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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Helllooo everyone...
Salaaam namaste to all my friends...
I am going to start my new fan fiction...
" DO DIL..."
Its all about our favourite couple...AKSHARA NAITIK i mean NAKSH...
hope u all will support me...
THANKS FOR UR LOVE...

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

INDEX...
part 1 page 2
part 2 page 5
part 3 page 8
part 4 page 15
part 5 page 26
part 6 page 33
part 8 page 45
part 9 page 55
part 10 page 67
part 11 page 74
part 12 page 83
part 13 page 94
part 14 page 107

part 15 page 115

part 16 page 118

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

INTRODUCTION...
Naitik singhania...i cute lovable college boy...caring...sweet...but a very possesive nature...
his life is only his best friends...
but life to sabki change hoti hai...jab kisi se pyaar ho jaye...aur uske liye hamesha aapka dil tadap jaye...
Akshara maheshwari...sweet...beautiful...simple...but fun loving girl...jo har rishte ko pyaar karna jaanti hai...chahe wo dosti ho ya phir pyaar...
PAR AISA KYA HOGA AKSHARA NAITIK KI LIFE ME JO UNHE PYAAR KI DOR SE BAANDHE GA...JO INN DO DIL KO EK JAAN BANAYEGA...??

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

A boy looking ouside the window...(yes u guess it right...he is naitik )
watching a couple...
naitik-aaj poore ek saal baar hamara intezaar khatam hoga akshara...hum ne jo ek doosre se wada kiya tha...use poora karne ka time aa gaya...ab hum milenge toh hamesha saath rehne ke liye...
SO KYA HAI YE WADA...KYU JUDA HUE NAKSH EK DOOSRE SE EK SAAL KE LIYE...KYA WO AB KABHI MIL PAYENGE...?
WILL UPDATE IT IN FIRST PART...WIH A FLASHBACK...
TILL THEN WAIT FOR IT...

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

happu tum kaha ho ?
good nite
sweet dreams...

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

Sona vry nice intro dear pls do update first part dear I m waiting for story plss plss ...:)

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Sameera Badar

@sameera_naksh

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Nyccc FF dear ...I m waiting ur off...plz cont soon

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchigarg
Sona vry nice intro dear pls do update first part dear I m waiting for story plss plss ...:)

thank u ruchu...i will update it soon...

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh
Nyccc FF dear ...I m waiting ur off...plz cont soon

thank u sooo much sameera :)

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

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PART...1
Today he is very happy...because after a one long year he is going to meet his LOVE...yes ! his only love...AKSHARA...
Naitik woke up early in the morning...take bath...his mom gayatri gave him his favourite breakfast...
today he want to do everything what he like...
he came in his room...open his cupboard...and saw his personal diary...
naitik-aaj itne dino baad mai tumhe phir se likhne jaa raha hu...
he came at sat near the window...when he saw a cute couple talking together...
naitik take his pen and start writing...
" Mujhe yaad hai akshara...ek saal pehle hum ne ek doosre se kuch wada kiya tha...aur wo wada aaj hi ke din poora bhi hone wala hai...kitna pyaara hoga wo waqt jab mai tum he poore ek saal baad dekhunga...mai tum se kya kahoonga...ye mujhe bilkul samajh nahi aa raha...hum baat kaise shuru karenge...mai ye soch hi nahi paa raha...
par jo bhi ho...ab hum kisi bhi wajah se ek doosre se juda nahi honge...hamare ek pormise ne itni dooriyaan dekh li...ab aur nahi..."
He put his pen down...and smile a little...
nk-mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai...hamari wo pehli mulaakat...
FLASHBACK...
Naitik with his gang...mohit...shaurya...alok and antra...entered in a college...
mo- jaldi chal yaar warna iss baar ek pehle paper me hi room se bahar ho jayenge...
sharya laugh at mohit...
alok-ye toh aise keh raha hai...jaise na jane kitna padhkar aaya hai...
mo-padhkar toh mai ek word bhi nahi aaya...bas jakar kisi intelligent bacche ke peeche baithna chahta hu...taaki acche se cheating kar saku...
sh-tu iska alawa kuch aur kar bhi nahi sakta...
alok-mai toh bas antra ke peeche baith jaunga...wo mujhe sab dikha degi...kyu antra...
antra(surprised)-sorry yaar ! kal mai party me gayi thi...so no padhai...aur books i hate them...
naitik suddenly close his books...
nk-tum sab bas aise hi raho...kisi se aaj kuch nahi hone wala...
all spoke in a same time - why ?
nk-kyunki ab se hum sab ko second year ke baccho ke saath baithna hai...
mo-matlab ?
nk-matlab ye ki third year ka student...secnd year ke ek student ke saath baithega...
sh-iska matlab iss baar hum sab fail...
nk-tum sab ka toh pakka hai par mera nahi...
all joint their hands together in front of naitik...
" pls naitik hamari madad kar de "
naitik smile on them..." theek hai mere paas kuch notes hai... wo mai tum sab ke liye banakar laya tha...par usse cheating kaise karni hai...wo mai nahi jaanta "
alok-tu chinta mat kar wo sab hum kar lenge...
sh-thanks naitik...
all gave a group hug to naitik...
nk-hmm...ye rahe tum sab ke notes...aur jakar iska bando bast kar lo...
all quickly went in their classrooms...
naitik joint his hands in front of god..." sorry bhagwaan mai jaanta hu...ki maine apne dosto ke liye galat kiya...par kya karu uske liye itna toh kar sakta hu "
he again open his books...and went towards his class...
and when he entered in the class...
he saw his friends are already waiting for them
nk(shocked)-tum sab bhi isi room me ho ?
mo-hmmm... itni jaldi tera peecha nahi chodenge...
an-ab toh tumhe bhi hamari help karni padegi...
nk-par papers toh diye naa maine...
sh-wo papers class rom me aate hi sir ne le liye...
nk-ohh god !
all again hold their hands in front of him...
nk-ok...
so all sat on their seats...examination time start...
so the sitting arrangements are...
on first seat...
shaurya...with a girl
alok...with a girl
mohit...with a boy
antra...with a boy
and on the last seat...
naitik with ?
teacher came in the classroom...
gave copeis to the student...
teacher-naitik...tumhare side ka student kaha hai ?
nk-sorry i don't know...
th-ohhh ! i am sorry actually i forgot about new sitting arrangements...
naitik smile...and teacher went to the another row...
now the exams start...and all students start doing their work...

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago