FAITH N DESTINY WORKS TOGETHER(repost)UPDATED PG 11 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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very emotional update chotima
i beleave that rk will realised his mistake soon
feel sad for him
waiting for the next
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EAGERLY WAITING FOR MORE
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HERE IS PART 8

Vacations was finished. Now its time of opening collage after opening collage few days went smooth but not for rk. due to her health madhu was not coming to collage after one week when madhu come to collage it was fee day n she was late.so she was walking fast or u ca say running . in front of office she tripped n about to fall just then some one hold her .

sultan - madhu be carefull . itni jaldi kis baat ki hai .

madhu - sorry, today I am late n today is last day of depositing fee. So---

sultan - (scold her for being careless)ab teri tabiyat kaisi hai .

madhu - now I am feeling good .

sultan- you sit here n give me fee I will deposit it

madhu gave money to sultan.now madhu was 4 months pregnant n her pait was visible . after depositing fee sultan gave reciept to madhu n accompany her to her class . while going in class deepali notice madhu .she Came near madhu

deepali - how are you madhu ,roma was telling me that you are not feeling well that's why u cant come to collage .

madhu - now I am alright . feeling better.

Deepali - what happened (just than she notice madhu hand on stomack)madhu you are pregnant.

Madhu - yes

Deepali - rk ko pata hai

Madhu - (in wisper tone with teary eyes) nahin , mai us din ke baad se mili hi nahin.

Deepali - why

Madhu - you know every thing ,then why are u asking this .aur phir usse batane ka bhi kya fayda when he was not ready to accept me as his wife then how can you accept from him that he will accept his child. Leave it. Shayad upar wala mere saath saath mere bachche ki kismet mai bhi pita ka pyar likna bhul gaya hai bas farak sirf itna hai ki mere pita ab is duniya mai hi nahin hai aur mere bachche ka pita hai likin woh usse apnana nahin chahata.

Deepali - why don't you tell him about your pregnancy

Madhu - I cant .kahin woh phir ye na kahe de ki mai paison ke lalch mai kisi aur ka bachcha ko usko pita bana rahi hun,n agar usne ye kaha to mai ye bardasht nahin kar paaungi

Tears start flowing from her eyes .deepali hugged her tightly

Sultan - don't worry madhu , he will accept you n his child.

Bell rang leaving madhu in her class sultan n deepali went away .at lunch time madhu was sitting in her class lying her head on table.sultan deepali n roma came in

Sultan- putting his hand on her shoulder) what happened madhu ,are you all right

Madhu sit straight n nodded her head in yes )

Madhu - slight pain

Roma- where(getting worried)

Madhu - in chest (in low voice)

Roma doubtfully- have u taken your breakfast n medicines in morning

Madhu nodded her head in no.

Deepali - have u brought your lunch if no then take mine n have it.

Madhu - I am not feeling hungry u eat your lunch.

Roma - what ,tune aaj breakfast nahin kiya dawaai bhi nahin li .

Sultan - when you know very well about your condition then why you don't eat any thing from morning.if you don't want to eat any thing then drink juice ,roma take care of her I will bring juice for her.

Madhu - no need sultan .today is my fast .

Roma - are you mad , don't say you kept fast of karwa chauth for rk.

Plz madhu kuch kha le kuch khana nahin hai to kum se kum juice hi pee le apna nahin to apne hone wale bachche ka to khayal kar.tujhe yaad nahin dr ne kya kaha tha . bhookhe rahane se to teri tabiyat aur bigde gi ..sultan tum juice le kar aao isse juice peena padega,varna to uncle aunty ko ph karke yahan collage hi bula le unhi ki baat ye sunegi. tujhe maaloom hai abki baar teri tabiyat bigdi to tujhe hospital mai admit hona padega

Just then rk entered in class room

Rk - tum log kya baat kar rahe ho ,kya hua hai madhu ko ,kyo usse hospital mai admit hona padega,

All keep mum

Rk - koi bolta kyo nahin kya hua hai BIWI ko ,BIWI kya hua hai tumhe.

All stunned seeing rk there n calling madhu biwi but roma n sultan smile looking each other n signaled each other showing their thumbs up

Today rk came to collage with determination .today he was clear in his mind that he will get his wife back he will accept any punishment from madhu but he want madhu back in his life .he will take madhu to his house n introduce her to his parents but he cant live without his wife .today was new morning for rk . he was coming to madhu when he heard roma n sultan conversation with madhu .

Madhu try to get up but fell down .

Rk rush towards madhu

Rk - BIII... WIII...

RK hold madhu in his arms try to wake her up

Rk (seeing madhu unconscious)roma what happened to my madhu .what you are talking about.

Roma - rk (she was unable to speak)

Rk (shouted) kuch to bolo ,sultan tum hi kuch batao.

Roma start crying

Roma - plz rk madhu ko bacha lo uski jaan khatre mai hai.

Rk get hyper - roma saaf saaf kaho pahaliyan mat bhujaao.

Sultan - saaf shabdon mai sanana chahate ho to sono

MADHU IS 4 MONTHS PREGNANT SHE IS CARRING YOUR BABY N MOST IMP .DR IS ASKING HER TO ABORT HER CHILD BUT YOUR MADHU IS DETERMINED TO GIVE BIRTH TO YOUR CHILD WHETHER YOU ACCEPT HER OR NOT . ACC TO HER THIS CHILD IS SYMBOL OF HER LOVE .DR SAID IF SHE GAVE BIRTH TO THE CHILD SHE CAN EVEN LOOSE HER LIFE .

Roma told him all sufferings of madhu n her complications in pregnancy.except hole in heart

Roma - today she kept fast for you of karwa chauth n usne aaj subha se kuch nahin khaya hai isne apne aaj ki medicines bhi nahin li hai n issi wajah se ye faint hui hai n today is her appointment with doctor.one more thing she is very weak dr said to take extra care but she is not taking her diet properly nor medicine she is living in depression now a days

Rk get shocked hearing madhu pregnancy news but he was still hugging madhu n trying to wake her up.

Suddenly rk get up from floor carring madhu in his arms n settle himself on a chair madhu on his lap. Deepali sprinkle some water on madhu face.madhu start gaining her conciousness .rk was caressing madhu cheeks with one hand. He was now furiously weeping .

Rk - plz aankhe kholo .mujhe jo saja dena chaho de do par plzzz madhu aanhke kholo.thumahari ye halat mere karan hui hai .plzzz biwi .tum logo ne mujhe pahale kyo nahi bataya .meri madhu itni takleef jhel rahi thi aur main na jaane isse kya kya kahata raha.plzzz madhu aanke kholo, mujhe daikho ,mujh se baat karo mujhe apni galti sudharne ka ek aur mauka de do.

Till now madhu gained full conciousness . seeing rk face n herself on his lap she felt embress madhu try to get up ,but rk hold her more tightly .

Madhu - rk chodo mujhe, sab daikh rahe hai.

Rk - to ,apni biwi ko hi to pakde hun.Waise biwi tum aise meri goud mai baithi hui hi achchi lagti ho

Roma - rk ye iski dawaai n juice

Rk - now biwi be a good wife n girl n drink this juice n take your medicine

Madhu - rk mera fast hai .

Rk - no fast nothing ,imp thing is I am your hubby n asking you not to keep fast for me.(with teary eyes) madhu I don't deserve this , I am responsible for your this condition.if you really want to see me happy then drink this , let me fed you with my hands.

Madhu open her mouth to argue

Rk - shhh (keeping his finger on her lips)mujhe chod kar jaane ka programme bana rahi thi. Tumne sooch bhi kaise liya mai tumhe apne se door jane dunga.

N he start singing

Tera Peecha Na Chodunga Soniye

Pyar Ke Is Khel Men, Do Dilon Ke Mel Mein
Tera Pichha Na Main Chhodunga Soniye
Bhej De Chahe Jel Mein
Pyar Ke Is Khel Mein

Jahan Bhi Tu Jaayegi Main Vahan Chala Aaunga - 2
Tera Pichha Na Main Chhodunga Soniye - 2

All start laughing with rk act.sultan give back hug to rk n madhu.

Sultan - ye hui na baat.waise rk tum sudhar kaise gaye. Sooch lo uncle aunty ko pata chalega to kya hoga.

Rk -let them know I am ready to face any thing for my madhu

Roma gave rk juice n medicine

Rk - first drink this n then I will feed u lunch with my hand.you all bring your lunch here also n join her.

In between madhu ask rk to eat n try to feed him but rk stoped her .madhu look rk again with suspicious

Rk - biwi plz don't look at me like this.(in her ear he said some thing)

Madhu - (looked rk with shocked) you are also keeping fast for me .

Rk nodded his head is yes.

All have happy tears in their eyes.after having their lunch rk give sultan his car keys n asked him to open his car. N he picked madhu in his arms n start walking towards his car. After settling her in front seat of his car he took driving seat.n said something in roma n sultan ear

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally rk come to know about madhu's pregnancy
superb update
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after so many days no like n no comment
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part 9

Rk - sultan tum roma ko le kar aao.we are going.

He starts the car.

Madhu - rk where are we going,

Rk - (take her hand in his hand n kiss on it) plz madhu call me rishabh .mujhe rk bol kar paraya mat karo.i am rishabh for you.

Madhu - but tell me where you are taking me.

Rk - sweet heart hospital, to day is your appointment na.

tears comes in her eyes,seeing tears in her eyes rk got worried

rk - what happened sweet heart.kahin dard ho raha hai.

madhu - rishabh plz don't call me sweet heart ,it remind me that day .this word scares me

rk - sorry madhu , I hurt u too much that day. Jabki tum itna suffer kar rahin thi

after reaching hospital they have waited for few minutes for sultan n roma.roma gave reports to rk .rk entered in dr cabin with madhu holding her hand.

Madhu - good evening dr.

Dr smiled in return

Dr - madhu you ,how are you .who is he

Madhu - dr he is my hubby.

Dr - aho atlast he returned from tour n get time to come here..

Rk look madhu with surprise

Madhu - yes dr, today morning itself he return back from tour.

Dr - give me your reports let me see .come inside with me let me check you first .

After finishing check up dr came out madhu was still in.

Dr - so mr

Rk - dr I am rk, rishabh kundra.

Dr - I think you know every thing about your wife.n I think aapko madhu ki pregnancy n beemari ke bare mai sab pata hoga.

Rk - yes dr I know about the complications in her pregnancy n what you adwise to her.but aap kis beemari ki baat kar rahi hai.pregnancy beemari thode hi hoti hai.

Dr - it means you don't know about her beemari, read these reports .she had a hole in her heart besides pregnancy complcations.that hole is increasing her complications.

Dr scold rk badly being so careless towards her n not coming with her for check up .

While rk was reading reports madhu came out of room n sit beside rk. He was lost in his though n tears were flowing from his eyes.he did not notice when madhu came n sit beside him.madhu call him two times then she put her hand on his shoulder .

Madhu - rishabh what happened , why are you crying.

Rk - madhu (his voice chocked)

Dr - hey mr kundra be brave .see your wife how calmly she is behaving from 4 months .i know how much she is suffering from pain but still she keep smiling.agar aap hi is tharah se behave karenge to inhe kaun sambhalega .ye to madhu ki himmat hai jo 4 mahene sab kuch akele jhel rahi hai. Now cheer up n take care of your wife.keep her happy.she needs extra care.

Rk -(wiped his tears)thanks dr .i will keep all your instruction in my mind n follow them seriously. Next time I will not give you any reason to complaint.

Rk hold madhu hand n come out of cabin.on their way to chawl.

Rk - madhu tumne apni beemari ke bare mai mujhe batays kyo nahin.why you are suffering alone.i am your husband then why you hide this from me.

Madhu - kya batati n kyo batati jab tumne mujhse saare relation tod liye the .tumne mujhse shaadi hi shart jeetne ke liye ki thi.sach kahun naraj to nahin hoge rishabh mai sab kuch bardasht kar sakti hun lekin koi mere swabhi maan ko choot pahuchaye ya mere swargwassi mata pita ko kalankit kare ye mai kabhi bardasht nahin kar sakti .agar mai tumhe batati bhi to kahin tum phir ye nahin kaha dete ki mai tumse paise lene ke liye natak kar rahi hun.aur phir sabse badi baat tum mujhe apni patni manane se inkar kar rahe the to mai kis huq se tumhe batati. Rishabh mai gareeb n anaath jaroor hun par kamjoor nahin .

Rk -(taking her hand in his hand) mujhe maaf kar do mujhe ek mauka de do apni galti sudharne ka

Plz madhu really I love u so much that I cant express in words . tum jo saja mujhe dogi mujhe manjoor hai. Lekin mujhe maaf kar do.

When they reach chawl rk came out of his car quickly n open madhu side door of car n help her .then he picked madhu in his arms n start climbing staires .they saw an elderly couple was sitting their under tree smiling , sultan n roma standing with them. They are doing some gossiping.rk again came down carring madhu in his arms

Rk - (in shock)mom dad you here.what are u doing here .

Dad - (ignoring his question , hiding his smile) rishu what are u doing here.who is this girl you are carring .

Rk - dad she is madhu my wife n your bahu.

Mohan - what

Madhu trying to get down n signaling rk to put her down.

Radhaji - (trying to hide her smile)what you got married with out our permission. How dare you.

Rk - sorry mom but it happened so suddenly that -----

Mohan - don't make excuses .first you did marriage without our concern n now you are doing another sin by hiding our bahu from us.u have to pay for this .

Madhu was still in rk arms . hearing his dad warning he put madhu down carefully .madhu come forward n bent to touch mohan feet , mohan hold her in middle .

Mohan - no need beta.

Radha - madhu come here .what happen to you ,you are looking pale.

Madhu - nothing maa ,Today is karwa chauth so I kept fast but he broke it in middle. He is not allowing me to keep this fast but he himself kept this fast.

Radha - what he is keeping fast of karwa chauth for you.

Madhu nodded her head shyly. Radha hugged madhu tightly.

Rk - mom ,dheere, you will hurt her.

N rk start crying

Mohan - rishu what happened saja ka naam sunte hi rone lage.

Rk - no dad (hugged his dad) dad plzz save my madhu

Radha - what are u talking , what happened to madhu.

Rk did not utter a word n handed madhu's report to mohan.

Mohan -what is this

Rk - god has already given me punishment for my misdeeds .so every punishment u give me will be smaller to me. Your bahu is pregnant with my child n she had a hole in her heart. So too many comlications in her life brought by me n make her suffer.

Mohan - that's my son,now u come on right track.so no punishment

Sultan n roma - but we want party uncle

Radha - first come inside we decide it later .madhu need rest, come madhu you come with me.

After coming inside madhu house

Rk- mom dad you are not angry with me what I have done without your knowlage .YOU BOTH ARE LOOKING TOO COOL.

Mohan -(Ignoring him ) beta what I am hearing n sultan u not even u bother to tell us about madhu illness n her condition is serious.i am upset with u too for this.

Sultan - sorry uncle madhu ne mujhe n roma ko apne hone wale bachche ki kasam de rakhi thi .we only keep our promise.now a days for us her happiness is more imp then any thing. Sorry aunty forgive us for this.

Radha- its ok beta I am proud of you all for taking care of our madhu.now madhu you take rest n I will cook some thing for u n rishu u sit near my daughter,this is your punishment.n u would be dadaji bring some sweet for your bahu cum daughter. roma u come with me in kitchen n help me n u sultan you go with your uncle to help him After dinner all went but rk stay with madhu but this time with his parents permission.

Next day when madhu wake up she saw rk sleeping on her bed.holding her in protective way. She smile seeing his position but get shocked seeing dry tear marks on his cheeks .madhu caress his hair n try to get up slowly.but rk hold her more tightly in sleep.she again lie down n try to free her self.after sec. she succeed.she get up n went to washroom .when she come out from washroom she heard sobbing voice coming from room. She rush towards there n saw rk sobbing in sleeping n burbling -biwi don't go any where don't leave me alone ,forgive me.

Madhu immediatly hugged her tightly - rishabh wake up I am here with u , I am not going any where .i will not leave u ,(she patted on his cheeks) rishabh wake up.open your eyes.did you see any bad dream, I am with u see.

Rk opened his eyes n check madhu.

Rk - are u alright.

Madhu - I am fine but what happened to you, why are u crying while sleeping.

Rk - plz biwi forgive me .i am scared .i saw a bad dream that you left me.punish me but don't leave me.

Madhu - you need any proof of forgiveness. If you want punishment that I can give it to you.

Rk - what ever punishment you will give I will accept it happily.

Madhu - but let me think what punishment I can give u. (she put her finger on her head n start ticking on it) ok now then get ready I will give you too many punshments

first -hug me 4 times for leaving me alone for 4 months

second- feel your baby

third -wish him for entering in 5 months or you can say completing 4 months

forth - feed me n our baby we are feeling hungry.

fifth - get ready we are going to collage.

Is it enough or you want more.

Rk - (laughed n said naughtily hugging madhu) is tharah ki punishment mai jindagi bhar jhel sakta hun.cant you extend my punishment list any more.

Rk put his palm on madhu abdomen n move it slowly like he is pampering his real baby n then place a kiss on her abdomen SORRY BABY YOUR FATHER IS VERY BAD ,FORGIVE ME.I LEFT YOUR MAMA WHEN SHE NEEDED ME .BUT I PROMISE MAI TUMKO EK ACHCHA PITA BAN KE DIKHONGA. NOW U N YOUR MAMA IS MY RESPONSIBILTY.

Rk -biwi ek promise mai thumahare saamne apne aap se karma chata hun.

Madhu - what

Rk - I will accompany you every where you go.n never ask me to stay away from you.today evening I will take you your real home.

Madhu - ok but rk one more promise I want from you .you should marry me again in front of your parents. I want their blessing too.kya tum apne parents se hamari dobara shaadi ki baat kar sakte ho.plz rishabh bas meri ye ichcha poori kar do iske baad mai tumse kuch nahin mangungi.

Rk - mai aaj hi mom dad se baat karunga. Chale ab collage ke liye late ho raha hai.

After having their break fast Madhu took two more packets besides her books .

Rk - what is this.

Madhu - (with some hasitation)rishabh these are my designs which sultan's uncle gave me to design for their winter collection n some designs for another companies. In another packet there are some dress of NGO ppl which I stiched for them .I have to summit them today due to my illness it is already late. They are waiting for me .NGO se kai baar ph bhi aa chukka hai .so I was thinking after collage I will go there .

Rk - give these packet to me.

Rk took both packets from madhu's hand n they come out holding each other hands.rk help her to sit in car n keep packets n books on back seat n start the car.on their way to collage

Rk - biwi ek baat poncho naraj to nahin hogi.

Madhu - no

Rk - why u work besides studies

Madhu - rishabh you know I am orphan n mere paas apne parents ki koi jama punji nahin hai jisse mai apni padai pori kar saku n anpne aap ko jinda rakh sakun.majhe rooj jeene ke liye collage ki fee ke liye apni rooji roti khud kamani padti hai. So din mai collage attend karti hun n raat me mai NGO ke kapde silti hun taaki apne padai poori kar sakun n apne khane peene ka intajaam kar sakun.Sunday ko old age home mai part time job karti hun . lekin ab meri dawaiyon ka kharch bhi bad gaya hai to sultan ne mujhe apne uncle ki company ke liye n kuch doosari company ke liye kapde design karne ka kaam dila diya hi .meri gujar basar ye chote chote kaam kar ke hi hoti hai

Rk - sorry madhu mujhe ye sab nahin pata tha .

Madhu - rishabh ab tumne ek aur baar mujhe maafi mangi to mai tum se such mai naraj ho jaaongi.

When they reach collage before getting down from car rk bent towards madhu n kiss on her forehead.seeing madhu n rk together all his group get exited n some get shocked n some feel jealous.

Deepali come forward n hugged madhu .

Rk - deepali be careful .

Trishna gave her side hug - how are you madhu .

Rk - trishna take care of madhu in class .i gave u responcibility of madhu in your class n never leave her alone n biwi you don't exert your self if you need some thing keep this mobile n call me . I have saved my ,sultan ,roma deepali no in it .come thumhe class tak chod dun .

Madhu - rishabh mai apne aap chali jaaongi aur phir trishna to hai mere saath .

Rk - biwi

Madhu - ok baba chalo.

In every period rk came running to her class to check her.in lunch also a servant bring lunch for them rk feed her with his hand n gave her medicines .he himself took madhu to her class when he satisfied that she is ok then he left from there.after collage when all are leaving rk called sultan

Rk - sultan can you do me a favour .

Sultan - say

Rk - madhu bata rahi thi ki thumahare uncle ne usse koi winter collection ke design banana ke liye diye the .woh aaj unki company jaane ki kaha rahi thi design dene ke liye.lekin unki company to yahan se bhaut door hai so mai chaha raha tha ki tum madhu se woh designs lekar apne uncle tak pahuch do. N unse request kar lo ki jab tak madhu ki tabiyat theek nahin ho jaati tab tak woh uske baaki kaam ka time extend kar de.taaki madhu exert na ho.kyoki mujhe maaloom hai wo kaam karna to chodegi nahin .ya aisa kuch arrangement ho jaye ki usse wahan na jana pade.

N aaj mai usske saath NGO jaa kar wahan ka kaam poora kara deta hun .

Sultan - don't worry rk madhu ko kisi tharah ki problem nahin hogi aur jahan tak mere uncle ka kaam hai woh mai baat kar lunga.baaki baat mai thumhe ph par batonga akele mai.

after finishing all work of madhu they comeback to chawl.

Till now madhu was exausted but she went straight in kitchen to make tea for both .when she was coming out of kitchen with tray rk hold took tray from her hand n ask her to come.both have tea together.after tea he ask her to take rest n forcefully lie her down putting her head on his lap.he start caressing her hairs in few minuts she went in deep slumber. It was 7 0 clock when she woke up n radhaji,mohan n rk was sitting near her.she get up with a jerk .

Madhu - how long I sleep,(scolding rk)tumne mujhe uthaya kyo nahi kitni der tak mai soti rahi dinner ka bhi time hone wala hai.

Mohan - no he was trying but u was in deep sleep n I stopped him for doing this .i want to admire my daughter.see how tired you were that hamari baton se bhi thumahari neend nahin tooti

Madhu - sorry dad ,I myself don't know how long I slept

Radha - don't feel guilty beta n don't worry about dinner .mai ghar se bana kar laai hun.we will eat together.mohanji n rishu you go out side of room I want to talk with my bahu.

Both went out smiling n rk winked .

Radha - (gave her a packet )madhu mujhe rishu ne sab bata diya hai ,so you want proper wedding

Madhu nodded her head shyly

Radha -then come n wear this dress aaj mai apni bahu ko apne haathon se sajaaungi.

Edited by meenji22 - 10 years ago
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yepiiieee finally all is well poor rk crying in sleep also he is so much tensed about madhu's health and loved madhu's sweet punishment get well soon madhu I think after marriage every thing wil b good her complication and all wil b reduce want to see rishbala n their baby together continue soon n plz plz plz pm me loved d story
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Originally posted by: sweetlove147

yepiiieee finally all is well poor rk crying in sleep also he is so much tensed about madhu's health and loved madhu's sweet punishment get well soon madhu I think after marriage every thing wil b good her complication and all wil b reduce want to see rishbala n their baby together continue soon n plz plz plz pm me loved d story


yes madhu gave him sweet punishments


hope so

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