MANAN FF:CAN IT BE REAL.................part 16 pg 25 5/10/15 - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow a beautiful crown for the most beautiful princess.
It was awesome yaar,
continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update dea...
read 3 parts in one go
continue soonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great parts ya...sorry for late commenting.
Keep up the wonderful work.. seriously loveing the story.
Continue soon. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome
Plz Updt the next part asap
n do pm me plz
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Posted: 9 years ago

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****** hey all this time m not saying sorry cause i know u all are annoyed with me ...ill be wrapping up this story its very close to my heart my very 1st writing but m not able to update
and satisfy my readers so just bear with me for a few more parts

Part 15
chachi :nandu... Nandu...
nandu still sleeping chachi was calling her to come down...
cabir came in nandu's door he was fixing his hairs infront of the mirror...
cabir: princess come on get up...
nandu: no response
cabir: come on yar we'll be late
nandu: no response
cabir: chal yar nandu now get up its to much...
nandu: no response
cabir got worried now he went near nandu removed the blanket and
saw nandu all red and shivering he touched her forehead ...
cabir: OMG.. she is having high grade fever...
cabir: chachi ...chachiii
chachi came running upstairs ...
chachi: what happed cabir...
cabir: nandu...
chachi came near nandu and touched her
chachi: ohhh GOD she is having fever cabir call the doctor...
( nandu is an asthnandu patient since childhood that why she cannot bear dust,smoke,cold...etc)
every time fall sick the whole house is in trouble...
cabir: doctor is coming...
chachi: nandu wake up
after some time nandu woke up ...
nandu: chachi what's wrong ohhh shit m late for collage ..
(trying to get up) that was nandu's biggest problem when she fall sick she become more active chachi: nandu no u are having fever lay down now...

nandu: m fine ...
chachi: what f9 u have high grade fever ..
nandu: chachi m telling u na m f9..
cabir: come on yar princess have some rest I don't want our lead vocalist in the show to sing and look like a zombie ...
nandu: birrr plzzz yar m f9 ...
cabir's phone ringing ...
manik calling..
cabir: hello...
manik: hey dude where r u guys m w8ing at collage gate
cabir: sorry man but will not be coming today ...
manik(worried): why s everything ok ...
cabir: ya but nandu is having fever ...
manik: what ..
how is she?
Did u call the doc?
Did she eat anything?
How did it happened?
cabir: woo woo dude hold ur horses ...
manik: dude m coming there ...
before cabir could say anything manik cut the call and was on the way to nandu place...
doc: I have checked her she is fine the fever is due to the weather change
doc: these are the medicine let her rest ...
cabir: how about the food
doc: ya u can only give her soup or porridge
nandu: yuck...
manik: come doc I'll send u to the gate...
doc left with manik
suddenly chachi ... got a call 4m chacha..
chachi: hello..
chacha: hello shanoo ji quickly get ready we both have to go Manglor we will be back in 2 day's chachi: manglor but why...
chacha: because our land there u remember we are selling it so the buyer want to meet the owner and we have to sign the papers
chachi: but nandu is sick...
chacha: what how ?
chachi :cold...
chacha: ohhh but this deal is very important its ok u come and ask camp
and rockstar to be with her
chachi: but how can we leave the kids
chacha: its ok...
chachi: ok m coming there bye...
cabir&manik: what happened ...
chachi: me and murthy ji have to go manglor so u boy's have
to take care of nandu.
cabir: its ok chachi u go we are here ...
after a while chachi left...

manik and cabir were both in nandu's room taking care of her
cabir put cold sponge on her head so her fever would get low...
manik was checking her temp..
both were having a serious tensed face
nandu like a cute little baby was staring at them
nandu: guys m f9 now...
cabir: ya I know...
manik: look at the thermometer it says ur fever is just 103 degree completely f9...
nandu: ok But Im hungry and I want to go and sit down stairs
manic and cabir took nandu down stairs...
They both went to kitchen..
manik: hey man there's no soup
cabir: ohh man shit I think chachi forgot to cook for her now what...
nandu was just sitting infront...
nandu: but m hungry ( making baby face)
manik went on his knees infront of nandu ...
manik: chef is at ur service madam what soup would u like chicken ,tomato ,veg , mushroom or corn...
cabir: ohhh romeo... u going to cook just forget it I have one sis only don't want her to die... manik: shhh let the lady order ...
nandu: hmmm chicken and corn...
manik: in 20 min madam...
cabir: manik yar what's wrong with u when did u learnt cooking..
manik: actually it's a secret ...
cabir&nandu : secret ?
manik: but don't laugh ok...
cabir&nandu: hmmm
manik: last summer me and mom went to visit my aunty right
cabir: hmmm
manik: there mom forced me to join a one week cooking course ...
cabir: and u did it ..
manik: because I thought ...
cabir: come on tell...
manik: k don't laugh i thought that whenever I'll love a girl I'll always cook for her ...
cabir bursted laughing manik threw juice on him ...
cabir: hey dude what's this...
manik: told u not to laugh..
cabir: but come on the would be rockstar will cook...
cabir left from there
during the whole incident nandu was just thinking of manik's words
that whenever I'll love a girl I'll always cook for her ...
MANIK looked at nandu and gave a smile ... and started cooking ...
nandu was just staring at him...
after manik finished he went to the table ... where nandu was sitting both were lost in each other ... manik took the spoon and started feeding nandu ...

to be cont...

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Posted: 9 years ago
hey there...amazing update..loved it..contint soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sooo sad u gonna wrap the stroy.
But its ok, every good thing comes to an end.
Just love the caring Manik and the cute doll Nandini.
Thanks for the pm.
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
nyc update
continue soon
thnks fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Why chotu chotu part 😔
it's awesome but too short only font is big *puppy face* + *pout*
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hiie dear awesome update... Manbir taking care of cutie nandu... Chalo accha kiya chaachi KO Mangalore bej ke varna manik ka cooking skills k baareme pata hi nahi chalta, ho nandu's extra activeness remembered me of my sick days when i used to get up early morning 3am to create scenes... Love you for helping me to cherishing my memories
Aur haan dare not to wrap up varna bhagwaan jii maaf nahi karenge saare viewers ka dil tor ne k liye 😲 😲

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