MaNan Drabble: Tough Summers {Epilogue - Pg43} - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suv-kriyaansh

it was short but its mindblowing 😃

thnk god..finally manik realised his feelings 4 nandini ... but be4 he confess he should apologise properly...bt i want him 2 suffer more... 😕

i love ur stry... iam really hooked to it

thnx 4 the PM .. cntinue sooonnn




Thanks. Well, he may or may not suffer. But apology is probably on the way!

I am glad you like the story and more importantly you are hooked to this one. Just hope I am able to entertain you throughout this story.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-



Are you sure? Because I know the next one's kind of a cliff hanger as well.


Well i.definitely don't mind...i could read all the parts in one go.also if u send them to me😆 butt idk about the others...its ur call at the end of the day 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Thank you, Rez.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Well, if people can bear another one, I don't mind updating one today!</font>



i m more than sure that people can bear not just one but as many as you can give of this fic.its beautiful.and nicely written.

so go ahead and please post another one 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: missviolet


Well i.definitely don't mind...i could read all the parts in one go.also if u send them to me😆 butt idk about the others...its ur call at the end of the day 😳


Originally posted by: filter.coffee



i m more than sure that people can bear not just one but as many as you can give of this fic.its beautiful.and nicely written.

so go ahead and please post another one 😊


Fine, If you guys ask for more. I am updating the next as well. Give me a few minutes, then!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Thanks to you too. Though I did nothing much. 😆

I like to read good stuff and it is one of them so this thank u was for writing it and for updating it, coz many a times writers don't update their drabbles or ss at a speed that you do, though now i know that u already have it written😆
I will love to read the next part even if it's a cliff hanger😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Chandramukhi..

I like to read good stuff and it is one of them so this thank u was for writing it and for updating it, coz many a times writers don't update their drabbles or ss at a speed that you do, though now i know that u already have it written😆
I will love to read the next part even if it's a cliff hanger😃

Well thanks. I am glad you are happy with the speed. But I would also mention, this time it was because I have the entire story with me.. but back then while I was first posting this story, I still updated at the same speed. A chapter or two in a day! So the parts being already with me isn't the sole reason for the speedy updates. 😆
And dude, how do you know next one doesn't leave you with a cliffy? 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Updating on the next page!
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Posted: 10 years ago
No PMs for this one please! Get to this with the link on the previous update. ^_^



Chapter Eight.



She peeped out in the roof top more than the darkness, the silence that screamed into her ears, made her shudder out of fear. The gentle breeze blew her strands, with all the gentleness they possessed. An unknown shiver ran down her spine. But leaving all the odd thoughts aside, she reminded herself about the motive that made her rush to the roof top. Nimish!
She looked around in the dark, the corners darker. But she couldn't trace him. Irony! She had to go all the way to his all-time-favourite place. And that meant she had to cross his territory. Feeling the churning sensation that took place in her stomach, she closed her eyes. She had to overcome all that she feared. She had to live a life, after all. And with that she took tiny steps towards the boundary. With each step, the next got heavier.
He stayed steady with all his pulses under his control - normal, calm, from the outer appearance but equally rushed, hyper, nervous as sudden thoughts popped into his head. He had his eyes closed, pretending to sleep. While his attention drifted to the tinkling anklets, her delicate skin against the breeze, Her flowing skirt. He could feel every bit of hers.
She looked across the boundary to find him lay on the mattress with innocence covered all over his face. Innocent? She for once thought as though she has lost her mind. Out of all the people, thinking of Manik as Innocent was a big time mistake.
Though her heart ached to have seen him peacefully lying there, She could still see his face in the darkness. Even while sleeping, he had something that made her feel the strong pull towards him.
Without giving a second thought she climbed the boundary with her fingers clutching the sides of her skirt. She didn't bother the piercing of her nails through the thick cloth, hurting her. But she didn't move her eyes off him. She just couldn't afford to. What if he woke up, all of a sudden? She wasn't ready to bear his eyes upon her.
While he felt her gaze, she tumbled as soon as she stepped into his territory. But the worse was, she landed in his bed - next to him. She froze as his arms encircled around her waist.
His eyes widened with amazement. Her eyebrows arched as her eyes went big and round. Her breath caught up in the wind pipe, as she felt his cold touch against her skin. She was warm and welcoming, in every manner. And he so knew it.
Not wanting to see him, her eyes went shut. Looking at her reactions, he couldn't help but start, "Nandini..." He cried into a whisper. These days every time he called out her name, it ended up into a mere whisper.
She tried to move away, not wanting to listen to him - his words had the pinch of emotions, these days. And she just wanted to run away from those. But he pulled her closer, "You are not moving, Anywhere." She still struggled against his grip. "I won't let you go, Nandini" His words had some underlying meaning to it. And with that she felt the urge to throw her arms around him. But she wasn't going weak. "Listen to me for once, and then the decision is yours."
She had already made up her mind and she wasn't going to change it at any cost. That was what she had planned. "Fine." She declared yet with irritation laced in her voice. Eyeing him, she made him realize their position And he got them straightened.






Done! Bless, @missviolet and most importantly @Rez for this early update.. they talked me into this!

Also @Chandramukhi!

Apologies! I am still unfamiliar with your names! :P


And for sure, don't blame me for the cliff hanger yet again. ^___^
Edited by -shenz- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thankyou 😳
Also ur soo good at leaving us at cliffhangers😆...well thanks for the update i enjoyed it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Definitely a cliffy!😆
But i think i have a little idea what he is going to say next.
Waiting for you to update it tomorrow.😃
Edited by -Chandramukhi.. - 10 years ago

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