Basu Bhaiya (Page-5,6,9,11)

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Mohini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Awesome writing n fantastic imagination...
In the initial updated that night scene where arjun was shivereing n karna asks for sol. Arjun tells how the five brothers used to sleep ... arjun feels yudi's presence in karna *supercute*!
Then there chilhdood awwi innocent n little pityful as it shows how testful the destiny was.
Keep writing... looking forward to it!

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

What an imagination you have...love the way you write...

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Pooja--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

🤣😆😆😆 Oh my stomach aching with laghter. Os on aham finally.😛

I luv kaju.🥳

beautifulkly written. The BEST period. Superb imagination.

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

In village words spread in air. News of Basu's discovery of a vanvasi boy was not suppressed for long time. In a very short span whole village was aware of the stranger child. Eager people gathered on Adhirath's house in no time.
"look the boy looks so majestic, must be a royal prince."
"his eyes are so big and expressive! He must be very intelligent."
"isnt he looking a lot like Basu of childhood? If Basu would have been as dusky as him they would have looked like two brothers."
There were so many remarks like that among Villagers