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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
lovely part
hope riddhima too have feelings for armaan soon
continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
too good part
but chota tha yr
bechari riddhima
and everyone eaing armaan
post next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
awesome part
hope armaan and ridhima soon come together
thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
such a cute part..
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
nice part
looking forward to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
that's sn awesome part so cute
really hope ridhz will also fall for armaan
loved rahul armaan moment
loves how rahul teases armaan always
nd musky nd ridhz relationship is also cute
do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Nice part...
armaan is so sweet...I agree wid rahul dat whosoever l marry him l b d luckiest...
n dat sidhant...acha hua gya...but m sure vapis jarur ayega
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Wohoo Chrispyyy, Another awesome part...
Phirse late toh nehi kardi na maine heheheh...
Guess not as next part toh abhi post nehi huva na ;)

Wow, Muski is staying back with Ridz...
Accha hai, ab Ridz can share whats bothering her with Muski...
Of course woh toh Ridz ke cousin hai, usse nehi pta hogi toh kisse hoga right...

Finally, Ridz is ready to tell Muski about her past...
Mujhe toh pakka yakeen hai yeh ladke ka maamla hai...
Ab dekhna yeh hai ki kiski wajahse aur kiya huva hai...

Oh toh Riddhima is ladke se kaam mein mila ta...
Aahaan, yeh koi aur nehi Siddhant Modi hai...
Deal karte karte dono ke beech pyar bhi hogaya, wah badi fast hai hehehe...

Why I m not surprise...
Of course Siddhant ne choda hai Ridz koh...
Hmm yeh bhi sahi hai, woh apne ma ke hilaf kissi se shaadi kaise kar sakte hai...
Jab jaanta ta toh Siddhant ne Ridz se rishta joda kyun...
Jo bhi ho, jo huva acche ke liyeh huva...
Siddhant aur Ridz relation mein hota toh Armaan koh apna pyar kaise milta aur Ridz koh bhi itna accha humsafar tohdi na milenge...

Hatss off to Muski, she support for Riddhima to move on...
Glad that muski didn't scold her or blast on her for hiding something important...
Arey wah, Riddhima toh Armaan ke baare mein pooch rahi hai Muski se hehehe...
Lolz, they first make fun of Armaan being shy and then Muski tease Ridz about him hehehe...
Their sisterly bonding is super awesome and nice...

Ek taraf Muski Ridz koh tease ki aur Rahul Armaan koh tease kar rahi hai hahaha...
Wow, even Anurag joins Rahul ;) thats cool...
Love Mallik teasing section...
Hayye, Armaan kitna accha hai... Woh Ridz koh apni tarike se uski dil jeet na chaahte hai na force karke...
hahaha sacchi kaha Rahul ne, Armaan toh bada chupa rustam nikla...

They are happy to see Armaan trying to win the girl heart whom he loves...
Everyone is happy with Armaan choice, why not...
Ridz hai hi itni sweet and innocent...

Continue super soon Chrispy...
Take care...
Muwaahhh <3
Love you...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Kamina Sid kahin ka!
Lekin achcha hai. Agar woh Ridz ko nahi chodta toh Armaan ko woh kaise milti?

Bohot cute hai dono. An bad jaldi se un dono ko ek saath dikhado, please!
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BAN GAYE HO TUM MERE KHUDA
PART5

Armaan is sleeping with a charming dimpled smile playing on his face.Riddhima comes near the bed to wake him up.He wakes up to see his Riddhima wearing his favourite sauce wala laal colour saree,mangalsutra with little make up on her beautiful glowing face.She seats beside him n strokes his head playing with his hairs.

Riddhima: utho na Armaan,sab niche breakfast ke liye wait kar rhe hai.
Armaan(putting his head on her lap): nahi Riddhima,mujhe tumahare sath rehna hai.aise hi.

Then he pulls her suddenly so that she is lying on the bed and he is half lying upon her.he puts her hair back to ears and comes closer.his blue orbs fixed to her green orbs.he comes more closer and looks at her lips,then again looks in her eyes.their lips were an inch distance. He close his eyes and was about to kiss her.When muskaan shouts.

Muskaan: bhaiii...ye ap kya kar rhe ho.wo Rahul hai Riddhima nahi...

Armaan listening this opens his eyes only to see Rahul lying their with closed eyes and hand on his mouth,horrified.Armaan gets up with a jerk realizing he was dreaming.Rahul runs out of the room all shock.Muskaan and Ananya laughs standing at the door looking embarrassed Armaan and horrified and shocked Rahul.

Rahul has come to call Armaan as he was late than his usual time.Muskaan has come to check why Rahul is taking so much time just to call Armaan and she was almost dead to see Armaan is about to kiss her husband thinking she is Riddhima and shouts.Ananya was going down when she heard Muskaan and rush to see what has happened for Muskaan to shout like this.she started laughing.

Ananya(laughing to Armaan): jaldi ready hok niche aa ja breakfast ke liye.(looking at Muskaan and laughing more)chal.din ki shuruwat achi thi.
Muskaan:(laughing)ha ha ha ha..ha mom.jab dad ko pata chalega to aur maza aaega(looking at Muskaan)bhai,ap aj to mere sautaan ban jate.(dramatically crying fakely)phr mera kya hota...?kaha jati mai abhaagan??(laughing)Aur Riddhima?uska to socha hota bhai?use pta chalega to kya sochegi wo aap ke bare me??

Armaan stands their all embarrassed and guiltily and then runs in the bathroom.
Yes,Muskaan knows her Armaan bhai is in love with her sister-cum-best friend.and she is so much happy but prays so that Riddhima should also forget her past and move on with Armaan.Rahul gave her the news the day she came back to Mallik mansion.She always makes plan so that Armaan can meet Riddhima and they both can know each other more.They all went for picnic so that they can help Armaan without telling him,as if he get to know,for sure he will be angry as he wants to do efforts alone to win Riddhima's heart.
Armaan is in dream land now-a-days,always thinking about her and dreaming about their future.He is just waiting for the day when he can love in her eyes for him and is sure that the time will come very soon.He talks to her daily on phone about something or nothing.
Riddhima is day by day becoming more friendly with Armaan.She likes talking to him very much so whenever she is free,calls him.sometime they talk for hours about their likes dislikes,what they want to do in future.She feels proud to be his only girl-friend and that he shares everything to her.They enjoyed alot in the picnic last week,planned by Rahul and Muskaan playing antakshari,football,Muskaan doing everyones mimicry and all laughing.She has forgot about Sid.She is very much happy with Armaan's friendship.He always makes her feels better.she somewhere in her heart feels connected to him.She never felt like this with Sid too.She is now focused to her work and Nikita is very happy to see her happy.

Here Shashank has told Padma about his wish to make Armaan their son-in-law.Padma was very much glad and wished in her mind "meri Riddhima ka rishta Armaan se pakka kar dijiye bhagwaan jee".They many time thought to talk to Malliks but Anjali denied as she was aware of Armaan's wish and wanted Armaan himself comes with the proposal.She has seen love n care for Riddhima in Armaan's eyes and with his action too but she wants Riddhima to feel the same for Armaan.Riddhima is now-a-days is at Joshi house,as her sister is 3 months pragnent.Anjali has called riddhima for some days so that if she will not feel good with her health,Riddhima will be their for her when Atul is busy working.Anjali and Atul were talking to Riddhima.

Anjali:Ridzi,tune shadi ke bare me kya socha hai?

Riddhima was shock with the sudden question.

Riddhima:mujhe thoda aur waqt chahiye di...mai abhi apne career pe focus karna chahti hu.
Atul:are Ridzi,wo to tu shadi k bad bhi kar sakti hai,jaise anji aur muski kar rh hai.muski rahul aur armaan ke sath office aati hai and hume help karti hai aur anji aj bhi apni practise continue kar rh hai.(anjali is a paediatrician)

Riddhima:(thinking)ha par jeej mujhe koi aisa ladka pasnd bhi to aaye na...

Anjali:acha chal bta tujhe kaisa ladka chahiye?

Atul:ha ridzi bol? Mai tere liye waisa hi ladka dhundh k lauga.

Riddhima:(thinking)hmm ladka aisa ho jo mera sab se acha dost ho.mujhe uncoditional pyar kare,chahe kuch bhi ho jaye mera sath kabhi na chode(thinking about sid)meri care kare,aur hmesha mere sath khada rhe chahe dhup ho ya chaao.

Anjali:(smilingly)mil gaya ladka.Ridzi jaisa ladka tu chahti hai waisa to bs Armaan hai.wo teri care b karta hai aur tu uski friend bhi hai.and i am sure ki wo tujhse bhot pyar b karega shadi k bad.

Riddhima:(shocked)ye ap kya keh rahi ho di.(looking at atul)jeej di ko samjhao na.pagal ho gai hai,kuch bhi bol rh hai.

Atul:kya galat keh rh hai?? ridzi.Armaan tere liye perfect match hai(
Anjali has told everything to Atul)tu hi to chahti hai na ki tera life partner tera sabse acha dost ho.Aur Armaan se acha dost hai kya teri life me??

Anjali:ha ridzi,soch is bare me.shayad tujhe samajh aa jaye.


Then they both go to sleep in their room.Riddhima is thinking about Armaan.she thinks what Atul and Anjali has said to her.

Riddhima:(thinking)kya sach me Armaan aur mai...(smiling) wo to mera bhot acha dost hai aur meri kitni care bhi karta hai.us din jb mujhe chot lagi thi to wo kitna bechain ho gaya tha...

Flashback:

Picnic day

their is a big garden where all(armaan,anjali,riddhima,atul,rahul,muskaan)are playing football.Riddhima is admiring a cute girl playing alone when ball comes and hits riddhima's leg as Rahul has passed the ball to her to kick.she shouts in pain and sits their not able to walk.Armaan comes running.
Armaan:riddhima?tum thik ho?

Riddhima:aaahh.bhot pain ho rha hai.

Armaan first glares to Rahul in anger then picks up Riddhima in his arms and makes her sit on the bench.He removes her shoes and caresses her foot ask muskaan to bring pain-relief ointment from car and applies gently on her foot.She is happy to get a friend who cares for her alot.then he ask everyone to play antaksharee so that Riddhima will not have to move for sometime till her pain decreases.

Flashback ends

Riddhima:(to herself) jab wo itna acha dost ho sakta hai to soch riddhima ki wo husband kitna acha hoga.(smiling) he will be the best husband.par maine kbhi use as a husband point of view se dekha hi nahi(hitting her head lightly)itne din se so rh thi kya ridzi.tera life partner tere sath tha aur tu use dekh bhi nahi pai. Wait wait wait.jyada sapne mat dekh ridzi.agr wo kisi aur se pyar karta hoga to..karta hi hoga yar. Itna good looking and handsome hai.kafi ladkiya marti hai uspe to phr kaise ab tak single hoga.koi na koi to hogi.(thinking)offo... Ridzi pagal ho jaegi tu itna sochegi to.usi se puch leti hu.(picking up her phone)nahi nahi.itni rat me wo q jaga hoga.aur kya sochega...

Thinking this she doze off.

Next day

She gets up and call Armaan.she has already seen so many bad dreams in a single night and wants to make sure that they all are not real.
Armaan picks up the phone

Armaan:hey Riddhima.aj itni subh subh kaise yad kiya?
Riddhima:(confused)hmm wo ar... Armaan mai... Mai tumse mil...(closing her eyes)Armaan mai tumse milna chahti hu,mujhse tumse kuch puchna hai,kya aj sham tum mujhe mil sakte ho.plz its urgent...
She said all this in one go.
Armaan:ha ha q nahi.mai milta hu sham ko.nothing serious na?
Riddhima:(to herself) ha bhot jyada serious hai.meri life aur death ka sawaal hai.(to armaan)nahi kuch serious nh hai.bs thodi bat karni hai.chalo bye.

She cuts the call and here Armaan is all confused that what has happened to her and why she is behaving so weirdly. But is happy to meet her all alone having no family and friends around her for sometime.Ofcorse he loves his family and friend but wants to spend some precious time with her alone.


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PART6


Its a busy day in office today.Everyone is working and rushing to complete their works by after.today's deal is very important for Malliks.Anuraag and his PA is arranging for the meeting.Atul is busy with his paper works.Rahul and Muskaan are selecting the best designer dresses to present.But Armaan is not working,actually he is trying to work but is lost somewhere.he is restless as Riddhima has called him to meet her.why she sounds so low he thought,is there any problem.does she needs me now.he was not able to concentrate so thought to go home and rest.he asked Rahul to handle the deal.Anuraag first was surprise that his WORKOHOLIC son is taking a day leave but than he was ok with it.
Armaan went home and slept for sometime.in evening he called atul to know about the deal.
Atul:ha Armaan bol?
Armaan:how was the meeting?is the deal signed?
Atul:nh yaar.meeting 6bje ke liye postpone ho gai hai.the clients are going to come late.
Armaan:ok.if need any help just call me.i'll be their.all the best for the deal.bye.

Then he get ready and went to cafe as Riddhima has told him the place,time and asked her to come their directly and she will come after finishing her work.
He went in the cafe and sat in the corner table,she didn't come yet so he asked the waiter to bring some magzine.he was reading magzine,when he felt someones continues gaze on him.he looked up only to see riddhima standing infront of him wearinga simple purple colour churidaar,glaring at him.he was confused that niether he is late nor he did any mistake then why she is shooting How-dare-u look.

Armaan:(stands up and passing chair to her like a gentleman)hey riddhima.have a sit.
Riddhima:(angrily)thankx
Armaan:wat happen? U look annoyed.?
Riddhima:i am annoyed... At u
Armaan:(surprised)wat? But wat i did?
Riddhima:i asked u come and meet me not to read this business magzine.
Armaan:(laughing) ok ok.i am sorry.
Riddhima:(angrily)mai yaha ghussa hu aur tum has rhe ho?(turning her face to aside)jao mai bat nh karti..hm..

Armaan first smiles at her kiddishness then puts his hand on her hand and rub it a little.she felt some current passing through her spine.first she looks at their and then in his eyes.these eyes are so magical she thought and smiled.they were lost in each others eyes.the love they hold for each other is clearly visible in their eyes wheather they express it in words or not.yes,riddhima too is falling for him.he has already given his heart mind and soul to her.now its her turn to make a way in her heart for him.
Their beautiful eyelock was disturbed by the waiter as he placed their order which riddhima has given before coming to the table where he was sitting.Armaan removed his hand from hers.she felt like some very precious thing is taken away from her.

Armaan:ha to bolo,kya bat karni hai tumhe?
Riddhima:wo mai., wo...
Armaan:bolo riddhima,u can ask anything wat u want?so just say it?

She takes a deep breathing closing her eyes,then opens and
asked

Riddhima:kya tum mujhe apni sabse achi dost mante ho Armaan?
Armaan:ofcourse riddhima,ur my bestest friend.
Riddhima:tum mujhse apne sare secrets share karte ho?

Armaan was confused that what has happened to her and all of a sudden why she is asking all this.

Armaan:(keeping his hand on hers)Is everything fine??ye sare sawaal kyu puch rh ho?
Riddhima:ha armaan.plz jawaab do na.
Armaan:ok,ha mai tumhe har wo bat btata hu jo mai kabhi share nh karta tha.
Riddhima:kya tumhe nahi lagta ki tum mujhe apni life ki sabse important bad btana bhul gaye??
Armaan:(thinking)nahi.mujhe nh lagta.
Riddhima:pyar armaan?pyar k bare me to aj tak kuch nh btaya tumne??(armaan was shock,he thought maybe she got to knw but was relax when she asked)kya tumhe kabhi kisi se pyar nahi hua?
Armaan:hua hai na.life me har kisi ko ek na ek bar pyar to hota hi hai,mujhe bhi hua.2sal phle.phli nazar me..

Riddhima was hurt.

Riddhima:(thinking)kash mai tumse 2 sal phle mili hoti armaan,to aj yaha hum just friends banke nh baithe hote.(to armaan)mujhe usk bare me nh btaoge armaan?kaisi hai wo?
Armaan:(looking directly in her eyes)she is the most beautiful girl i have ever seen in this world.mai usse bhot jyada pyar karta hu,wo bhot bholi aur maasum hai,har kisi ko khush dekhna chahti hai,uski aakhe bilkul sachhi aur pavitra hai.uska maasum sa dil roz har kisi ki k liye duaa mangta hai.wo meri zindagi hai,mai ek pal bhi usk bare me soche bina nahi rh skta.meri jaan hai wo.wo meri saason me samati hai...

He was lost in her eyes,she thought he is praising her but when she realize that he is talking about the girl he loves,she lowers her gaze.he also looks some other side and smiles.

Riddhima:(choking)us.. Uska...na...naam kya hai Armaan?? Kaun hai wo jisse tum apni jaan se bhi jyada pyar karte ho?
Armaan:riddhima,i m really very sorry but mai aj uska nam nh bta skta.wo nh janti ki mai usse kitna pyar karta hu.jab mujhe uski aakho me apne liye pyar dikhega mai use bta duga aur usk bad tumhe khud milauga.promise.

She smiles faintly

Armaan:janti ho riddhima,mujhe lagta hai ki ab wo din jyada dur nahi hai jab wo meri ho jaegi.

Saying so he smiles his dimpled smile.

Its 7:15 now and they are talking generally when armaan gets a call from Rahul

Armaan:ha Rahul bol?

Rahul:bhai,clients deal ke liye mana kar rhe hai.they are saying ki designs purani ho chuki hai.and they are leaving.dad wants u to handle this situation.plz come fast bhai.

Armaan:(worried)ok i'll be their in 15mins.

He tells everything to her and asked riddhima to accompany him as he wants her support right now.he wants her to be with him for his mental support.they drive to his office.sitting in the car she thinks

Riddhima:(thinking)kya meri kismat itni khrab hai.phle jiss pasnd kiya wo chor k chala gaya aur ab jise pasand kr rh hu wo phle hi kisi aur ka ho chuka hai.kya kami hai armaan mujhme jo tum mujhme bs apni friend dekhte ho aur usse jyada kuch nahi.i want to be more than a friend for u armaan.but agr tum us ladki me apni khushi pate ho to mai tumhare raste me kahi nh aaugi qki mai apna ye itna acha dost ko kho dena affort nh kr skti.i want u in every second of my life,phr wo saath bs friends banke kyu na mile,i'll be happy.


a lone tear escape from her eyes which she instantly wipes)

Reaching office he ask her to sit in his cabin and he'll be there in sometime then he goes to the clients.they held another 10mins meeting in which he requested them to give 1week time and everything will according to their wish.the clients know if Armaan Mallik has promised then he will do their work by hook or by crook.

He turned to their office team,glared an angry look at Rahul who was guilty for not checking the designs in market before presenting it.then to everyone.

Armaan:(sternly)i want everyone who was in the meeting,in my cabin within 5mins.(turning to anuraag)dad u go home.i'll make everything clear and this deal will be ours.
Then he went to his cabin to find Riddhima looking at his cabin and all his stress and anger was gone looking at her.

Outside Anuraag wished "all the best"to everyone as now an angry young and the Workoholic Armaan is back.and he don't like mistakes in deals which are important.they all went inside his cabin and was surprise to see Riddhima their.
They greeted each other and she was going out as there was meeting going on.

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rmaan:(calmly)riddhima yahi ruko plz.i need u right now.

He knows if she will go then he'll bombared on everyone what he don't wants to do that.

Armaan:(while studing the file)Atul,in 2days all the paper work should be done.Abhi(Abhimanyu sharma.he is anuraags PA) i want u to make all preparations done by 3days.no excuses.(looking at rahul sharply)and u,Mr.Rahul Mallik,i want the best designer in 24hrs.do whatever u want.do u get that?
Rahul:(bowed head)yes bhai.

Muskaan smiles broadly and shouts

Muskaan:bhai hume designer mil gai.aur i am sure bhai apko b pasand aaegi.
Rahul:(glaring at muskaan and )bakwaas band kar muskaan.bhai ka ghussa aur mat bada.
Muskaan:tu chup kar kaankhajure,mai apne bhai se bat kar rh hu,khud se to ek kam dhaang se hota nahi hai.(looking at armaan)haa to bhai,agar mai kahu ki designer mil gai hai,aur actually yahi pe hai to.(looking at riddhima)ye rahi designer...

Armaan smiles and think why he didn't get that she can help him.everyone smiles and hopefully looks at ridhhima who is totally shock as she has never worked with such a big company.

She looks at armaan who nobs.

Riddhima:(smiles)ok i'll do.(silently)just for u armaan...

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PART7

"bhai bachaooo...mom.. daddd..."

Rahul was shouting but why...lets see.hmm coz his "Sweet ennocent" wife has turned into"kaali Mata".she is sitting on his stomach and pulling his hairs.No one dared to stop her and come in between them.They were laughing till their stomach ached.

Muskaan:tune mujhe chipkali bola,ab dekh mai kya haal karti hu tera.. Kaankhajure...

Riddhima:(trying hard not to laugh)bas..bas muski,ab kya jaan legi uski.
Armaan:(giving hand to muskaan to get up)chalo chodo use,baki ki WWE kal kar lena.bhot rat ho gai hai.

Muskaan:(holding armaan's hand getting up and looking at Rahul)Aj room me aane ki sochna bhi mat.sad jaak store room me.Bandar kahika...

This was not the first time that RM were fighting and all others are laughing at their childish behaviour.it was now commom for them.The day client has given them 1 week time, they all started working together.it was routine to see RM fighting for some or the other thing and then koochi-kooing in any corner after sorting out the fight.Riddhima has caught them kissing after their fight 2days back

Riddhima:ahem ahem.. See the angry love birds.abhi aisa lad rh the ki ek dusre ko kha jaege and now busy in romancing haa...

Nikki:are u both sure ki tum dono ki love marriage hai?? Means i have dought.

RM was very embarassed but was happy when everyone laughed at them.
They all were working from Mallik mansion.it's the 6th day day and tomorrow the deal will be signed.Riddhima,Atul and Abhi has shifted to MM for a week so that they can work from home with the team.Atul has asked Anjali to shift to Gupta house for a week as he and Riddhima both will be busy.and he calls her after every 2 hrs.

Atul:anji.tbiyat kaisi hai?

Anjali:atul abhi 2hrs phle bhi yhi question kiya tha tumne.

Atul:2hrs anji 2hrs..2hrs me 120mins hote h,7200 sec hote.plz bolo na kaisi ho.

Anjali:atul...ok mai thik hu.tum kam kro.mujhe kuch b hua to mai tumhe cal kr dugi.khush?

Atul:thank u anjali.tum kitni achi ho.bye.

He was overprotective and a cute darling husband.

Muskaan:rahul, kuch seekh jeej se,dekh wo kitni care karte hai anji ki.aur tu ek bandar,mujhse pura time ladte rhta hai.

Rahul:bol to aise rhi hai jaise khud kabhi ladti hi nahi.

Muskaan:dekh rahul,jyada mat bol haa nh to.. To..
(and she picks up the sofa cusion and start throwing on him.

Armaan:bas bas bas muskaan,chod use aur kaam kar.

Armaan was happy to work in a team and all time his love beside him.he got a new girl-friend as Riddhima has called Nikita to help her with the designs so it will take less time to complete.they were friendly but after coming here nikki met Abhi and they felt in love.they have not confessed yet but are aware of each others feeling so they spends lots of time together.

AR are the most happy ones in the whole team as their love are infront of their eyes by 24 hrs.these 1week is the best of days their life.

Riddhima has found her true love in these days.the feelings which she has never felt for anyone,not even for sid,she has felt for him.she has experienced the true meaning of love.but She is now trying to digest the fact that her true love loves someone else. She got to know the dream scene from Muskaan when last night while working Armaan slept putting her head on his mom's lap like a baby.

Muskaan:rizdi pata hai ek din bhai apni dreal girl ka sapna dekh rh the and wo rahul me us ladki ko dekh ke Rahul ko kiss karne wale the par time pe maine chilla diya warna pta nh mere rahul ka kya hota..


Armaan hiding his face ran to his room in embarassement.All were laughing except Riddhima.she was hurt that girl is everywhere around him but she is nowhere.she felt bad but she herself consoled her heart to except the truth.He cares for her.he works with her if nikki is sleeping or is spending time with her new found love Abhi.and sleeps after her she is dozed off.Many-a-times he made coffee for both of them as the others goes to sleeps in their respective rooms.being awake,helping her when he is free,making coffee,giving her plate full of food when she's busy working and forgets to have food,all this little care he does for her is making her fall in love with him more and more.She loves spending time with him so whenever in night they both are awake she asks him to accompany her for a walk in garden and he happily do that.

Day before yestarday she was walking beside him looking at the moon when she hits the stone and was about to fall when he held her by her waist,she clutched his colar tightly and closed her eyes due to fear,after sometimes she opens her eyes only to get lost in the deep blue ocean.they were sharing a beautiful eye lock.the world was lost.they two were the only one for each other at that moment.the world around them seems faded.Don,t know for how long they were staring in each others eyes.

Armaan was lost in her beauty,her beautiful green eyes has now expressing something to him.is it love? He thought.does she loves me.yes man she loves me..see her eyes showing that love which i am searching from 2yrs for me. Yes yes yes.she loves me.OMG,i can't believe it happened.i am gonna confess,not now but after the deal for sure.Looking in her eyes he thought this.

He was always around her,helping her or staring her from a distance,but now-a-days she is behaving little strange,she don,t talk to him much,from the day he told her about his love life,she has changed.wheather she got the hint that i love her aur she is jelous he thought.

All are sitting in armaan's room,doing their own work,almost everything was done and Riddhima was giving final touch to every dresses.she wants the best to be done as its only for her Armaan and she don't wants him to feel low.

Riddhima:ye saree kaisi lag rh hai?

She got no response,everyone was doing their works and was talking and Armaan staring at her.she saw him asking in a low volume.

Riddhima:ye saree kaisi lag rh hai Armaan?
Armaan:(sitting next to her and coming close to her ears, unknown to the fact that everyone is looking at them now)beautiful...

She blushed and went out as everyone was there including ananya and anuraag.his eyes still on the door from where she went out.

All:(coming near to his ears and shouts) beautifulll...

He comes out of trance and run behind her to see that she didn't took it otherwise.
Searching her he comes to garden where she is sitting on a bench lost...

Armaan:(sitting next to her)kya soch rahi ho?

Riddhima:jo tumne kaha us hi ke bare me soch rahi hu.

Armaan:bura laga kya?

Riddhima:nahi,wo bas aj tak kisi ne is tarah se tarif nahi ki na to thoda ajeeb lag rh
hai(thinking)aur acha bhi.

Armaan:to aadat dal lo riddhima.

Riddhima:(confused)kya...??

Armaan:kuch nahi.chalo andar,kaam sham tak khatam karna hai na..
Riddhima:(still lost)hmmm chalo.



They go back to their room without meeting gaze with anyone as everyone wants to know what is going on between them.
All have seen AR's growing friendship in this days.they were just praying to God that soon AR should be together.

Atul:Rizdi,tu iss deal ke bad b humare sath hi job continue kar na...

Riddhima:(confused)hmm lets see...

Rahul:par humari company ki policy hai ki join hone k 5 sal tak aap job chod nahi saki madam..

Atul:ha to thik hai na,waise bhi ridzi kaha shadi karne ke bad kam chod degi.wo to bad me bhi continue karegi,.. Hai na Armaan?


Armaan first gave puzzled look to Atul than Rahul,and he got to know that they are on teasing mood now..


Rahul:ha bhai bolo na,ap job continue karne doge na ridzi ko??


Nikki:are wo to Ridzi k husband pe depend karta hai ya nahi,hai na ridzi.

Riddhima:(doing her work so not to look at Armaan,as tear has already made their way in her eyes)hmm...

Armaan shoot a abe-saalo-tumse-chup-nahi-jata-kya look to the boys and look at ananya to help.

Ananya:chalo baccho dinner lag gaya hai,khana kha lo aur so jao.kal subah jaldi uthna hai tum sab ko.

Armaan:(going to the dining area)thankx mom.

She gave him an understanding nod.

After dinner,everyone was sitting in the study room.Rahul was ready to give a demo presentation so he will not do the same mistake again and make his bhai angry again. So the presentation was good and anuraag was happy that they all have managed to do everything in just a week.he was proud to have such a hardworking team,he treated all of them as his children and was happy to have them.

Everyone went to their respective rooms to have some sleep as tomorrow is a big day.Armaan went in garden to take some fresh air and be with himself for some time.he was standing near the artificial pond in the garden and was thinking about her.how to confess,how to make her feel special,how to make her his forever and ever.he closed his eyes only to see her smiling preety face and glowing shiny eyes.looking at her in his mind he gave a million dollar dimpled perfect smile.then he felt someone next to himself looking at him.

Armaan:(still closed eyes)Riddhima.yaha kya kar rh ho?.soi nahi ab tak.?

Riddhima:tumhe kaise pata chala mai hu.tumhari aakhe to band hai.
Armaan:(opening his eyes and looking in his eyes)mai tumhe mehsus kar sakta hu riddhima. I can feel you.
She was lost in his words for a second.
Riddhima:apne pyar ko dekh k muskuraa rhe the na armaan? Aakhe band karke usi ko dekh rhe the na?
Armaan:(to himself)mai to aakhe khol ke bhi usi ko dekh rha hu.(to her)hmm ha.bas ushi ko dekh raha tha.
Riddhima:(hurt)use bataya ki tum usse beintahaan mohabbat karte ho.?agar nahi btaya to bta do armaan,kahi bhot der na ho jaye.(to herself)jaise meri mohabbat me ho gai hai,mera pyar mere samne hai aur mai use ye tak nahi bta paa rh hu ki mai tumse kitna pyar karti hu.bas mai hi janti hu armaan ki mai ek pal bhi tumhare bina nahi jee sakti.i love u,i love u armaan,.(to him)mai sone ja rahi hu,tum bhi so jao.kal bhot special din hai.bye.goodnite.
Armaan:mai kal use deal k bad bta duga.i'll confess my love to her.aur phr sabse phle tumse milauga.bye.goodnite.
Riddhima:(with teary eyes)ok.bye.goodnite.

And she went from their as soon as possible so not to cry infront of him.

After Riddhima is gone, armaan sits near the pond on the grass smiling and think.

Armaan:(thinking)pyar karne lagi ho na mujhse,utna hi jitna mai karta hu.maine dekha tumhari aakho me wo chamak,wo ehsaas,wo chahat ,wo jalan us ladki se jisse mai pyar karta hu,aur wo pyar jo mai pichle kuch dino se dhundh rha tha.ab mai der nahi karuga riddhima,mai tumhe bta duga ki mai tumse kitna pyar karta hu.aur wo ladki jo meri zindagi hai wo aur koi nahi tum hi ho...meri Riddhima ho.kal sach me main humari zindagi ka sabse haseen din bna duga.

Then he went to his room thinking about her and dozed off. Tomorrow is a day when he will confess his love to her,wheather the deal is in their favour or not..
Kal bhot kuch badalne wala hai.kuch naye rishtey banege,kuch naye sapne sajege...
So stay tuned...

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PART8

Its a beautiful sunny day filled with happiness and joy.
Mallik mansion is almost up-side-down.everyone is running here and there doing some or the other work.yes they got the deal.the clients were impressed with the designs and want to do more deals with Mallik's.Anuraag has held a celebration party.so ladies are preparing for food and snacks.all men are busy inarrangments.Rahul is checking the catering,Atul checking for decorations.Abhi is out checking the security.Anuraag inviting all the guest.but where is Armaan?...

Rahul:mom bhai kaha hai?
Ananya:wo to subh se dikha hi nahi.
Muskaan:ha mujhe bhi nahi dikhe bhai.
Anuraag:bhai mere bete ko kaun chura ke le gaya...??

All started laughing but riddhima was upset,she is happy for armaan that he will get his love soon,but sad for herself...she is lossing him forever.

Muskaan:rizdi mere room me chal na.mujhe thoda kaam hai.
Riddhima:ha chal.

They go to RM's room.in the hall all are sitting and talking.

Ananya:ye riddhima ko kya hua aj? Itni shant q hai.roz to itna hasti rehti hai.
Anuraag:preshan hogi...
Rahul:mom ap tension mat lo.wo muskaan k sath gai hai na.haste huye hi aaegi.

In RM's room

Muskaan:kya hua ridzi,kafi tensed lag rahi.is everything alright??
Riddhima:(with fake smile) ha muski.all ok.bas mom ki yad aa rh hai.ek week se unhe dekha nahi na.chal niche.bhot kaam hai.aur party ki tyari bhi karni hai na.
Muskaan:ha yaarrr.mai to bhul hi gai thi.chal chal.

They goes down and sits with other doing work.after sometime door bell rings.Rahul opens the door. Shashank,padma and Anjali has come.

Rahul:(touching their feets)namastey aunty,namastey uncle.

They comes in where all are sitting.Everyone wishes them.Atul takes anjali's hand and ask her to sit with him

Padma:socha aj itna bada din hai,thodi help hum bhi kar de.
Shashank:ha aur phr kitne din ho gaye humari bacchiyo ko bhi to nh dekha
(opening his arm for Riddhima and Muskaan)

They comes and hug him.

Atul:ye acha hai papa,sara pyar betiyo ko.aur hume kuch bhi nahi..(making a sad face)
Padma:tum apni maa ke pass aa jao.
Rahul:awww..

(showing thumb to muskaan)

Then Riddhima goes and hugs padma and start crying.

Riddhima:i missed u mamma..
Padma:are Riddhu,ro q rh hai.chal shant ho ja.mai aa gai na.sshhh.

After sometime they all are sitting in hall having fun.Anjali is in RM's room with Atul.he wants to spend some time with his wifey alone.
All are asking for Armaan but he is nowhere to be seen.his mobile is in room but he is not.After sometimes he comes from outside.all together start asking questions except riddhima.she is looking down and doing or typing a messege. He looks at her very lovingly and smiles.

Armaan:ok.now sab shant ho jao.mai bahar kuch kam se gaya tha.

Saying so he goest to his room and sleeps.

AFTERNOON

Everyone is sitting at the dining table to have lunch.
Padma:are armaan nazar nahi aa raha? Riddhima Beta jao use laao.

Riddhima very slowly going to his room thinking.

Riddhima:Aj armaan apne pyar ka izahaar karne wala hai,aur wo ladki ha kahegi.kaun Armaan ko mana kar skta hai.aur phr wo to us ladki ko jaan se b jyada chahta hai.phr wo ladki na jane mujhse armaan ko bat bhi karne degi ya nahi.wo mujhe usse milaega.mai kaise armaan ko kisi aur k sath dekh paugi.mujhe himmat do bhagwaan jee.

She knocks the door but no response so she opens the door and see Armaan sleeping bare shirt showing his well toned muscular body.how can a girl resist him she thought.he was sleeping on his stomach.his hair was messed and face was glowing with a million dollar smile.he was happy from heart mind and soul and was dreaming about her.
She hesitantly went near the bed

Riddhima:(looking down)Armaan...Armaan...

He didn't woke up so she went near him and was about to shout in his ears when he turned that makes her fall on him becoz of the sudden jerk.she was on him half lying,her head on his chest near his heart and hair falling of her face and some on his chest.she can clearly hear his heartbeats and wants to spend her whole life doing that.

He opens his eyes feeling little weight on himself and smiles seeing her in that position.
She tries to get up but again misbalances and falls.she is feeling very shy due to the close proximity they are sharing.Armaan moves his hand on her face and puts her hairs behind her ears.They share a beautiful eyelock looking in each other to find love of their life.she is so beautiful he thought.he is so handsome she thought..

Their eyelock breaks when from down muskaan calls their name to have food.She got up from the bed and ran down to hide the embarassement and blush.he smiles sheepishly thinking about their closeness and wants to spend his whole life like that. then he too got up wearing his T-shirt went down.

In the evening,the whole mansion was glowing with the lightings and the fragrence of flowers.the guest started coming.Anuraag was attending the guest with ananya.and shashank was with padma talking to their business friends.Rahul and atul after checking all the arrangements were looking upstairs waiting for their lovely wives.All were busy partying.Riddhima came with nikki.abhi saw her and commented "beautiful" looking her in a pink churidaar..she blushed.Anjali and Muskaan came down after sometime.both Rahul and Atul were out of the world for sec to see their wives who are looking beautiful.Anjali was wearing a blue saree with sleevless blouse,matching jwelleries and little make up..while muskaan was wearing white net saree showing her perfect figure with big ear-rings and a small mangalsutra,with beautiful make up.

Rahul:(holding her hand and pulling closer)u looking sexy Muskaan.

She blushed and went to riddhima who was busy searching Armaan.where is he yaar.

All the guest arrived.everyone enjoying the party.many people asking for armaan,but he is not there in the party.

After some minutes,lights are gone.and one spot light is flashing on the stairs.And there he is,wearing a casual blue jeans,black T-shirt and grey blazer looking smoking hot and sexy holding a guitar.All the girls were dying to see him and the only girl he wanted to see was standing in the corner losing all hopes and sacrifice her love so that he can be happy.he comes down playing a soft music with the guitar and came in the centre of the hall.he was searching for someone,where is she? Where is she.yaa.there,standing with her friend wearing a beautiful black saree with broad red border and a red full sleeves blouse with deep back and saree showing her perfect curves and matching jwelleries with very light make up looking totally breath taking.its very hard for him to move eyes from her tonight.
He takes the mike and announce.

Armaan-hello ladies and gentlemen, aj meri life ka bhot special day hai.Malliks ko ek aur deal mil gai,but ye deal hume ek bhot hi special person ke karan mili hai."Riddhima"(she looks up with shock)yes riddhima its becoz of u.ofcourse humari team ne bhot mehnat ki hai,i thank to each one of you.and i m glad to have u with me.thankx to all.(all claps)guys mai aj bhot khush hu,not only becoz of the deal but their's another reason too.(listening this she looks down and is lost)but wo reason mai ap sabko nahi bata sakta but but but aj ap sab armaan mallik ka ek naya roop dekhoge.meri family k alawa koi nahi janta ki mai gana gata hu.to aj mai gaauga,(looking at riddhima,who is looking everywhere but not to him)for someone very special...

And he start singing looking at her
(guys i just love this song from alone.)


Chand aasmano se laapata ho gaya,
(playing the guitar.looking at her)
Chal ke mere ghar mein aa gaya, aa gaya
Main khush kismat hoon bakhuda is tarah
Ho jaye puri ek duaa jis tarah

(passing the guitar to someone and going near her extendind hand infront of her to dance,and how can she deny such a beautiful offer,she gave her hand to him)

Tere bin meri jaana kabhi
Ek pal bhi guzaara nahi

(coming to the dance floor where RM,AA,AN and some more couple dancing)

Teri aarzoo ne khud se begaana kar diya..
(keeping her hand in his shoulder,and putting his hand in her bare waise,making current passing through her spine)

Chand aasmano se laapata ho gaya,
Chal ke mere ghar mein aa gaya aa gaya
(they are moving together,dancing very perfectly)

Maine tujhe tohfe mein ye dil diya
Tune mujhe badle mein ye jahaan diya
Main hi jaanu,tu hi jaane jo hai darmiyaan
Tujhse hai meri jaana ghar ye aashiyaan.

(their eyes are fixed on each other,sharing a perfect bond of love)

Tere bin meri jaana kabhi
Ek pal bhi guzaara nahi
Teri aarzoo ne khud se begaana kar diya..

Chand aasmano se laapata ho gaya

Chal ke mere ghar pe aa gaya aa gaya.


All are very happy to see AR dancing together.they enjoying their every moves.
The song ends.Armaan is still holding her very delicately yet protectively and they are lost in each other.everyone claps and they comes out of the trance... Riddhima is still lost in the moment and Armaan still holding her by waist moves aside,coming close to her ears.

Armaan:thodi der me terrace pe aao.i want u to meet someone very special.jaldi aana.mai wait kruga.




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Edited by megha_kajen - 10 years ago

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