AR FF- BAN GAYE HO TUM MERE KHUDA(PMs Later) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
It's an amazing story. I have read it in dmg blog too. I really liked it. U r an awesome writer. Thank you so much for giving us wonderful stories
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
hey christu
i know baby i m late as always but kya karu i was really busy with something nd stuck in it
ok now coming to the part its superb yaar
i really loved nd adore armaan love for ridhz seriously just lovely
then ar moments are really sweet nd cute
loved how armaan make ridhz smile
nd they both become friends now
loved hiw happy nd excited armaan is to meet ridhz nd to go to her home
loved muskaan bond with Gupta's
loved how armaan at last make ridhz smile with his talk
really cute nd adorable part yaar
now i want to read more continue soon dear
for now
bye love u tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: gaurikajen

superb part

chalo ar friends to banne
post next part soon


thanx gauri m glad u liked it...
yaa i'll do soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Amazing part ...
Armaan waiting to meet his lady love :)
Shanky ,rahul , anjie , anurag ne AR ko saath mein witness kia ...they noticed d spark between them !
Matlab now they'll get married soon :)
Hope riddhima is able to forget her past and move on !!
Continue next part asap !!

Thnxx for pm :))



hey nazz

m glad u loved the part and Ar getting maried so soon...
not possible but lets see...k aage kya hota hai ;)

till then enjoy :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: tacker_karan

Very nice part

armaan n ridhima atleat
became friends
Waiting fr dere parents to do something more



hey thanx dear for commenting :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

wow..awsumm part..
armaan Riddhima becoming frnds..n now SB chahte h unki shaadi ..
continue soon


thanx nikki for commenting...
m glad u liking it :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: kajenlife

nice update

now AR have became friends
even their family want them to see together
continue soon


thanx dear :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zarakhanarlover

It's an amazing story. I have read it in dmg blog too. I really liked it. U r an awesome writer. Thank you so much for giving us wonderful stories


thanx dear for apperiaciating 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: palakajenian

hey christu
i know baby i m late as always but kya karu i was really busy with something nd stuck in it
ok now coming to the part its superb yaar
i really loved nd adore armaan love for ridhz seriously just lovely
then ar moments are really sweet nd cute
loved how armaan make ridhz smile
nd they both become friends now
loved hiw happy nd excited armaan is to meet ridhz nd to go to her home
loved muskaan bond with Gupta's
loved how armaan at last make ridhz smile with his talk
really cute nd adorable part yaar
now i want to read more continue soon dear
for now
bye love u tc


achha chal its okk..i understand..

hehehehe...glad u adore armaan for the love he has for ridhzz...

yaa i'll do post soon :D

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Posted: 10 years ago
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BAN GAYE HO TUM MERE KHUDA
PART4

After dinner,Malliks were ready to go home except Muskaan. She is going to stay with riddhima today as she needs to know the reason behind riddhima's sadness. Riddhima can hide her pain with everyone,but with muskaan,it was impossible n yes ofcourse with Armaan too.They know each other in n out. After Mallik's went,everyone was on their bed. Muskaan was with Riddhima lying on the bed.

Muskaan: chal ab bol kya bat hai jo tujhe preshan kr rahi hai.??
Riddhima:(frightened)tu.,tujhe kaise pata mai pareshan hu?
Muskaan: meri shadi ho gai iska ye matlb nh ki mai apni best friend ke man ki bat nh janti.chal bol jaldi..

That was enough for Riddhima to remember all her past again which she was trying to forget. She was eagerly waiting for Muskaan to talk to her and she can pour her heart infront of her. She herself was not able to go and tell her as she didn't told muskaan about her being in relation with someone for more than 5 months.

Riddhima:(looking down)maine tujhse ek bhot badi bat chupai hai muski. mai tujhe btana chahti thi par mauka hi nahi mila.(she looks up to muskaan who ask her to continue. So she start telling her.)mai 6 month phle ek project pe kam kar rh thi.

FLASHBACK

Riddhima is sitting with a guy with fair complex n and good looking features. Modi & sons.co.Ltd. has offered a deal to design some dresses to Riddhima. So she is here to sign the deal.
Riddhima: hello Mr.Modi.Mai Riddhima gupta.
Guy: hie Ms.Gupta.we have heard alot about ur designs and wanted to work with u.can u start with the presentation plz
Riddhima: ya sure.

She starts the presentation. Nikita is with her helping with the project. The guy is impressed with the presentation as it ends.

Guy: so ms.Gupta.i liked ur presentation very much n would love to work with u.

Riddhima is very happy listening to this and hugs Nikita.

Riddhima: me too Mr.Modi.
Guy: now as we have signed a deal,plz be free and stop calling me Mr.Modi.I have a name u know.
Riddhima: nope.U never told ur name(laughing)
Guy: siddhant,bande ko Siddhant kehte hai. aap chahe to sid bula skti hai.
Riddhima: hmm.nam to acha hai,i'll ok with sid.my name is (she was cut in between)
Guy: Riddhima.bhot pyara nam hai bilkul aap hh tarh.par mai apko ridz bulauga.
Riddhima: ok.

And with the deal their friendship grew more. Soon sid started falling for Riddhima. when he realize it he propose her infront of Nikita in a very filmy style. he was in his kneel carrying a ring and a flower. Riddhima was first confuse but later she accepted his proposal. they went for dates,movies,shopping.but sid never announce their relation. He nor takes Riddhima to meet his parents n niether he went with her to her parents when she asked.Months went like this but he never take any initiative for their relation. Riddhima has already asked her a lots of time that her parents are searching for a guy.but he never reacted.

One day

Sid comes to meet riddhima in a garden on her demand.she told him that her parents want her to marry ASAP.

Riddhima:(angrily)sid plz ya to tum apni family se bat kro ya phr shayad mujhe kisi aur se shadi karni hogi..

This was her anger which she thought maybe will make sid understand and he will do something.but but but she was unknown to the faced that her world is going to shatter the very next moment.

Sid: mai tumhe kuch btana chahta hu ridz.jo bat aaj tk maine tumse chupai hai.(Riddhima just looks at him and he continues)meri shadi fix ho chuki hai Riddhima.maine maa ko humare bare me btaya.aur wo meri shadi tumse nh karna chahti.aur tum to janti ho na ki mai maa ki bat nh tal sakta.mujhe ye karna hoga riddhima,mai maa ki bat nh tal sakta.

Saying so he looks at riddhima who was by now in pool of tears.she has never in her dreams thought that someone will hurt her so badly. She stands up and walks out of garden.
After some days she called sid to make things clear

Riddhima: sid plz kya tum ek bar humare liye try bhi nahi kar sakte.ek bar aunty se bat to kro
Sid: I am sorry ridz,I m really very sorry. Mai apni life me aage bad chuka hu aur kuch din bad meri shadi hai.mujhe bhool jao aur apni life me aage bado.bye ridz.aj se humare raste bhot alag hai.

It was so easy for him to speak but for Riddhima,no.she was dying each and every second with the fact that she has loved someone who can't stand for their love.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Telling all this Riddhima was crying very badly and Muskaan was consoling her.

Muskaan: bas ridzi bas.shant ho ja.us nikamme ke liye tu q apne aasu barbad kar rh hai

Listening this Riddhima remembers Armaan's words and she smiles faintly.Muskaan ask her to forget that jerk and move on in life.she has already abused him from core of her heart and asked Riddhima to do the same so she will feel better.and actually it worked. Riddhima was feeling much better than before.they were talking all the night about one or the other thing when she asked.

Riddhima: are haa muski.ye armaan hmesha itne sweet hai ya kabhi kabhi?
Muskaan: Bhai to hamesha se hi aise hai.wo kabhi jaldi free nh hote.mujhse to starting me bat b nh karte the jyada.phr khud hi friendly bhi ho gaye.pata hai,wo mujhe apni behan mante hai.
Riddhima: hmm unki koi girlfriend nh hai kya.?
Muskaan: u will not believe it yar,bhai ne aj tak kam k alawa kabhi ladkiyo se bat bhi nh ki.he is too shy yar...
Ridhhima: kitne sharmile hai, hahahaha grin emoticon grin emoticMuskaan:ha-ha-ha-ha.(laughing in her own manner)Par tu aj itna bhai k bare me q puch rh hai? Kahi tujhe bhai pasand to nh hai

Riddhima:(patting muskaan's head)tu bhi na muski.kuch b bakti rhti hai.aisa kuch nh hai.
They talk for some time and sleep.


While on the other side the drive back to Mallik mansion was very difficult for Armaan.his mom dad was in Rahul's team teasing him all the way.

Rahul: mom Riddhima kitni achi ladki hai na.jo b usse shadi karega kitna lucky hoga na.(listening this armaan first smiles then frowns when he understands that Rahul is teasing him.)
Ananya:(winking at Rahul)ha beta.Armaan tu bhi aisi hi ladki dhundh apne liye.(Ananya is happy with armaan's choice but yet Armaan has not told anyone about.he knows that his mom is teasing him too.)
Anuraag: are bhai,humara Armaan to isse bhi achi ladki layega apne liye.hai na Armaan??
Listening to this Armaan quickly answers..

Armaan: nahi.Riddhima se achi aur koi ladki ho hi nh sakti.she is the best in the world for me.

All laugh hearing this and Armaan bits his tounge as he has foolishly said what they all wanted to hear..All the Malliks were happy.

Anuraag: beta tum chaho to mai shashank se bat karta hu.
Armaan: nahi dad.mai riddhima ko kisi b tarike se force nh karna chahta hu.phle mai usk dil me apne liye jagh bana lu phr hum bat aage badayege.
Rahul: hm hm hm...bhai ap to bade chupa rustam nikale.mujhe to laga tha apko romance aata hi nh isliye aj tak koi ladki nh patai,par aap to mere bhi baad nikale(n the next moment he got a smack on his head).

Ananya and Anuraag was happy to see Armaan so changed an wants to win his love with his own will. Armaan was happy that no one from hi family has oppose him. Rahul was happy as he knows that whoever girl will marry his bhai will be the luckiest girl in the world.


Part ends
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