AR FF- BAN GAYE HO TUM MERE KHUDA(PMs Later)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyya people wassup...enjoying rains...
okay...so with rains comes another FF on our beloved Armaan riddhima by my very close friend..
Christina...
she's an awsume writer...
hope u all will love her FF...

so here goes this FF...



INTRODUCTION

RIDDHIMA GUPTA:

25 yr sweet,cute n caring gal with innocent smile n preety green eyes.A fasion designer working in her own botique

ARMAAN MALLIK:

27yr old handsome man with a charming smile n beautiful blue eyes.CEO of Mallik garments co. Ltd.

SIDDHANT MODI:

27 yr old guy works in his father's company.

RAHUL MALLIK:

Armaan's younger brother.married to muskan 1yr before.


MUSKAAN MALLIK:

Rahul's wife n riddhima n anjali's cousin.

ANJILI JOSHI:

Riddima's elder sister n married to atul joshi 2yr back.


ATUL JOSHI:

Anjali's husband. Armaan's manager n a cute loving n caring guy.

SHASHANK GUPTA & PADMA GUPTA:

Riddhima n Anjali's mother and father..loves both his dauther very dearly


ANURAAG MALLIK:
Armaan n rahul's dad.

ANANYA MALLIK:

Armaan n Rahul's mother.





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BAN GAYE HO TUM MERE KHUDA
PART1


A beautiful girl wearing track suit is sitting on the rock near the sea n crying very badly.Her eyes can speak that she is crying from a long time.The sunrise n a beautiful day is maybe good for people around her who are jogging but not for her.She is in pain,the pain which is invisible to all.Only she can feel it. After all only 2 day before all her life has changed from good to worse
She gets a call

Girl:Hello
...
Girl:Ha maa.mujhe pata hai.
...
Girl:Ha mai bas thodi der me ghar pauchti hu.
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Girl:Ha maa.mai thik hu.ap tension mat lo.I'll be their in 15mins.
She cuts the call.Start moving towards her home thinking...
Girl(thinking):Kab tak apne ap se aur is sach se bhagti rahugi mai ki Usne mujhe chod diya.Par phr kyu aj bhi mera dil ye man ne k liye ready nahi hai.kyu rota hai mera dil aj b uske liye.Mai kyu aj b usk karan apne aap ko taklif de rh hu...
Talking to herself she walks and suddenly starts feeling dizzy.she faints on the road in front of the car which has just stoped.

she faints on the road infront of a car which stops quickly.A handsome guy wearing a 3 piece suit comes out of the car hurriedly n moves towards her silently praying that the girl should be alright who has just fainted infront of the car.He goes near her n frowns comes on his face as he knows her.He sits down and call her.

Guy:Riddhima..(he pats her cheek gently)Riddhima.. .
Getting no respose he picks her in his arms n moves towards the car.He puts her on the back seat of the car n start driving all time being careful but hurried too.He rush the car n stops it infront of a beautiful banglow.He picks her again and move inside shouting...
Guy:koi pani leke aao.jaldi plz...(keeping her on the couch of the hall)mom... Muskaan... Rahul...

Listening to him shouting, ananya n muskaan comes out of the kitchen n Rahul from his room. None has seen him shouting so loudly n so worried.

Rahul:Armaan Bhai? Ap to kal aane wale the na.Aur kya hua ap itna chilla q rhe ho.
Then he looks to riddhima lying unconcious. As soon as they all see her,they all are worried. Maid gives water to Armaan.He sprinkles some water on her face.
Muskaan(worried):bhai kya hua ridzi ko?
Armaan(tensed):Maj ghar aa rh tha tb meri gadi k saamne behosh hok gir gayi ye.(looking to ananya)mom ise hosh q nh aa rha.??
Ananya:Armaan shant ho ja beta.(looking at Rahul)ja doctor ko phone kar.
Rahul:Mai doctor ko bulata hu.

After some time doctor comes n check Riddhima. She is still unconcious lying in RM's room. Armaan and everyone waiting outside RM's room. Armaan walking here and there tensed and worried. He can't see her like this. Rahul is concoling Muskaan as she is very much worried for her cousin who is her best friend too.They are of same age n were together in school and college.Their was no secrets hidden between them till the date muskaan got busy in her married life.

After sometime doctor comes out of the room n tells that nothing is serious n Riddhima fainted because of weakness as she is not having her food properly.

Riddhima gets concious after sometime but her vision is not clear.She tries to seat so Muskaan comes and help her seating with pillow behind her back.She gets her vision clear n smiles looking at Muskaan. Muskaan Smiles back n hugs her tightly with some tears in her eyes.Everyone smiles to see Riddhima concious and fine.She wishes everyone present their and smiles looking at Armaan who returns the smile back. He is very much happy to see her smiling at him n in a better condition then before.How he can see her in this state when he daily prays to God for her happiness and well being.He wants all her dreams comes true as he can't see his love(Riddhima)heartbroken. Yes he is in love with her from 2years.

He was in love with her the moment he saw her in Atul-Anjali's engagement.He don't know much about her but was mermerizied by her beauty,not only her face n features but was in love with her innocent,pure n beautiful heart which cares n respects for everyone.He never told her afraid for breaking his heart. Yes he is strong from outside but his heart is very delicated. He never told anyone about his feelings but someone was their who knows him in and out n wants to see him happy.

Muskaan comes out from the hug and ask
Muskaan:Ridzi tu apna dhyan nh rkhti hai na? Ruk mai abhi maasi ko btati h.
Riddhima:Nahi Muski,mai thik hu.tu bekar me hi preshan ho rh hai.
Muskaan:mai bekar me preshan ho rh hu? Rahul dekho ye mujhe bekar bol rh hai,mai bekar hu kya?
Rahul:Muski,plz not again.
Muskaan(doing melodrama):ha ha mai hi bekar hu na.baki sab ache hai.
Looking this everyone laughs.
Riddhima:chal band kar tera ye melo-drama aur mujhe kuch khila.Mujhe bhuk lagi hai aur kafi time ho gaye tere hath ka kuch khaye hue.

Muskaan smiles n everyones comes to the dining table. Armaan is happy to see Riddhima laughing n enjoying her sister's company.
Riddhima is trying to pretend normal and is controlling her tears to fall. She is happy to spend time with Muskaan after a long time but she is not happy from heart.Who can she be happy from heart when her heart has already been broken. She is little worried n tensed. The spark and shine from her eyes are missing and Armaan can tell it in a look. Her eyes speaks to him.but those eyes has not yet told him wheather she loves him or not.
After having breakfast they chit chat for some time when Rahul gets a call.He moves aside when Riddhima ask for permission to leave.Rahul comes backs.

Rahul:I need to go.Their's an important work in office.(looking at Armaan)Bhai aj dopehar tak aa jana tab tak mai meeting ki tyari karwata hu.m nikalta hu.bye everyone.
He start moving when Riddhima calls him...
Riddhima:hmm Rahul... Kya tum mujhe mere ghar tak chod doge plz.
(maybe today god is in Armaan's favour)
Rahul:ohh sorry ridzi but mujhe thoda jaldi jana hai.aisa kro u go with bhai.he will drop u(giving Armaan a pleading look who was happy to spend some time with his secret love).
Armaan:Ok.i'll drop u..

The shine n happiness in his eyes was not unnoticed by Ananya. she was happy that her son was taking some initaitive.


Hope u all loved this part...

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Love
megs ;)

Edited by megha_kajen - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing cs ..!!
Riddhima crying for someone ...
She faints in front of armaan's car ...
Armaan loves ridz since 2 yrs but dint tell her due to fear :(
Very intresting ..!
Continue asap ..!!

Thnxx for pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reallly love the part, it was awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start, looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start
ar meet
ridhima is upset and armaan's secret love
excited for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start to the story :) I can't wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting
Armaan didn't confess his love for ridhzi due to fear
He love her since 2 years
Ridhima crying for someone
Amazing
Update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hmm interesting ...
par pta nah mujhe yeh kyn lag rha h ki maine yeh story padhi hui h *pout*
yeh story pehle bhi post hui h kya ???
hmm but anyways story par ate h
hmm so ridhz is going from a heartbreak phase i mean bechari ka dil tod diya kisi ne tch tch
so armaan loves ridhz from 2 yrs but is afraid of rejection
are itne handsome ladke ko kaun reject karega
loved ridhz nd muskaan bonding
poor ridhz feeling bad for her
loved how armaan got concerned seeing ridhz like that
hmm i loved to read this story more mujhe lagta h maine yeh story shayad padhi h par yaad nah araha
aree yaar
anyways shayad age padhke pta chalega
anyways thanks for the pm
loved the story as well as concept
its really cool

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