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Posted: 10 years ago
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A child cried some distance away...
her heart could not resist but sway
her thoughts reaching out to behold...
a prayer answered from above untold...
She looked at the sight where he lay..
A innocent pure soul fighting God's play..
Who could leave him in such a sight...
She wondered her heartless mother's plight..
As She held him in her arms tight..
Nature did witness a divine sight..
Maa ,she heard him say perhaps..
as he went into that peaceful nap..
Cuddled in her arms lay a mother's delight...
Tears came as if celebrating this respite...
Oh my son... where were you all this while...
I finally found you giving meaning to my life...
Note- A small dedication to Radha and her Radheya..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you sweetheart . 😊
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Thank you dear😊
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Excellent poem Riti.👏. Expecting more and more from you. 👍🏼
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Beautiful poem Ritudi👏
I love the bond between Karna and radhamaa😳
Thank u for pm😊
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Thanks for such a delight only a poet can connect to a poet in one sight
This dedication of yours will always be in my heart all along
You are a great poet and it's a beautiful song
poetry is where you belong

Regards j



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KURT15

Excellent poem Riti.👏. Expecting more and more from you. 👍🏼


Thanks dear ..😊
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Originally posted by: Aarti_

Beautiful poem Ritudi👏

I love the bond between Karna and radhamaa😳
Thank u for pm😊


Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: angrani

Thanks for such a delight only a poet can connect to a poet in one sight

This dedication of yours will always be in my heart all along
You are a great poet and it's a beautiful song
poetry is where you belong

Regards j




Aww so sweet..you are nice poet too..why not write something..

Thanks for such lovely comment

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