New asya SS - mr.khan , are you jealous?

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tanisha

@ninja_tanisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

HEY!! I'M NEW OVER HERE... MY NAME IS TANISHA AND U CAN CAN CALL ME "TANU"

CHAPTER - 1

asad - miss. farooqui ... aapko 7:00 pm baje ke pehle ghar aana tha.. and abhi 9:00pm baj rhe hain...

zoya - mr.khan, wo toh mujhe bhi pata hai 9:00pm baj rhe hain.. meine phupi ko bata diya tha ki 9:00pm. btw.,where is phupi and najma?

asad - wo relative ke ghar gye hain.!

zoya - Okay... phupi n najma bhi naa kaise boring insaan ke saath chod gye ...

asad - kya kaha aapne?

zoya - aapko suna nahi? ear thik hain?? mein aapko BORING insaan kaha..!!

asad - whatever..

after '10 min..

zoya - mr. khan wo..

asad interupputed.

asad - aapko kitni baar bola hai, knock karke aane ko...!

zoya - mr.khan aap apna door band karke rakha kijiye

and she smiled..

asad - boliye kya kaam hai?

zoya - mr.khan , I'm really hungry..

asad - so?

zoya - toh aap mere liye kuchh bana ke layiye...

asad - aap khud bana lijiye..

zoya - u are so selfish..!! i'll manage

asad - that's good...!

zoya - hey! mark, what's up?

and she goes to her room..

asad's p.o.v.

who is mark?.. hoga koi miss farooqui jaisa pagal..! who do i care?

end of asad's P.O.V.

scene shifted to zoya's room

zoya - mark, i'm really hungry...meine morning se kuchh bhi nahi khaya(as she was upset) so ... agar tum mere liye... kuchh la do..

mark - zoe.. waise bhi jabse aaya hun apni bestie se toh mila hi nahi!! I'm coming zoe..

( mark is zoya's bestie from newyork n wo aaj hi india aaya hai..!)

mark rang the bell...

asad(in mind) - iss waqt kon aaya hoga? jaake dekhta hun..

asad - miss, farooqui..where are u going?

zoya - mr.khan.. wo mark aaya hai..use hi darwaja kholne jaa rhi hun..itna kaafi hai .. yaa aur batun..?

zoya opened the door...

and hugged mark tightly..and kissed him on his right cheek

mark - zoe i missed youu...!

zoya - but i didn't missed you..

mark - really?

zoya - nope! i was joking..

mark - that was not funny!!

zoya - i know..

asad came..

asad - miss farooqui, ammi kya chali gyi 2 din ke liye.. toh aapne yeh sab shuru kardiya...!.. ?( yes!! he was jealous of mark)

zoya - mr.khan.. mind your tongue..

asad - who is mark?

zoya - that's none of your business..!

asad - sidha - sidha boliye ki wo aapka bf hai..

mark - man. .. pls calm down..

asad pushed mark...

mark - zoe.. pls take it,, and bye.. I'm leavin'

zoe was followin' him

zoya - mark, wait... pls.. mark...

mark started walking on road..

and a car was about to hit him

zoya saved him... but injured herself.

asad shouted - miss farooqui...

mark - zoya, zoya! open your eyes...! zoe..!!!

asad - miss farooqui...!! wake up!!...

both had tears in their eyes...

mark - mr.khan , hospital chaliye..

in hospital

asad - it's all your fault..!! agar tum car ke saamne naa aata toh yeh nahi hota..!

mark - phir toh aapki galti hai, mein aapki wajah se kv se bahar gya tha!!

mark - and u know what.. she is my bestie not my gf..

doc came..

mark - doc.. how is she?

doc , - calm down... she needs some rest...and she is out of danger now!

asad - kya mein unse mil sakta hun?

doc, - wait for sometime.. and unhe discharge kal shaam ko mil jayega ..

after sometime

doc - u can meet her...

mark went... and hugged zoya ...

mark - how dare you?? tumne mujhe darra hi diya tha,..!

zoya - u cried?

mark - nope!

zoya smiled..

mark - u take rest.. mein tumhare liye kuchh khaane ke liye le ke aata hun..

zoya - Okay.

asad came..

asad - miss farooqui...

zoya - aap phirse mujhe taunt maarne aa gaye..

asad - how are you feeling now?

zoya ignored asad...

mark came..

mark - zoe... eat it..,.

zoya tried to eat with left hand.. and as her ri8 hand is injured..

asad - miss farooqui, mein help...

mark interuppted..

mark - zoe, lao.. mein khilata hun...

zoya to asad - mr.khan aapne ghar ko lock kiya?

asad - yaa...

zoya - mark , your mom must be worried about you.. i think you should go..

mark - zoe but you...

zoya- see, your mom is calling you.. pls go..

mark - are u sure?

zoya - yup!

mark -take care,.. and bye!,,

zoya - bye ! :)

asad to zoya - miss farooqui.. wo,, i wanted to say

zoya - mr,khan aap jo bhi bol rhe hai mujhe kuchh nahi sun raha ... meine gaane sun rhi hun.. can't u see?

asad - miss farooqui ... listen to me once..!

zoya again ignored asad ..

asad - miss farooqui agar aapne nahi suna toh mein ghar chala jaunga..

(asad wanted to say sorry)

zoya ignored asad..

asad - fine.. i'm going home..

in car..

asad - ahh... mein ese kaise unhe akela chod ke jaa sakta hun?.. i mean ammi will kill me..! i should go back..

precap - mark - hey! zoe.. how re u feeling now?

zoya - I'm fine... mark...

mark to zoya - zoya, I...

zoya - I?...

mark - love...

zoya - love...?

SHOULD I CONTINUE??

buddy me for pm's..

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2. asya_luver

Edited by ninja_tanisha - 10 years ago

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Priya

@asya_luver

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Posted: 10 years ago

allah miyaan!!!

would love to see jealous mr.khan!!!

i won't call you tanu coz it reminds of "TANVEER" (sorry) 😳

tanisha, it's superb!!

u should continue!!

do pm me if possible!..

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Hahaha jealous asad is a treat to watch continue soon

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Jealous asad is always a treat to watch and read as well

qubool hai has given us very less of jealous asad, only some during the rajvir track and also the zoyaan marriage track

i would have loved something like this happening in the show during the track of tanveer. It would have been some comic relief but anyways really looking forward to this story

please continue soon

will be waiting impatiently 😊

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SHQ_forever

@SHQ_forever

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

😆allah miyaan , what's wrong with this girl (tanu) .. ??

😆😆

itna chottu part!!

btw it's superb!

give longer parts plss...!!

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Priya

@asya_luver

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

😊

when will u update?

Edited by asya_luver - 10 years ago

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tanisha

@ninja_tanisha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

😊

i will update tomorrow

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Nice start
Jealous asad was treat
Update soon plz
Do pm me
Thanks

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Superb 👏
Plz pm me of ur next update and add me to ur pm list
Lovn jealous wala asad
Update soon

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#10

Hey tanu

Welcome to the forum.

It's lovely n would definitely want pm for this.

I'm in for a jealous Asad..

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