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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: palakajenian

hmm interesting ...
par pta nah mujhe yeh kyn lag rha h ki maine yeh story padhi hui h *pout*
yeh story pehle bhi post hui h kya ???
hmm but anyways story par ate h
hmm so ridhz is going from a heartbreak phase i mean bechari ka dil tod diya kisi ne tch tch
so armaan loves ridhz from 2 yrs but is afraid of rejection
are itne handsome ladke ko kaun reject karega
loved ridhz nd muskaan bonding
poor ridhz feeling bad for her
loved how armaan got concerned seeing ridhz like that
hmm i loved to read this story more mujhe lagta h maine yeh story shayad padhi h par yaad nah araha
aree yaar
anyways shayad age padhke pta chalega
anyways thanks for the pm
loved the story as well as concept
its really cool


hhmmm...intresting toh hai...
but u haven't read it anyhwere...

*narrowing eyes*

haann...good come to story..

yaaa bechari Ridhz is going through heartbreak...
nd yaa Armaan loveds her since 2 years..
hehhee...
glad k tu itne se part me Muski ridhaz ki bond samajh gyai...
hahahhaaha


shut upn Palaku
ahhahhahaa...

luv u loads
muahh :*

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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: tacker_karan

Aesm start

lv armaan already...I knw he l b d best



thanx dear...
m glad u liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Heyyy Chrispyyy...
dekho dekho maine kaha ta na main zarur aaungiii...
Teri Ruhi tujhe kuch promise kare, actually woh kissi koh bhi promise kare toh woh nibate hai...
Ab tum bhi believe karte ho na teri Ruhi jo bolti hai woh karti hai hehehe...
Chalo meri bakwaas toh hoti rehti hai...
Part ke baare mein tohda baat hojae...

Waise toh I just love the starting...
Main hamesha se hi yeh FF padna chaahti ti but was too lazy to search in FB as u have post many parts in there...
Ab I guess megs is posting it here, toh Megs darling tu please zyada time mat laga post karne mein samjhi na... Nehi toh tujhe bohot acche se WA pe ya FB messenger pe main samjhadungi hehehe...

Oh ho, see main phirse story koh chod ke idar udar ke baate karne lage hehehe...
Okey now starting se batati hoon kaisa laga hai mujhe...
Starting was nice but yeh kiya, heroine koh shuru se ro la rahi ho tum...
Wonder why she is crying, Aur mujhe toh pakka yakeen hai yeh Ridz hi hai...
Ab isko kisne dokha diyaaa??? I so hope not some basturd called Siddhant or whatever hehehe...

Oh no, yeh toh faint hogaye...
Arey wah, yeh toh hero ke car ke saamne jaakhe faint huvi hai...
Accha huva hero aagaye apne heroine koh sambhalne...
Hero heroine koh nehi jaanenge toh kon jaanenge right...
Arey wah Hero toh seedha usko arms mein utaya aur apne car pe leita diya...
Phir seedhe ghar poch gaye apne heroine koh lekar...

ab Hero toh pareshan hoga na apne heroine koh behosh dekh kar...
Muski is Ridz cousin, wow thats so nice...
Rahul is Armaan brother, not bad...
Accha hai sabne Ridz koh pehchaan liya, maine kaha ta na heroine hi hai aur heroine toh humhare Ridz hi haina...
Aur Hero Armaan hi hoga, aur koh Ridz uff heroine ke hero ho hi nehi sakte...
Lekin pata nehi yeh ladki kis kamine ke baare mein soch ke apne mothi jaise aansu waste kar rahi hai...
Hayye, hero koh bohot dukh huva heroine koh sad dekh ke... Kyun nehi after all uske lambe umar ke liyeh khushi ke liyeh dua jo maangte hai woh...

Arey wah, yaha toh hero heroine se doh saal se pyar karte hai...
Aur ghar main aisa koi hai jo jaanti hai Armaan Ridz se pyar karte hai...
When Ridz came back to sense and Muski shoot her with so many questions hehee...
I so love this Muski, always bubble and happy go...
Awww Ridz and Muski hugging each other while Muski scold Ridz for not taking care, it was so cute sistery bonding...

Hero ke chehre pe finally smile aagaya heroine ke chehre pe smile dekh ke...
Lekin yeh kiya, hero koh pata chala woh fake hai, uske aankhon main dard hai...
Wah wah, yeh hai dil se dil ka connection hehehe...
After spending time with Muski and Mallik's , Riddhima take leave from there...
Oh ho, jab hero hai toh heroine koh Rahul ke saat jaane koan denge right hehehe...
Accha huva Rahul bohot busy ta, ab hero heroine saat saat...
Wow, so Ananya knows her son has a soft corner in his heart for Ridz...
So hope Ananya would bring them together and make Ridz realized Armaan is the one for her not that basturd who hurt and leave her...

Super awesome starting Chrispyyy...
Maine toh bohottt enjoy ki...
Ab is megs ke bol ke jaldi jaldi next part update karwao if u want the comment okey hehehe...
Muwaahhh <3 Love u...

I know ab teri chehre pe bhi bada wala smile hoga...
As maine promise kiya, meri comment tu kabhi nehi bhulenge... Bhulne main dungi tab bhulenge na tu hahaha...
Bhul bhi gaye toh tension not, main hoon na yaad dilane ke liyeh...
Chalo ab milte hai next part ke comment mein okeyyy...
TATA, CYAAA <3




oh...bhai saab itni lambi comment...
hehehehhee


haaan...kyun ni...
u r such a buzy person ni...
hhhuummppp...
*pout*

hahahahaaa...
voh toh aap already samjha chuke rihoo ;)


haaan pehle hi rula diya...
hhahahhaaa

lets see k voh kon hai...
jisne ridhz ko rulayaa..

ahhhahaa...
ab faint hui toh aiwee thode kisi k bhi car k saamne hogi..
hero ki ccar k saamne hogi naa

yo..ek dum right...


hhehehee...
for a change
muski bhi sis hai ridhz ki



so toh hai..
heroine beemar ho aur heo upset na ho...
aisa toh ho hi ni sakta..

haan...kar ri hun update...
shanti rakho thodi...

kuch mimto mein kar dungi...

hhhuummpp...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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BAN GAYE TUM MERE KHUDA
Part 2

Armaan is waiting for riddhima in his car as she is being pampered by Ananya n Muskaan. Both the ladies giving her instructions like she is a kid going school for the very first day. Armaan enjoying the scene.
Muskaan(hugging Riddhima):Apna dhyan rakhna ridzi.aur haa time pe khana khaiyo.
Ananya: Aaram se jao beta.aur yaha jab bhi man kare aate rhna.

Listening this Armaan looks at his mom who grin at him. He is in heven now as according to him things are going correct.
Riddhima comes and sit on the front sit.She bids bye to Muskaan N Ananya.Muskaan is worried for Riddhima because she knows that something is there that is untold to her n she has to know.

The ride to home was very quiet for AR.He was stealing glances from her and she never noticed it as she was busy thinking n lost in her thoughts.He thought to break the silence.

Armaan: hmm Riddhima??
Riddhima: hmmm...ha boliye?
Armaan: Ap thik to hai na. I mean kuch preshan lag rh h ap.Is everything OK??
Riddhima:(tensed)Ha ha sb...sb thik hai.

She felt foolish of herself to show him the emotions so clearly but the thing she was not knowning was that Armaan can read her face and eyes.
He droped her safe and went his office.

IN OFFICE

Armaan was going through a file but was not able to concentrate on his work. All the time his was in her thoughts. Lots of questions were there who's answer only she can give.But he is not that friendly to her to ask her anything. He was lost in the meeting also. Rahul has never seen his Bhai so lost. Whatever the problem is but he concentrates.So to check whether everything is fine he comes to Armaan's cabin where Armaan is just turning the pages without even glancing at it.

Rahul:Bhai?..(no responce)bhai?..(shaking him)bhaiii...???
Armaan: ha...hmm...ha Rahul bol tu kab aaya?
Rahul: Jab ap apne khayalo ki Mallika me khoye the??
Armaan: (glaring)Rahoool.
Rahul: ok ok ok.sorry.Ab btao kya hua.Ap aj itne khoye q ho? Kahi international conference me koi pasand to nahi aa gai?
Armaan: chup kar saale.apne jaisa socha hai kya.jyada bakbak mat kar nahi to Muskaan ko bata duga tere secret affairs.phr sona rat me akele...
Rahul: bhai ye acha hai. jab dekho tab blackmail krte rhte ho. acha btao how was the conference?
Armaan: conference was good.but tere aur Atul k bina bore ho gaya tha yar..
Rahul: isliye hum bolte hai shadi kr lo bhai.kabhi bore nh hoge.

And the next moment he ran out of the cabin to save his head.

Armaan:(to himself)shadi to karuga Rahul.bas uski ek haa ka intazaar hai.


RIDDHIMA'S BOUTIQUE

Riddhima is working on some dress but she is all blank. She don't know what she is doing.
Her co-worker and a very good friend Nikita Malhotra is observing her for a long time.

Nikita:kya hua ridzi? Kya soch rh hai?
Riddhima: kuch nh bas soch rh hu ki aisa kya kiya hai maine jiski itni badi saza de rha hai wo mujhe.
Nikita:tu q bar bar use yad karti rhti hai yar.wo to apni life me aage bad chuka hai. tujhe bhul b chka hai phir tu q usk liye apne ap ko saza de rh hai. aage bad ridzi. u deserve much better than him who will love u n do anything for u.just think.

Saying so nikita moves to do her work leaving riddhima in a train of thoughts

"Mujhe ye karna hoga riddhima.mai maa ka dil nh tod skta."
"meri shadi kr rha hu ridz.us ladki se jisse maa chahti hai."
"Mujhe bhool jao aur apni life me aage bado ridz.I am sorry,really very sorry."

All his words echoes in her mind as her worse nightmare has come true.but she is oblivious to the fact or we can say never paid attension that someone in this world loves her truely and madly.He is always with her and will always be till his last breath..

Do tell hws the part...


LOVE
Chris
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Nice part ...
Riddhima should forget that jerk and move ahead ..
Armaan is totally lost in thinking about ridz :)

Continue asap !!
Thnxx for pm !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Lovely update. Ridhima had some past hope she get over from it soon. Armaan is already in love with her
Thank you so much for the pm. Continue soon n do pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Nice update :)
I hope Riddhima falls for Armaan soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
yo another
megs ki bachi mujhe yaad agaya where i read the story
but yaar yeh story maine puri nah padhi *pout*
thanks to u ab i can read it complete
hmm now coming to this part
its superb nd very emotional too
loved armaan love for ridhz
loved how he got to know her inner turmoil by seeing her face
lol omg loved how ananya nd muski pampered ridhz
armaan nd rahul office cute moment is really cute
then ridhz so her past is revealed
haww poor ridhz feel so bad for her
sid he is disgusting
how could he do this to her
but acha hua chod diya armaan h na vo sambhal lega use *wink*
chal ab main chali
will come again with a new comment
when u post next part
ao agar comment chahiye to jaldi post kar
ok bye
love u tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: megha_kajen




oh...bhai saab itni lambi comment...
hehehehhee


haaan...kyun ni...
u r such a buzy person ni...
hhhuummppp...
*pout*

hahahahaaa...
voh toh aap already samjha chuke rihoo ;)


haaan pehle hi rula diya...
hhahahhaaa

lets see k voh kon hai...
jisne ridhz ko rulayaa..

ahhhahaa...
ab faint hui toh aiwee thode kisi k bhi car k saamne hogi..
hero ki ccar k saamne hogi naa

yo..ek dum right...


hhehehee...
for a change
muski bhi sis hai ridhz ki



so toh hai..
heroine beemar ho aur heo upset na ho...
aisa toh ho hi ni sakta..

haan...kar ri hun update...
shanti rakho thodi...

kuch mimto mein kar dungi...

hhhuummpp...


Kyun megs, tujhe bhi toh long comment deti hoon na...
Ab tu has mat okey, jab kuch bohot pasand hoti hai toh sab acche acche long comment hi denge na...

Accha hai tujhe pata hai main kitni busy rehti hoon hehehe...
Ab humpp and pout meri saamne mat kar...
Koi asar karne wali nehi mujhpe u know na heheh...

Of course of course...
Main toh bohot intelligent and smart hoon...
Issiliyeh toh samajh gayi heeheee...

I know, kitni gandi hai yh Chrispy...
Heroine koh toh abhi se rola diya...

Actually na, mujhe pata chal gaya woh koan ta...
Pehle toh mujhe tohda tohda hint ti Us KAMINA hoga...
Aur yaha toh abhi shuru huva hai toh mujhe na wait nehi huva...
Tujhe toh pata haina kaha iske parts mil sakte hai hehee...

Of course of course...
Aise tohdina kissi ke car ke saamne woh behosh hogi...
After all woh heroine hai yaar... hehehe...

Wah, i m right...
See maine kaha na main intelligent and smart hoon haahahha...

Thats nice, I love Muski hehehe...
Uske wajahse toh hasne koh milte hai nehi toh dekho heroine toh zyada waqt rote hai :P

Yeah Heroine bimar ho toh hero koh fikar hoga na...
Hayye, shaanti kaha se laun main... :P
Oh u mean woh wali shanti hehehe, mujhe laga shanti jo ghar mein maid hote haina :P

Wah tu ne post kardiya... Muwaahhh love you...
No humppp hahaha take care <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Heyyy Chrispyyy...
dekho dekho main phirse aagayi hoon hahahaha...
I know u love the previous comment so main phirse aagayi comment karne...

Chalo ab part ke baare mein tohda baat karte hai...
As usual it was awesome part... I m so loving this story...
Ek baat bolun Chrispy, maine tumse baat karne se pehle (means in our crazy grup) teen chaar baar yeh story dekha ek page mein...
I wanted to read it after seeing the name...
Lekin main bohot lazy ti us waqt issiliyeh maine na kissi koh poocha iske part dene koh na kabhi try ki padne ki but maine toh socha ek din zarur padungi :)

Chalo yeh idar udar ke baate chodke story ke baare mein baat karte hai heheh...
Haan toh Armaan was waiting for Riddhima...
Wah kiya baat hai, Armaan ke dil mein toh laddu phut raha hai woh apne lover ke saat tohdi der akele hone koh mila...
Uff Ridz toh apne dhuniya mein kho yi hai...
Love their small conversation...
Ridz felt foolish to show her emotions but she didn't know everyone knows it but few does and in that few now Armaan is also added...

Bechara Armaan, Ridz se milne ke baad toh usko kaam mein mann bhi nehi laga...
Woh toh har waqt Ridz ke baare mein soch raha hai...
Arey wah, the workaholic guy is thinking to be friends with Ridz and make place in her heart...
Wonder how he would do that...

Hahaha yaha Armaan Ridz ke baare mein soch rahi hai aur Rahul came and tease Armaan...
Bechara Rahul, uske teasing toh back fire hogaye...
Armaan toh usko dhamki de diya woh Muski koh uske affairs ke baare mein bata denge hahaha...
Phir Bhi Rahul ne jaane se pehle tease kiya... hahaha...
Kyun nehi , after all bhai toh Armaan ka haina...

Hayye, Armaan koh ab shaadi bhi karna hai...
Kyun nehi, uske dil ke malika toh mil gayi na ;) haan bas uske haan ka inthizaar hai Armaan koh...

Ek jhaga Armaan Ridz ke bare mein soch raha hai aur Ridz woh kamine ex boyfriend ke baare mein...
Love the way Niks make Ridz understanding knowing Ridz so called ex bf has move on while Ridz was crying for that stupid moron bloody idiot guy...

True love can't be forgotton but yeh true love bhi nehi hai...
Armaan ek din yeh baat Ridz koh samjhaenge... I m sureee ;)

It was awesome part Chrispy...
AR little moment in the beginning of the part...
Armaan thinking about Ridz and Rahul came and tease him...
Their moment was fun to read...
And end mein Niks making Ridz understanding asking to move on...
Hope soon Ridz would realized that that kamina wasn't mean to be for her...

Love it and love you more Chrispyyy...
Take care muwaahhh <3
Continue super soon :D

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