MANAN FF:CAN IT BE REAL.................part 16 pg 25 5/10/15 - Page 10

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helooo everyone i know all of u are damn pissed with me for updating soo late ... actually my laptop screen broke down
n my whole story was in there...i still m not able to get it fixed so writing everything again hope u guys understand read and do comment



part 12
nandu: this is aryaman...
aryaman reached out his hand manik shook it like he was slamming a hammer down...

aryaman: and u r?...
manik: m manik... nandini's boyfriend...
nandu was shocked . why on earth did he say that ? soha was no where in sight ...there was no one around who will report her... there was no reason to say that... it wasn't that she minded but it was odd
aryaman: ahhh
manik: we'd better be going nandu... ( but didn't looked at her)
nandu: ok...
aryaman: ok bye nandini. and manik see u around...
both of them went in the whole day passed just like that...
nandu reached home and suddenly she remembered that it was manik's birthday 2moro...
nandu called navya and told her about her plan she volunteered to help so did cabir...
the next morning as every year chachi baked manik's favorite cake as manik arrived they all had breakfast together and then the cut the cake and sang happy birthday for him (totally off key) ...

every year this is the best thing manik thought he gets for his birthday...
manik: ok guys lets go now...
nandu& cabir: ya...
they all reached the college the whole morning they were busy with the classes now it was lunch time nandu manik went to the picnic table in the college garden...
they both sat down just then soha came there... with aryaman...
soha: happy birthday manik...( as she bent and gave a slight hug to him)...

manik: ( rudely )...thnx
aryaman : so today is ur birthday...happy birthday man...
manik: thnx...
navya also came there...
suddenly manik and nandu were all surrounded by them...nandu knew that now soha will really suspect what is she going to give manik as a gift...as she is manik's girlfriend...
soha: so manik what ur girl friend got u...
manik : silent...
soha: don't tell me she didn't get u present...
suddenly nandu spoke up...
nandu: off course i did ...
soha and aryaman shocked ... but manik was stunned...
navya smiling cause she helped nandu prepare that...

manik: u did ... i mean u didn't had to ... i mean we just started dating...
nandu took out a big box from her hand bag...
nandu: shut up and open this... she said with a smiling face
manik: ok...
as he started opening the ribbon soha and aryaman also got curious ...

manik opened and it was a food container...
soha: u got him a food container...
nandu: ya i thought its a good idea every day he can bring his lunch in it...she said with a sarcastic smile
manik gave nandu a puzzled look as he opened the container...
manik: omg ...( a smile lit up his face just the way nandu wanted it to)...



all came close to see there were 16 small cup cakes each with a letter on it HAPPY BIRTHDAY MANIK...
manik: wow this is the best gift ever... u baked it ...
flashBACK...
cabir and navya helping nandu baking the cup cakes 1st two times it was terrible but then finally she managed to bake the perfect cup cakes then they wrote the letters on it...
flash back ends...

nandu: hmmm

soha: u got him cup cakes ...thats.
before soha could complete manik spoke up...
manik: thats the best thing ever he took one and bring it near to nandu's mouth for her to take a bite ...
nandu shyly took a bite and then she did the same
manik: sorry guys but i don't believe in sharing ...especially when my girl friend gave something with so much love...
soha: ohhh manik how sweet... nandu that's all what u got for him...
nandu: silent...
manik didn't like that ...
manik: she cooked for me which she never do for any one so this is special...so would u plzz excuse us so i can spend some time with my girlfriend ...
soha: ohhh ya sure ... she gave an evil smile...
all three left from there...
nandu: do u think it worked to make her believe that m ur girlfriend ...
manik: I think so ...
nandu: I do have something else for u. but I think its kind of stupid. Don't know whether u like it or not. If u don't like it u can give it back...
manik: ( grinned )you got me one more gift ... seriously if u picked it will be awesome...
nandu put her hand in hes pocket and took out a small cloth bag...and put in his hand...

manik curiously ... Put the content on the wooden table... a leather cord slithered out and a small whale hung in the middle ...
manik touched it his smile was growing every second ...
nandu really liked it because it was cute ...and polished whale tail with black thread...

nandu: it's a necklace ... Made of whale bone ...it supposed to be a guy necklace ... That's what the sales man said ...u don't have to wear it... I know its wired to get jewellery to a guy... if u don't like it u can give it back...
nandu looking at manik...
nandu: actually i bought it cause this reminds me off that origami whale u made on our 1st day on school ...but if u dont...
manic(smiling): i love it ...

nandu(sadly): i knew u don't like it...wait what .. what did u say...
manik: nandu i loved it... will u put it on me...
nandini get a big smile on her face
manan eyelock
B.G
Namkin si baat hai, har nayi si baat mein
Teri khusboo chal rahi, hai jo mere saath mein
Halka halka rang beetay kal ka
Gehra gehra kal ho jaayega
Ho jaayega
Aadha ishq, aadha hai, adha ho jaayega
Kadmon se meelon ka vaada ho jaayega
Aadha ishq, aadha hai, adha ho jaayega
Kadmon se meelon ka vaada ho jaayega

manik: nandu...
nandu blinked at him as he PUT the necklace to his neck for her to tie it there...
nandu: really? u like it ...
manik: off course i want to show off my girlfriends awesome taste ...
he turned his back towards her so she can tie it ...
nandu was lost in her thought
nandu(pov): what if he thought it's just a pretend present?
what if he had no idea that what i feel for him?
nandu was a bit sad in her heart she always wanted this to be real but it's after all just a pretend..
she tied the ends of the cords carefully...
nandu: ok done...( it looked perfect on him ... it doesn't look girly at all ) nandu thought...
manik: thnxxx nandu...this is the greatest birthday i ever had...
manik pulled nandu for a hug. she rested her head on his shoulder...


BG
Aadha ishq, aadha hai, adha ho jaayega
Kadmon se meelon ka vaada ho jaayega
Aadha ishq, aadha hai, adha ho jaayega
Kadmon se meelon ka vaada ho jaayega

suddenly the thought of soha party came in nandu's mind
nandu: ohhh no i hope u think the same after tonight...

it was evening already ...
nandu and manik cycling to soha's house...
manik: have i mentioned that i don't get this? tell me again why are you borrowing a book from soha...
nandu: it difficult to say no to her u know...
they reached at soha place... her house was big...
nandu suddenly had a shiver in her spine
well nandu was really glad that manik insisted on coming with her... he didn't wanted to leave nandu with soha alone...
they locked the cycles and started walking towards the door...
manik ranged the bell ...
after a while a old lady with uniform opened the door ...
she was staring at manik nandu...
soha: get out of the way ... geeta... how hard is it to let the guests come in...
ge: sorry madam...
as she moved a side nandu looked at the house ... it was huge and perfectly maintained ...
then she looked at soha who was wearing a black dress knee length... with big earings ... and high heels...unlike nandu who was wearing shorts and top...with sneakers and manik as well didn't dress up at all he was wearing 3 quaters with t-shirt and slippers
soha: hi manik... come in...
manik: ( took nandu hand in his) hey...
nandu felt a bit awkward...
soha: ok u guys come back at the pool side...
manik:whispered... she keep her book on pool side...
nandu gigled ...
as soha opened the pool side door a big crowed shout...S-U-R-P-R-I-S-E...
there were around thirty people...nandu looked properly .they were all from college ...
but she never talked with them before ... even manik also didn't knew them...
manik's mouth dropped open...
soha: happy birthday manikkk...( she wrapped her hands on manik arm and took him away)


nandu was left alone... she looked around and suddenly felt relived as cabir was was also there sitting near the pool eating something...
nandu: hey bro...
cabir: hey ...
nandu: how come u are here ...

cabir: i came to know about soha plan so ... didn't wanted my sis to struggle alone...
nandu sat next to him... she looked around to find manik ... and was shocked ...
he was standing with his ex-girlfriend... pryia roy...
nandu: what the hell is she doing her...
cabir: u know that witch soha na ... she should have planned something...
flashback:
manik pryia breakup day
manik with pryia... and cabir nandu...
pryia: manik its our date ...
manik: i know that...
pr: ohh u know date mean u and me ...why every time u bring this murthy siblings together...
manik: pryia...they my friends...
pr: and i am ur girlfriend...
manik: stop being a drama queen...
pr: drama queen... ok so today u choose u want me or them...
manik: that's obvious ...
pryia smiled...
manik: i want cabir & nandu ...
pryia,cabir,nandu: what
manik: ya u are with me for 2 months ... and they have been with me from last 7 years ...
pr: ok do hell with ur friendship...
flashback ends
cabir: man i still remember that breakup day...
both of them laughed ...
suddenly someone came and hold nandu from her shoulder...
nandu turned to see it was aryaman...
arayman: hey...
nandu:hi...cabir...this is aryaman our new class mate...
aryaman grab nandu and pushed her a bit near the pool...
arayman: feel like going swimming..
nandu(scared): no... don't throw me in the pool...
arayman: but i thought u like swimming...
nandu: leave me...
cabir(angry): leave her dude she don't want to get wet...
aryaman turned ...
arayman: do u even know her...
just then his hand slipped from nandu's shoulder ... she was about to fall
when just on time manik came and held her by her waist...
nandu closed her eyes so tight
manik: whispered...its me girlfriend...
arayman: i was just joking...
manik: ohhh really...she would have gotten hurt(angry)
before manik could say anything soha came there
soha: manik come with me i want to give u something...
manik : w8...
soha: come on manik...
she pulled him away from there

arayman: sorry nandu was just kidding...
nandu: hmmm its ok... By the way ... meet my brother cabir...
arayman: ohhh ... ur brother...hey
cabir(coldly): hi ... And u better be easy with my sister dude
arayman: ohhh sorry for that dude ...
cabir: nandu my going to get myself something to eat...

nandu: hmmm ok
cabir left...
arayman: hey come I want to show u something
nandu: where?
before nandu could say anything else aryaman just started pulling her arm...
aryaman took nandu to the basement where was playing area there were some games there... Ping pong, table tennis , snokker...

arayman: see this soha have all this in her house itself...
nandu: hmmm
arayman : lets play something
nandu: ok what...
arayman: how about ping pong...
nandu: ok
they both played for 5 min ... And nandu was winning cause always she,cabir and manik used to play ping pong , foot ball or cricket...
nandu: ok now I'm tired lets go... ( she knew that manik and cabir will be looking for her) arayman: wow u play like a pro...
nandu started walking towards the door when aryaman hold her arm and turned her towards him
Nandu felt awkward and uncomfortable...
nandu: hey...
arayman: nandu why don't u like me...
nandu was suddenly shocked with sudden question...

nandu: I do like u ... but only as a friend and well m dating manik...

aryaman :just forget manik...
nandu shocked and numb...
arayman: just imagine he is not in the picture what if u met me 1st ...
nandu: I don't know and manik is I'm sorry aryaman
suddenly the door opened... aryaman removed his hand from nandu like
some is caught stealing diamonds it was manik and pryia
nandu: manik...
arayman: ohhh man u caught us...
nandu was confused she gave a look to aryaman... ( caught us doing what)
nandu: no what?...
manik was standing near the door confused priya's hand was on his shoulder...
pr: ohhh I guess we are not getting any privacy here... .
Nandu shocked her heart sink ...why they were looking for privacy...
is manik going back with pryia... . What was manik thinking ...did he think aryaman and n me ? Nandu was having a battle of questions in her mind
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Aah...finally you are back...
Great shot yr.. nice update
Continue soon. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Awesome!
Loved it
soha is such a witch!
Nandu is cute!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Omg.., what is gonna happen now???
This soha na... I feel lyk killing her...
How sweet... Nanduade cupcakes for him and even got him such a cute gift...
Uff... Y did she take him to soha's party...
Shit aryamaan was trying to push her into the pool...
What was the end??? Manik n priya...
Aryamaan is so sick...
Update soon.
Thnkz 4 the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Oh this is so sad.
World of confusions 🤔
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Haaay
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inna vadiyaaa part diyaaa
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inne dino baad
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ussme b danger suspense
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no yaar not bad waala
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nxt part i hope it will be good not bad
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update ASAP don't make us wait this much yaaar
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😉 😊
tc stay blessed ty for pm 😉 🥱 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
amazing update!!!! thanks for the pm..eagerly waiting for the next update!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Nice update
Update the next part soon
zaroge thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: sws2

Oh this is so sad.

World of confusions 🤔




it will be cleared soon just wait n watch 😉
zaroge thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydreamer

Haaay
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inna vadiyaaa part diyaaa
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.
inne dino baad
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ussme b danger suspense
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no yaar not bad waala
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nxt part i hope it will be good not bad
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update ASAP don't make us wait this much yaaar
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😉 😊
tc stay blessed ty for pm 😉 🥱 😳






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don't worry i will be good trust me

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