhanvi: Bhabi really didn't remember

Prem: I also said the same thing. So you people won't try anything. Leave it

Mataji: How could Simar forget Prem birthday. Atleast by tomorrow she remembers

Sujatha: Hope so. Prem don't be depressed she will remember by tomorrow

Prem: I don't have any hope you all leave it. Anyway it's time let's go to sleep. Good night everyone by saying Prem leaves and then everyone else disperse to their rooms

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago
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PART 2:

MORNING:

PREMAR ROOM:

Prem got up and found simar sleeping peacefully. Prem feels sad that Simar doesn't remember his birthday.😔

Prem (st): No problem may be by tomorrow you will remember by thinking so he gets up from bed and goes to fresh up

Simar who was awake smiles seeing Prem.😊

After having breakfast all men leave to office

Sujatha: Still Simar didn't remember Prem birthday

Roli: Maa I have a strong feeling didi remembers but she is acting

Mataji: If that is the case then I will be happy

In office Prem is not having interest to do any work. Siddanth notices it and thinks to do something

Afternoon both Prem & Siddanth come home for lunch

Prem goes to fresh up and Simar goes to kitchen

Siddanth: Roli we should do something so that Simar remembers Prem birthday. He is very sad and not even working in office

Roli: Ya we should do something

Jhanvi: But what can we do Bhai? Prem Bhaiyya said not to remind Bhabi

Roli: Atleast we can try indirectly by reminding tomorrow date to didi and tells something to Siddanth

Siddanth: Ok

During lunch Roli calls Siddanth

Siddanth: Receives the call and says hello ya we will have tomorrow. I will call you back

Roli: What happened Siddanth ji?

Siddanth: Nothing Roli we have a meeting so what's tomorrow date I need to confirm once again if it's possible tomorrow or not

Roli: Ya tomorrow is 12th July Siddanth ji. Any way no work so you can confirm. Right Didi?

Simar: Ya Siddanth ji you can confirm its 12th July and no work but keep it before evening because we need to go to kid's zone.

Everyone with defeated faces says OK

Whereas Simar is trying hard to control her smile.😊

After having lunch Simar goes upstairs where everyone is in hall

Prem: I said you people don't try anything its waste of time

Siddanth: We are not able to see your face dull mere Bhai so we tried. But it's waste

Prem: Yes leave it and pls don't try anything😔

Saying so Prem & Siddanth leave for office.

Evening:

A person comes and asks for Simar.

Roli: Who are you? Why do you want to meet Simar Didi?

Person: We wanted to ask Simar mam which kind of flowers we should use for decoration. We tried contacting through phone but it's not reachable

Roli: Which decoration?😲

Person: Birthday Party mam

Jhanvi, Roli, Pari and Uma shouts birthday party. By listening to it Simar comes down and understands they all came to know so without saying anything she goes towards the person and asks him to use orchids and roses also she says some more things regarding cake and decoration after that the person leaves

Roli: So didi you remember Jiju's birthday

Simar: Yes

Roli: I know you will remember but seriously what an acting. I too thought you forgot

Jhanvi: Haa Bhabi everyone thought you forgot and we are thinking what to do to remind Bhai birthday

Simar: I thought to surprise Prem ji so acted as if I didn't remember and I know you people were trying to remind so only I thought to continue acting infront of you as well but because of this person it got revealed. But be careful it should not be revealed to Prem ji

Jhanvi: Ok Bhabi

Mataji/Sujatha/Mausiji: Don't worry we also won't reveal to Prem

Simar turns towards them and smiles😊

Mausiji: Whatever it is you remember we are happy

Suddenly Siddanth enters and says don't worry I also won't say to Prem

Simar: So, now everyone knows we can shift the party to home itself and you people also don't wish to Prem ji till tomorrow afternoon.

Roli: Why?

Simar: Roli Prem ji was born @12:15PM so we will wish him at that time and cut the cake

Jhanvi: Wow Bhabi how romantic

Mataji: Simar no need to shift let it be in the hotel itself this time we will celebrate with little change what's there in it and remember as Simar said no one should wish Prem till tomorrow afternoon

Everyone shouts ok

Simar: Siddanth ji you itself should bring Prem ji to hotel tomorrow

Siddanth: Don't worry I will bring him by saying so he goes to fresh up

Finally somehow the day passes. Simar asks Anjali and Sanju also not to wish Prem. Everyone will be sleeping peacefully except one soul

It was his birthday within 30 minutes. From past 3 years the day use to be like hell and the wishes were like curse for him. But this year it was indeed different. His life has turned around. His loneliness is replaced by the giggles of his wife.

He looked at another side of bed and found his three girls sleeping peacefully cuddling with each other.

Prem: My life and love Simar is with me.❤️ But what to do she didn't even remember my birthday. Simar is "jeeta jaagta calendar" how can she forget my birthday I am not able to understand

He got up a little to have a closer look to check if she is really sleeping or pretending to sleep. He was lost in her beauty. He slowly moved closer and pecked her forehead and then pecked his daughters.

Prem: I know you don't remember my birthday but no problem you are with me that's enough for me. You are my life Simar and you love me❤️ that's the god's best gift for me

Saying so he pulled the duvet and went into sleep🥱. Simar who was pretty awake smiled at his words and said

Simar (st): Prem ji this will be most memorable birthday of yours I promise that. By saying so she too drifts into sleep🥱

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fantastic os...
good to see u in back to back
tnx
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LOVE_DIPISIM

fantastic os...
good to see u in back to back
tnx

Thank you dear... 😊
By seeing u peoples response only i am able to write it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic OS Asha. You are a great writer. It is simply superb. I think I already read it 3 times. Please post part3 and 4 as I am not able to wait simars suprise and prems feelings.
Thanks a lot for doing this to premar fans. Appreciate your time.
Once again it is superb.Please keep writing these fr us.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey friend ur os is nice
hey friends can u make a thread of Premar all ff's/os/ss so it will be easy to find
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: justchillalways

Fantastic OS Asha. You are a great writer. It is simply superb. I think I already read it 3 times. Please post part3 and 4 as I am not able to wait simars suprise and prems feelings.

Thanks a lot for doing this to premar fans. Appreciate your time.
Once again it is superb.Please keep writing these fr us.

Thank you dear...😊
Ya dear sure i will update today itself... may be one hour i will post part 3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kshamaDeeksha

hey friend ur os is nice

hey friends can u make a thread of Premar all ff's/os/ss so it will be easy to find

Thank u frnd...😊
Ya it ll be good if we make a thread...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os dear
Simar was very cute
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