MaNan Drabble: Tough Summers {Epilogue - Pg43} - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Chandramukhi..

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Gadha kahin ka, if you can't see her pain then why do you even hurt her?
Yes he was responsible for her pain, but a mere sorry just can't be the remedy for her broken heart. The boy needs to introspect and be clear about his feelings and then woo his love back.
Nandini's fragile trust on him is broken and i can see what she is going through now!
Anyway, thanks for the wonderful update!😊
I know you'll update soon.😆


Thanks! You know it's difficult to keep my words to myself while I portray these stories and make sure I don't bash the other character for the jerkiness. But you kinda spoke my heart off! 😆


Of course, I will update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I like the message you are trying to show us
once trust is broken it can't it be regained so easily
It's sad that boys don't understand that, if they did there wouldn't be so many broken hearts
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Thanks!</font>
[DIV]<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">You want me to update long ones?😲How long? Well, the length is still much more longer than what it should be for a Drabble. But then, Hey! Ask me for the length and I might try to fit in those many words!😛</font
um vry much addictd to ua story dr.
f ew ask me abt de word count den,i rly wan diz to b a lamba ff coz i wud luv to read watever ew write.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all part in one go
Awsome story..nice concept
The slap is perfect and he truly deserve it but the way u penned the pain which manik and nandibi going thriugh is so beautiful
Continue sooN
N plz pm me next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
How can be he .. Like this stupid??
And ofc! She is hurt beyond repair..
Really? Like why he had to be such a jerk!!
Anyways!
You penned her emotions beautifully :) good job :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
so emotional... 😭
loved it
cntinue sooonishhh
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chair1992

I like the message you are trying to show us

once trust is broken it can't it be regained so easily
It's sad that boys don't understand that, if they did there wouldn't be so many broken hearts


Thank you! I am glad to know at least the message was conveyed.
And for some reason it isn't the guy who ends up breaking ones trust but at times even girls end up doing the same, much more vulnerably.

But anyways, Let's not get into that. Thank You! ^_^
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vyshnavivaiga


Firstly, addiction is injurious to health.


Secondly, Let this be short and simple. And Lamba would become stretch and boring! 🥱 And You shouldn't read whatever I write instead read what is good.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: silky1191

Read all part in one go

Awsome story..nice concept
The slap is perfect and he truly deserve it but the way u penned the pain which manik and nandibi going thriugh is so beautiful
Continue sooN
N plz pm me next update

Thank you so much!
Updating in a few minutes.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manya_189

How can be he .. Like this stupid??
And ofc! She is hurt beyond repair..
Really? Like why he had to be such a jerk!!
Anyways!
You penned her emotions beautifully :) good job :)



Thank You!

I know people can be such jerks at times. 🤢

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