manan FF: Can it be real ❤️......... part 3 pg 2

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Teaser :


nandni is a college girl. She has brother cabir they both are twins and are best friends both have one more friend manik .Three of them are in the same college .nandni is a sweet simple girl ,manik is a handsome hunk many girl's fall for him and cabir is a intelligent and fun loving guy.
nandni's longtime crush on manik has never gone anywhere .But when college queen soha set her sight on manik, he has to come up with a way to turn down... Without incurring the wrath of the most popular girl in college. A plan is hatched: nandni can pretend to be manik's girl friend . but nandni never had a real boy friend ,let alone a pretend one! Can she manage to convince everyone that she is manik's girl friend and then convince manik that they're meant to be... for real?

sorry there's no fab 5 in the story i might add in the characters later


part 1 pg 1
part 2 pg 2
part 3 pg 2
part 4 pg 3


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start...but y chudail😡
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I think it's going to be interesting... Plz continue soon
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PART 1:

It was morning now nandini is still sleeping . nandini's chachi came in to wake her up followed by her pet dog spy

spy jumped on nandini and started licking her face

.cabir was also getting ready .
chachi: nandini .. nandini come on wake up 1st day at college cabir is getting ready wake up .
nandini: plzz let me sleep
chachi: get up we have to pick up manik also he called in the morning that his bike is spoiled so can we pick him up .
as nandini heard his name she jumped out of the bed.
she took spy in her lap and started cuddling him


cabir : nandini hurry up we will be late



nandini: came down quickly took her breakfast cabir was already outside in the car pressing the horn .
cabir was driving nandini looked out side the car and remembered how they met manik

FLASH BACK :
back then manik was a new guy in town .he showed for the 1st day of 8th grade and practically made girls swoon all the way down the hall . In pre-Algebra ,second period , mr.raghav split cabir and nandini up and sat manik right in the middle between them. Nandini kept looking at cabir , thinking of thing's she wanted to tell him, but figuring it was too risky to pass a note through a stranger .The third time she looked over hoping cabir will notice mr.raghav spot her looking at manik 's hand . manik was folding a paper over and over and twisting it around .the twin's stared at him until there sitting on manik 's desk was a small origami whale that could fit in the palm of your hand .
with a studious expression , manik drew eyes and a smiley face on the whale .then he looked up and caught nandini smiling at it . she looked away quickly , embarrassed.
When she glanced down again, the whale was sitting on the corner of her desk , beaming at her .after the class she was gathering her book's , cabir leaned over to manik .
cabir : hey that was cool ! its origami, right ? can u make more stuff, too ?
nandini knew that cabir must be very interested , because he hardly talk to strangers. But once he started talking its pretty hard to make him stop.
manik : a few other thing's my dad taught me I can show u if u want ?
cabir : sure how about Saturday ?u can come for lunch
manik : don't u want to know my name before inviting me .
nandini: this is cabir my brother and I'm nandini
manik : hey m manik malhotra but friendzz call me manik
that's how they become friendzz manik could have ditched them for a more popular crowd if he'd joined a sports team or auditioned for theater ,but he like cabir's strange interests ...so they know each other and r best friendzz by then .
here she imagined that maybe one day manik would look at her and see nandini , girl of his dream's ,instead of nandini his best friends sister
she still had the whale and a beautiful necklace which manik once gifted her on her birthday she always wear it even when it doesn't go with the dress.
cabir: here this guy is late again cabir pressed the horn again and again until manik came outside rushing with his stuff


manik : sorry man really I forgot to put the alarm I was up late last night that's why hey nandini.
nandini hey manik how r u ?
manik : don't ask m hell stuck

Cabir:why what happened ?...
to be contu
precape
manik : man that soha is after me
nandini:what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Edited by zaroge - 10 years ago
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intrstng story
update soon dear
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part 2

Manik : dude last I nite I received an email from soha

dear manik ,
have u ever wondered what it would be like to date the hottest girl in college? I bet u have . I could tell u were thinking about it when I met u at our graduation ceremony. U were thinking , "if only soha would ever date me." Well, it's your lucky chance . I have decided that I need a boyfriend and here are the reasons we would be a perfect couple:
(1) our heights would match perfectly
(2) we'll be in the same class
(3) we're both cute and popular
(4) so we will be like dipika and ranveer of college.
it will be fun. So see u 2moro at the main gate so we can make an entrance together. Then I'll brief u the rules of dating soha how awesome it will be?
kisses <3
soha


nandini: oh manik !!! "how will you resist?
manik : I know yar m going to die :(


nandini: hehehehehhehehehe! She is going to be in ur class

manik : don't be so happy u r also in my class and cabir is in different class
nandini: what oh nooo!
cabir: how ever she is really hot. Like dipika, type hottt!


" ewww cabir" nandini said: smacking his shoulder.

cabir: she is . right manik ?
manik : " I guess she is ok but not my type" I think u didn't hear carefully " rules of dating soha " man I knew it I shouldn't have talked to her at that graduation.now it's going to be disaster .

Cabir: can't you just say no?
nandini: I know the answer no one can say no to soha
nandini understood exactly what manik was worried about.
manik : doomed ... (worry)
cabir : all right tell her u already have a girlfriend.
manik : like long distance? I don't think she will believe it
cabir: I don't know

Well u could just tell her that u r dating nandini.
nandini was shocked ... she was so glad like she is just going to faint (inlove)




Nandini was speechless. there was a really awkward pause, nandini wondered if she was supposed to make a joke here.
nandini started to say "AS IF..." At the same time as manik said "WELL I..." and they both stopped .

manik : what were you going to say ? he put his arms down and titled his head back to look at her
nandini: ummm, just as if she'll believe that.
cabir: why?
nandini wished manik would say something ,but he just kept looking at her .
manik : actually i think it will work .
nandini bit her tongue, she was surprised
cabir: sure it will nandini will be in ur class so soha can see you are together. And it's only a while until soha get over you. And it's not like there's anyone nandini want's to date , so u r hardly putting a dent in her love life. Right nandini?
manik : what would u say nandini? Want to be my pretend girlfriend? His eyes were like storm clouds, big and unstoppable and irresistible.

nandini : okay , nandini said feeling dizzy. I mean it'll be tough pretending to like u , but I guess I can take one for the team right?
cabir: ok let plan everything .
nandini & manik : what r we not going to college
cabir:hey u guy's college will start after 2 hour's we got ready by our school time look( cabir showed them the time)
all started laughing ...
manik : man we r so used to it that so hard to change.
nandini: exactly ...
cabir: it's good guy's at least now u can have a grand love bird entry in the college. (Cabir stopped the car near the garage so that manik can get his bike) cabir got off the car.
nandini was about to open the door when manik open the door and hold her hand and went on his knees
manik : you are my knight , my warrior princess.

He pressed her hand to his heart. she could actually feel it beating through the soft fabric of his sea green t-shirt
nandini: ok here are the rules of pretend dating nandini "you need to stop comparing me with others ( manik 4m day one used to compare nandini with royal queen and actresses because of her name and because he loved to see that irritating expression on her face )
manik : and what r the other rules ? he was still holding her hand against his chest .
nandini : that's the only one .she tell with such an innocent face I'll keep u posted as others come up.heheheheheh
manik : manik grinned. I'll look forward to it.
cabir: ok here dude ur bike is done.
nandini pulled back her hand as manik leave it to grab the key she realized that she was blushing
nandu: great ok sounds like fun. She went towards the bike "coming manik "?
manik : where my girl goes , I go
nandini glanced at his face for a while

cabir: ok guy's I'll go 1st and u guy's come together
manik : cool!
nandini: hmmm nandini was nervous.
cabir left manik and nandini were standing near the bike. Nandini was lost in her thought she was so nervous that if she couldn't do it then soha will take over manik . manik glanced at her for a while then hold her hand again.
manik : nandini it's ok if u don't want to do this I can understand. I'll find some other way for that soha

nandini: no it's ok ... I'm fine I can do it I will not let u down
manik sat on the bike nandini sat behind him manik was driving nandini hesitated to put her hand on manik 's shoulder. suddenly pressed the break nandini hold him tight they both glanced each other. A guy's pressed the horn they came back to there senses manik started driving.
to be contu...
precap:
manik : hey soha meet my love my girl friend nandini
nandini and soha shocked
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This awesome yaar...something new...do update soon
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waoo yar amazinggg

update soon 😉
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PART 3:
manik was driving .he was looking at nandini through the side mirror she was upset he knew from her expression
manik : nandu
she loved the way he say her name
nandini: yeah
manik : r u ok ? u look nervous
nandini: well u know me and new people a bad combination .
manik : u don't have to do this. If u don't want to it's ok . I'll find another way to get rid of soha
nandini: oh that ? she said with a nervous laugh .umm it's ok m not worried about that seriously its just the fear of new place and people.
manik : if u r sure . but just remember I really appreciate this.
finally they reached the collage entrance they spotted a thin tan figure in white shorts and a fitted red tee leaning against the big college sign

manik : uh.ohh
nandini felt an anvil of cold dread settle into her body .she spent so much time thinking about how will it be to be manik's girlfriend .
manik : just ignore her (giggling)
nandini: very funny(hitting him on the shoulder)

they got off the bike manik parked the bike.
soha: hi manik ( her voice was sultry . nandini always thought soha was too skinny to have a voice so low , but it made her sound like an old movie star ) she came and tried to touch manik

manik : hey soha ( how did he sounds so casual ?) this is my girl friend , nandini
nandini's hands were shaking . nandini stared at her . soha had brown curled hairs hung down on each side of her face . she kept pushing it back with one long,tan,manicured hand.
soha loved wearing red .
soha: nandini murthy. I have seen u before. she narrowed her eyes even more. I thought u moved away in taylor's college.
manik : guess not (nandini didn't respond ) lucky for me.
suddenly 4m behind them a car pulled up
navya: howdy doo! Soha a voice called it was navya.
(navya would be a perfect friend but navya was much cool to hang out with nandini. Soha had latched on to her from day one,so now navya was one of the most popular girls in school .
navya had perfect long black straight hairs, she was wearing bight red shirt and black shorts.)


navya: hey soha.
soha: navya babez u r wearing red .
navya: yeah I just bought it yesterday
soha:that's the idea red is my colour .
navya: don't worry ur highness u look more hotter than me.
soha: ( sniffed) navya, u remember manik ( she said meaningfully) this is his girl friend.
navya squinted at nandini
navyas: no way I didn't know that u guy's were dating .
nandini then had a horrible realization that if navya knows her mom will also know who is nandini's chachi's friend .but it was too late to do anything about that now .
nandini : um yeah ! its new
soha: really (rolling her eyes) when did u guys get together.
manic: ( 2 month before) nandini: ( last month ) they both said together .

soha eyebrows shot up
manik : I asked her 2 month before but she said yes last month
soha: ohhh how cute ( in killing tone )
navya: how did u asked her ( she sounded more interested than soha) was it romantic or wired)
manik :you know ( he said sensing nandini's panic.) I asked her. No big deal. We should go in shouldn't we?
soha stopped him with one hand on his chest looking straight at nandini.

soha: oh boy! Aren't we all friends . boy's never care about the details . to get the real story, you have to ask the girl. Right nandini? So tell us the details. I want to hear every single thing.
manik : it's totally boring and we'r going to be late .
soha: we still have few minutes unless there is some reason u don't want to tell this story manik
manik and nandini exchanged glances. Hers said, (she totally knows we'r lying ). his said ,( help what to do? )
nandini: (took a deep breath). Well ( she had imagined manik asking her out thousand times. So she could describe the perfect scene pretty easily)

nandini: it was Wednesday night I decided to walk spy my dog to the park on the corner . when I came out of the door manik was sitting on the door steps . he looked like he'd been waiting for a while ,he asked if he could come to the park along with me and I said sure and gave him spy's leash
soha : ur dog's name is spy?
nandini: ya me and my brother loved it and it's cool
soha: go on, so u and manik walked to the park
nandini: yeah and we let spy off the leash in the fenced area, and then we sat on the bench by the fountain.
navya: I know that fountain , wow that's romantic.
soha : navya plzzz stop interrupting.
nandini: and then he put something in my hand,(she imagined it so many times. It was real in her head.)
nandini: I looked down and it was this little oragami whale .on one side it said nandini... And when I truned it over the other side said,"... will u be my girl friend ?""
navya: OMG... that's the cutest thing I've ever heard.
soha: how could u read it in moonlight ?
nandini: oohhh come on there r lights in the park ( she looked nervously at manik 's , but she couldn't figure out the look on his face. Was he freaked out? Did he think it was wired that she had come up with a whole story so fast)

soha: ohhh well that's sweet. I don't know why u didn't wanted to tell us the story manik
soha: but nandini babezz u waited for one month.
nandini : I guess I was nervous ... I mean manik 's my 1st ...she flattered. She couldn't do it . she couldn't say ,manik 's my boyfriend.
Manik : the important thing is she did say yes.(he put his arm around nandini's waist and pulled her near to him)

manik:. Now that u have all the detail's u need for in-depth encyclopaedia on the subject , may we plzz get to the class miss soha.
soha: (lifted her chin so her wings of hair swung back from her face). Of course she linked her arms through navya's and headed towards the class.


soha and navya walked away .nandini's heart was racing manik 's whole side was pressed against hers, and his bare arms were resting on her waist. She could feel the strength of his muscles and she seems to be confused and scared and amazed at the same time.
manik : w8 ...( he looked around soha and navya were gone). Nandini that was amazing.
nandini: ohhh ( she turned pink ) . it was nothing special.
manik : seriously?. I couldn't believe it. I wish I was that cool.if you would have been a guy. you'd knock the socks off any girl with a move like that.
nandini: (giggling) hey " knock the socks off ?" how old are u , fifty ?
manik : nice . I give u compliment, and u make fun of me.
nandini: sorry , I forgot for a moment that's really what a girl wants to hear, that she'd be a great boy if she get a chance.( sarcastically )
manik : hey i meant that u r very much smarter than any boy I have heard of.
nandini: Im a girl ok and really happy with that.
manik : u r my cutie pie
nandini: loser
manik : my Einstein
nandini: stop behaving like a jerk manik .
manik pressed one hand to his forehead . Alas! How my girl friend abuse me .
both started laughing ...

they walked to the check-in counter , moved his arm from around her waist and leaned over to sign-in
nandini glanced around and stopped laughing . soha was standing halfway down the hallway. nandini understood this isn't over yet . soha wanted manik and she thought nandini is the one standing in her way.
but the question is what soha is going to do about it?
manik : nandini m done let's go
nandini: hmmm

they both turned and cabir came in
cabir: hey love birds u match maker is here hehehehhehehehe
nandini hit him playfully
nandini: hehehhe v. funny
nandini and manik went for their classes
to be cont...
precap :
manik and nandini and at the lunch table manik pulled nandini towards him
manik : sit next to me or else she will
nandini turned and saw soha waving to manik and coming towards them with her
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wow nandu as manik's fake gf. Interesting. update soon.
Thanks for d pm.

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