Naksh FF # Do DiL # Part 16 on Page 118

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: --pranu--

tho tum khaaleti?

kya ? kha leti

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Good morning wish mein happu kaha gayi????

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Good part cryu...

nice mom beta pyaar

and akshi as shaurya cousin

akshi ne phir naitik ko ullu banaaya hehehe

cycle ride is nice hehe naitik doesn't know how to ride lol...

waiting for next update where naitiks surprise bday is gonna be do update soon...

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: --pranu--
Good part cryu...
nice mom beta pyaar
and akshi as shaurya cousin
akshi ne phir naitik ko ullu banaaya hehehe
cycle ride is nice hehe naitik doesn't know how to ride lol...
waiting for next update where naitiks surprise bday is gonna be do update soon...

thank u sooo much happu for liking this part...maine socha ki part kisi ko pasand nahi aane wala

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
thank u sooo much happu for liking this part...maine socha ki part kisi ko pasand nahi aane wala

humesha aise hi sochte ho...

I will give a surprise soon 😉

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Sona dear vry nice part I like it natik gya akshi ne kuch pada to hai hi nhi cycle scene was gud ...interesting story with lovly precap waiting pls do update soon..😊

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: ruchigarg
Sona dear vry nice part I like it natik gya akshi ne kuch pada to hai hi nhi cycle scene was gud ...interesting story with lovly precap waiting pls do update soon..😊

thank u soo much ruchu for ur lovely comment yaar...
ya i will update it soon

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Pragati-naksh

@Pragati-naksh

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

very nice and interesting part.. naitik ki punishment for akshi then cycle scenes awesome

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
very nice and interesting part.. naitik ki punishment for akshi then cycle scenes awesome

thank u soo much pragu for liking it

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

PART...3
Akshara walking towards the parking area...and naitik still stand on the college gate...
ak-mai five tak ginti hu...phir palat kar dekti hu...one...two...
nk-mai ten tak ginta hu...hope wo palat jaye...one...two...
but suddenly his gang came...
mo-yaha khade khade kya kar raha hai...chal andar...
nk(sadly)-yaa...
he went from there to his class...with his gang...
here akshara complete her countdown and turn to see him...but :(
she too went from there...
IN THE CLASS...
All are already sat on their seats...akshara too came in the class n sat on her seat ( same sitting arrangements...
naksh look at eachother...but remain silent...exam start...and teacher gave them their papers and copies...
akshara became worried for her paper...
she look at naitik ( chupke chupke )
ak(st)-hope ise mera paper aata ho...maine toh aaj bhi apne course ka kuch nahi padha...
with this fear she start writing her paper...ut suddenly naitik holds her pen...
akshara became shocked with this...
nk-punsihment bhool gayi ?
ak-mujhe yaad hai...
nk-phir...
naitik quickly exchange his copy with her...
nk-ye lo aaj ka mera saara paper tum likhogi...
ak-par naitik mai kal...
nk-mujhe kuch nahi sunna...
ak-aur mera paper ?
nk(smile)-mai itna bhi bura nahi hu...wo mai kar doonga...
ak-par tum ne padha bhi hai ?
nk-madam last year maine ye hi sab padha tha
ak-abhi tak yaad hai wo sab ?
nk-hmmm...par tum mera paper acche se karna
ak-hmmm...
ak(st)-thank u bhagwaan ji...kam se kam mera paper accha toh hoga...iske paas ya fail hone se mujhe kya...aur rahi baat gusse ki toh last exam ke baad mujhe kaun sa yaha rehna hai...she smile on this...and start writing something in naitik's coppy
but naitik religiously writing akshara's paper ( khoob mann lagakar )...
after three hours paper get over...and all came out from their class...
IN COLLEGE CANTEEN...
All friend are there except naitik...
sh-aaah...jaan me jaan aa gayi...ab last paper poore dus din baad
mo-ha yaar kam se kam uss paper me ek word toh likh loonga...
an-btw ye naitik kaha hai ?
sh-room me toh saath tha...par paper khatam hone ke baad pata nahi kaha gaya ?
ak-maine naitik ko gate se bahar jaate dekha tha...
alok-tab toh zaroor hamare liye kuch surprise lane gaya hoga...
naman-surprise ! ohhh shit ...
shaurya-tujhe kya hua ?
naman-yaar kal naitik ka birthday hai...aur hum ne kuch surprise plan hi nahi kiya...
mo-haa yaar mai toh bhool hi gaya...
antra-mai bhi...
mo-toh kya kiya jaye ?
akshara silently listening their talks...
naman-itni jaldi kya ho payega...
shaurya-akshara ?
ak-ji dadu
sh-tu kuch bata naa...
ak-mai kya batau...wo aap sab ke friend hai...aap log unhe mujhse acche se jaante hai...jo unhe accha lagta hai...aap log wo sab kijiye...
mo-yaa right...
antra-good idea akshara
akshara smile :)
mo-toh theek hai...aaj hi hum sab pehle movie chalte hain...phir raat se kal tak party karte hai
alok-par party hogi kaha ?
mo-usi ke ghar par...mai maa se baat kar loonga...
naman-good...
gang together ( execpt akshara )- so lets do the party...yaaayyy !
" kaun si party ? " naitik said...
all became shocked...
naitik came and sat on one chait beside antra...
nk-kaun si party ki baat kar rahe ho?
sh-kuch nahi soch rahe the...exams khatam hone ke baad sab party kare
nk-ha par usme time hai naa...
mo-tu kya bakwaas kar raha hai...filhaal ye bata ki iss bag me kya hai ?
nk(smile)-isme tum sab ke liye gifts...
an-gifts...kyu ?
nk-tum sab bhool gaye...
all pretentds that they forgot his bday...
all together-kya ?
nk(sadly)-kuch nahi ba mera mann kiya toh mai le aaya...
mo- wow ! yaar toh phir jadi de
nk-haa deta hu par one by one

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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